I thought of giving this book one star... But I've actually read worse, and the first couple of chapters of this book were actually pretty decent. And I’m not going to comment on the insta love thing, because the author does warn us like two times that this book is a fast paced romance and slowburn poly romance. As in; she will quickly fall in love, but slowly over time the relationship will turn into RH.
The story; The premise of the story is fine, and could have actually worked out very decently. And I know the author has that capability because the first few chapters were actually super well done. Was the MMC head over hills with just one - night stand, and immediately the same night creeped into her house? Yes, but like I said, I knew it was going to be insta lovey (or rather insta obsession.) The MMC is a mafia leader who inherited the position from his father, and had a falling out with his two brothers over it. With the book just over two hundred pages long the entire premise of the book is just the MMC stalking the FMC, FMC gets kidnapped by one of the brothers for revenge and leverage etc. (Surprise, surprise; the brother also thinks the FMC is super special and adorable and starts to develop his first feelings while he had her kidnapped.) FMC gets rescued, eventually FMC and MMC open up the relationship - which they only established they are for like a day - and then the book ends up on a cliffhanger. So overall, not the most literary masterpiece of all time, but for a dark romance that, like I said is around 200 pages long, it is the standard and often works.
But now;
My problems with the book;
If I took a shot everytime I read “He/you sees/see sex and power as the same thing, and I made it my mission to save him/you” (because she actively says this to the MMC to his face), I would be in a coma right now.
Now I get why people hate the; “Rape/non-con to move the story forward” trope. Because that is basically what the MMC does. The FMC goes out with a guy, and he decides to show her he’s his by just taking her. She ends up sobbing on the ground, and telling him to go away, but a few paces later she makes the realization that “he sees sex and power as the same thing and this was just how he wanted to show that he cared” and she forgives him in like two pages.
The whiplash I got when the book started to get around the 180 pages. I swear in like 30 pages, they’d establish they are in a relationship/can’t be without each other, they go to his club to teach some traitors some lessons. He beats them up, they sit down, a guy at a bar flirts with FMC, he beats the guy up, the brother shows up, they go to MMC house, and suddenly they are opening their relationship to the brother as well, and are the MMC and the brother going to “rule” side by side as equals. The argument that they had for years was solved in a 2 page (so five minute) talk all because FMC “changed them.” The last few pages are just one final sex scene with the brother watching because he can’t deal with fysical touch yet (because at the end it’s suddenly revealed that the brothers have been sexually abused by being “rented out” by their father, that’s why - according to FMC- the MMC sees “sex and power as the same thing.” (If I have to read it 30 times, so have you.) And then it’s even a bunch more confession time in which the FMC calls them her soulmates because she knows she meant to save them…
The random evil aunt that had raised MC, (and has almost used her as a servant according to MC) that just suddenly appeared in the end of the story to be mean to MC so the guy could save her.
The writing was just not it, read more like a wattpad story.
The first spice scene was actually good, the rest was just meh and I actually skim read most of it because I just didn’t really care.
So why did I continue;
In the hopes it got better since I knew it could be done since the first few chapters were great. And eventually I got so far in the story I was going to see it finished, because of my pride. Luckily I got this for free on stuff your kindle day.
So two stars in the end: one for the decent start, and one for the fact that she did warn us this was going to be an insta love/obsession thing so I had been warned. Will not be continuing the story.