This 2nd chance so-called romance is why I tend to stay the heck away from them…..
SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!
PLOT first.
H & h were in love but at age 18 (h) and H (20), they found out heroine was pregnant with their son and because both their parents wouldn’t support them, they decided to split so that they can focus on their careers and co-parenting their kid – for 10 freaking whole years!
And this is my problem with this plot. First of all, I am tired of Authors constantly excusing stupid behaviors and decisions by saying they were “too young”. While 19 & 20 is young, they are not babies. They are just starting out into adulthood and that to me is not a valid excuse for them to separate.
Secondly, they said they couldn’t be together then because Hero needed to focus on his NHL career and he didn’t have the money to support a wife & kid. First of, he was getting paid. He wasn’t playing in NHL for free so he definitely could support them and it contradicts this reasoning because it is said that he was sending child support to heroine regularly and a generous sum too! Then there was heroine. She wanted to be a Lawyer and she had to put her career dreams for the first half of her kid’s life on hold to raise him. Okay, so why couldn’t she & the kid live with and travel with Hero to be a family? Why did she need her parent’s money & help with raising her kid when she was getting a generous kid allowance for herself & kid from Hero for 10 long years? She could still have gone to college and raise their kid together. See? Plot holes galore.
Then there was the biggest and main reason why I pretty much skimmed this thing and DNF’d a couple of times. For 2 people who we are told over & over again were soulmates and never stopped loving each other, they sure didn’t act it. We are told that Hero had girlfriends throughout the 10 yr separation (one in particular that heroine mentioned she met at a game when she was with her son who was very beautiful) and she also dated as well though only one BF was given as an example by Hero.
Heroine was a virgin when they met so I assume he was not as it was not mentioned that she was his first too. So in the 10 yrs, they pretty much had relationships (not flings) with OP and allowed their son to meet them. We are not given any details about all these OP. Not how long they dated or how they felt about them and why it didn’t work out, etc. It was just mentioned and forgotten like it was nothing, but to me it was a very big deal because if they are soulmates & still in love with one another, you would think that it would hurt them to see each other with OP but nothing was said. Not even any jealousy expressed which is why I did not buy into this so called BS romance.
And then there was the 10 year separation. Hero retired from the game when story begins and heroine is just about to start her career, so why wait for whole 10 years to reunite? Why not 3 or even 5 for Pete’s sake? In the 10 years they were apart, they (Hero mostly) gained a whole lot experience with OP. I could have possibly upped my rating if they had stayed celibate and not been able to move on with anyone else especially as we are told over & over again in every other page how much they still loved one another and never stopped. Nothing says ILY better than to f**k someone else and shove them in your beloved’s face.
So in a nutshell, if this is what someone’s idea of love & romance is, then I must be living in another century and if you are expecting any real depth/emotional read, then look elsewhere because all this has is from first chapter till the end is the MCs getting together right away & exchanging ILYs and basically The End. No 3rd party act, No OP drama & No other conflict. It’s basically heroine trying to study & pass her final exam to become a Lawyer, a bit of sex here & there and some pre-teen tantrums with MCs kid. In a nutshell? BORING!!!!!!!!!