First, thanks to Netgally for the advanced copy!
Hybrid Magic follows Winnie, a young woman working to become a mage. When she's invited to join a special delegation to help alleviate dark magic in a newly-friendly country, she agrees, excited to learn. But things aren't always as simple as they may seem.
It should be noted that this book is the first book in a second part of a series. What follows in my review may largely be due to the fact that I did not know to read the first three books in that series. (Note, I was also unaware there were other books because NetGalley's site incorrectly labeled it as Destia's Dragon Shifter War #1 with no mention of it being a Part 2).
While an effort was clearly made for this to stand alone, I don't think it does. So much so that I think this should have been Book 4 rather than Part 2 Book 1. Reading this as a standalone, I found myself wishing I was reading the earlier books because the backstory seemed so much more interesting than what I was reading. I didn't realize it had books before and wondered why I was reading about a magical cleaning crew rather than an evil wizard and a magical war. It felt like an unnecessary extra season tacked onto the end of a great show, only I hadn't seen the great show. It's not a standalone, so don't read it if you haven't read Part 1.
TO START: I didn't hate every minute of this book. If I wasn't reading it for Netgalley, though, I likely would have given up before it got good. The first 2/3 dragged because of the heavy exposition and lack of drama.
I was initially excited for this book because, based on the description, it had a lot of promise. I like mages. I LOVE dragons. All good things! The last third of the book delivered on this promise and was truly great. There were even some great moments that seemed to me to be pretty cool foreshadowing (if the next books are going where I think they are). Honestly, if the first 2/3 of the book were condensed into a few chapters and the last third was more drawn out, more complex, it would have been a MUCH better book. It would have been the book the description promised.
But, the description lied. It said it was about a girl and a dragon but we don't meet the dragon until 2/3 of the way through the book (at which point it gets good). The cover also lied- it shows a girl with glowing green hands but that's not a thing at any point. This problem was largely due to the extraordinary amount of exposition and backstory (which wouldn't be necessary if this were sold as a 4th book in a series rather than a Part 2 Book 1).
There was TOO MUCH exposition. The book started at a snail's pace because everything from Part 1 had to be explained again and again in detail so that a reader who hadn't read Part 1 would have all the necessary context. This book does not stand alone. It doesn't. Not only was there a ridiculous amount of backstory and exposition, but it's done in a very clunky way. The majority of the backstory (particularly at the very beginning) is not done through the prose, but through the dialogue. The problem this creates is that you show two characters who just lived through an event... asking each other basic questions about the event. They were often asking about things they should already have known the answer to. A lot of the exposition could have (and should have) been done at the very least in a long, detailed prologue. But realistically, it wouldn't have been needing if this was Book 4.
Part of what also confused me was how the main character, Winnie, was treated by the people around her. About halfway through the book it's revealed that she's directly and solely responsible for figuring out the evil wizard's weak point and how to kill him. She's the reason the war ended. She's the reason that they are in times of (admittedly tenuous) peace. She worked directly for the King on the very important project of saving people that ended with her figuring all this out. She's a badass.
No one treats her like it. They keep trying to make her prove herself. She's disregarded and scoffed at. She's treated like something stuck to the bottom of everyone's shoe instead of a WAR HERO. And not just any war hero- one of three people who brought about the end of the war. Everyone should know who she is. They should be star-struck by her. They should be listening to her ideas because her ideas literally ended a war. Instead they wave her off, they treat her like she's completely irrelevant, and she walks around parties alone, with no one even looking in her direction. At one point someone from the rival nation says something along the lines of "ignore her, she's young and just an assistant.' SHE LITERALLY ENDED A WAR.
Even worse, she thinks she's right. I've had enough of bad*ss heroines who think they're nothing special. Girls can be awesome and know it. They can be proud without being boastful. I know it's done a lot in fantasy, but honestly it's to such a degree here that Winnie almost seemed pathetic. She let everyone ignore her and mistreat her and was like "I get it. I'm used to it" which makes no sense! She's a strong, intelligent woman and she's allowing herself to be a doormat and accepting it as the way she is. "I'm nothing special" kind of attitude. Make it make sense.
There were a lot of inconsistencies or things that just didn't make sense.
For example, the grandmother could have been completely cut from this. Aside from exposition, the scenes she appeared in gave us nothing. But Winnie also talks about how her grandma is proud of how Destin (their country) focuses on helping everyone reach their full potential for contributing to society. Her granddaughter is a war hero and well-respected scholar. And she's mostly worried about... marrying her off? The character was completely inconsistent.
Another example: all the people who revile the peace agreement wear red everywhere, everyday. They're also the biggest supporters of the now dead evil sorcerer. Why would they be advertising their out-of-date alliance? It would be like Death Eaters walking around in Dark Mark t-shirts AFTER Voldemort died. Why would they do that?
Third example: the high council of the country they're invited to is fighting over whether they should be allowed into the country at all. Half the council wants to throw them out. And yet, she's able to walk around the city alone, unmolested, despite very clearly being Destian and not Fantisian? If the council hate Destians, people on the streets (who lost more in the war than council members probably did) would LOATHE Destians. She would be yelled at, assaulted, followed. Instead, people just kind of look at her funny.
The dragons.
Dragons fly! Duh. They have telepathy! Cool! The telepathy has a very limited range and is essentially useless. Not so cool. Not one of them breathes fire at any point which is... not dragons. Also not dragons? Doing as they're told by humans and behaving as though they are humans' pets. These dragons are super easy to kidnap. They can be held down by some chains and a handful of guards. And worst of all, they can see all the magic that exists in the world in a way human's can't. But they can't use it. It seemingly doesn't do anything except give them good intuition. They've had this power for centuries but no dragon has ever been able to use it to manipulate the world around them. Cue main character.
Winnie gets access to this sight and five minutes later is using it to change things and save people. It almost overwhelms her but then the dragon's like "Hey calm it down" and she's like "Oh is that all?" and magically is in complete control of it. Later someone else gains access and the ability to manipulate the magic around them is IMMEDIATE and stronger than even Winnie has managed.
The dragons were so weak. They were basically giant birds with an appreciation for the magic of nature.
The book could have used another edit, sad to say. There were small proofreading errors and grammatical mistakes throughout. It's not a big deal to a lot of readers, which is fine, but for snobs like me, it can easily ruin a book. Those errors disrupt the flow of the writing and take the reader out of the fantasy. The dialogue was also awkward. Yes, because of the heavy expositional conversations held by character who both already know that information, but also because it was just awkward. The author couldn't decide whether to use old-timey grammar or more current ways of speaking, which led to "Worry not" and "Keep in touch" being in the same paragraph. Characters would say "I know not" but also use contractions. It was very strange to read.
All in all, this is a fun, light YA fantasy book that has its issues and should have been Book 4 in the series. It spent so much time on exposition that it didn't really have much story on its own. Cutting down on the exposition could have saved 50 pages, and those pages could have been dedicated to the most interesting part of the story that gets a bit rushed at the end. If you're selling a book about a girl and her dragon, the dragon should show up at some point in the first half of the book!