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The Husbands of Elizabeth Bennet, Volume One: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Elizabeth Bennet has seen many things on her rambles through the countryside, but never an overturned carriage. It is immediately clear that the cause was no accident, and when she helps save the life of the driver — who is soon revealed to be a marquess in disguise — she has no idea that her life from that point will never be the same again.
Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick, is a man that knows what he wants — and he wants Elizabeth. In light of multiple attempts on his life, who cares what the ton will think of his choice? While he recovers from the latest attack at Longbourn, and with none of the scruples shown by a certain inhabitant of nearby Netherfield, Henry wastes no time in charming his way into Elizabeth’s heart.
In accepting Lord Stashwick’s proposal, Elizabeth is suddenly thrust into the heart of London’s social elite. With Henry’s sister as her mentor, she takes the first steps toward building a reputation worthy of admiration and respect ... but not everyone she meets is pleased with the idea of the daughter of a country squire rising so high.
Can two people from different social classes build a life together when danger still lurks around the corner? And what is a certain gentleman from Derbyshire to do when he’s forced to admit that he may have squandered forever his only chance at happiness — especially given Elizabeth’s shining success in the very circle of society to which he had hesitated to elevate her…
As the title indicates, Elizabeth Bennet will marry twice in her lifetime — volume one is the story of her romance with Henry, a very charming nobleman who knows what he wants and goes for it. Volume two will see Elizabeth recovering from the loss of her first love and finding the strength to open her heart again with Darcy at her side.
Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick, is a man that knows what he wants — and he wants Elizabeth. In light of multiple attempts on his life, who cares what the ton will think of his choice? While he recovers from the latest attack at Longbourn, and with none of the scruples shown by a certain inhabitant of nearby Netherfield, Henry wastes no time in charming his way into Elizabeth’s heart.
In accepting Lord Stashwick’s proposal, Elizabeth is suddenly thrust into the heart of London’s social elite. With Henry’s sister as her mentor, she takes the first steps toward building a reputation worthy of admiration and respect ... but not everyone she meets is pleased with the idea of the daughter of a country squire rising so high.
Can two people from different social classes build a life together when danger still lurks around the corner? And what is a certain gentleman from Derbyshire to do when he’s forced to admit that he may have squandered forever his only chance at happiness — especially given Elizabeth’s shining success in the very circle of society to which he had hesitated to elevate her…
As the title indicates, Elizabeth Bennet will marry twice in her lifetime — volume one is the story of her romance with Henry, a very charming nobleman who knows what he wants and goes for it. Volume two will see Elizabeth recovering from the loss of her first love and finding the strength to open her heart again with Darcy at her side.
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Published September 3, 2023
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September 13, 2023
Borrowed from KU 9-4-23 with no stipulations of a review. I volunteered to leave my thoughts and opinions and I will NEVER use AI to write my reviews. Just saying.
Full Review to follow... after it goes live [if it does] somewhere else. [Went live 9-13-23 11:45]
Rating: mature: due to violence, murder, death scene and sick room described, use of poison, treachery, betrayal, language: British swearing
Angst: Medium to high
Trope: [1] Elizabeth marries another [2] NSN Jane or rather a jealous Jane. Man, she went off. What a B-witch or bipolar, one or the other. I couldn't tell.
I normally don't enjoy a story where Elizabeth marries someone else. I did, however, enjoy this story because Henry Faulkner was such a sweetie. I adored him.
There was a touching discussion between Elizabeth and her mother. Also, the relationship between Mary and Elizabeth was really sweet.
Revised:
Amazing story where love conquered the social distance between lovers
Hopefully, this review does NOT contain SPOILERS. The story is full of treachery, betrayal, attempted murder, murder, near-death experiences, and exile of more than one villain, and someone would hang, just saying. These are just a few of the actions packed within 33 chapters plus an epilogue. I can hardly wait until Volume Two.
Austen Fans, who love Pride and Prejudice, know that Elizbeth Bennet enjoys her morning walk. On one particular morning, ODG found an overturned carriage with only the driver still alive as the occupant and groom were dead. The descriptions might be a bit graphic for children, therefore, the rating would be teen at least and considered mature due to descriptions of the crime scene and the sick room. There was also language throughout, as in British swearing. There were mild religious elements, but nothing preachy.
Fortunately for Elizabeth, Mr. Bingley happened along and helped her transport the victim and the deceased to Longbourn. The apothecary, Mr. Jones, and a surgeon from a nearby town were contacted for the injured man. The vicar was called for the deceased, and the magistrate would arrive after being out of town. They determined that it had been an ambush and were concerned about the safety of those at Longbourn and Meryton.
Mr. Bennet, Elizabeth, and Mr. Bingley overheard the doctor asking the coachman his name [Henry Faulkner]. Bingley had to return to London for an engagement and happened to mention the incident to Darcy and was shocked when Darcy recognized the name. Darcy contacted his cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam and his father, the Earl, with what he had learned from Bingley. Many things happened quickly after that.
The man was no ordinary coachman. Henry Faulkner, turned out to be the Marquess of Stashwick. This was not the first attempt on his lordship’s life. He knew he was in danger and had taken precautions. Unfortunately, they had not been enough. Now he had to decide who was a friend and who was a foe. The angst would be medium to high as the reader searched the clues in order to figure out who was after the Marquess and why. I have read this twice now and the clues are well hidden. Right in the middle of all the drama, a love story blossomed. But not between the characters we normally see in this fanfiction.
This story will not be for everyone due to Elizabeth’s interest in someone other than Darcy. The author decided to post two volumes in order to separate the two love stories. Volume two will feature Elizabeth and Darcy. The first volume sets the stage for her circumstances to change dramatically in society. The reader is aware that Darcy walked away from Meryton and Elizabeth. It was never his intention to return. He knew nothing of what had happened at Longbourn after they left Hertfordshire. He did not know that Miss Bennet was devastated over the abandonment of Mr. Bingley. He never knew their cousin Collins had proposed to Miss Elizabeth nor that she had refused him. He didn’t want to know. He would later regret that he didn’t know.
As far as Darcy was concerned, Elizabeth’s family were fortune hunters and beneath him. The family was vulgar, had connections to trade, lacked status, had no fortune or dowries for the daughters, and lacked all the things Fitzwilliam Darcy, scion of Pemberly, thought important for a marriage partner the ton would approve. By the end of Volume One, Darcy would discover that someone cared nothing for those things and soon Miss Elizabeth Bennet would be above him in position, interests, connections, status, and wealth. That fact is not a spoiler as the title gives it away.
Darcy reminded me of a child who walked away from a toy only to want it back when another child decided to play with it. Now, it was his favorite thing and his grief over what he had tossed away got on my last nerve. I’m sorry. I was actually glad Elizabeth found love from a good man. I adored Henry Faulkner. It was a bumpy road to their HEA, to be sure. Man, was it ever. I felt for them. They were lucky to come out of it alive. Not all things were roses and Elizabeth was shocked to discover her favorite sister, Jane, had a jealous streak. Oh, grief.
Full Review to follow... after it goes live [if it does] somewhere else. [Went live 9-13-23 11:45]
Rating: mature: due to violence, murder, death scene and sick room described, use of poison, treachery, betrayal, language: British swearing
Angst: Medium to high
Trope: [1] Elizabeth marries another [2] NSN Jane or rather a jealous Jane. Man, she went off. What a B-witch or bipolar, one or the other. I couldn't tell.
I normally don't enjoy a story where Elizabeth marries someone else. I did, however, enjoy this story because Henry Faulkner was such a sweetie. I adored him.
There was a touching discussion between Elizabeth and her mother. Also, the relationship between Mary and Elizabeth was really sweet.
Revised:
Amazing story where love conquered the social distance between lovers
Hopefully, this review does NOT contain SPOILERS. The story is full of treachery, betrayal, attempted murder, murder, near-death experiences, and exile of more than one villain, and someone would hang, just saying. These are just a few of the actions packed within 33 chapters plus an epilogue. I can hardly wait until Volume Two.
Austen Fans, who love Pride and Prejudice, know that Elizbeth Bennet enjoys her morning walk. On one particular morning, ODG found an overturned carriage with only the driver still alive as the occupant and groom were dead. The descriptions might be a bit graphic for children, therefore, the rating would be teen at least and considered mature due to descriptions of the crime scene and the sick room. There was also language throughout, as in British swearing. There were mild religious elements, but nothing preachy.
Fortunately for Elizabeth, Mr. Bingley happened along and helped her transport the victim and the deceased to Longbourn. The apothecary, Mr. Jones, and a surgeon from a nearby town were contacted for the injured man. The vicar was called for the deceased, and the magistrate would arrive after being out of town. They determined that it had been an ambush and were concerned about the safety of those at Longbourn and Meryton.
Mr. Bennet, Elizabeth, and Mr. Bingley overheard the doctor asking the coachman his name [Henry Faulkner]. Bingley had to return to London for an engagement and happened to mention the incident to Darcy and was shocked when Darcy recognized the name. Darcy contacted his cousin Colonel Fitzwilliam and his father, the Earl, with what he had learned from Bingley. Many things happened quickly after that.
The man was no ordinary coachman. Henry Faulkner, turned out to be the Marquess of Stashwick. This was not the first attempt on his lordship’s life. He knew he was in danger and had taken precautions. Unfortunately, they had not been enough. Now he had to decide who was a friend and who was a foe. The angst would be medium to high as the reader searched the clues in order to figure out who was after the Marquess and why. I have read this twice now and the clues are well hidden. Right in the middle of all the drama, a love story blossomed. But not between the characters we normally see in this fanfiction.
This story will not be for everyone due to Elizabeth’s interest in someone other than Darcy. The author decided to post two volumes in order to separate the two love stories. Volume two will feature Elizabeth and Darcy. The first volume sets the stage for her circumstances to change dramatically in society. The reader is aware that Darcy walked away from Meryton and Elizabeth. It was never his intention to return. He knew nothing of what had happened at Longbourn after they left Hertfordshire. He did not know that Miss Bennet was devastated over the abandonment of Mr. Bingley. He never knew their cousin Collins had proposed to Miss Elizabeth nor that she had refused him. He didn’t want to know. He would later regret that he didn’t know.
As far as Darcy was concerned, Elizabeth’s family were fortune hunters and beneath him. The family was vulgar, had connections to trade, lacked status, had no fortune or dowries for the daughters, and lacked all the things Fitzwilliam Darcy, scion of Pemberly, thought important for a marriage partner the ton would approve. By the end of Volume One, Darcy would discover that someone cared nothing for those things and soon Miss Elizabeth Bennet would be above him in position, interests, connections, status, and wealth. That fact is not a spoiler as the title gives it away.
Darcy reminded me of a child who walked away from a toy only to want it back when another child decided to play with it. Now, it was his favorite thing and his grief over what he had tossed away got on my last nerve. I’m sorry. I was actually glad Elizabeth found love from a good man. I adored Henry Faulkner. It was a bumpy road to their HEA, to be sure. Man, was it ever. I felt for them. They were lucky to come out of it alive. Not all things were roses and Elizabeth was shocked to discover her favorite sister, Jane, had a jealous streak. Oh, grief.
September 9, 2023
So much modern language, typos and modern sensibilities. The author thanks readers on fanfiction for being her beta readers. I respectfully recommend she find an editor for Regency content.
She is also prone to the info dump~ where an author shows off research. Elizabeth spends two pages telling Mary what a lady’s maid does. Mary would know that! Even though they shared a maid at Longbourn, they had one as did Mrs Gardiner. I don’t mind a ‘bad Jane’ but this tried to blame everything on Mrs Bennet’s expectations of Jane. That’s one of the things I mean about a modern sensibility.
There was also a ‘mystery’ that I figured out in the first chapter! Weak.
She spent a long time describing Elizabeth’s wedding gown then did not show the wedding. The ending was rushed and ended up with the miracle Regency twins. Ugh.
Paragraphs were repeated and at the end of the book Darcy spend four pages summarizing what I just read. Please don’t insult my intelligence, author.
She is also prone to the info dump~ where an author shows off research. Elizabeth spends two pages telling Mary what a lady’s maid does. Mary would know that! Even though they shared a maid at Longbourn, they had one as did Mrs Gardiner. I don’t mind a ‘bad Jane’ but this tried to blame everything on Mrs Bennet’s expectations of Jane. That’s one of the things I mean about a modern sensibility.
There was also a ‘mystery’ that I figured out in the first chapter! Weak.
She spent a long time describing Elizabeth’s wedding gown then did not show the wedding. The ending was rushed and ended up with the miracle Regency twins. Ugh.
Paragraphs were repeated and at the end of the book Darcy spend four pages summarizing what I just read. Please don’t insult my intelligence, author.
October 15, 2023
A riveting story, I’m looking forward to reading the next one.
November 23, 2023
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
As the title tells us not only does Elizabeth have more then one husband but also we have to also read a second volume to get the whole story.
The story description gives us the main outline. The man Elizabeth comes upon when she is out walking is the only survivor to what seems to be an attack by highwaymen on a carriage. He claims to be the driver and gives her the name of Henry Faulkner. As Longbourn is closest and as Charles Bingley has showed up, it is arranged that the man will be taken to that manor. He faces a long recuperation as his leg is broken and he has some stab wounds.
As the story evolves we learn that not only is this man a Marquess but also that this is not the first attempt on his life. And so much of the story has to do with those events and his place in society. The man is a charmer, although he is old enough to be Elizabeth's father. From the "get-go" he is open as to his developing feelings for Elizabeth. She visits him daily to keep him entertained and finds herself also growing fond of the man. He is a widower and so there is family involved. He keeps his identity secret so that the assassins don't find him there and without full protection.
Darcy and the Colonel have visited as the Colonel is the man's nephew. Thus Darcy looks upon events with dismay as he realizes that all the things that prevented him from acknowledging his own growing feeling for E. and to lead him to pursue her are are not a problem for a member of the ton, a peer, who has no qualms about Elizabeth's lack of connections and dowry, etc.
Jane's character has some surprises in this story. Mary becomes close to Elizabeth. The Bingley sisters attempt to use their "connections" to Elizabeth through Jane's marriage to their brother.
This is a long story. I have read other stories in which either Darcy or Elizabeth are married to someone else, not each other. There is an epilogue but we still have to wait for Volume Two to get a HEA for ODC.
As the title tells us not only does Elizabeth have more then one husband but also we have to also read a second volume to get the whole story.
The story description gives us the main outline. The man Elizabeth comes upon when she is out walking is the only survivor to what seems to be an attack by highwaymen on a carriage. He claims to be the driver and gives her the name of Henry Faulkner. As Longbourn is closest and as Charles Bingley has showed up, it is arranged that the man will be taken to that manor. He faces a long recuperation as his leg is broken and he has some stab wounds.
As the story evolves we learn that not only is this man a Marquess but also that this is not the first attempt on his life. And so much of the story has to do with those events and his place in society. The man is a charmer, although he is old enough to be Elizabeth's father. From the "get-go" he is open as to his developing feelings for Elizabeth. She visits him daily to keep him entertained and finds herself also growing fond of the man. He is a widower and so there is family involved. He keeps his identity secret so that the assassins don't find him there and without full protection.
Darcy and the Colonel have visited as the Colonel is the man's nephew. Thus Darcy looks upon events with dismay as he realizes that all the things that prevented him from acknowledging his own growing feeling for E. and to lead him to pursue her are are not a problem for a member of the ton, a peer, who has no qualms about Elizabeth's lack of connections and dowry, etc.
Jane's character has some surprises in this story. Mary becomes close to Elizabeth. The Bingley sisters attempt to use their "connections" to Elizabeth through Jane's marriage to their brother.
This is a long story. I have read other stories in which either Darcy or Elizabeth are married to someone else, not each other. There is an epilogue but we still have to wait for Volume Two to get a HEA for ODC.
October 29, 2025
The Best Yet
I have read many books by this author and I find this one the best so far. What a wonderful, unique take on P&P! I could not put it down until I finished and then was disappointed when it was over. Volume 2 cannot be published soon enough!
I have read many books by this author and I find this one the best so far. What a wonderful, unique take on P&P! I could not put it down until I finished and then was disappointed when it was over. Volume 2 cannot be published soon enough!
September 5, 2023
Absolute delight
An absolutely delightful and unusual premise in this variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Christine Combe. I normally hate any book that has Lizzy with anyone else but I really enjoyed this one.
An absolutely delightful and unusual premise in this variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Christine Combe. I normally hate any book that has Lizzy with anyone else but I really enjoyed this one.
October 23, 2023
Lizzy becomes a peer
Lizzy marries a peer. Lots of new characters. I rated the story 4.5 stars but rounded down because many names sounded and/or looked alike so it was difficult to keep everyone straight. Concentrating hard to figure who is talking or who is doing detracted from the enjoyment for me.
Lots of details about a nobody, Lizzy, becoming a peer was enjoyable.
Lizzy marries a peer. Lots of new characters. I rated the story 4.5 stars but rounded down because many names sounded and/or looked alike so it was difficult to keep everyone straight. Concentrating hard to figure who is talking or who is doing detracted from the enjoyment for me.
Lots of details about a nobody, Lizzy, becoming a peer was enjoyable.
October 21, 2023
Elizabeth Bennet finds an overturned carriage and an injured man while on a walk avoiding her mother and Mr Collins. Charles Bingley, who returned from London after his ball, relays the name of the man to Darcy. This starts a snowball of who the man is, how important he is, who he is related to, and how he feels about Elizabeth. Despite an age difference, the mystery man and Elizabeth find themselves in love despite many obstacles. Fitzwilliam Darcy finds himself feeling like a fool for not recognizing his feelings for Elizabeth sooner. On top of all that, there is a mystery! I really enjoyed it and can’t wait for the next book.
March 12, 2024
Where to begin with this ... the book description was intriguing - I don't mind E or D K-I-S-S-I-N-G someone else before they sort their shit out. However, husband #1 does not become her husband until we're 92% into the book. I was hoping to experience the marriage itself, not the courtship & betrothal period.
There's a lot of repetition in this book, something happens and then what happened is told over and over again to different parties (i.e. the 32 dresses).
I started skimming at 50%.
I'm gonna give the 2nd book a go, I haven't read a lot of this author's work so I'm going to test the waters with that one.
There's a lot of repetition in this book, something happens and then what happened is told over and over again to different parties (i.e. the 32 dresses).
I started skimming at 50%.
I'm gonna give the 2nd book a go, I haven't read a lot of this author's work so I'm going to test the waters with that one.
October 9, 2023
Entertaining
Kind of far fetched, but engaging premise. The story begins about two weeks after the ball at Netherfield, the Bingleys and Darcy have left for London, Jane is sad because of the letter Caroline Bingley sent, and Elizabeth has no very good opinion of Darcy. While on a walk, Elizabeth encounters the scene of a carriage accident in which two people have been shot and killed, but one man survives, but he's severely injured. Bingley appears on the scene on horseback, and helps Elizabeth get the injured man to Longbourn. The man who they at first believe to be the driver of the carriage, turns out to be a Marquess. Only Mr Bennett and Elizabeth know that he's a nobleman, and during his recovery, he falls in love with Elizabeth, and she falls in love with him. When Bingley mentions the name of the man to Darcy, he recognizes it and it turns out that the man is an uncle to Colonel Fitzwilliam.
This is a high angst and very dramatic tale, with lots of intrigue, betrayal and deception, but thankfully also with romance, courage, and strength through adversity. You can tell by the book title that Elizabeth doesn't end up with Darcy in this installment. That would have been impossible to accept if the author hadn't created a convincing and heartfelt romantic relationship between Elizabeth and Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick. I hope volume two comes out soon, because at this point Darcy's heart is broken, and we can't have that!
The mysterious Marquess that Elizabeth meets has a family that could compete for "most dysfunctional" prize. There's also a very dark and strange little twist related to Jane and Bingley. Can't say that I enjoyed that quirky situation, as it just made a dark story darker still. However, I believe the author was just making a statement about certain psychological issues that were little understood in this era. The book is well written, with only a few editing errors. I recommend it highly for an entertaining and imaginative way to pass some time.
Kind of far fetched, but engaging premise. The story begins about two weeks after the ball at Netherfield, the Bingleys and Darcy have left for London, Jane is sad because of the letter Caroline Bingley sent, and Elizabeth has no very good opinion of Darcy. While on a walk, Elizabeth encounters the scene of a carriage accident in which two people have been shot and killed, but one man survives, but he's severely injured. Bingley appears on the scene on horseback, and helps Elizabeth get the injured man to Longbourn. The man who they at first believe to be the driver of the carriage, turns out to be a Marquess. Only Mr Bennett and Elizabeth know that he's a nobleman, and during his recovery, he falls in love with Elizabeth, and she falls in love with him. When Bingley mentions the name of the man to Darcy, he recognizes it and it turns out that the man is an uncle to Colonel Fitzwilliam.
This is a high angst and very dramatic tale, with lots of intrigue, betrayal and deception, but thankfully also with romance, courage, and strength through adversity. You can tell by the book title that Elizabeth doesn't end up with Darcy in this installment. That would have been impossible to accept if the author hadn't created a convincing and heartfelt romantic relationship between Elizabeth and Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick. I hope volume two comes out soon, because at this point Darcy's heart is broken, and we can't have that!
The mysterious Marquess that Elizabeth meets has a family that could compete for "most dysfunctional" prize. There's also a very dark and strange little twist related to Jane and Bingley. Can't say that I enjoyed that quirky situation, as it just made a dark story darker still. However, I believe the author was just making a statement about certain psychological issues that were little understood in this era. The book is well written, with only a few editing errors. I recommend it highly for an entertaining and imaginative way to pass some time.
October 16, 2023
Fun read but a little bit one dimensional
I really enjoyed reading this book.
However I would say the character of Elizabeth is sort of a cross between Lizzy and Mary. She's a bit more humorless and actually quotes the Bible during conversations and frequently talks about god's plan. She was also shocked at Jane for wearing a low cut dress in order to secure bingley. I suspect the author is herself very religious.
*Spoilers ahead*
She judges Jane very harshly for suggesting she is jealous of Lizzy for marrying a member of the peerage, to the point where she almost cuts Jane off thinking her artful. However in Jane Austen's original Lizzy and Jane share a giggle when Lizzy suggests she first fell in love with Darcy when she saw his grand house at Pemberly.
Austen's Elizabeth has a good sense of humor and would not be morally righteous about such things.
I really enjoyed reading this book.
However I would say the character of Elizabeth is sort of a cross between Lizzy and Mary. She's a bit more humorless and actually quotes the Bible during conversations and frequently talks about god's plan. She was also shocked at Jane for wearing a low cut dress in order to secure bingley. I suspect the author is herself very religious.
*Spoilers ahead*
She judges Jane very harshly for suggesting she is jealous of Lizzy for marrying a member of the peerage, to the point where she almost cuts Jane off thinking her artful. However in Jane Austen's original Lizzy and Jane share a giggle when Lizzy suggests she first fell in love with Darcy when she saw his grand house at Pemberly.
Austen's Elizabeth has a good sense of humor and would not be morally righteous about such things.
June 15, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is Volume 1 of 2. Elizabeth Bennet has seen many things on her rambles through the countryside, but never an overturned carriage. It is immediately clear that the cause was no accident, and when she helps save the life of the driver, who is soon revealed to be a marquess in disguise, she has no idea that her life from that point will never be the same again. Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick, is a man that knows what he wants, and he wants Elizabeth. In light of multiple attempts on his life, who cares what the ton will think of his choice? While he recovers from the latest attack at Longbourn, and with none of the scruples shown by a certain inhabitant of nearby Netherfield, Henry wastes no time in charming his way into Elizabeth’s heart. In accepting Lord Stashwick’s proposal, Elizabeth is suddenly thrust into the heart of London’s social elite. With Henry’s sister as her mentor, she takes the first steps toward building a reputation worthy of admiration and respect, but not everyone she meets is pleased with the idea of the daughter of a country squire rising so high. Can two people from different social classes build a life together when danger still lurks around the corner? What is a certain gentleman from Derbyshire to do when he’s forced to admit that he may have squandered forever his only chance at happiness, especially given Elizabeth’s shining success in the very circle of society to which he had hesitated to elevate her. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
Note: As the title indicates, Elizabeth Bennet will marry twice in her lifetime, volume one is the story of her romance with Henry, a very charming nobleman who knows what he wants and goes for it. Volume two will see Elizabeth recovering from the loss of her first love and finding the strength to open her heart again with Darcy at her side.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is Volume 1 of 2. Elizabeth Bennet has seen many things on her rambles through the countryside, but never an overturned carriage. It is immediately clear that the cause was no accident, and when she helps save the life of the driver, who is soon revealed to be a marquess in disguise, she has no idea that her life from that point will never be the same again. Henry Faulkner, the Marquess of Stashwick, is a man that knows what he wants, and he wants Elizabeth. In light of multiple attempts on his life, who cares what the ton will think of his choice? While he recovers from the latest attack at Longbourn, and with none of the scruples shown by a certain inhabitant of nearby Netherfield, Henry wastes no time in charming his way into Elizabeth’s heart. In accepting Lord Stashwick’s proposal, Elizabeth is suddenly thrust into the heart of London’s social elite. With Henry’s sister as her mentor, she takes the first steps toward building a reputation worthy of admiration and respect, but not everyone she meets is pleased with the idea of the daughter of a country squire rising so high. Can two people from different social classes build a life together when danger still lurks around the corner? What is a certain gentleman from Derbyshire to do when he’s forced to admit that he may have squandered forever his only chance at happiness, especially given Elizabeth’s shining success in the very circle of society to which he had hesitated to elevate her. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
Note: As the title indicates, Elizabeth Bennet will marry twice in her lifetime, volume one is the story of her romance with Henry, a very charming nobleman who knows what he wants and goes for it. Volume two will see Elizabeth recovering from the loss of her first love and finding the strength to open her heart again with Darcy at her side.
September 28, 2024
🤔
I don't know... I surely do not like stories where E doesn't marry D. I decided to read this book for one of the reviewer said it was worth it. I did not find it so. But.... What I got out of it was this... From the beginning of the story, E brought up D in her thoughts often. Thinking of how he disapproved of her and her family (which he only disapproved of certain family members). Which showed me, from her very first impression of D and I mean, her very first impression (which doesn't mention it in this story but I will assume from the original canon) was that when E first saw him as he walked into the assembly room and she thought him handsome enough to tempt her but with his comment towards her not being handsome enough to tempt him, that ruined her opinion of him towards her. I felt that with the coach driver's first words out of his mouth for her was that she was flattered beyond belief and her vanity took control and played on her mind. Yes she was in love with the Marquess. How could she not be when he likes her for herself. I read the whole story and wasn't impressed... I'll have to read book 2 to see about the Husbands of Elizabeth...
I don't know... I surely do not like stories where E doesn't marry D. I decided to read this book for one of the reviewer said it was worth it. I did not find it so. But.... What I got out of it was this... From the beginning of the story, E brought up D in her thoughts often. Thinking of how he disapproved of her and her family (which he only disapproved of certain family members). Which showed me, from her very first impression of D and I mean, her very first impression (which doesn't mention it in this story but I will assume from the original canon) was that when E first saw him as he walked into the assembly room and she thought him handsome enough to tempt her but with his comment towards her not being handsome enough to tempt him, that ruined her opinion of him towards her. I felt that with the coach driver's first words out of his mouth for her was that she was flattered beyond belief and her vanity took control and played on her mind. Yes she was in love with the Marquess. How could she not be when he likes her for herself. I read the whole story and wasn't impressed... I'll have to read book 2 to see about the Husbands of Elizabeth...
October 13, 2023
Absolutely loved this!
I have read a few JAFF stories where Lizzy marries before marrying Darcy, either knowing her husband (and his death) before meeting Darcy, or being in an abusive marriage which Darcy then helps her get out of. Never have I read a story where Darcy meets Lizzy first, but then through his pride loses her to another man who truly loves her, and her him in return. This is the first book I've ready by this author and I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel - Dec. better come quickly because I do not like cliffhangers and I'm not a patient person (my jr high students have chased away all the patience I have). While I read this via KU, I may just have to buy the books because I truly haven't enjoyed a JAFF as much as this one for a long time.
Twists and turns and suspense - oh, I don't know how I'll handle what I know kust happens in the sequel because I did really love these characters, (even Darcy as he suffers in his love pulled at my heartstrings).
A must read! 4 stars because I have to wait for the sequel and conclusion lol
I have read a few JAFF stories where Lizzy marries before marrying Darcy, either knowing her husband (and his death) before meeting Darcy, or being in an abusive marriage which Darcy then helps her get out of. Never have I read a story where Darcy meets Lizzy first, but then through his pride loses her to another man who truly loves her, and her him in return. This is the first book I've ready by this author and I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel - Dec. better come quickly because I do not like cliffhangers and I'm not a patient person (my jr high students have chased away all the patience I have). While I read this via KU, I may just have to buy the books because I truly haven't enjoyed a JAFF as much as this one for a long time.
Twists and turns and suspense - oh, I don't know how I'll handle what I know kust happens in the sequel because I did really love these characters, (even Darcy as he suffers in his love pulled at my heartstrings).
A must read! 4 stars because I have to wait for the sequel and conclusion lol
March 26, 2024
Ok but it did not pull me.
I'm going to list what i did not like as that is what will help other make their decision on whether to read this book or not.
- I felt that the Marquess was a bit too old. - Elizabeth was not her happy, bubbly, pertinent self. She was playing the role of the dignified marchioness way too early in this story.
- I read P&P for ODC, there was not nearly enough interraction between ODC and i wanted some acknowledgement of Elizabeth contemplating her feeling for Darcy. Something to lead up to the next book.
- I'm not a fan of a perfect Jane, but this flawed Jane did not sit well with me.
- I skimmed through the last 50 pages as the story was just too drawn out.
I gave 3 stars as it was well written and a decent story line. In going the next book is better at engaging be.
I'm going to list what i did not like as that is what will help other make their decision on whether to read this book or not.
- I felt that the Marquess was a bit too old. - Elizabeth was not her happy, bubbly, pertinent self. She was playing the role of the dignified marchioness way too early in this story.
- I read P&P for ODC, there was not nearly enough interraction between ODC and i wanted some acknowledgement of Elizabeth contemplating her feeling for Darcy. Something to lead up to the next book.
- I'm not a fan of a perfect Jane, but this flawed Jane did not sit well with me.
- I skimmed through the last 50 pages as the story was just too drawn out.
I gave 3 stars as it was well written and a decent story line. In going the next book is better at engaging be.
September 18, 2023
A very different love story
4.5 rounded up.
The is overall, a well written novel, with a delightfully insouciant and devoted hero. Most of the characters are according to canon, though different facets of their characters are revealed.
I was irritated by anachronistic language and I attention to period appropriate detail. For example, there were no “detectives” in the Regency era. They would have hired Bow Street Runners. Spoiler alert-and there were no cases of Peers being hanged during those years. Death sentences for the Aristocracy were commuted. When the language is often modern, one loses the sense of being immersed in an historical context.
All that said, I’m looking forward to Vol. 2. Combe is a good story teller who is witty and humorous.
4.5 rounded up.
The is overall, a well written novel, with a delightfully insouciant and devoted hero. Most of the characters are according to canon, though different facets of their characters are revealed.
I was irritated by anachronistic language and I attention to period appropriate detail. For example, there were no “detectives” in the Regency era. They would have hired Bow Street Runners. Spoiler alert-and there were no cases of Peers being hanged during those years. Death sentences for the Aristocracy were commuted. When the language is often modern, one loses the sense of being immersed in an historical context.
All that said, I’m looking forward to Vol. 2. Combe is a good story teller who is witty and humorous.
June 29, 2024
It’s after 2am, I started reading in the early evening to relax and perhaps have an early night. That plan flew out the window on the first page, I was hooked and drawn into a world turned on its head. I’m a firm believer ODC belong together, that is the core of the original book so knowing this book would not bring them together i nevertheless decided to give in to pure curiosity and give it a try. I loved it, I love Elizabeth in this she’s perfectly like in canon, as is Darcy but I like that his hesitation and Bull headedness came with a price one he learned too late. I’m trying not to dive straight into book 2 and forget sleep entirely. Excellent read.
October 16, 2023
a fabulous read
I heard about this book when someone was looking for recommendations on a P&P fb page.
I’m so pleased that I chose to download it. I read it in two sittings and am now impatient for the next book in this series.
I’m really enjoying books that have Elizabeth marry someone before Darcy (so long as they get their HEA).
This story didn’t disappoint and it was great to meet new characters too.
Get the kettle on, make a cuppa, and sit quietly to enjoy this book.
I heard about this book when someone was looking for recommendations on a P&P fb page.
I’m so pleased that I chose to download it. I read it in two sittings and am now impatient for the next book in this series.
I’m really enjoying books that have Elizabeth marry someone before Darcy (so long as they get their HEA).
This story didn’t disappoint and it was great to meet new characters too.
Get the kettle on, make a cuppa, and sit quietly to enjoy this book.
September 28, 2023
Loved it! Can't wait for the continuation of the story!
This is an all around great tale including mystery, romance, intrigue, and putting in place: the Bingley sisters! Also, some real consequences visited on Darcy! A different Jane, more realistic, I think. Lots of new characters, but not overwhelming. No appearances of Lady Catherine and Collins, yay. Just a really great story idea. Love the couple, Henry and Elizabeth.
This is an all around great tale including mystery, romance, intrigue, and putting in place: the Bingley sisters! Also, some real consequences visited on Darcy! A different Jane, more realistic, I think. Lots of new characters, but not overwhelming. No appearances of Lady Catherine and Collins, yay. Just a really great story idea. Love the couple, Henry and Elizabeth.
October 1, 2023
Wonderful!
Very well written, edited, and put together!
I love a variation where Elizabeth is appreciated for the impudent, outdoorsy gentlewoman she is. I also liked that someone higher in rank than Darcy appreciated her worth, despite being a penniless gentleman's daughter.
Yes, I know sooner or later she'll end up married to Darcy, but this courtship and marriage has been a delight!
Very well written, edited, and put together!
I love a variation where Elizabeth is appreciated for the impudent, outdoorsy gentlewoman she is. I also liked that someone higher in rank than Darcy appreciated her worth, despite being a penniless gentleman's daughter.
Yes, I know sooner or later she'll end up married to Darcy, but this courtship and marriage has been a delight!
October 15, 2023
I enjoyed the tale despite some of the repetitive sections and some of the modernisms. The nearly constant Christian religion was fairly heavy handed - and at times felt like evangelism instead of fan fic and off putting. I almost quit a few times. Miss C Bingley getting comeuppance was quite nice. It is a longish read. Oddly, the non-canonical ending in Lizzy getting an HEA and Darcy only getting regrets felt kinda nice.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 19, 2023
Not too bad
There are some things I question but they are not worth mentioning. I am all for Elizabeth not marrying Darcy but I still found it hard to believe she would marry with such an age discrepancy. I look at it as her falling for the first unrelated man to treat her with respect. Still I was not completely convinced. And, really, there was so much to overcome, who had time for love with all the distractions?
There are some things I question but they are not worth mentioning. I am all for Elizabeth not marrying Darcy but I still found it hard to believe she would marry with such an age discrepancy. I look at it as her falling for the first unrelated man to treat her with respect. Still I was not completely convinced. And, really, there was so much to overcome, who had time for love with all the distractions?
October 29, 2023
I don’t believe it-I Loved it!
This is not your typical ODC.
Elizabeth is better in this story and Darcy allows, no shoves, no runs away from her. She doesn’t miss him. Henry is amazing. He is swollen with grief and sorrow.
They are wonderful together, you feel a little sorry for Darcy but are wanting Henry to succeed.
I found this book so enjoyable and cannot wait for the next one.
This is not your typical ODC.
Elizabeth is better in this story and Darcy allows, no shoves, no runs away from her. She doesn’t miss him. Henry is amazing. He is swollen with grief and sorrow.
They are wonderful together, you feel a little sorry for Darcy but are wanting Henry to succeed.
I found this book so enjoyable and cannot wait for the next one.
October 31, 2023
Entirely Satisfying Read
I enjoyed the author’s great attention to detail. I learned so much more about the confusing rules of succession and political preferences. All of this was wrapped up in an uncommon, but detailed love story threaded with intrigue and angst. Of course I would have loved to see a denouement that brought ODC together, but I will wait for the next volume. Hopefully, Jane will get it together for everyone’s sake.
I enjoyed the author’s great attention to detail. I learned so much more about the confusing rules of succession and political preferences. All of this was wrapped up in an uncommon, but detailed love story threaded with intrigue and angst. Of course I would have loved to see a denouement that brought ODC together, but I will wait for the next volume. Hopefully, Jane will get it together for everyone’s sake.
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November 22, 2023DNF. I loved the blurb and there are many good things about this book, such as the writing style. Unfortunately, I didn’t like the way the author tells the story. And some weird comments at some dramatic moments of the story put me off completely.
For example: she tries to help the seriously injured man in the overturned carriage and has the time to be thankful she’s not wearing an expensive shawl: « Thankful she had chosen only a plain shawl to wrap around her pelisse »
For example: she tries to help the seriously injured man in the overturned carriage and has the time to be thankful she’s not wearing an expensive shawl: « Thankful she had chosen only a plain shawl to wrap around her pelisse »
August 1, 2024
A unique and great read
Im usually 100% lizzy/darcy but this was so well done it had me loving the henry/lizzy pairing and wishing it was longer so i could read more of their interactions with society and the faulkner family , it also has me dreading henrys fate in book 2 i honestly would love to read a whole series of lizzy and a character like henry if she decides to do so at some point. I highly recomend.
Im usually 100% lizzy/darcy but this was so well done it had me loving the henry/lizzy pairing and wishing it was longer so i could read more of their interactions with society and the faulkner family , it also has me dreading henrys fate in book 2 i honestly would love to read a whole series of lizzy and a character like henry if she decides to do so at some point. I highly recomend.
October 9, 2023
I loved this variation, and I am so, so, so excited for the second. I am always a fan of the trope of Elizabeth having a previous marriage before marrying Darcy (and Darcy still being down bad), and I thought this one in particular was very well done, balancing that relationship between Elizabeth and Henry, and leading up to the relationship with Darcy.
October 17, 2023
The respect she deserves
He knew who she was at first sight. He also knew her value. Striking while the iron was red hot showed excellent taste on his part, but also showed Darcy his own folly.
What a great mystery- no one expected the outcome! Well thought-out handling of mental issues.
I cannot wait for Vol.2!
He knew who she was at first sight. He also knew her value. Striking while the iron was red hot showed excellent taste on his part, but also showed Darcy his own folly.
What a great mystery- no one expected the outcome! Well thought-out handling of mental issues.
I cannot wait for Vol.2!
December 9, 2023
All about love
This story is unique in so many levels. The love story of Lizzie and her mature prince charming is so much fun to read. It was intriguing and I could not stop reading it . Darcy paid the price for having influential upbringing that title and money took presidents to love and happiness.
This story is unique in so many levels. The love story of Lizzie and her mature prince charming is so much fun to read. It was intriguing and I could not stop reading it . Darcy paid the price for having influential upbringing that title and money took presidents to love and happiness.
March 3, 2024
SUCH A GREAT STORY!
Wow, this story upon all the reviews I read I knew I was going to love it. And love it, I did. I cannot wait to read part 2. This book did not disappoint. It was the first book I read by this author. Now onto my second. Then I’ll be looking for more books by her. Highly recommend this book. HAPPY READING!
Wow, this story upon all the reviews I read I knew I was going to love it. And love it, I did. I cannot wait to read part 2. This book did not disappoint. It was the first book I read by this author. Now onto my second. Then I’ll be looking for more books by her. Highly recommend this book. HAPPY READING!
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