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Slicer
I loved playing the field, never wanted to settle down, Until I met her. It was supposed to be a onetime thing, I just didn’t expect the connection we shared and I wanted more. I wanted her. But she was gone the next morning. So, I turned back to my player ways all while trying to search for her, Needing her like I needed air to breathe, Keeping a hold of the only memory I had left of her, Her gold bracelet. Until she moved to my town, with something of mine in tow, She doesn’t want me anymore though, She’s seen my player side and she doesn’t like it, But what she doesn’t realise, Is that she’s mine, always has been and I’m playing for keeps this time.
Meghan
He showed up in my life when I least expected it, My parents were pressuring me to settle down, Marry the man they wanted me too, Then he walked in on my shift, I wanted to finally rebel, finally have something for me, All while trying to put myself through med school and leave this dead-end town behind. I just didn’t expect the spark that shone between us, But he doesn’t do relationships, he doesn’t do commitment, So I left him the next morning, not expecting to see him again when he leaves town. Only he left something of his behind. I searched for him for years, until finally, there he is, Wrapped around another woman. I decide to put my feelings behind me and concentrate on my residency, But he has other ideas, he wants me. And whether I’m ready or not, He’s taking me.
This can be read as a standalone but is better if books are read in order to get an understanding of other characters. This is book 5 of 7 of Untamed Hell fire’s MC series, with a HEA. Due to mature content and themes this book is recommended for readers aged 18+, this novel may contain triggers.
I loved playing the field, never wanted to settle down, Until I met her. It was supposed to be a onetime thing, I just didn’t expect the connection we shared and I wanted more. I wanted her. But she was gone the next morning. So, I turned back to my player ways all while trying to search for her, Needing her like I needed air to breathe, Keeping a hold of the only memory I had left of her, Her gold bracelet. Until she moved to my town, with something of mine in tow, She doesn’t want me anymore though, She’s seen my player side and she doesn’t like it, But what she doesn’t realise, Is that she’s mine, always has been and I’m playing for keeps this time.
Meghan
He showed up in my life when I least expected it, My parents were pressuring me to settle down, Marry the man they wanted me too, Then he walked in on my shift, I wanted to finally rebel, finally have something for me, All while trying to put myself through med school and leave this dead-end town behind. I just didn’t expect the spark that shone between us, But he doesn’t do relationships, he doesn’t do commitment, So I left him the next morning, not expecting to see him again when he leaves town. Only he left something of his behind. I searched for him for years, until finally, there he is, Wrapped around another woman. I decide to put my feelings behind me and concentrate on my residency, But he has other ideas, he wants me. And whether I’m ready or not, He’s taking me.
This can be read as a standalone but is better if books are read in order to get an understanding of other characters. This is book 5 of 7 of Untamed Hell fire’s MC series, with a HEA. Due to mature content and themes this book is recommended for readers aged 18+, this novel may contain triggers.
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Published August 31, 2023
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November 13, 2023
Nope.
He’s her first and only. Separation of 5 years so yep, she’s celibate 🙄
Meanwhile, he’s fucking everything that moves, but it’s always been her 🙄
Besides, it’s her fault she left without getting the truth, so of course he wasn’t going to keep it in his pants. But remember…it’s always been her 😂😂🤣
He’s her first and only. Separation of 5 years so yep, she’s celibate 🙄
Meanwhile, he’s fucking everything that moves, but it’s always been her 🙄
Besides, it’s her fault she left without getting the truth, so of course he wasn’t going to keep it in his pants. But remember…it’s always been her 😂😂🤣
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July 16, 2024Slicer and Meghan
DNF
I must be desparate! I can’t even with this book! Why do
I keep trying this author? She clearly knows absolutely nothing about Texas or the USA or American slang and terminology. FFS lady just write a biker book based in the UK. You make my head hurt with your child minders and Houston is a small town BS! This book has too much repetitive information both from former books and from the h and H’s view points. It’s like she copy and pasted his viewpoint from chapter 9 as her viewpoint for chapter 10. In fact I think she copy and pasted whole sections from previous books as filler. I don’t need you to retell every other characters story in this book… just tell Slucer and Meghan’s story. …And another thing all of her hero’s are just plain stupid. They spend 5 years looking for someone who knows everyone in their family and club and is right up under their noses. Get help With your plots—because extra dumb bikers are NOT HOT!!!
DNF
I must be desparate! I can’t even with this book! Why do
I keep trying this author? She clearly knows absolutely nothing about Texas or the USA or American slang and terminology. FFS lady just write a biker book based in the UK. You make my head hurt with your child minders and Houston is a small town BS! This book has too much repetitive information both from former books and from the h and H’s view points. It’s like she copy and pasted his viewpoint from chapter 9 as her viewpoint for chapter 10. In fact I think she copy and pasted whole sections from previous books as filler. I don’t need you to retell every other characters story in this book… just tell Slucer and Meghan’s story. …And another thing all of her hero’s are just plain stupid. They spend 5 years looking for someone who knows everyone in their family and club and is right up under their noses. Get help With your plots—because extra dumb bikers are NOT HOT!!!
October 13, 2023
Ugh
Fifth book in and still full of errors! Does no-one read it through before it's uploaded?
Whole series needs a decent edit!
Clearly the author not being American but has based this mc in the USA really needs to research how Americans say things and names for things.
Fifth book in and still full of errors! Does no-one read it through before it's uploaded?
Whole series needs a decent edit!
Clearly the author not being American but has based this mc in the USA really needs to research how Americans say things and names for things.
July 14, 2024
3.5 Stars
Slicer and Megan’s story. We were teased with these two in Dagger’s book. Megan is a Dr. (or resident) at the hospital Mel (Dagger’s woman) works at. She has a 4-year-old daughter from a ONS that she’s been trying to find the father for years with only the knowledge that his name is Noah and he belongs to a MC. We learned at the end of the book that Noah is Slicer, so we also know that Slicer has been searching for his ONS for years too… and sleeping with loads of sweet butts to drown his sorrows.
The blurb sets this up, the two meet and have an epic ONS, but Megan gets spooks (listens to a jelly wannabe OW) and leaves before Slicer wakes up and can tell her that he’s keeping her forever. Both try to find each other but are outsmarted by the jelly wannabe OW, and they move away. Years pass (5) until they meet up again. Unfortunately for Slicer, when he’s FINALLY reunited with his long-lost love, he’s banging sweet butt Clitter.
Megan was a great mother. I loved that she searched for him because her daughter desperately wanted her father. I loved that she was still willing to put her daughter’s feelings first when she mistakenly thought he moved on.
It doesn’t matter that he’s moved on when I haven’t; he’s still hers, even if he isn’t mine.
But don’t get too excited because the next h is back to hiding a kid because she thinks that H cheated.
Bottom Line- This is my favorite of the series. It wasn’t perfect, but I felt like it was the cleanest delivery. (and it deviated from the formula (Slicer didn’t jump to any conclusions). There weren’t any super leaps of logic needed, anyone acting too crazy, or large plot holes. There were the usual British tidbits I find distracting since this is taking place in the US, and the editing issues we’ve seen throughout the series.
Safety- This doesn’t have any cheating and nothing crazy for the mc genre, but strict safety readers might take offense with the fact that she’s celibate during the separation while he sleeps around. And there’re a couple on page scenes with sweet butts before they’re reunited.
Slicer and Megan’s story. We were teased with these two in Dagger’s book. Megan is a Dr. (or resident) at the hospital Mel (Dagger’s woman) works at. She has a 4-year-old daughter from a ONS that she’s been trying to find the father for years with only the knowledge that his name is Noah and he belongs to a MC. We learned at the end of the book that Noah is Slicer, so we also know that Slicer has been searching for his ONS for years too… and sleeping with loads of sweet butts to drown his sorrows.
The blurb sets this up, the two meet and have an epic ONS, but Megan gets spooks (listens to a jelly wannabe OW) and leaves before Slicer wakes up and can tell her that he’s keeping her forever. Both try to find each other but are outsmarted by the jelly wannabe OW, and they move away. Years pass (5) until they meet up again. Unfortunately for Slicer, when he’s FINALLY reunited with his long-lost love, he’s banging sweet butt Clitter.
Megan was a great mother. I loved that she searched for him because her daughter desperately wanted her father. I loved that she was still willing to put her daughter’s feelings first when she mistakenly thought he moved on.
It doesn’t matter that he’s moved on when I haven’t; he’s still hers, even if he isn’t mine.
But don’t get too excited because the next h is back to hiding a kid because she thinks that H cheated.
Bottom Line- This is my favorite of the series. It wasn’t perfect, but I felt like it was the cleanest delivery. (and it deviated from the formula (Slicer didn’t jump to any conclusions). There weren’t any super leaps of logic needed, anyone acting too crazy, or large plot holes. There were the usual British tidbits I find distracting since this is taking place in the US, and the editing issues we’ve seen throughout the series.
Safety- This doesn’t have any cheating and nothing crazy for the mc genre, but strict safety readers might take offense with the fact that she’s celibate during the separation while he sleeps around. And there’re a couple on page scenes with sweet butts before they’re reunited.
dnf-for-now
December 9, 2024This series gets really good ratings and one of the reviews wished death upon people who read it, so......................of course I had to try and give my support. ;) But, well, hmmmmmm. I didn't care for the writing. So, dnf for now, but if you like this kind of fiction (la la la la fiction, that was my attempt at singing, like song writing) you might check it out. It's KU, so no harm no foul for me.
August 24, 2025
Meghan spent one night with a man named Noah, she thought he was the one but due to difficult parents she slipped out. Noah spent one night with the woman he new was his one and she disappeared and he has been looking for her ever since. Five years later Slicer has found her, but his sleeping with women to fill his pain for Meghan is keeping Meghan from giving him another chance, Noah though has a plan and he is going to prove to Meghan he is worthy of her love. Can he do this before her past catches up with her?
Another great one in this series. I think that this might be my favorite. I enjoyed every moment, Slicer is a bit of a man whore but immediately drops it when he sees Meghan again. These two area wonderful couple and was sad to see their story end.
Another great one in this series. I think that this might be my favorite. I enjoyed every moment, Slicer is a bit of a man whore but immediately drops it when he sees Meghan again. These two area wonderful couple and was sad to see their story end.
November 14, 2023
Love less than perfect characters
December 17, 2023
I loved this one. It was amazing. I loved Slicer. Finally back together again and so amazing. I can't wait to read the next book.
November 4, 2023
a good read
This has a good story with interesting characters that will pull you into the story as it progresses through to the HEA. The biker and his Resident Dr. have a rocky courtship after reuniting from a five year absence from each other where he searched for her and she searched for him. There is a threat from her cult family, the sweet-butts cause havoc, a kidnapping occurs and justice is obtained. It is a wonderful book. I enjoyed it very much.
This has a good story with interesting characters that will pull you into the story as it progresses through to the HEA. The biker and his Resident Dr. have a rocky courtship after reuniting from a five year absence from each other where he searched for her and she searched for him. There is a threat from her cult family, the sweet-butts cause havoc, a kidnapping occurs and justice is obtained. It is a wonderful book. I enjoyed it very much.
October 7, 2023
loved it.
What a great read. Fast paced with lots of drama and some serious craziness. Meghan’s parents and “friends” all needed to die for sure. Sickos. Noah “Slicer” was such a great guy. Loved him. And little Lilah and her pranks was hilarious. Meghan might have been raised by some awful people but she was an amazing mom and one loyal girl. Great read.
What a great read. Fast paced with lots of drama and some serious craziness. Meghan’s parents and “friends” all needed to die for sure. Sickos. Noah “Slicer” was such a great guy. Loved him. And little Lilah and her pranks was hilarious. Meghan might have been raised by some awful people but she was an amazing mom and one loyal girl. Great read.
February 3, 2024
Please get an editor
Please!!! Find someone to edit for you!! You can get help for free! Your books have a good story line, the errors just seem to get worse. Yes, I read them, but it is painful. And please get on the Internet and research America!!!
Please!!! Find someone to edit for you!! You can get help for free! Your books have a good story line, the errors just seem to get worse. Yes, I read them, but it is painful. And please get on the Internet and research America!!!
February 18, 2025
What Misoynistic Abusive Piece of Trash They All Are Scapegoating Clitter, Fuck His Abusive Ass
Wow, there is a clear widening divide between the misogynists and the womanists, isn't there.
The pathetic little pick mes who make sure Clitter takes the punishment, and not only that, that she knows her place.
I hated her on page one.
Wanted her to slit all their throats by the last page.
What the fuck is this shit?
Meghan is a Fucking Celibat.
She is vile.
Clitter gets punished over and over because this asshole chose to emotionally invest in getting, maintain, sustaining and stimulating to orgasm, an erection around her.
That is an emotion investment.
Clitter gets communally raped at an emotional level by these people.
These people are why Trump gets into power.
These people are communal narcissists.
Clitter gets punished because hes not emotionally invested enough in Meghan to not Dick around.
Abuser.
All of them.
But they aren't real, are they?
They are fake people that exist for the Unseen, Unloved and utterly Unfucked of the world, who sit and feel jealous of how "at least the domestic abuse victims get noticed" and need to tell the Raped of the world, how to nuance their rape enabling.
A Green Pilled Patriarchial Parable of Toxicity.
To grift of necrotic pussies.
Wow, there is a clear widening divide between the misogynists and the womanists, isn't there.
The pathetic little pick mes who make sure Clitter takes the punishment, and not only that, that she knows her place.
I hated her on page one.
Wanted her to slit all their throats by the last page.
What the fuck is this shit?
Meghan is a Fucking Celibat.
She is vile.
Clitter gets punished over and over because this asshole chose to emotionally invest in getting, maintain, sustaining and stimulating to orgasm, an erection around her.
That is an emotion investment.
Clitter gets communally raped at an emotional level by these people.
These people are why Trump gets into power.
These people are communal narcissists.
Clitter gets punished because hes not emotionally invested enough in Meghan to not Dick around.
Abuser.
All of them.
But they aren't real, are they?
They are fake people that exist for the Unseen, Unloved and utterly Unfucked of the world, who sit and feel jealous of how "at least the domestic abuse victims get noticed" and need to tell the Raped of the world, how to nuance their rape enabling.
A Green Pilled Patriarchial Parable of Toxicity.
To grift of necrotic pussies.
December 9, 2024
3.5 stars. In all honesty this was pretty tame and laid back compared to the others. We finally get Slicer's, aka manwhore's story. He was rather gross to be honest 🙈. Sorry. Meg is the doctor we met a couple books back. They had a ONS. They both get tricked by an ow named Cindy and go 5 yrs without seeing each other. During that time they're both looking for one another. Meg loves Noah so much she stays celibate. While Noah f**** anything in a skirt with easy access 🙃. But of course he's imagining it's Meg. Yeah, not a fan when author's do this. When they're finally reunited she walks in a church to find him and Clitter going at it. Why is Clitter even still around? I'm not understanding this. I don't care if they've known her since they were in highschool. She's trying to sabotage everyone's relationship and whispering in ol' ladies ears. Yet Meg is ok around her in the end? Why go in that direction? She caused a lot of problems between Meg and Noah while also attacking her. These MC men are idiots 😂.
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December 4, 2023
Love found again
Slicer and Meghan had a one night stand 5 years ptior. They've been looking for each other since. A lot of people stood in their way o er the years but they meet again at Dagger's wedding.
I. Lowered my rating as the book just repeats prior books or repeats what was in the chapter before just from the others point of view. To me it was unnecessary. Also many errors.
Slicer and Meghan had a one night stand 5 years ptior. They've been looking for each other since. A lot of people stood in their way o er the years but they meet again at Dagger's wedding.
I. Lowered my rating as the book just repeats prior books or repeats what was in the chapter before just from the others point of view. To me it was unnecessary. Also many errors.
February 22, 2025
Finally
This one has been a long time coming he finally found her and they have a beautiful daughter love it
The ending was the closure that they needed after everything. This book will be hard for some dealing with cults and child marriages but I loved the book
This one has been a long time coming he finally found her and they have a beautiful daughter love it
The ending was the closure that they needed after everything. This book will be hard for some dealing with cults and child marriages but I loved the book
December 7, 2023
3 ⭐⭐⭐ - OK or decent reads.
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Club whores really have no limits and measure no consequences to hook a brother.
Our heroes are separated for years due to the jealousy of the women our hero had sex with and they desire to become an old lady. Not to mention the heroine's crazy parents.
It's a ready-made recipe for disaster.
If you overlook the poor grammar, you enjoy a good story.
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Club whores really have no limits and measure no consequences to hook a brother.
Our heroes are separated for years due to the jealousy of the women our hero had sex with and they desire to become an old lady. Not to mention the heroine's crazy parents.
It's a ready-made recipe for disaster.
If you overlook the poor grammar, you enjoy a good story.
December 2, 2023
Probably would have enjoyed it more if the first 7 chapters or so didn’t describe the H shenanigans in detail with OW while he was looking for the h 🙄 she kind of had a little bit of a back bone …stressing the little bit. She of course was celibate and using her brain studying to be a doctor and landing it etc.
Anyway could have been a win even with all the first lot of chapters but I just couldn’t be bothered and didn’t believe H connection with h.
Anyway could have been a win even with all the first lot of chapters but I just couldn’t be bothered and didn’t believe H connection with h.
February 17, 2024
This is not a safe read at all so I'm gonna spoil. For the following reasons, I can't recommend this book and it appears the men all were with other women before and after meeting their heroine from what is mentioned in the book. In addition, it sounds as if a lot of couples suffer from OW/OM drama that keeps them apart also. (This is book 5 of the series). A lot of grammar & spelling issues and it's obvious the author is from UK though the story is set in the U.S.
#1 worst thing is a child is kidnapped, and later it's stated that an older man held her down while a man who is her "fiance" touches her privates. That's as far as it got but I'm sick just writing that much down. This happened near the end and I would have DNF'd had it occurred earlier in the book. Nobody wants to read that stuff.
*The MMC is not faithful during separation. though he looks for her for years.
*There is mention of a horrible $exual a$$ault a FMC in a previous book suffered. I'm won't mention what was done, just hearing it in past tense was bad enough.
*There is a cult which practices child marriage (as young as 10 years old), and there are scenes with adult men discussing things that will turn your stomach.
The main characters Meghan & Noah (Slicer) meet & have insta-love. Spend the night together but a co-worker of hers who wants and lies and tells her he is a one-and-done kind of guy (they bump into each other when she goes outside to make a call) so she leaves before he wakes up. He looks for her for 5 years but is with club sweet butt, on page and descriptive which I didn't need. It was gross, he would talk about how loose her c**t was and he was imagining it was the h (awwww make it stop!).
He wouldn't kiss anyone though (because kissing is only for his true love, what a guy *eyeroll). When they FINALLY meet again, it's at a mutual friends wedding and he is screwing the ho in a doorway!!! Not exactly the reunion I was hoping would be epic. This may sound crazy considering what I've reviewed so far but the author actually wrote him in a way that I believed how much he loved the h and he was in fact faithful once he found her again (aside from church thing before he saw her).
Meghan, I liked a lot and that is why I'm giving 2 stars. She was strong and kind and really not a doormat. When she discovered she was pregnant she immediately tried to find him even though she only knew his true first name. She reached out to multiple MCs trying to find him but due to their legal names not being used and the secrecy of the clubs, she couldn't find him. She also figured out her "friend" was jealous of her getting with Noah and probably lied to her because she completely changed and was trying to get her fired (didn't work). Noah later went back to the diner looking for her and the friend, Cindy told him she was temporary and moved on. She was also honest with her daughter, telling her about looking for her father. When her child is taken she doesn't pull a too stupid to live stunt. Nope, she arms herself and isn't afraid to use it. She's also becoming a doctor. She's almost too perfect.
Side note, the daughter, Lilah's practical jokes were just silly beyond belief that a 4 year old could pull them off.
Oh this book could have been so much more. I really did like the plot and I found a lot of the characters likable and interesting. And believe it or not I did like Noah and Meghan together and it felt like their love was real and deep. This author sometimes reminds me of Leann Ashers whose books are so over-the-top unrealistic but the guiltiest of pleasures (I say with affection), big difference is once those guys lay eyes on their women, even a 5 year separation wouldn't make them unfaithful. Unrealistic, yes but I'm not reading for reality. I want the sweet fantasay.
So, in the end. Not sorry I read it. A little sad because I really would like to read the other stories but it's just not for me.
#1 worst thing is a child is kidnapped, and later it's stated that an older man held her down while a man who is her "fiance" touches her privates. That's as far as it got but I'm sick just writing that much down. This happened near the end and I would have DNF'd had it occurred earlier in the book. Nobody wants to read that stuff.
*The MMC is not faithful during separation. though he looks for her for years.
*There is mention of a horrible $exual a$$ault a FMC in a previous book suffered. I'm won't mention what was done, just hearing it in past tense was bad enough.
*There is a cult which practices child marriage (as young as 10 years old), and there are scenes with adult men discussing things that will turn your stomach.
The main characters Meghan & Noah (Slicer) meet & have insta-love. Spend the night together but a co-worker of hers who wants and lies and tells her he is a one-and-done kind of guy (they bump into each other when she goes outside to make a call) so she leaves before he wakes up. He looks for her for 5 years but is with club sweet butt, on page and descriptive which I didn't need. It was gross, he would talk about how loose her c**t was and he was imagining it was the h (awwww make it stop!).
He wouldn't kiss anyone though (because kissing is only for his true love, what a guy *eyeroll). When they FINALLY meet again, it's at a mutual friends wedding and he is screwing the ho in a doorway!!! Not exactly the reunion I was hoping would be epic. This may sound crazy considering what I've reviewed so far but the author actually wrote him in a way that I believed how much he loved the h and he was in fact faithful once he found her again (aside from church thing before he saw her).
Meghan, I liked a lot and that is why I'm giving 2 stars. She was strong and kind and really not a doormat. When she discovered she was pregnant she immediately tried to find him even though she only knew his true first name. She reached out to multiple MCs trying to find him but due to their legal names not being used and the secrecy of the clubs, she couldn't find him. She also figured out her "friend" was jealous of her getting with Noah and probably lied to her because she completely changed and was trying to get her fired (didn't work). Noah later went back to the diner looking for her and the friend, Cindy told him she was temporary and moved on. She was also honest with her daughter, telling her about looking for her father. When her child is taken she doesn't pull a too stupid to live stunt. Nope, she arms herself and isn't afraid to use it. She's also becoming a doctor. She's almost too perfect.
Side note, the daughter, Lilah's practical jokes were just silly beyond belief that a 4 year old could pull them off.
Oh this book could have been so much more. I really did like the plot and I found a lot of the characters likable and interesting. And believe it or not I did like Noah and Meghan together and it felt like their love was real and deep. This author sometimes reminds me of Leann Ashers whose books are so over-the-top unrealistic but the guiltiest of pleasures (I say with affection), big difference is once those guys lay eyes on their women, even a 5 year separation wouldn't make them unfaithful. Unrealistic, yes but I'm not reading for reality. I want the sweet fantasay.
So, in the end. Not sorry I read it. A little sad because I really would like to read the other stories but it's just not for me.
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April 22, 2024
⭐️⭐️⭐️/5
🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
This one is much better than the previous books in this series. Things are more fleshed out and there are less plot holes.
Meg and Noah met and had an instant soulmate attraction. They sleep together that same night where he takes her virginity. The next morning a woman who she thought was her friend lied and told her Noah doesn’t do relationships. So Meg leaves while he’s still asleep. She finds out she’s pregnant and for the next five years they relentlessly search for each other until the fateful day of their mutual friends wedding where Meg walks into the church and finds Noah screwing a club whore in the doorway.
A tidbit of push and pull as Meg wants to just be friends to ensure their daughter has all of Noah’s attention. He doesn’t allow that to happen though and she gives in quickly.
As usual with this author, lots of OW drama. He is faithful to Meg once they find each other again though.
Things that annoy me about this book:
1) The OW drama. The OW gets forgiven by everyone, including the FMC, which is so stupid. This keeps happening in these books. Everyone knows these club whores are nasty and vile with bad intentions and the guys keep saying they should clean house and just get rid of all of them. Yet they never freaking do, thus allowing more drama to ensue.
Also the bit where Noah tells a club whore that the brothers don’t want to settle down with women who have slept with all the bikers and that they want women who are like their claimed women who only have sex with them and are basically pure is so fucking disgusting. These guys screw any and everything with a pulse, yet the women doing that are wrong? Misogynistic bullshit is what it is.
2) people do shitty things and get forgiven way to easily.
3) the repeated telling of the past books throughout the current book. Yes these are standalones but you can’t actual follow the story unless you read them in order. It’s too much filler.
4) please do research on the US if you are planning to write about it. Texas and Washington are not close to each other. You can’t make a day trip to and from there. Also, several words throughout don’t make sense or aren’t even real words.
This author has tons of potential and I can’t wait to see what they write when they get some skill under their belt. The plots and stories are fantastic but the format and plot holes need serious work.
🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
This one is much better than the previous books in this series. Things are more fleshed out and there are less plot holes.
Meg and Noah met and had an instant soulmate attraction. They sleep together that same night where he takes her virginity. The next morning a woman who she thought was her friend lied and told her Noah doesn’t do relationships. So Meg leaves while he’s still asleep. She finds out she’s pregnant and for the next five years they relentlessly search for each other until the fateful day of their mutual friends wedding where Meg walks into the church and finds Noah screwing a club whore in the doorway.
A tidbit of push and pull as Meg wants to just be friends to ensure their daughter has all of Noah’s attention. He doesn’t allow that to happen though and she gives in quickly.
As usual with this author, lots of OW drama. He is faithful to Meg once they find each other again though.
Things that annoy me about this book:
1) The OW drama. The OW gets forgiven by everyone, including the FMC, which is so stupid. This keeps happening in these books. Everyone knows these club whores are nasty and vile with bad intentions and the guys keep saying they should clean house and just get rid of all of them. Yet they never freaking do, thus allowing more drama to ensue.
Also the bit where Noah tells a club whore that the brothers don’t want to settle down with women who have slept with all the bikers and that they want women who are like their claimed women who only have sex with them and are basically pure is so fucking disgusting. These guys screw any and everything with a pulse, yet the women doing that are wrong? Misogynistic bullshit is what it is.
2) people do shitty things and get forgiven way to easily.
3) the repeated telling of the past books throughout the current book. Yes these are standalones but you can’t actual follow the story unless you read them in order. It’s too much filler.
4) please do research on the US if you are planning to write about it. Texas and Washington are not close to each other. You can’t make a day trip to and from there. Also, several words throughout don’t make sense or aren’t even real words.
This author has tons of potential and I can’t wait to see what they write when they get some skill under their belt. The plots and stories are fantastic but the format and plot holes need serious work.
August 14, 2025
Rating System (as of 8/14/2025):
⭐: It was a struggle to read. I almost DNF
⭐⭐ : This could have been so much better.
⭐⭐⭐: Good/Average
⭐⭐⭐⭐: Great book. I will probably reread it.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐: I absolutely loved this book.
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Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Triggers:
Cult
Child Kidnapping
Child Molestation
Tropes:
Second Chance
MF Romance
MC Romance
OW Drama
ONS
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Summary:
FMC and MMC have a one night stand in which she runs out on him the next morning. MMC looks for her but cannot find her. The FMC discovers she is pregnant and looks for the MMC but cannot find them. They are separated for five years. At a mc wedding the FMC and MMC find each other.
Disclaimer:
This is book five in the Untamed Hell Fire’s MC Series. Last year I read Hawk, which is book seven in this series. At that time I rated Hawk as two stars. Having joined a few mc lovers Facebook groups I found that this author is a favorite. I decided to reread Hawk but to read it in the order of the series. Having done that I changed my rating to three stars. Although the books state they can be read as standalones I find that reading them in order helps for a better experience as the book characters cross over in each book. If you are a fan of mc books and are looking for a quick read in which you know that they are going to have an HEA this is the series for you.
Review:
I have read the ONS/Surprise Baby trope many times. This story was written slightly different. I enjoyed how the author took the story in a slightly different direction. I once again applaud how she handled the subject of abuse and kidnapping---but maybe it could have been flushed out a little more. As I am reading through the series I am enjoying how the characters cross over and how you get to know there background prior to their specific book. I am also enjoying the development of the authors writing. All in all this was a nicely written story.
MC Book Author Recommendations:
Eve Black
Candice Wright
Samantha Cole
Penny Dee
Sandy Alvarez & Crystal Daniels
Audrey Bell
⭐: It was a struggle to read. I almost DNF
⭐⭐ : This could have been so much better.
⭐⭐⭐: Good/Average
⭐⭐⭐⭐: Great book. I will probably reread it.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐: I absolutely loved this book.
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Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Triggers:
Cult
Child Kidnapping
Child Molestation
Tropes:
Second Chance
MF Romance
MC Romance
OW Drama
ONS
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Summary:
FMC and MMC have a one night stand in which she runs out on him the next morning. MMC looks for her but cannot find her. The FMC discovers she is pregnant and looks for the MMC but cannot find them. They are separated for five years. At a mc wedding the FMC and MMC find each other.
Disclaimer:
This is book five in the Untamed Hell Fire’s MC Series. Last year I read Hawk, which is book seven in this series. At that time I rated Hawk as two stars. Having joined a few mc lovers Facebook groups I found that this author is a favorite. I decided to reread Hawk but to read it in the order of the series. Having done that I changed my rating to three stars. Although the books state they can be read as standalones I find that reading them in order helps for a better experience as the book characters cross over in each book. If you are a fan of mc books and are looking for a quick read in which you know that they are going to have an HEA this is the series for you.
Review:
I have read the ONS/Surprise Baby trope many times. This story was written slightly different. I enjoyed how the author took the story in a slightly different direction. I once again applaud how she handled the subject of abuse and kidnapping---but maybe it could have been flushed out a little more. As I am reading through the series I am enjoying how the characters cross over and how you get to know there background prior to their specific book. I am also enjoying the development of the authors writing. All in all this was a nicely written story.
MC Book Author Recommendations:
Eve Black
Candice Wright
Samantha Cole
Penny Dee
Sandy Alvarez & Crystal Daniels
Audrey Bell
October 12, 2025
Slicer and Morgan
All it takes is one time and one moment to figure out that Life can change in an instinct. Morgan is running from the clutches of her parents since she has been promised to a man that believes that younger and submission is a proper way for a woman. Slicer is living life with no responsibilities and no obligations just simply living day-to-day. All that changes the moment that he lays his eyes on the waitress at a diner. They have one night that they devote to one another a little do they know that that devotion is gonna cost them five years of longing and devastation. Morgan spends every chance she gets trying to find the man that not only saved her, but gave her a lasting memory. Slicer spent five years, trying to get rid of the memory of Morgan by involving himself with the club bunnies every chance he gets. All that changes win Morgan is doing her residency near the MC clubhouse. Loved reading how slicer struggles to find himself and the woman that changes his life. Couldn’t put the book down loved every moment about this romantic story. Can’t wait to read the next book in this series.
All it takes is one time and one moment to figure out that Life can change in an instinct. Morgan is running from the clutches of her parents since she has been promised to a man that believes that younger and submission is a proper way for a woman. Slicer is living life with no responsibilities and no obligations just simply living day-to-day. All that changes the moment that he lays his eyes on the waitress at a diner. They have one night that they devote to one another a little do they know that that devotion is gonna cost them five years of longing and devastation. Morgan spends every chance she gets trying to find the man that not only saved her, but gave her a lasting memory. Slicer spent five years, trying to get rid of the memory of Morgan by involving himself with the club bunnies every chance he gets. All that changes win Morgan is doing her residency near the MC clubhouse. Loved reading how slicer struggles to find himself and the woman that changes his life. Couldn’t put the book down loved every moment about this romantic story. Can’t wait to read the next book in this series.
February 25, 2024
The importance of proof reading
‘To’ and ‘too’ are incorrectly used 90% of the time in this book. ‘Your’ is possessive, not ‘you’re’ (short for you are); I’ve added that description because the author uses them the wrong way round in over 90% of this book, a practice that continues the wrong way these two words were used in the previous books.
These books are being written for adults, and as adults, when reading this book, we would expect to have the fundamental aspects of the book correct such as spelling, grammar, and using the correct versions of words in sentences. It strikes of the book not being spell checked or proofread and of the whole writing and publication processes being rushed, and it not only detracts from the read but is actually annoying me now because it hasn’t improved by this fifth book in the series. I am loving the plots, these are otherwise a good read, but this is primary school stuff that should have been sorted before pressing the ‘submit’ button.
‘To’ and ‘too’ are incorrectly used 90% of the time in this book. ‘Your’ is possessive, not ‘you’re’ (short for you are); I’ve added that description because the author uses them the wrong way round in over 90% of this book, a practice that continues the wrong way these two words were used in the previous books.
These books are being written for adults, and as adults, when reading this book, we would expect to have the fundamental aspects of the book correct such as spelling, grammar, and using the correct versions of words in sentences. It strikes of the book not being spell checked or proofread and of the whole writing and publication processes being rushed, and it not only detracts from the read but is actually annoying me now because it hasn’t improved by this fifth book in the series. I am loving the plots, these are otherwise a good read, but this is primary school stuff that should have been sorted before pressing the ‘submit’ button.
November 22, 2024
Boring! Only things interesting was the hospital cases that Meghan had to attend to and the pranks of Lilah Rose!
Skimmed through the repeated contents from previous books and some His and her POV which were copy pasted.
The plot of both of them trying to find each other was unbelievable and even after Meghan came to know the love of her life who she was trying to find for her daughter was Slicer the manho( this she found out painfully) for 5 years and calling every MC , she didn't meet him for atleast 2 weeks because she didn't want to take any attention away from Mel and Daggers reunion and wedding!! Strange!! I would have thought Mel and Dag her friends would have wanted her n the baby to have a happy reunion with Slicer the Manho ASAP as she has been trying to find him since 5 long years! Anyhow this book also has the same stupid sweet / bitter butts causing problems between the couple.
Skimmed through the repeated contents from previous books and some His and her POV which were copy pasted.
The plot of both of them trying to find each other was unbelievable and even after Meghan came to know the love of her life who she was trying to find for her daughter was Slicer the manho( this she found out painfully) for 5 years and calling every MC , she didn't meet him for atleast 2 weeks because she didn't want to take any attention away from Mel and Daggers reunion and wedding!! Strange!! I would have thought Mel and Dag her friends would have wanted her n the baby to have a happy reunion with Slicer the Manho ASAP as she has been trying to find him since 5 long years! Anyhow this book also has the same stupid sweet / bitter butts causing problems between the couple.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 1, 2025
So many issues with this book (and all the author’s books).
The potential was there for a really great story. Strong heroine, troubled her. But what held this back from being a 4 star was:
1. Grammar and sentence structure issues. This books needs strong copy editing.
2. Plot is not well developed. So much potential, but it failed.
3. Continuity issues - character ages, timelines
4. Believability (however one spells hat) - no MC books is believable but this more so. Characters act in contrary ways that don’t make sense. There is a sort nice cluelessness to the characters which doesn’t make sense for an MC story based on the around 100 MC books I’ve read. I’m all for being different and unique in one’s writing, but the actions etc. don’t make sense separately or as a whole.
I’ll still read the others but where I would have bought this it remains a Kindle Unlimited.
Highly disappointing.
The potential was there for a really great story. Strong heroine, troubled her. But what held this back from being a 4 star was:
1. Grammar and sentence structure issues. This books needs strong copy editing.
2. Plot is not well developed. So much potential, but it failed.
3. Continuity issues - character ages, timelines
4. Believability (however one spells hat) - no MC books is believable but this more so. Characters act in contrary ways that don’t make sense. There is a sort nice cluelessness to the characters which doesn’t make sense for an MC story based on the around 100 MC books I’ve read. I’m all for being different and unique in one’s writing, but the actions etc. don’t make sense separately or as a whole.
I’ll still read the others but where I would have bought this it remains a Kindle Unlimited.
Highly disappointing.
February 23, 2025
Hallelujah!! Sophie finally got out in her place. Like this was the highlight for me and why this has 3 stars.
I felt like there was less bitching from the women despite the punch up. I mean seriously.
In order to create drama and make the heroine seem more intelligent than others, the part about the cafeteria lady who no one picked up she was hemorrhaging but the heroine …. In a hospital … come on 🙄. That hospital would be shut down with law suits if that’s their level of care. But I guess the heroine was there to save the day (albeit the patient died).
And a child care centre who gives a child to their grand parents without them being in the visitor list? No.
Too many things are just so far fetched in this series.
At least the heroine didn’t die on the table 3 times 🙄.
I must say all of these books, there is a shit tonne of crying by the bikers going on. Everyone has tears streaming down their cheeks, unshed tears or misted eyes. Like ALL the time.
Pussies.
I felt like there was less bitching from the women despite the punch up. I mean seriously.
In order to create drama and make the heroine seem more intelligent than others, the part about the cafeteria lady who no one picked up she was hemorrhaging but the heroine …. In a hospital … come on 🙄. That hospital would be shut down with law suits if that’s their level of care. But I guess the heroine was there to save the day (albeit the patient died).
And a child care centre who gives a child to their grand parents without them being in the visitor list? No.
Too many things are just so far fetched in this series.
At least the heroine didn’t die on the table 3 times 🙄.
I must say all of these books, there is a shit tonne of crying by the bikers going on. Everyone has tears streaming down their cheeks, unshed tears or misted eyes. Like ALL the time.
Pussies.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 10, 2025
The H is a treasurer in a MC. The h is a waitress in a diner. They meet when the H is on a run and stormy weather forces the group to stop overnight. They eat at the diner. The H and h have an ONS. The h leaves and her charm bracelet is left behind. When the H returns to the diner to find the h, a jealous coworker lies to him and tells him she's just passing through.
The h's parents belong to a religious cult and have planned to marry her off to a man who is much older. The h discovers she is pregnant. She tries contacting MC and asking for him but they don't recognize the given name he told her. She doesn't know his club name. She finishes med school and begins her residency.
Five years later she and their daughter come across him banging an OW at a wedding. Evidence of how much they thought of each other over the five years (meaningful tattoo, charms for the bracelet) helps to address the infidelity.
The h's parents belong to a religious cult and have planned to marry her off to a man who is much older. The h discovers she is pregnant. She tries contacting MC and asking for him but they don't recognize the given name he told her. She doesn't know his club name. She finishes med school and begins her residency.
Five years later she and their daughter come across him banging an OW at a wedding. Evidence of how much they thought of each other over the five years (meaningful tattoo, charms for the bracelet) helps to address the infidelity.
November 30, 2025
Bikers never learn the way to a woman's heart is not found with another woman.
She has been trying to get away from a cult parents for years and medical school is her way out. she has one night that was supposed to be just for her but he left a present behind and she spends years trying to find him so he can meet her. when they finally meet again the club girl is in claims him and yells scaring their daughter making her snap at the girl and him to come face to face with her for the first time. when she's finally convinced to go the club the girl attacks her and she vows never to return only for the brothers to corner her at work and beg for him and forgiveness for themselves. when the daycare releases her to the wrong people she saves her and herself by ridding the world of the pervert causing her to shut down. the story concludes with an amazing birthday party for their baby girl slash surprise wedding for her.
She has been trying to get away from a cult parents for years and medical school is her way out. she has one night that was supposed to be just for her but he left a present behind and she spends years trying to find him so he can meet her. when they finally meet again the club girl is in claims him and yells scaring their daughter making her snap at the girl and him to come face to face with her for the first time. when she's finally convinced to go the club the girl attacks her and she vows never to return only for the brothers to corner her at work and beg for him and forgiveness for themselves. when the daycare releases her to the wrong people she saves her and herself by ridding the world of the pervert causing her to shut down. the story concludes with an amazing birthday party for their baby girl slash surprise wedding for her.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 7, 2025
We meet Meghan in the second book of this series and her character pops up all through this series. This story was one I enjoyed as it didn't have all of the over the top action, drama etc.
This couple end up being separated for over 5 years all because of miscommunication and jealousy on part of a sweet butt/club girl.
Our FMC tried her very best to find Slicer and enlists all the help she can get to.find the father of her child whilst our MMC lives his best life sometimes remembering the FMC (EVEN THOUGH HE CLAIMS TO THINK OF HER ALL THE TIME).
This was a quick read and brought the much needed closure to this couple.
These books all follow a recipe of a club brother finding his old lady. He messes up big time. Both main characters have baggage of some sort. Grovel time and a happily ever after.
This couple end up being separated for over 5 years all because of miscommunication and jealousy on part of a sweet butt/club girl.
Our FMC tried her very best to find Slicer and enlists all the help she can get to.find the father of her child whilst our MMC lives his best life sometimes remembering the FMC (EVEN THOUGH HE CLAIMS TO THINK OF HER ALL THE TIME).
This was a quick read and brought the much needed closure to this couple.
These books all follow a recipe of a club brother finding his old lady. He messes up big time. Both main characters have baggage of some sort. Grovel time and a happily ever after.
March 15, 2024
I liked this book and enjoy this series, but...
Why did this book, which is #5 in the series, retell all the other books before finally getting the main characters to meet again at 30% of the book? The last book ended with them seeing each other at a wedding, so I thought that's where we would pick up again, but no, we get a summary of all the stories first.
So this is why I only gave this book 3 stars, dual POV'S does Not mean retelling the events with the same dialog,twice, or in other words, using that tactic to make your word count higher. A good editor would help you figure that out. There were a few mistakes and Meg because Mel at one point. I want to enjoy a nice story that flows, not skim over stuff you already told us, twice!
Why did this book, which is #5 in the series, retell all the other books before finally getting the main characters to meet again at 30% of the book? The last book ended with them seeing each other at a wedding, so I thought that's where we would pick up again, but no, we get a summary of all the stories first.
So this is why I only gave this book 3 stars, dual POV'S does Not mean retelling the events with the same dialog,twice, or in other words, using that tactic to make your word count higher. A good editor would help you figure that out. There were a few mistakes and Meg because Mel at one point. I want to enjoy a nice story that flows, not skim over stuff you already told us, twice!
July 23, 2024
Loooove!!
Damn I loved this book, the storyline was frikken crazy, disgusting, angering, cute, emotional & hot as hell with that smut!
I really fell in love with Slicer in this, I could feel all his emotions of longing for his love, then the way he just automatically fell in to his role of daddy was beautiful!
Loved Meg since Dagger & Mel’s story but boy oh boy did I not expect her background. She done amazing to escape those unfathomable scumbags (I hope all filth like them rott in hell!)
I always love a happy ending but this one I especially loved after all their years apart searching for each other.
Now onto Flame & Star, I have been dying for their story, I’m soooo excited!!
Damn I loved this book, the storyline was frikken crazy, disgusting, angering, cute, emotional & hot as hell with that smut!
I really fell in love with Slicer in this, I could feel all his emotions of longing for his love, then the way he just automatically fell in to his role of daddy was beautiful!
Loved Meg since Dagger & Mel’s story but boy oh boy did I not expect her background. She done amazing to escape those unfathomable scumbags (I hope all filth like them rott in hell!)
I always love a happy ending but this one I especially loved after all their years apart searching for each other.
Now onto Flame & Star, I have been dying for their story, I’m soooo excited!!
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