When Melissa goes out on a date with Sean, she’s immediately drawn to his charming personality. Thinking she’s hit a jackpot, she dismisses her initial reservations and agrees to go to his place after dinner.
As the night unfolds, it becomes apparent that Sean is hiding something. A door she’s not supposed to open, a hushed call she wasn’t meant to hear, a camera she shouldn’t touch. Each clue points to an increasingly terrifying conclusion about Sean's secret.
By the time Melissa realizes the disturbing truth, she’s trapped in Sean’s house, just another victim in his elaborate ploy. Can she escape before she ends up like the other girls?
The paranoia with our lead, Melissa, really started things off in a good direction. Her conflicted feelings and, at times, impulsive reactions, all just matched up really well. However, I kept feeling like I was missing something until it was all finally divulged a little ways in. Not anywhere near where I wanted it to be, but sort of. Joshua, specifically, was written in a way that made me feel like this was a middle book in some series. Just no real background or proper development, which made everything else feel strained. The pacing wasn’t bad, but the plot also got a little too deep for its own good. I think that Joshua and/or Sean could have easily been removed from this story, making everything simpler and more streamlined. The writing was fine, as was the premise, but there were just a lot of core issues that took away from the overall experience. Fans of the genre may or may not take to this.
I try not to shit on peoples writing, but I’m making an exception here.
This is the kind of book that gives me confidence I could write a novel and actually have people buy and praise it. I do not intend that as a compliment. Clearly, anyone can throw down some garbage on a page and call themselves an author nowadays.
From the utterly unlikable protagonist to the story so rushed you can’t possibly feel any investment in the characters, to the “twists” that are so asinine and predictable you can’t even call them twists, to the clear total lack of research into schizophrenia and depiction in the most stereotyped and incorrect characteristics of the disease, which is beyond harmful for people who already deal with stigma from that awful disease (along w any other mental illness), this was a dumpster fire from start to finish. Please do not waste your time. The single worst book I have read in years.
The plot had a lot of potential but in my opinion was not well executed. The writing could be better, and I find that the book in general isn't developed enough and doesn't really make sense at times. The passage that's supposed to be the real highlight of the book, the one that makes up the whole story, only lasted a few pages and went by very quickly. I'd have liked more detail, more action and less foreshadowing of plot twists, as I saw 90% of the book coming. Despite this, I still had a good time reading this book, it entertained me, so my rating is split between 2 and 3.
When I started the book I was enjoying it. But as I carried on reading it was so predictable. Read it in a few hours, disappointed and a lot of spelling mistakes. Waist on anyone is not spelt waste.
Melissa, twenties, has had horrendous luck with dating. But she hasn’t given up yet…
Match on Tinder. Sean is a huge and welcome surprise.
Melissa is a teaching assistant; Sean is a successful marketing executive.
Joshua Dawson, Melissa’s toxic ex-boyfriend.
Is this supposed to be set in America? Multiple issues with that…but we don’t call men’s fragrances ‘perfumes.’ 👎🏻
Roommate Rachel is a programmer and a good friend.
Dinner. Sean’s home is very nice. And he wears Tom Ford cologne. ✨
Anna.
The digital camera…
Do all of Iris Baxter’s “heroines” have super helpful friends? And misunderstood ex-boyfriends? The trends developing in her writing are troubling, to say the least. The Perfect Apartment has so many of these same boxes checked. But The Perfect Impostor is actually good. So clearly this author has some creativity…
Sean is an amazing boyfriend.
The mental illness angle… 😳 Umm…oof.
Identity Reveal is…meh 😑
Not sure whether the epilogue, with Anna, helps or hurts.
I want to first say that this review is no hate to the author, nor do I intend to tear down this novel. But, I did not enjoy this at all. It was only about 150 pages, which is not long enough to be considered anything other than a novella (in my opinion). The plot had SO MUCH potential, but the book just was not long enough to actually develop any of the characters or ideas. This book left me feeling confused and gave me whiplash throughout reading it because I felt like it jumped around A LOT. It was not the worst book I have ever read, but it definitely was not the best. I would love to read a novel with a similar storyline that is triple the length and takes some time to explore each topic, rather than briefly mentioning it and moving on.
I am giving it four stars because it gave me a creepy feeling while reading. I didn't really know what to expect next and I found it to be a good first book.
On the less positive note, I agree that more research should be done on schizophrenia, as it does seem to play on some untrue stereotypes, at least in the way I've known people with it.
This was a good story with a very SURPRISING ending. I have to admit,I was into the story but didn't pay attention to a clue given earlier in the book. That is the reason why the ending kind of threw me. I'm glad I didn't catch it though. It always makes for a better surprise.
Really enjoyed this book. It moves fast and there is good character development. Enough characters with odd behavior that it keeps you guessing. Good twists with who is who and what is real.
This story had me reading it every chance I got, so it turned out to be a quick read for me. I enjoyed the writing style and the plot. I would recommend this, definitely!