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Bitsy
Bitsy's life has always been under the wing of the ruthless and overly protective Phantoms MC. Raised within the confines of their brotherhood, she's learned to survive in a world where danger is as constant as the roar of engines.
But when a threat emerges that even her family can't shield her from, Bitsy knows she must escape, if only for a few precious days of freedom. Igniting her motorcycle's engine, she rides off into the unknown, seeking solace and a chance to clear her troubled mind.
Viper, the formidable Enforcer of the Obsidian MC, lives by a different code, one rooted in family and unwavering loyalty. When he discovers an unconscious woman on the side of the road, his life takes an unexpected turn. Bitsy's arrival in his life is a storm he never saw coming.
As Bitsy awakens, she confides in Viper, revealing the imminent danger that haunts her. Though he knows he can't eliminate the threat physically, Viper makes a decision that will change both their lives forever. He becomes her unwavering protector, her rock in the midst of turmoil, and he'll do whatever it takes to keep her safe.
But as they navigate the treacherous waters of the Obsidian MC, Viper soon realizes that Bitsy's life isn't the only one hanging in the balance. Loyalties will be tested, secrets will unravel, and the line between right and wrong will blur.
How can Viper keep Bitsy safe when his own life is in danger?
But when a threat emerges that even her family can't shield her from, Bitsy knows she must escape, if only for a few precious days of freedom. Igniting her motorcycle's engine, she rides off into the unknown, seeking solace and a chance to clear her troubled mind.
Viper, the formidable Enforcer of the Obsidian MC, lives by a different code, one rooted in family and unwavering loyalty. When he discovers an unconscious woman on the side of the road, his life takes an unexpected turn. Bitsy's arrival in his life is a storm he never saw coming.
As Bitsy awakens, she confides in Viper, revealing the imminent danger that haunts her. Though he knows he can't eliminate the threat physically, Viper makes a decision that will change both their lives forever. He becomes her unwavering protector, her rock in the midst of turmoil, and he'll do whatever it takes to keep her safe.
But as they navigate the treacherous waters of the Obsidian MC, Viper soon realizes that Bitsy's life isn't the only one hanging in the balance. Loyalties will be tested, secrets will unravel, and the line between right and wrong will blur.
How can Viper keep Bitsy safe when his own life is in danger?
148 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 30, 2023
108 people are currently reading
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About the author
Carol Dawn
42 books350 followersCarol Dawn was born in Maysville, Kentucky, USA, under the name Carolyn Jacobs. Carol is a stay-at-home mom where she spends her days making pb&j sandwiches, picking up toys, and giving her kids more cuddles than they want.
At the young age of five, Carol received a reading medallion for reading over twenty-one books in an eight-week period. So, her literary journey began. She wrote poems, songs, short stories and read many books.
Carol has a slight (MASSIVE) obsession with alpha male/insta-love romance books. If she isn't reading about them, she's writing about them.
When she isn't writing, reading or playing mom, you will find her watching re-runs of Stargate SG1, Startrek Voyager, cooking, coloring mandalas or performing her favorite songs for her invisible audience.
At the young age of five, Carol received a reading medallion for reading over twenty-one books in an eight-week period. So, her literary journey began. She wrote poems, songs, short stories and read many books.
Carol has a slight (MASSIVE) obsession with alpha male/insta-love romance books. If she isn't reading about them, she's writing about them.
When she isn't writing, reading or playing mom, you will find her watching re-runs of Stargate SG1, Startrek Voyager, cooking, coloring mandalas or performing her favorite songs for her invisible audience.
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October 1, 2023
amazing
How to describe this book, amazing, beautifully written, angst and so much love. Bitsy is a brilliant book, one that I connected to on a personal level. I don’t like giving away plots but I will say Carol wrote this book exceptionally well. Bitsy and Viper were just perfect together. I loved that Bitsy bridged the cap between the Phantoms and the new guys in Obsidian MC. I can’t wait to see what comes next.
How to describe this book, amazing, beautifully written, angst and so much love. Bitsy is a brilliant book, one that I connected to on a personal level. I don’t like giving away plots but I will say Carol wrote this book exceptionally well. Bitsy and Viper were just perfect together. I loved that Bitsy bridged the cap between the Phantoms and the new guys in Obsidian MC. I can’t wait to see what comes next.
November 26, 2023
Fast
This was a short fast paced book I liked how they fell in love instantly but the trigger for me is the cancer story line I've lost a number of people in my life to this disease and reading a. Story about it just upsets me a little
This was a short fast paced book I liked how they fell in love instantly but the trigger for me is the cancer story line I've lost a number of people in my life to this disease and reading a. Story about it just upsets me a little
October 3, 2023
Bitsy
Such a fantastic read. I absolutely loved Bitsy and Viper’s story ❤️❤️❤️ they had such an unusual meeting with Viper rescuing her after a bike accident. He felt connected to her from that moment. Bitsy is dealing with a devastating disease and just wanted a few days to herself before revealing this to her family. Now she is at the Obsidian MC clubhouse recovering from her injuries and blurts out to everyone she’s dealing with cancer. Viper vows to be by her side throughout all her treatments. They are being hounded by an enemy they don’t know. When Viper thinks Bitsy has been kidnapped he inadvertently gets himself kidnapped not knowing Bitsy is safe. Things go from bad to worse but he is brought back from deaths doors. This story had me on tenterhooks, I couldn’t put the book down. I was thoroughly entertained while reading it and 100% recommend the book to everyone ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ you will not be disappointed 😎 I can’t wait for the next book featuring the Obsidian MC
Such a fantastic read. I absolutely loved Bitsy and Viper’s story ❤️❤️❤️ they had such an unusual meeting with Viper rescuing her after a bike accident. He felt connected to her from that moment. Bitsy is dealing with a devastating disease and just wanted a few days to herself before revealing this to her family. Now she is at the Obsidian MC clubhouse recovering from her injuries and blurts out to everyone she’s dealing with cancer. Viper vows to be by her side throughout all her treatments. They are being hounded by an enemy they don’t know. When Viper thinks Bitsy has been kidnapped he inadvertently gets himself kidnapped not knowing Bitsy is safe. Things go from bad to worse but he is brought back from deaths doors. This story had me on tenterhooks, I couldn’t put the book down. I was thoroughly entertained while reading it and 100% recommend the book to everyone ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ you will not be disappointed 😎 I can’t wait for the next book featuring the Obsidian MC
September 20, 2023
Definitely recommend!! The story line flows so well and keeps you turning the pages, but yes tissues will be needed. Bitsy has her own secrets and reasons for wanting to escape for a few days and winds up in the arms of Viper, the Enforcer for Obsidian MC.
Obsidian MC is all about family and love, just like the Phantoms MC, and Carol is bringing us some new characters.
I really enjoyed riding this emotional roller coaster, and seeing the love, angst, alpha protectiveness, and you will as well.
Obsidian MC is all about family and love, just like the Phantoms MC, and Carol is bringing us some new characters.
I really enjoyed riding this emotional roller coaster, and seeing the love, angst, alpha protectiveness, and you will as well.
September 20, 2023
Wow, I am speechless. I love all of Carol Dawn's books. This one was just over the top. It is definitely a tear jerker. I had tears from beginning to end. There were happy tears and sad tears. I had a hard time putting this book down. I didn't stop reading until it was completely fone. This was an emotional read for me. Carol Dawn did a wonderful job of showing weakness, laughter and tears. This is definitely a must read.
October 8, 2023
Excellent
I was a bit worried about this book because the last couple of books that I had read by this author were just not as good as her previous books. I am so happy to say that this book was just awesome! So happy that she is back to writing up to her potential. Loved the characters and storyline. Kept my attention from the start. Good characters and good twists and turns plus action and some humor. Overall this book was great!
I was a bit worried about this book because the last couple of books that I had read by this author were just not as good as her previous books. I am so happy to say that this book was just awesome! So happy that she is back to writing up to her potential. Loved the characters and storyline. Kept my attention from the start. Good characters and good twists and turns plus action and some humor. Overall this book was great!
September 19, 2023
Wow I don’t know where to begin. This story has everything you could possibly want. So much drama, angst, and most importantly love. I absolutely adore these characters. This s a perfect way to bridge two different groups of characters. It’s also a perfect way to introduce new characters. I can’t wait for more and will miss my old friends. Absolutely epic.
September 21, 2023
Bitsy's story is one filled with sadness, acceptance and love .
You're going to need some tissues for this one ladies and gentlemen because it's a sad one .
It was good to see the Phantoms MC in this book and it's also a start to a new MC series as well.
I'm looking forward to reading the new books in this series
You're going to need some tissues for this one ladies and gentlemen because it's a sad one .
It was good to see the Phantoms MC in this book and it's also a start to a new MC series as well.
I'm looking forward to reading the new books in this series
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September 26, 2023
Bitsy is a character that we all loved in the Phantam MC series and she didn’t let us down in her own story. She is a strong character who has her own challenges to overcome and Viper is the perfect man to be her rock and help her through it all. This book has it all: the story, characters, love and suspense that we alway get in a Carol Dawn book. This is a great introduction to new MC series.
September 30, 2023
Good short read
I've read all of Carol's books on Amazon. This one was pretty good and sticks to the normal plot scheme. It did however have a little too much theatrical speaking from the thoughts of the main characters. It just seemed to go on for way too long. Other than that it was definitely a good short romantic read.
I've read all of Carol's books on Amazon. This one was pretty good and sticks to the normal plot scheme. It did however have a little too much theatrical speaking from the thoughts of the main characters. It just seemed to go on for way too long. Other than that it was definitely a good short romantic read.
October 1, 2023
Great transition
This was a great transition from the Phantoms MC to the Obsidian MC. We are introduced to new characters while still semi-interacting with past ones. Bitsy has always been a favorite of mine, so to see her get her HEA was great! I can’t wait for more from this author.
This was a great transition from the Phantoms MC to the Obsidian MC. We are introduced to new characters while still semi-interacting with past ones. Bitsy has always been a favorite of mine, so to see her get her HEA was great! I can’t wait for more from this author.
October 2, 2023
Absolutely beautiful story
This is a beautiful, heartbreaking and inspiring story. Get the tissues ready for this one. All grown up and trying to find some independence for a bit before her life is changed more than anyone ever imagines. Bitsy is a true survivor. Viper is a man who has all the feels and won’t let her go. The strongest love a couple can have.
This is a beautiful, heartbreaking and inspiring story. Get the tissues ready for this one. All grown up and trying to find some independence for a bit before her life is changed more than anyone ever imagines. Bitsy is a true survivor. Viper is a man who has all the feels and won’t let her go. The strongest love a couple can have.
October 3, 2023
Another great book from one of my favorite authors. But you better get the tissue box ready for this one. Definitely a strong woman mc leads the story. After all that she goes through it’s wonderful to see her Find the love of her life. Would highly recommend anyone who loves a good tearjerker romance.
October 11, 2023
This book is the cross over to a new MC. It sees Cap's daughter moving on with her life years after we first saw her.
The pace is quick, and has lots of new characters that you'll get to know over time.
Bitsy and Reaper work through the trials thrown their way, both personal and club based, and come out stronger at the end.
The pace is quick, and has lots of new characters that you'll get to know over time.
Bitsy and Reaper work through the trials thrown their way, both personal and club based, and come out stronger at the end.
September 28, 2023
I loved it it delt with some tough health issues both psyical and emotional. but this is what I like about her books. this was the story of Bitsy and the coming together of two clubs. this one you can read on its own but as always if you read all of her books you will love it even more.
September 30, 2023
I enjoyed how the author transitioned from Phantom MC to the Obsidian MC using Bitsy's story. This book was another insta-love story with drama, action and a HEA. I couldn't put it down once I started reading it!
October 2, 2023
You were not kidding about the tissues! This was an awesome story about overcoming obstacles. I love seeing the next generation of series I have already read. I am glad to know they will be more from the Obsidian MC.
October 4, 2023
Great book
This book had my emotions on a roller coaster. I cried in the beginning and then laughed. I love how she combines her people all together and made this girl to be a badass. I love alk if this authors books
This book had my emotions on a roller coaster. I cried in the beginning and then laughed. I love how she combines her people all together and made this girl to be a badass. I love alk if this authors books
October 5, 2023
Hands down an amazing read which will have you going through a lot of different emotions, Bitsy is a strong female character and i love her wit and strong will. i love the way she has been part of the glue for the Phantom MC. Just know have this is emotional read,
October 5, 2023
Bitsy by Carol Dawn was so good. It was book one in her new MC series, Obsidian MC. She introduced us to new MC characters along with touching on the Phantoms. The story was original and interesting. Kudos!
October 10, 2023
A terrific story
This was an intense, suspenseful, and intriguing story with many unexpected twists that you won't want to miss. Can't wait for the rest of the new series.
I would definitely recommend this book, series, and outstanding author.
This was an intense, suspenseful, and intriguing story with many unexpected twists that you won't want to miss. Can't wait for the rest of the new series.
I would definitely recommend this book, series, and outstanding author.
October 11, 2023
emotional rollercoaster
What an emotional rollercoaster this author has taken me on. I love this author she can pull you in so it feels like your actually. Emotional but omg soo good
What an emotional rollercoaster this author has taken me on. I love this author she can pull you in so it feels like your actually. Emotional but omg soo good
November 15, 2023
good
I wish there was more to the story a bit I felt a bit underwhelmed. I’m also a sucker for a nice epilogue and felt like it could’ve been executed better it just felt rushed in the end. All in all though it was an alright book!
I wish there was more to the story a bit I felt a bit underwhelmed. I’m also a sucker for a nice epilogue and felt like it could’ve been executed better it just felt rushed in the end. All in all though it was an alright book!
December 22, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this book from start to finish and could not put this down. I absolutely loved the blend from the Phantoms MC to the Obsidian MC, and I absolutely adored these characters so much.
October 8, 2023
New starts
This is Bitsy and boy do I love her! What a start to a new mc, fresh new characters and such a different story line.
This is Bitsy and boy do I love her! What a start to a new mc, fresh new characters and such a different story line.
October 14, 2023
One of The Best Ugly Cries
This was a rollercoaster of emotions but one of the best ugly cries I have had in quite awhile. Carol Dawn you continue to impress me.
This was a rollercoaster of emotions but one of the best ugly cries I have had in quite awhile. Carol Dawn you continue to impress me.
October 18, 2023
It was an ok read. More focused on the issues with Bitsy than anything. A bit confusing at times as to which character was speaking but for the most part it was an ok quick little read.
October 22, 2023
Bitsy
Cap daughter is grown up and looking for freedom. She finds it but she's got a secret. She's got lung cancer and must deal with that while finding a new family and man.
Cap daughter is grown up and looking for freedom. She finds it but she's got a secret. She's got lung cancer and must deal with that while finding a new family and man.
October 27, 2023
interesting
What makes this book stand out from others is the cancer diagnosis of a young lead character. Her fortitude was admirable.
What makes this book stand out from others is the cancer diagnosis of a young lead character. Her fortitude was admirable.
October 29, 2023
Great read
It was a hard read. But I have to say it was a really great story line. To watch them go through all they did and end up with a happy ending was great.
It was a hard read. But I have to say it was a really great story line. To watch them go through all they did and end up with a happy ending was great.
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