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In 1930s Mississippi, Mary Johnson hates the oppressive heat, working on her family farm, and having to attend her minister father’s church several times a week. But she loves Mason Carter, her musician boyfriend. Both fantasize about living the high life up north in the big city.
When William Bevers, a wealthy old preacher, comes to court her, he promises a life of luxury along with money and status for her family. Mary wants nothing to do with him, but her parents decide for her. Determined to avoid a forced marriage, Mary elopes with Mason to the bright lights of Chicago.
But life up north is not the dream they expected. Multiple tragedies push Mary to the brink, and she soon returns home to the very world she tried so desperately to escape.
Too numb to stave off the pressure from her father, Mary considers accepting William’s proposal. But she soon realizes that life as the preacher’s wife might not provide the safety and security she craves.
In 1930s Mississippi, Mary Johnson hates the oppressive heat, working on her family farm, and having to attend her minister father’s church several times a week. But she loves Mason Carter, her musician boyfriend. Both fantasize about living the high life up north in the big city.
When William Bevers, a wealthy old preacher, comes to court her, he promises a life of luxury along with money and status for her family. Mary wants nothing to do with him, but her parents decide for her. Determined to avoid a forced marriage, Mary elopes with Mason to the bright lights of Chicago.
But life up north is not the dream they expected. Multiple tragedies push Mary to the brink, and she soon returns home to the very world she tried so desperately to escape.
Too numb to stave off the pressure from her father, Mary considers accepting William’s proposal. But she soon realizes that life as the preacher’s wife might not provide the safety and security she craves.
304 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 10, 2023
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Deborah L. King
3 books358 followersDeborah King has been a writer and storyteller her whole life. She published her first short story when she was seven years old. When she’s not writing, Deborah enjoys cartoons, cooking, photography, and Star Trek. Born and raised in Chicago, Deborah has managed to achieve all of her childhood dreams and still lives in the area with her husband and two youngest children. According to her daughter, she has “literally aced her life!”
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October 19, 2023
Important things you need to know about the book:
Mary Not Broken is the 3rd book in the Glory series. You can read this book as a standalone. This book explains how Mary morphed into the woman portrayed in the first two Glory books. Even though you can read this book at any point in the duology, I would recommend reading Mary Not Broken first and then Glory Bishop and Glory Unbound afterward.
Mary Not Broken alternated between medium and fast-paced. I had no issues with the pacing, but I did have to go back and reread paragraphs before certain events sunk in. But I blame that on being sick and unable to focus (thank you, Nightquil!!). There was a little lag towards the end between Mary leaving Mississippi and meeting Glory’s father. But, it did not affect how much I enjoyed the book.
There are trigger warnings in Mary Not Broken. If any of these trigger you, I suggest not reading the book. They are:
Domestic Violence (on-page and graphic)
Abortion (on and off page)
Miscarriage (on and off page)
Infant Death (on and off page)
Teenage Marriage (on page)
Forced Marriage (on page)
Drug Use (off-page)
Drug Overdose (on page)
Child Death (on page)
Grief (on page)
Cheating (on page)
Sexual Content: There is sexual content in Mary Not Broken. But none of it is graphic. The author keeps it nondescriptive. It worked for me because if the sex scenes were explicit, it would have taken away from the storyline.
Language: There is foul language used in Mary Not Broken.
Setting: Mary Not Broken is set mainly in Mississippi, in the towns of Flora and Jackson. A couple of chapters are set in Harlem, New York, and the last half of the book is set in Chicago, Illinois.
Plot Synopsis (as spoiler-free as I can get):
Mary Johnson hates living in Flora, Mississippi. But what she hates even more is that her father has arranged her marriage to an older preacher. A strong-willed girl, Mary flees with her sweetheart to Chicago and then Harlem. But when a tragedy forces her home, Mary is again pressured to marry. Numb from what happened, Mary agrees to the marriage, only to find herself in a situation that becomes unbearable. Instead of breaking, Mary learns to bend and rely on only herself. Will Mary ever be free of her husband? Will she be able to live the life she wants? And, most importantly, will Mary have a child to love?
Main Characters
Mary Johnson: I read this book with a preconceived notion about Mary because of the previous two books. If you have read the Glory series, you understand what I am talking about and why I disliked her. But, as I read her story and saw what she went through, my dislike was tempered. Everything that happened to her (from the deaths of her first four children to Glory’s birth) tempered and shaped her into the woman she was in the first two books. I pitied her by the end of the book, and I understood her. But I could never like her.
Secondary characters: The secondary characters in Mary Not Broken were beautifully written. There were some that I couldn’t stand, others that annoyed me, and others that I liked. Each character adds their nuance and depth to the storyline.
My review:
Mary Not Broken was a good read. As I mentioned above, I went into this book not liking and not wanting to understand the main character. But, the author did an excellent job of writing this younger character of Glory’s mother in a way that I pitied and, to an extent, understood. The storyline was wonderfully written, and I enjoyed the recipes at the end.
The entire storyline centers on Mary and the years before she gave birth to Glory. The author was able to add depth to a character that I despised and was able to make me pity her. The author also showed that a strong-willed young woman can morph into the abusive mother portrayed in the Glory series. I almost didn’t want that transformation to happen, if I am going to be honest. I wanted Mary to heal from everything that happened to her.
The end of Mary Not Broken held so much hope and love. I almost wanted the author to rewrite the Glory series to what I glimpsed there. But, knowing what I know, it made me so sad to read what I read.
Many thanks to Deborah L. King for allowing me to read and review Mary Not Broken. All opinions stated in this review are mine.
Mary Not Broken is the 3rd book in the Glory series. You can read this book as a standalone. This book explains how Mary morphed into the woman portrayed in the first two Glory books. Even though you can read this book at any point in the duology, I would recommend reading Mary Not Broken first and then Glory Bishop and Glory Unbound afterward.
Mary Not Broken alternated between medium and fast-paced. I had no issues with the pacing, but I did have to go back and reread paragraphs before certain events sunk in. But I blame that on being sick and unable to focus (thank you, Nightquil!!). There was a little lag towards the end between Mary leaving Mississippi and meeting Glory’s father. But, it did not affect how much I enjoyed the book.
There are trigger warnings in Mary Not Broken. If any of these trigger you, I suggest not reading the book. They are:
Domestic Violence (on-page and graphic)
Abortion (on and off page)
Miscarriage (on and off page)
Infant Death (on and off page)
Teenage Marriage (on page)
Forced Marriage (on page)
Drug Use (off-page)
Drug Overdose (on page)
Child Death (on page)
Grief (on page)
Cheating (on page)
Sexual Content: There is sexual content in Mary Not Broken. But none of it is graphic. The author keeps it nondescriptive. It worked for me because if the sex scenes were explicit, it would have taken away from the storyline.
Language: There is foul language used in Mary Not Broken.
Setting: Mary Not Broken is set mainly in Mississippi, in the towns of Flora and Jackson. A couple of chapters are set in Harlem, New York, and the last half of the book is set in Chicago, Illinois.
Plot Synopsis (as spoiler-free as I can get):
Mary Johnson hates living in Flora, Mississippi. But what she hates even more is that her father has arranged her marriage to an older preacher. A strong-willed girl, Mary flees with her sweetheart to Chicago and then Harlem. But when a tragedy forces her home, Mary is again pressured to marry. Numb from what happened, Mary agrees to the marriage, only to find herself in a situation that becomes unbearable. Instead of breaking, Mary learns to bend and rely on only herself. Will Mary ever be free of her husband? Will she be able to live the life she wants? And, most importantly, will Mary have a child to love?
Main Characters
Mary Johnson: I read this book with a preconceived notion about Mary because of the previous two books. If you have read the Glory series, you understand what I am talking about and why I disliked her. But, as I read her story and saw what she went through, my dislike was tempered. Everything that happened to her (from the deaths of her first four children to Glory’s birth) tempered and shaped her into the woman she was in the first two books. I pitied her by the end of the book, and I understood her. But I could never like her.
Secondary characters: The secondary characters in Mary Not Broken were beautifully written. There were some that I couldn’t stand, others that annoyed me, and others that I liked. Each character adds their nuance and depth to the storyline.
My review:
Mary Not Broken was a good read. As I mentioned above, I went into this book not liking and not wanting to understand the main character. But, the author did an excellent job of writing this younger character of Glory’s mother in a way that I pitied and, to an extent, understood. The storyline was wonderfully written, and I enjoyed the recipes at the end.
The entire storyline centers on Mary and the years before she gave birth to Glory. The author was able to add depth to a character that I despised and was able to make me pity her. The author also showed that a strong-willed young woman can morph into the abusive mother portrayed in the Glory series. I almost didn’t want that transformation to happen, if I am going to be honest. I wanted Mary to heal from everything that happened to her.
The end of Mary Not Broken held so much hope and love. I almost wanted the author to rewrite the Glory series to what I glimpsed there. But, knowing what I know, it made me so sad to read what I read.
Many thanks to Deborah L. King for allowing me to read and review Mary Not Broken. All opinions stated in this review are mine.
May 18, 2024
Oh Mary! I’m glad she got her happy ending. Reading Mary’s story makes me imagine a different life for Glory Hallelujah. I’d love to read Malcolm and his mother’s story.
June 1, 2024
3.75 stars
This was a wild ride! Trauma upon trauma upon trauma 😭
I thought young Mary was fun and full of spunk, I hate that she turned into everything she used to hate to get her happy ending, but I think the plot is true to how a lot of religious people felt in the 40s-60s (I mean some people still adopt this way of thinking about God today).
It took me some hours to process how I felt about this book (and I’m still processing). The writing style and plot definitely kept my attention. It seemed like the author was trying to balance the characters’ (Christian) views on sin and God’s wrath/grace, but I wish there had been some type of realization for Mary that God wasn’t punishing her for her past? I don’t know. I know this is part of a series though so maybe I’ll have to read the other books to see how things play out.
This was a wild ride! Trauma upon trauma upon trauma 😭
I thought young Mary was fun and full of spunk, I hate that she turned into everything she used to hate to get her happy ending, but I think the plot is true to how a lot of religious people felt in the 40s-60s (I mean some people still adopt this way of thinking about God today).
It took me some hours to process how I felt about this book (and I’m still processing). The writing style and plot definitely kept my attention. It seemed like the author was trying to balance the characters’ (Christian) views on sin and God’s wrath/grace, but I wish there had been some type of realization for Mary that God wasn’t punishing her for her past? I don’t know. I know this is part of a series though so maybe I’ll have to read the other books to see how things play out.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 10, 2023
This gorgeous cover attracted me to this novel. It foretold of the beautiful writing within its pages. This author can write - i look forward to reading more of her in the future.
This is a complicated story of a young woman’s life, made more difficult by limitations placed on her as a Black woman. The book is gripping. Mary is a fascinating character, and the story of her life was powerful. I’ll not spoil the story, but it’s memorable and worthy. It’s full of rich details and characters, has a thought provoking plot with both intense pain and love. This is a really fine novel.
This is a complicated story of a young woman’s life, made more difficult by limitations placed on her as a Black woman. The book is gripping. Mary is a fascinating character, and the story of her life was powerful. I’ll not spoil the story, but it’s memorable and worthy. It’s full of rich details and characters, has a thought provoking plot with both intense pain and love. This is a really fine novel.
April 10, 2024
This book was so good. I stumbled across this on KU, and I'm so glad I did. Mary had a rough life, growing up poor in the country. She dealt with a lot of hardship from such an early age. As the story continued, Mary made a lot of bad choices. Some were sacrifices to help her family & some were foolish, lol. I felt for Mary, but I was so happy when she stood up for herself.
I didn't realize this was book #3 in a series. I'm going back to read the other two books!
I didn't realize this was book #3 in a series. I'm going back to read the other two books!
July 9, 2024
This book was extremely slow in some parts.
Mary went through a lot that caused her to act this way but she got on my nerves. But now I understand why Mary acted the way she did in The Glory series… I wish I had read this first.
Ruthie was my favorite character.
Mary went through a lot that caused her to act this way but she got on my nerves. But now I understand why Mary acted the way she did in The Glory series… I wish I had read this first.
Ruthie was my favorite character.
October 30, 2023
"Mary Not Broken" by Deborah King is a gripping tale set in the 1930s Mississippi that beautifully captures the complexities of love, ambition, and the struggle for independence. Mary Johnson, the protagonist, despises the stifling heat, her family's farm, and the rigid religious life imposed by her father. Instead, she dreams of escaping to the city with her musician boyfriend, Mason Carter.
The story takes an unexpected turn when a wealthy preacher, William Bevers, enters the scene, offering Mary a life of luxury and financial stability for her family in exchange for her hand in marriage. Forced into a decision by her parents, Mary elopes with Mason to Chicago in pursuit of their dreams. However, life up north proves to be far from the glamorous escape they envisioned.
Deborah King masterfully weaves a tale of trials and tribulations, as the couple faces one tragedy after another. Mary's journey, filled with hardships, showcases her resilience and determination to escape the shackles of societal expectations. Her return to the oppressive world she sought to leave behind is a poignant reminder of the difficulties women faced in that era.
The characters in the book are well-developed, and their struggles feel authentic. Mary's internal conflict is brilliantly portrayed, highlighting the tension between her desire for security and her yearning for independence. The narrative draws readers into the emotional turmoil of the characters, making their journey relatable and engaging.
One unique and delightful aspect of the book is the inclusion of southern recipes. These add an extra layer of authenticity to the setting and the characters' lives, making the story even more immersive. They provide a sensory dimension to the narrative, allowing readers to experience the flavors and traditions of the time and place.
"Mary Not Broken" is a compelling story that explores themes of love, resilience, and the pursuit of one's dreams. Deborah King's vivid storytelling and the inclusion of southern recipes make this novel an enjoyable and thought-provoking read. It's a testament to the strength of the human spirit and the enduring quest for personal freedom. Overall, this book deserves four stars for its well-crafted narrative and memorable characters.
The story takes an unexpected turn when a wealthy preacher, William Bevers, enters the scene, offering Mary a life of luxury and financial stability for her family in exchange for her hand in marriage. Forced into a decision by her parents, Mary elopes with Mason to Chicago in pursuit of their dreams. However, life up north proves to be far from the glamorous escape they envisioned.
Deborah King masterfully weaves a tale of trials and tribulations, as the couple faces one tragedy after another. Mary's journey, filled with hardships, showcases her resilience and determination to escape the shackles of societal expectations. Her return to the oppressive world she sought to leave behind is a poignant reminder of the difficulties women faced in that era.
The characters in the book are well-developed, and their struggles feel authentic. Mary's internal conflict is brilliantly portrayed, highlighting the tension between her desire for security and her yearning for independence. The narrative draws readers into the emotional turmoil of the characters, making their journey relatable and engaging.
One unique and delightful aspect of the book is the inclusion of southern recipes. These add an extra layer of authenticity to the setting and the characters' lives, making the story even more immersive. They provide a sensory dimension to the narrative, allowing readers to experience the flavors and traditions of the time and place.
"Mary Not Broken" is a compelling story that explores themes of love, resilience, and the pursuit of one's dreams. Deborah King's vivid storytelling and the inclusion of southern recipes make this novel an enjoyable and thought-provoking read. It's a testament to the strength of the human spirit and the enduring quest for personal freedom. Overall, this book deserves four stars for its well-crafted narrative and memorable characters.
April 1, 2024
Ok so this book turned out better than I expected. I was glad to see Mary finally happy after all she’d been thru. Im curious to see how Glory’s life is going to play out in the next book of the series, “Glory Bishop”. Mary Not Broken is actually book #3 of the 3-book series, but can be read as a standalone. I’m glad that I read this one first though. I feel like its going to give me insight on how Glory’s life is influenced by already knowing the life events that molded her mothers life and beliefs.
November 28, 2023
Loved it!
Once again Deborah L. King writes a great book. I know this is supposed to be part of a trilogy but it is great by itself. I am just a regular booklover so I don't know all the correct words to use for a review but I have loved all 3 of her books and will continue to watch for another one.
Once again Deborah L. King writes a great book. I know this is supposed to be part of a trilogy but it is great by itself. I am just a regular booklover so I don't know all the correct words to use for a review but I have loved all 3 of her books and will continue to watch for another one.
April 29, 2024
Mary..Mary..
I really enjoyed this book. Mary went thru so much.. I had nonidea there were books before this about Glory..I am guessing Mary probably gave her a hard time trying to keep her righteous. About to read the other books too. Now I met Maru..Now For Glory...
I really enjoyed this book. Mary went thru so much.. I had nonidea there were books before this about Glory..I am guessing Mary probably gave her a hard time trying to keep her righteous. About to read the other books too. Now I met Maru..Now For Glory...
July 19, 2024
Mary takes you on an emotional roller-coaster ride. There are so many twists and turns, you just have to hold on until the end. Good from beginning to end.
September 28, 2023
Deborah King has done it again!
There’s always a hitch of breath with beginning a third book in a series, especially if it’s a prequel. Can lightning strike a third time? Will this prequel bring me to where it all began in the first book, and in a satisfying way? Will this book be faithful to the later version of the character? Will the third book equal the reading experience of the first two?
This is Deborah King, so, yes.
Mary Johnson yearns and strives, if not for something good, at least for something better. She is independent and smart, and not shy about it, but she has limited options as a Black woman in early and mid-century America. She strains against expectations placed on her by family, by society, by community, and certainly herself. Ultimately, her own expectations and sense of self are what propel and restrain her throughout the novel.
She is looking for love and happiness, and often the two are mutually exclusive. Mary’s moments of joy and pleasure are met with punishment. Eventually, Mary tries to make her world small enough to avoid punishments for speaking her mind or living with abandon (i.e. her “temptations.”) She attempts to be the architect of her own life, building walls to ward off disaster. However, she struggles to silence the inner voice that aches for something else. Throughout, we see the origins of the embittered, controlling, fearful-at-her-core, utterly riveting Mary that we got to know in Glory Bishop.
Once again, King pulls no punches. With economy of language and a gift for dialog, she brings us the spectrum of human experience: joy, anguish, triumph, tragedy, and everything in between. Once again, her characters leap off the page. With a few choice exchanges, lifetimes of relationships are expressed around a kitchen table.
Speaking of kitchen tables, do not read this book if you are hungry. Or, more correctly, you will get hungry reading this book. While around the kitchen table, her characters almost always are preparing or enjoying something scrumptious. Fear not, though. Ms. King has a few treats for you at the end!
Mary Not Broken grabs you by the shoulders and squeezes until the very last page. Highly recommend this book, as well as the entire series. (You can start with this book or with Glory Bishop).
4.5 stars rounded up.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
There’s always a hitch of breath with beginning a third book in a series, especially if it’s a prequel. Can lightning strike a third time? Will this prequel bring me to where it all began in the first book, and in a satisfying way? Will this book be faithful to the later version of the character? Will the third book equal the reading experience of the first two?
This is Deborah King, so, yes.
Mary Johnson yearns and strives, if not for something good, at least for something better. She is independent and smart, and not shy about it, but she has limited options as a Black woman in early and mid-century America. She strains against expectations placed on her by family, by society, by community, and certainly herself. Ultimately, her own expectations and sense of self are what propel and restrain her throughout the novel.
She is looking for love and happiness, and often the two are mutually exclusive. Mary’s moments of joy and pleasure are met with punishment. Eventually, Mary tries to make her world small enough to avoid punishments for speaking her mind or living with abandon (i.e. her “temptations.”) She attempts to be the architect of her own life, building walls to ward off disaster. However, she struggles to silence the inner voice that aches for something else. Throughout, we see the origins of the embittered, controlling, fearful-at-her-core, utterly riveting Mary that we got to know in Glory Bishop.
Once again, King pulls no punches. With economy of language and a gift for dialog, she brings us the spectrum of human experience: joy, anguish, triumph, tragedy, and everything in between. Once again, her characters leap off the page. With a few choice exchanges, lifetimes of relationships are expressed around a kitchen table.
Speaking of kitchen tables, do not read this book if you are hungry. Or, more correctly, you will get hungry reading this book. While around the kitchen table, her characters almost always are preparing or enjoying something scrumptious. Fear not, though. Ms. King has a few treats for you at the end!
Mary Not Broken grabs you by the shoulders and squeezes until the very last page. Highly recommend this book, as well as the entire series. (You can start with this book or with Glory Bishop).
4.5 stars rounded up.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 13, 2024
We first meet Mary in Deborah King's first two books, "Glory Bishop" and "Glory Unbound." Mary is the religiously zealous and abusive mother of the main character, Glory. "Mary Not Broken" was written to answer the question, just how did Mary become such a horrible person, let alone horrible mother. The following does contain some spoilers, but not enough to ruin the book for you. If you have read the Glory Bishop stories, you already know what is coming!
Some of Mary's past life was referred to in the first two books, but here is is all laid and expanded upon. Teen-age Mary is forced by her family into an arranged marriage with a man 40 years older than her. Rather than Mary him, she runs off with a boy her own age. Sadly, this elopement leads into unmitigated disaster, which Mary sees as punishment from God for her willful behavior.
After the many losses suffered in the is elopement, Mary returns home and marries the man arranged for her by her parents. Pastor Bevers is a clergyman and a professor at a local college; and unfortunately an abusive husband. Since Bevers is putting Mary's sisters through college, Mary is unable and unwilling to leave her abusive marriage. Ultimately the abuse breaks Mary's spirit, and she comes to believe she is a bad person and all that has happened to her is a deserved punishment from God.
Some important issue raised by all of these stories is how a one-sided interpretation of Christianity can lead into unconscionable behavior in the name of God. Mary and many others see only a God of retribution, ignoring the joy and happiness that can be part of a well-adjusted Christian life.
Akin to that are the horrible things families do to one another in the name of helping them. Her parents, who should be looking out for her, force her into an awful marriage with an abusive husband, the same way Mary forces Glory into an abusive marriage. It is said God punishes people into several generations; but it is the people themselves who perpetuate the punishment on themselves as cycles of abuse are handed down generation to generation.
Disclosure time: if you have read my previous reviews of the Glory Bishop stories you will already know Deborah is a co-worker and a friend. My preferences fall more into science fiction and the like, and I would probably not have read the books if I did not know Deborah. That said, I am glad that I read the books, it is good to step outside one's comfort zone and read something afield of the usual. Just as important, I am glad I read them because they are good books that are well worth reading.
Some of Mary's past life was referred to in the first two books, but here is is all laid and expanded upon. Teen-age Mary is forced by her family into an arranged marriage with a man 40 years older than her. Rather than Mary him, she runs off with a boy her own age. Sadly, this elopement leads into unmitigated disaster, which Mary sees as punishment from God for her willful behavior.
After the many losses suffered in the is elopement, Mary returns home and marries the man arranged for her by her parents. Pastor Bevers is a clergyman and a professor at a local college; and unfortunately an abusive husband. Since Bevers is putting Mary's sisters through college, Mary is unable and unwilling to leave her abusive marriage. Ultimately the abuse breaks Mary's spirit, and she comes to believe she is a bad person and all that has happened to her is a deserved punishment from God.
Some important issue raised by all of these stories is how a one-sided interpretation of Christianity can lead into unconscionable behavior in the name of God. Mary and many others see only a God of retribution, ignoring the joy and happiness that can be part of a well-adjusted Christian life.
Akin to that are the horrible things families do to one another in the name of helping them. Her parents, who should be looking out for her, force her into an awful marriage with an abusive husband, the same way Mary forces Glory into an abusive marriage. It is said God punishes people into several generations; but it is the people themselves who perpetuate the punishment on themselves as cycles of abuse are handed down generation to generation.
Disclosure time: if you have read my previous reviews of the Glory Bishop stories you will already know Deborah is a co-worker and a friend. My preferences fall more into science fiction and the like, and I would probably not have read the books if I did not know Deborah. That said, I am glad that I read the books, it is good to step outside one's comfort zone and read something afield of the usual. Just as important, I am glad I read them because they are good books that are well worth reading.
April 26, 2024
“Mary Not Broken” by Debora L. King is a gripping and emotionally charged novel that delves into the life of a woman facing incredible adversity. Set in the backdrop of 1935 Mississippi, the story follows Mary, a young woman whose life takes numerous tragic and challenging turns, from a forced marriage to the loss of her children and a series of misfortunes that test her faith and resolve.
The narrative is richly layered, exploring themes of familial duty, personal tragedy, faith, and redemption. Mary’s character is exceptionally well-crafted, allowing readers to deeply empathize with her struggles and her journey towards self-discovery and acceptance. The hardships she faces are heart-wrenching and painfully realistic, providing a stark look at the challenges faced by women in that era. King’s writing style is vivid and evocative, with a keen eye for detail that brings the historical setting of Mississippi to life. The portrayal of the societal norms and expectations of the time is spot-on, adding depth and authenticity to the story. The book does an excellent job of blending historical elements with the personal narrative of Mary, making it both educational and emotionally resonant.
The story’s pacing is well-balanced, with moments of intense drama and quiet introspection. Mary’s journey is one of profound transformation, as she grapples with her beliefs, the consequences of her choices, and the pursuit of personal happiness. Her evolution as a character is both believable and inspiring, making her story one that will stay with readers long after they turn the last page.
One of the most compelling aspects of “Mary Not Broken” is its exploration of the concept of sin and punishment. Mary’s belief that her hardships are divine retribution for her actions adds a layer of complexity to her character and drives much of the narrative. Her internal struggle with guilt and the search for forgiveness is a central theme that adds depth to the story.
The supporting characters are also well-developed, each contributing to Mary’s journey in meaningful ways. The relationships she forms, both positive and negative, shape her understanding of herself and the world around her.
In conclusion, “Mary Not Broken” is a poignant and powerful novel that offers a deeply moving and thought-provoking reading experience. Debora L. King has crafted a story that is both a compelling historical account and a profound exploration of human resilience and redemption. Highly recommended for readers who enjoy historical fiction with strong, complex female protagonists.
The narrative is richly layered, exploring themes of familial duty, personal tragedy, faith, and redemption. Mary’s character is exceptionally well-crafted, allowing readers to deeply empathize with her struggles and her journey towards self-discovery and acceptance. The hardships she faces are heart-wrenching and painfully realistic, providing a stark look at the challenges faced by women in that era. King’s writing style is vivid and evocative, with a keen eye for detail that brings the historical setting of Mississippi to life. The portrayal of the societal norms and expectations of the time is spot-on, adding depth and authenticity to the story. The book does an excellent job of blending historical elements with the personal narrative of Mary, making it both educational and emotionally resonant.
The story’s pacing is well-balanced, with moments of intense drama and quiet introspection. Mary’s journey is one of profound transformation, as she grapples with her beliefs, the consequences of her choices, and the pursuit of personal happiness. Her evolution as a character is both believable and inspiring, making her story one that will stay with readers long after they turn the last page.
One of the most compelling aspects of “Mary Not Broken” is its exploration of the concept of sin and punishment. Mary’s belief that her hardships are divine retribution for her actions adds a layer of complexity to her character and drives much of the narrative. Her internal struggle with guilt and the search for forgiveness is a central theme that adds depth to the story.
The supporting characters are also well-developed, each contributing to Mary’s journey in meaningful ways. The relationships she forms, both positive and negative, shape her understanding of herself and the world around her.
In conclusion, “Mary Not Broken” is a poignant and powerful novel that offers a deeply moving and thought-provoking reading experience. Debora L. King has crafted a story that is both a compelling historical account and a profound exploration of human resilience and redemption. Highly recommended for readers who enjoy historical fiction with strong, complex female protagonists.
October 11, 2023
I loved it! - Mary always wanted more than the rural life in MS to which she was born. The bright lights of big cities drew her like a moth to a flame. So it's no wonder that she defied her parents at every turn to make her dreams come true. But she realizes the price is too high when she loses everyone dear to her. Resigned to the consequences of her actions, she cedes to her parents' wishes and weds the old man they have chosen for their young daughter. Not to provide Mary with a good life, but to secure such for the family. A tractor for Pa and the hope of college for the remaining three girls. Is this the worth of Mary's life and happiness?
This is the story of so many young girls over history, basically sold into marriage to further their families' fortunes. A well-written tale that brought every detail into vivid color for me, from the backwoods of Flora to the college atmosphere in Jackson to the bright lights of Chicago. I rooted for Mary as she persevered under the strict hand of her husband, even as she made choices that would come back to haunt her. She snatched a measure of joy for herself and suffered the consequences. All for the love of her family. Mary practically puts herself on a cross at one point, convinced that God is punishing her for her sins. After years of clean living (except for the cigarette smoking she never gave up), she backslides (she didn't mean to) into the love and family she always wanted, her sacrifice and self-flagellation no more. But it was a long, heart-wrenching journey (the price of Job) to her personal joyfulness and I am so glad I took the time to read it.
As great as Mary is as a misguided heroine, I love Ruthie the most, her big sister's fierce protector. Even the pastor (despicable old coot) had to admire her after she whupped him good. She alone made it clear that Mary's sacrifice need not stand, that the family could make it if they stuck together. This coming from a young girl who also wanted more from life, but wasn't willing to sacrifice another to get it. Too bad their parents didn't feel the same.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This is the story of so many young girls over history, basically sold into marriage to further their families' fortunes. A well-written tale that brought every detail into vivid color for me, from the backwoods of Flora to the college atmosphere in Jackson to the bright lights of Chicago. I rooted for Mary as she persevered under the strict hand of her husband, even as she made choices that would come back to haunt her. She snatched a measure of joy for herself and suffered the consequences. All for the love of her family. Mary practically puts herself on a cross at one point, convinced that God is punishing her for her sins. After years of clean living (except for the cigarette smoking she never gave up), she backslides (she didn't mean to) into the love and family she always wanted, her sacrifice and self-flagellation no more. But it was a long, heart-wrenching journey (the price of Job) to her personal joyfulness and I am so glad I took the time to read it.
As great as Mary is as a misguided heroine, I love Ruthie the most, her big sister's fierce protector. Even the pastor (despicable old coot) had to admire her after she whupped him good. She alone made it clear that Mary's sacrifice need not stand, that the family could make it if they stuck together. This coming from a young girl who also wanted more from life, but wasn't willing to sacrifice another to get it. Too bad their parents didn't feel the same.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 22, 2024
Deborah L. King’s Mary Not Broken is a devastatingly beautiful story of resilience. It follows Mary—a fifteen year old girl—as she is thrust into womanhood. Her parents arrange for her to marry the much old preacher William Bevers, but in defiance of their wishes, she gets pregnant by a local boy, Mason. Together she and Mason run off and get married and move to the big city. At first, Mary enjoys the fast-paced glamour of the city life, but she soon also faces the dangers that city life can offer.
After a tragic twist of fate, Mary finds herself alone and must return home. Bevers’ offer of marriage is still on the table, and even though she doesn’t want to marry him, she realizes she is without many other options.
As Mary continues to fight to find love and her place in the world, the world begins to convince her that the tragic circumstances of her life are the consequences of her youthful sins. She falls victim to the lies the world would have her believe and must find a way back to herself.
King does an amazing job of portraying the sobering realities of the time. She highlights the injustices done to Mary in the name of religion, and she finds the delicate balance of living a good life and living a full life.
She also wrote Mary in a way that we can appreciate the struggles she faces, while still understanding how Mary’s beliefs came to be, and yet still be rooting for Mary to find her strength once more.
This story resonated with me in a way that truly caused for pause and reflection of my beliefs and experiences as well.
This is some excellent writing and I am looking forward to reading more from King.
I received a free copy of this book via Red Adept Publishing and am voluntarily leaving a review.
After a tragic twist of fate, Mary finds herself alone and must return home. Bevers’ offer of marriage is still on the table, and even though she doesn’t want to marry him, she realizes she is without many other options.
As Mary continues to fight to find love and her place in the world, the world begins to convince her that the tragic circumstances of her life are the consequences of her youthful sins. She falls victim to the lies the world would have her believe and must find a way back to herself.
King does an amazing job of portraying the sobering realities of the time. She highlights the injustices done to Mary in the name of religion, and she finds the delicate balance of living a good life and living a full life.
She also wrote Mary in a way that we can appreciate the struggles she faces, while still understanding how Mary’s beliefs came to be, and yet still be rooting for Mary to find her strength once more.
This story resonated with me in a way that truly caused for pause and reflection of my beliefs and experiences as well.
This is some excellent writing and I am looking forward to reading more from King.
I received a free copy of this book via Red Adept Publishing and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 7, 2024
Never Broken
I love historical fiction and the fact that this story was set in Mississippi circa 1935 really caught my attention.
Mary, in her teen years, was forced into an arranged marriage for the benefit of her family. That might not have been so bad, but her husband, preacher and teacher Will Bevers, was old enough to be her grandfather. Mary's heart was set on bright city lights and fast life. Bevers controlled her through mental and physical abuse. She had numerous affairs and pregnancies outside of her marriage. The poor decisions she made coupled with the many children she lost to death had her feeling she was being punished by God for her sinful ways.
With her father and husband both being preachers, along with being raised in the church, her struggles with God and religion were nearly insurmountable.
The freedom she had longed for, for decades, was hers after the death of her husband. By then, she had been beaten into submission and turned her life around, becoming 'holier than thou'.
This was an amazing saga of a southern woman who loved family, children and sought to find her place in life.
I was so saddened that her suffering was mostly due to trying to enrich her family, yet every time they saw the evidence of her abuse they asked 'what did you do this time?' What father allows his daughter to be beaten by a family friend?
I wish this book had come with discussion questions at the end because I think it would have helped me narrow down some of the events that occurred.
I haven't read the previous books in this series, but from the titles I can tell the stories are about Mary's one surviving child. It'll be interesting to see how Mary raises her daughter.
I love historical fiction and the fact that this story was set in Mississippi circa 1935 really caught my attention.
Mary, in her teen years, was forced into an arranged marriage for the benefit of her family. That might not have been so bad, but her husband, preacher and teacher Will Bevers, was old enough to be her grandfather. Mary's heart was set on bright city lights and fast life. Bevers controlled her through mental and physical abuse. She had numerous affairs and pregnancies outside of her marriage. The poor decisions she made coupled with the many children she lost to death had her feeling she was being punished by God for her sinful ways.
With her father and husband both being preachers, along with being raised in the church, her struggles with God and religion were nearly insurmountable.
The freedom she had longed for, for decades, was hers after the death of her husband. By then, she had been beaten into submission and turned her life around, becoming 'holier than thou'.
This was an amazing saga of a southern woman who loved family, children and sought to find her place in life.
I was so saddened that her suffering was mostly due to trying to enrich her family, yet every time they saw the evidence of her abuse they asked 'what did you do this time?' What father allows his daughter to be beaten by a family friend?
I wish this book had come with discussion questions at the end because I think it would have helped me narrow down some of the events that occurred.
I haven't read the previous books in this series, but from the titles I can tell the stories are about Mary's one surviving child. It'll be interesting to see how Mary raises her daughter.
June 6, 2024
Here’s another #indiespinesreadathon selection from April.
Mary Not Broken was a great read that kept me fully invested in the story, but it was also full of sorrow, suffering, and devastation. Life truly threw her a treacherous blow!
The story takes place in 1930s Mississippi where Mary is faced with a decision of marrying a man she doesn’t want. Should she marry him out of obligation, become a dutiful wife, for the sake of having a comfortable life for her and her family? Or, should she follow her heart? Each choice brings its on consequences…
This could be a sort of retelling of the biblical story of Job in the bible (which the author references in the story). A man heavy laden with long suffering.
As entertaining as the story was, it quickly became repetitive. Mary kept finding herself in the exact same situations, over and over again, with horrible consequences.
Books like this make me see the ripple effect of trauma; back in the time when women endured so much suffering and pain with no one to turn to. Never having a moment to pause and feel, process the pain, and heal, then being hit all over again. Mary endured soooo much loss, my soul ached for her.
I recommend this story for anyone who can handle a fast-paced religious fiction, with graphic abuse and loss. Deborah L. King is a new to me author and narrator that will stay on my radar!!
Mary Not Broken was a great read that kept me fully invested in the story, but it was also full of sorrow, suffering, and devastation. Life truly threw her a treacherous blow!
The story takes place in 1930s Mississippi where Mary is faced with a decision of marrying a man she doesn’t want. Should she marry him out of obligation, become a dutiful wife, for the sake of having a comfortable life for her and her family? Or, should she follow her heart? Each choice brings its on consequences…
This could be a sort of retelling of the biblical story of Job in the bible (which the author references in the story). A man heavy laden with long suffering.
As entertaining as the story was, it quickly became repetitive. Mary kept finding herself in the exact same situations, over and over again, with horrible consequences.
Books like this make me see the ripple effect of trauma; back in the time when women endured so much suffering and pain with no one to turn to. Never having a moment to pause and feel, process the pain, and heal, then being hit all over again. Mary endured soooo much loss, my soul ached for her.
I recommend this story for anyone who can handle a fast-paced religious fiction, with graphic abuse and loss. Deborah L. King is a new to me author and narrator that will stay on my radar!!
August 3, 2024
Mary Not Broken had me on an emotional roller coaster with my initial feeling being intrigued by Mary’s life. Then the events just continued to recycle until the last encounter where she would become the “good wife”. This book was interesting how it had a child to save the entire family and while doing so didn’t realize her own self worth ( ok I digress a bit).. Upon coming into her own life she graduated from being the family savior to now the holier than thou daughter/friend/sister. The book offered many laughs ( cooking meatloaf in August), moments of oh my, and a moment in particular that felt offensive.
The author definitely delivered a work of art that leaves you intrigued and offers an array of characters that will have you laughing and saying oh wow that’s an interesting person.
I alternated between the audio and EBook. Money WELL SPENT for the actress reading the audio. She was interesting with nice voice inflection and nice transitions from character to character. She was EXCELLENT!
The author definitely delivered a work of art that leaves you intrigued and offers an array of characters that will have you laughing and saying oh wow that’s an interesting person.
I alternated between the audio and EBook. Money WELL SPENT for the actress reading the audio. She was interesting with nice voice inflection and nice transitions from character to character. She was EXCELLENT!
February 18, 2025
The book began in rural Mississippi in 1935 when Mary at aged 15 is being forced by her father to marry a much older man who is a preacher and college professor, but Mary is in love with a local boy. The family will benefit from the marriage; a new tractor for dad and free college for Mary’s sisters.
Mary convinced her boyfriend that if she becomes pregnant she will have to marry him instead and be spared the old man. Once she’s pregnant and married she and her beau flee to Chicago where he’s hired as a trumpeter for a band. They move from Chicago to New York drawn by the promises of the big city.
When tragedy strikes, Mary is forced to return to Mississippi where the old man is still available and interested in marrying her. Feeling she has no other options, and knowing her family will benefit, Mary agrees and moves to Jackson Mississippi with her husband. But what will life be like?
This is a moving story filled with heartache and runs the gamut from child abuse, spousal violence, drug use, baby deaths and dependency, but ends in an upbeat tone.
Mary convinced her boyfriend that if she becomes pregnant she will have to marry him instead and be spared the old man. Once she’s pregnant and married she and her beau flee to Chicago where he’s hired as a trumpeter for a band. They move from Chicago to New York drawn by the promises of the big city.
When tragedy strikes, Mary is forced to return to Mississippi where the old man is still available and interested in marrying her. Feeling she has no other options, and knowing her family will benefit, Mary agrees and moves to Jackson Mississippi with her husband. But what will life be like?
This is a moving story filled with heartache and runs the gamut from child abuse, spousal violence, drug use, baby deaths and dependency, but ends in an upbeat tone.
October 3, 2023
Whew. Wow wow wow.
The character development of Mary Johnson Bevers Bishop is so careful, so genuine, so authentic. It is heartbreaking to witness the traumas and the lasting psychological effects they had on Mary along with the hosting of problematic coping mechanisms (self-harm, codependency, control . . .) Her story is a masterclass in the long term effects of religious and emotional abuse. I almost need a prequel to this origin story to understand more about Mary's initial rebellion and why she chose such extremes.
Throughout the book I can sense the angst around the topics of shame, religion, and sex and their impacts on women in the church. I already know what happens but I'm sad for Glory. She doesn't stand a chance.
P.S. I love Ruthie and I need more of her.
NOTE: .I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The character development of Mary Johnson Bevers Bishop is so careful, so genuine, so authentic. It is heartbreaking to witness the traumas and the lasting psychological effects they had on Mary along with the hosting of problematic coping mechanisms (self-harm, codependency, control . . .) Her story is a masterclass in the long term effects of religious and emotional abuse. I almost need a prequel to this origin story to understand more about Mary's initial rebellion and why she chose such extremes.
Throughout the book I can sense the angst around the topics of shame, religion, and sex and their impacts on women in the church. I already know what happens but I'm sad for Glory. She doesn't stand a chance.
P.S. I love Ruthie and I need more of her.
NOTE: .I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
June 26, 2025
Strength of a woman
Mary's destiny unfolded like a carefully negotiated contract, her aspirations traded for her family's economic salvation. The gleaming tractor her father acquired and the educational opportunities granted to her sisters came at the price of her personal autonomy, tethering her to a loveless marriage that slowly eroded her inner vitality. Imprisoned within a relationship defined by emotional barrenness and her husband's callous indifference, Mary navigated her constrained world with quiet resilience. Occasional glances and fleeting interactions with other men offered tantalizing glimpses of potential liberation, their brief encounters serving as fragile windows into an alternate existence that remained frustratingly out of reach. But like the title reads, Mary is not easily broken.
Mary's destiny unfolded like a carefully negotiated contract, her aspirations traded for her family's economic salvation. The gleaming tractor her father acquired and the educational opportunities granted to her sisters came at the price of her personal autonomy, tethering her to a loveless marriage that slowly eroded her inner vitality. Imprisoned within a relationship defined by emotional barrenness and her husband's callous indifference, Mary navigated her constrained world with quiet resilience. Occasional glances and fleeting interactions with other men offered tantalizing glimpses of potential liberation, their brief encounters serving as fragile windows into an alternate existence that remained frustratingly out of reach. But like the title reads, Mary is not easily broken.
January 6, 2024
This was my favorite of Deborah’s books. Maybe it wouldn’t be if I read it first, but having read Glory Bishop I appreciated the deeper understanding of how Mary became the mother she was. This is a hard read but it has so much heart and Mary has so much depth.
I do understand her better but still think she was too extreme because she was so damaged. But now I also see her as a survivor with more strength than most.
I want to know what happened to Paul. Why couldn’t he and her wonderfully flawed sisters help her find peace with herself? I wish they could have helped her see that she deserved happiness and could allow herself to indulge Glory enough to let her make her own mistakes once in a while.
Don’t skip the recipes at the end!
I do understand her better but still think she was too extreme because she was so damaged. But now I also see her as a survivor with more strength than most.
I want to know what happened to Paul. Why couldn’t he and her wonderfully flawed sisters help her find peace with herself? I wish they could have helped her see that she deserved happiness and could allow herself to indulge Glory enough to let her make her own mistakes once in a while.
Don’t skip the recipes at the end!
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November 5, 2023
Whew!!!!! My goodness this book was good. It tied a lot out things together. This was an awesome prequel to the Glory books. I had no many mixed emotions while reading—sympathy, confusion, anger at Mary’s number of foolish decisions, especially the barn one, sadness, frustration, joy and fright. I never saw any of the events coming in the book and that’s what kept it a page turner for me. I’m so glad I started this series! Definitely a must read!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 11, 2024
Joy and Pain
I was not prepared for this book to take me through as much as it did. In fact, as I raced toward the end, putting off my normal Sunday tasks until I could finish it, my heart was beating fast; I’ve never rooted for someone as much as I rooted for the main character in this book. I came to love her family. I loved her even when I struggled with her decisions, and I found myself wishing that there was more at the end. A wonderful book with excellent character development, vivid images and solid writing.
I was not prepared for this book to take me through as much as it did. In fact, as I raced toward the end, putting off my normal Sunday tasks until I could finish it, my heart was beating fast; I’ve never rooted for someone as much as I rooted for the main character in this book. I came to love her family. I loved her even when I struggled with her decisions, and I found myself wishing that there was more at the end. A wonderful book with excellent character development, vivid images and solid writing.
April 8, 2024
Extremely hard story to read. I just kept feeling like this is the most horrible story I've ever willingly read... The writing is beautiful, but I am not sure it's worth the emotional triggers. Domestic violence to the point of stillbirth is too much. While I enjoy the writer's skill, and didn't realize this was a series, I don't believe I can stomach the two other books. Still debating on this.
Her writing style reminds me of Toni Morrison. I appreciated it very much. Would love to read other works by her.
Her writing style reminds me of Toni Morrison. I appreciated it very much. Would love to read other works by her.
July 10, 2024
Mary not Broken ( The Bishop Women)
This was a good read. Mary the pastor daughter was arranged to married to bishop Beavers , but Mary ran away with Mason got married move to New York and have four children. Unfortunately she lose her husband and all her children and move back home to Flora . Well things got real bad for Mary so she have to do the arranged marriage to Bishop Beavers. Bishop was very strict on her so she always meeting guys and got pregnant twice . Bishop was an older man who beat Mary real bad. The only way Mary could get away from Bishop is when he died in his sleep. You will enjoy this story please read.
This was a good read. Mary the pastor daughter was arranged to married to bishop Beavers , but Mary ran away with Mason got married move to New York and have four children. Unfortunately she lose her husband and all her children and move back home to Flora . Well things got real bad for Mary so she have to do the arranged marriage to Bishop Beavers. Bishop was very strict on her so she always meeting guys and got pregnant twice . Bishop was an older man who beat Mary real bad. The only way Mary could get away from Bishop is when he died in his sleep. You will enjoy this story please read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 18, 2024
To Have A Second Chance!
Deborah L. King, first read of yours. I almost didn't read it but I'm glad I did. Mary was like so many woman of old and new. Old because women weren't supposed to have a voice and we never were supposed to go against whatever we were told. God was in all things we do. When we live a life in the world and come back from it we sometimes lose ourselves and we curse God, something happens and we believe again we become over zealous with how our walk has come a new way. Mary had to learn how to have an even road. Good read🤗🤗🤗🤗
Deborah L. King, first read of yours. I almost didn't read it but I'm glad I did. Mary was like so many woman of old and new. Old because women weren't supposed to have a voice and we never were supposed to go against whatever we were told. God was in all things we do. When we live a life in the world and come back from it we sometimes lose ourselves and we curse God, something happens and we believe again we become over zealous with how our walk has come a new way. Mary had to learn how to have an even road. Good read🤗🤗🤗🤗
July 17, 2024
Faith through testimony
This book is an excellent read for it takes you through trials & tribulations of Mary only to show us that she had to go through to get through. Only to realize that faith is priceless and once you believe in God and become humble, God will give you what he knows you need! Deborah L.King is an amazing writer. When she puts out her next book in this series my coins will be ready.
This book is an excellent read for it takes you through trials & tribulations of Mary only to show us that she had to go through to get through. Only to realize that faith is priceless and once you believe in God and become humble, God will give you what he knows you need! Deborah L.King is an amazing writer. When she puts out her next book in this series my coins will be ready.
September 24, 2023
Whenever I start a book by Deborah L. King, I know I am going to step into a world of rich characterization, well described family connections... and a world where I will be deeply immersed in a time and place nuance of time and culture. The writing, the dialogue flows and is always natural.
Mary Not Broken is no exception. I delighted in this book, reading through the tragedies and happinesses that shaped Mary into the character she becomes in the two later books of the trilogy. I highly recommend this book and am figuring out who to buy the whole set for as a holiday gift this year.
Mary Not Broken is no exception. I delighted in this book, reading through the tragedies and happinesses that shaped Mary into the character she becomes in the two later books of the trilogy. I highly recommend this book and am figuring out who to buy the whole set for as a holiday gift this year.
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