I find it difficult to get into the first 30% of the book. I'm not sure if there's a book needed to be read before this because it seems like all the relationships between the MCs and side characters have already been established.
Lauren and Hart have known each other since freshman year. Their friends are close, but they never became more than acquaintances. Yet for some reason, in their senior year, Lauren joined a dance competition, and that's the first time Hart saw her perform. Then he all of a sudden developed some sort of attraction to her, and she did too.
Idk, but there's just something about the writing style that doesn't vibe with me. Also, this is way too long for a story that is not even complicated. It became sort of repetitive with her dancing, his baseball games and practices, them studying, eating, and sleeping together. Add in the underprivileged kids and teens Lauren was trying to teach/support. Then that bomb about her father's identity. Even though there seemed to be a lot going on, it didn't feel overwhelming. Tbh,, I felt bored at some parts and had to skim them.
Also, I think the constant Spanish convos didn't make it any better. Look, I don't speak the language, so I'm going to need the translation right then and there on the page. Unfortunately, these translations are situated in a different chapter in the end.
Anyway, it just didn't work for me, and I tried to push through, but it just didn't get any better.
Book info:
- College romance
- Sports romance (baseball)
- Death of a loved one
- Domestic violence
- Abandonment issues
- Mention of bullying (past)
- Speech condition (past)
- Broody x Broody
- Dual V
- No cheating, OM/OW, separation
- HEA (10 yrs later, married with 3 sons and 1 girl otw)