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Ard's Oath #1
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Arden was left in the village by a dying mage, who never returned. With no way out of the village on his own, he had always held onto the hope that one day his magic would awaken and give him access to his spheres. But he’s about to turn eighteen, and it’s never come. Instead, he’s settled into his lot as a sarcastic and quick-witted innkeeper. That all changes one night when his old flame, who escaped the village to become a mage’s anchor, returns. Ard’s life is about to go through some dramatic changes, and he’s not ready for them. Too bad, with magic comes responsibility, and Ard needs to adapt quickly because he’s making more enemies than friends with his glib tongue. Thankfully, he’s got some help along the way. Because he’ll need it. As the most powerful mage in the nation, he’s about to be thrown headfirst into the elite of the kingdom, and a few jokes won’t stop a sword.
456 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 7, 2023
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Bruce Sentar
50 books785 followersBorn and raised in the agricultural midwest, I moved every year after school even as far as Shanghai before settling down with my wife in Chicago.
I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
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I have always enjoyed Wuxia stories and became thrilled when I discovered harem stories spreading to western books. I've written down my day dreams for years as an idle hobby. Inspired by the harem genre I'm finally fleshing them out into full blown novels.
I'm excited to share my stories with you as I turn them into novels and series.
Connect with me on Facebook for updates on my latest books.
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November 13, 2023
Recently I had decided to catch up on Sentars Dungeon Diving series which I actually really enjoy other than finding the MC to be too much of a square, but even with that issue I was still entertained. So I was excited to start a new series of Sentars, unfortunately this just didn't gel with me at all. I normally like Sentars first few books in every series he makes, until he just overloads us with too many harem members and it makes the relationships feel really hollow, It's super weird because he usually does a great job at first making the MC and FMCs of the first few books have decent a romance story for a harem book, but then he just goes off the rails as his series' goes on. So I found it surprising that I did not enjoy this book at all, and I decided to cut my losses early and quit about 100 pages in.
First, while I find the MC of Dungeon Diving a pretty boring person, it felt like Sentar tried to make this MC the complete opposite, which unfortunately made it so he couldn't hold a normal conversation at all, every other sentence was some obnoxious quip that would make me want to pummel this dude until he learned some respect, and I'm not really a violent person. I know, I know, not every MC can be as awesome as Zhou Weiqing (kudos to anyone that knows who that is, best MC ever imo) but this guy was just obnoxious, it made me realize I'd much rather have a square MC like in dungeon diving than someone that can't hold a normal conversation.
Secondly I hate this system he has written here, I'm not some blushing prude, but the fact that this whole magic system revolves around having to make out or have sex with with so many people feels kind of gross. I'm down for a good kiss or make out session, but being a revolving door for the sake of this system just doesn't feel right.
Lastly the main FMC has had to be said revolving door after breaking the MCs heart by leaving without saying a word to leave for the capital and be an "anchor". So the FMC we're supposed to like later on broke our MCs heart, is now part of this skeevy magic system for last three years, we find out she's cucked him for some prince after her vanishing act and if the MC wants her back (let her go bro, first loves are just that, firsts) he has to steal her from said dickhead prince she's been flittering around with. That's a big no thanks for me. Three strikes pretty early on made me decide I have other books to read that won't annoy me or skeev me out.
First, while I find the MC of Dungeon Diving a pretty boring person, it felt like Sentar tried to make this MC the complete opposite, which unfortunately made it so he couldn't hold a normal conversation at all, every other sentence was some obnoxious quip that would make me want to pummel this dude until he learned some respect, and I'm not really a violent person. I know, I know, not every MC can be as awesome as Zhou Weiqing (kudos to anyone that knows who that is, best MC ever imo) but this guy was just obnoxious, it made me realize I'd much rather have a square MC like in dungeon diving than someone that can't hold a normal conversation.
Secondly I hate this system he has written here, I'm not some blushing prude, but the fact that this whole magic system revolves around having to make out or have sex with with so many people feels kind of gross. I'm down for a good kiss or make out session, but being a revolving door for the sake of this system just doesn't feel right.
Lastly the main FMC has had to be said revolving door after breaking the MCs heart by leaving without saying a word to leave for the capital and be an "anchor". So the FMC we're supposed to like later on broke our MCs heart, is now part of this skeevy magic system for last three years, we find out she's cucked him for some prince after her vanishing act and if the MC wants her back (let her go bro, first loves are just that, firsts) he has to steal her from said dickhead prince she's been flittering around with. That's a big no thanks for me. Three strikes pretty early on made me decide I have other books to read that won't annoy me or skeev me out.
September 17, 2023
This can be summed up in one word. Juvenile.
The setting is thin. The story is slow and when it picks up is very forced. The interactions are so very juvenile.
The setting is thin. The story is slow and when it picks up is very forced. The interactions are so very juvenile.
November 12, 2024
I do not recommend this book to anybody. I'm somewhat embarrassed to admit I read this abomination of grammatical devastation.
This is yet another self-published book that switches from first to third person, and the way it's done upsets the flow of the book at several points. While the misspellings were almost non-existent, the grammatical errors were rife and I would catch myself reading the same sentence several times to figure out what the author was TRYING to say. On top of that, the author takes what could've been an intriguing fantasy novel and begins to turn it into a perverted harem fantasy.
With that said, I did like the main character. I did not like the first person narrative of the main character, but the main character was entertaining when he wasn't being a pervert. Most of the characters are actually well thought out and have their own personalities, something I can't say for most self-published books.
The magical mechanics used in the story were interesting, even though you could tell where the author's mind was going with them about a third of the way in. I honestly believe the author could've written the entire premise without getting into lewd and sordid detail. There is such a thing as subtle context and the author avoided the use of that to hit you over the head with hammer.
I am not a prude, but I have always had a problem reading the sexual fantasies of authors because it is a little bit like a deep-dive into their sexual fetishes. My aversion to such material probably started with Anne Rice's Witching hour (which was actually a lot more subtle than this hot mess). I finished the book because I was sort of hoping the author would choose subtly over the venereal path he did choose. I kind of knew subtly was out the window with the first "sex scene" that was written about in gratuitous detail and I skipped several pages so I didn't have to get into his head. If that's your thing, knock yourself out. I skipped through most of the last chapter because I do not want to know what this guy fantasizes about.
I gave it two stars only because the guy isn't half bad at character and world building. He just doesn't write well and would do himself a favor to get an editor who might fix the glaringly obvious grammatical mistakes and possibly steer him away from the overtly detailed sexual fantasies that start about midway through the book and only get worse from there.
This book is written for a certain type of people. I don't really get it, it's not my thing, but I'm sure some dudes like sitting around reading the equivalent of a men's "romance novel" only less romance and more fucking.
And people wonder why I drop out of reading for years at a time. Well wonder no more, if I didn't already have a better book lined up next I would probably quit reading for the rest of the year.
This is yet another self-published book that switches from first to third person, and the way it's done upsets the flow of the book at several points. While the misspellings were almost non-existent, the grammatical errors were rife and I would catch myself reading the same sentence several times to figure out what the author was TRYING to say. On top of that, the author takes what could've been an intriguing fantasy novel and begins to turn it into a perverted harem fantasy.
With that said, I did like the main character. I did not like the first person narrative of the main character, but the main character was entertaining when he wasn't being a pervert. Most of the characters are actually well thought out and have their own personalities, something I can't say for most self-published books.
The magical mechanics used in the story were interesting, even though you could tell where the author's mind was going with them about a third of the way in. I honestly believe the author could've written the entire premise without getting into lewd and sordid detail. There is such a thing as subtle context and the author avoided the use of that to hit you over the head with hammer.
I am not a prude, but I have always had a problem reading the sexual fantasies of authors because it is a little bit like a deep-dive into their sexual fetishes. My aversion to such material probably started with Anne Rice's Witching hour (which was actually a lot more subtle than this hot mess). I finished the book because I was sort of hoping the author would choose subtly over the venereal path he did choose. I kind of knew subtly was out the window with the first "sex scene" that was written about in gratuitous detail and I skipped several pages so I didn't have to get into his head. If that's your thing, knock yourself out. I skipped through most of the last chapter because I do not want to know what this guy fantasizes about.
I gave it two stars only because the guy isn't half bad at character and world building. He just doesn't write well and would do himself a favor to get an editor who might fix the glaringly obvious grammatical mistakes and possibly steer him away from the overtly detailed sexual fantasies that start about midway through the book and only get worse from there.
This book is written for a certain type of people. I don't really get it, it's not my thing, but I'm sure some dudes like sitting around reading the equivalent of a men's "romance novel" only less romance and more fucking.
And people wonder why I drop out of reading for years at a time. Well wonder no more, if I didn't already have a better book lined up next I would probably quit reading for the rest of the year.
September 24, 2023
Poorly thought out
This main character is a poor fit for this world. Having been told that if a mage gets killed his anchors are executed, he pledges to charge into danger for them. This creates a character who will risk 3 lives for 1. Even worse it creates an obvious weakness for his enemies to exploit. This character needs a rewrite to become more calculating, or he's going to stay a 2 dimensional good guy
This main character is a poor fit for this world. Having been told that if a mage gets killed his anchors are executed, he pledges to charge into danger for them. This creates a character who will risk 3 lives for 1. Even worse it creates an obvious weakness for his enemies to exploit. This character needs a rewrite to become more calculating, or he's going to stay a 2 dimensional good guy
October 17, 2024
I borrowed this book thanks to my Kindle Unlimited subscription, and I read it on my tablet using the Kindle app.
Sometimes you start a book with no expectations, thinking you'll probably stop after just twenty pages, but then you reach page forty and kind of like it. Then you get to page eighty, like it even more, and before you know it, you've read the whole thing and are reaching for book 2. That’s exactly what happened to me with Ard's Oath, book 1.
Ard's story grabs you from the start, and the main character is hilarious. You can’t help but want to know what he’ll do next. Ard wakes up late in life to become a mage, but not just any mage—he’s a four-sphere mage, which is incredibly rare and powerful. The problem is, he doesn’t know how to use his magic and has to learn as he goes. Fortunately, he has Emlyn, a lover from his childhood who is now his anchor (someone who can’t produce magic but can use it if a mage passes it to them through an "intimate way," like kissing). Ard faces enemies, allies, and more enemies on his journey to learn not only magic but also how to live as a nobleman.
As a critique, I think Ard's evolution happens a bit too quickly by the end of the book. If he’s this powerful at the end of book 1, I wonder how much stronger he’ll be after four more books. The good news is, I’m planning to find out—I’ll definitely keep reading this series!
Sometimes you start a book with no expectations, thinking you'll probably stop after just twenty pages, but then you reach page forty and kind of like it. Then you get to page eighty, like it even more, and before you know it, you've read the whole thing and are reaching for book 2. That’s exactly what happened to me with Ard's Oath, book 1.
Ard's story grabs you from the start, and the main character is hilarious. You can’t help but want to know what he’ll do next. Ard wakes up late in life to become a mage, but not just any mage—he’s a four-sphere mage, which is incredibly rare and powerful. The problem is, he doesn’t know how to use his magic and has to learn as he goes. Fortunately, he has Emlyn, a lover from his childhood who is now his anchor (someone who can’t produce magic but can use it if a mage passes it to them through an "intimate way," like kissing). Ard faces enemies, allies, and more enemies on his journey to learn not only magic but also how to live as a nobleman.
As a critique, I think Ard's evolution happens a bit too quickly by the end of the book. If he’s this powerful at the end of book 1, I wonder how much stronger he’ll be after four more books. The good news is, I’m planning to find out—I’ll definitely keep reading this series!
December 27, 2023
Snark attack. Snark is like harsh language; if used judiciously it is effective and can be amusing. The only reason this gets a 4 instead of a 3 from me is that by the end of it the MC was no longer being reflexively snarky/sarcastic and learning that he had to take this shit seriously. EDIT: after reading book two, I removed the benefit of the doubt from this review, so a 3 it is.
I understand that other people like this kind of character; I find them annoying, but I realize it can be hard to strike a balance for more OP-type characters. While I recognize this as a mechanism to slightly "nerf" the legendary mage, here it was annoying to read. Hope isn't a COA, but hopefully the MC is less of an arsehole in the next book.
It's only a hypothesis, but I feel that the author is overcompensating for uptight MCs in some of his other books. I'm noticing a trend that I (personally) don't like of mentally juvenile characters in a lot of the recent books, and you can see from the relevant reviews that I don't appreciate that. YMMV as always.
I understand that other people like this kind of character; I find them annoying, but I realize it can be hard to strike a balance for more OP-type characters. While I recognize this as a mechanism to slightly "nerf" the legendary mage, here it was annoying to read. Hope isn't a COA, but hopefully the MC is less of an arsehole in the next book.
It's only a hypothesis, but I feel that the author is overcompensating for uptight MCs in some of his other books. I'm noticing a trend that I (personally) don't like of mentally juvenile characters in a lot of the recent books, and you can see from the relevant reviews that I don't appreciate that. YMMV as always.
January 15, 2024
I was looking for some fantasy by independent authors and this one caught my eye. Not just the cover, it had a large number of reviews with an average of around 4.5 on Amazon.
Surprisingly, this didn't disappoint. The author has done some great worldbuilding and there is a decent magic system that has rules and boundaries. Not quite up to Brandon Sanderson standards, but far better than a lot mainstream fantasy being written today.
In contrast to some of the authors other books (according to reviews I read), there is very little sex in this book. About 3 or 4 pages out of 450 so no need to avoid this book if that is a concern. The pace did get a little slow in a couple of places but that's not unusual or unexpected from this type of book.
Looking forward to reading the sequel.
Surprisingly, this didn't disappoint. The author has done some great worldbuilding and there is a decent magic system that has rules and boundaries. Not quite up to Brandon Sanderson standards, but far better than a lot mainstream fantasy being written today.
In contrast to some of the authors other books (according to reviews I read), there is very little sex in this book. About 3 or 4 pages out of 450 so no need to avoid this book if that is a concern. The pace did get a little slow in a couple of places but that's not unusual or unexpected from this type of book.
Looking forward to reading the sequel.
October 25, 2023
Make sure to stick your nose in this book (figuratively), it won’t be the only nose you’ll find! Ard is such an amazing character. It’s rare that I feel a bond with a fictional character, but Ard says all the intrusive things I wish I could say daily. He truly carries and sells this story for me, and I found myself laughing out loud multiple times. There’s nothing better than a bumbling, efficient idiot! Five stars, all day. Can’t wait to read the next.
November 10, 2023
Irrational, illogical, nonsensical.
Main character is contradictory in that he is incredibly childish and sex-driven at the same time. Maybe a serious problem of incredibly low Emotional Intelligence and a lack of formal education. System is contradictory too. Supposedly the few Mages in this Fantasy other world, have the "gift" of six to eight different types of magic (author only describes five: (life, death, earth, fire, ice) (and main character supposedly can only do 4 magics: Earth, Life, Death and Ice??) Then the mages need warrior-asssistants-bodyguards, called "anchors" that act kind of like lighting rods to qualm the negative effects of the "magic" that the mages perform. The thing is, this system isn't really explained well, or have a "Rule of Equivalent Exchange": Mage executes magic spell (no magic energy needed, but has to discharge the negative effects upon an anchor). Usually, a magic user has to gain a surplus of magic energy (Mana, Chi, Qui, Aether, etc.) that they can use to execute different spells or magical abilities. In this story, there is no storage or management of magical energy. The mages, transfer the "negative-effect-magical-energy" to the anchors, and they use this energy to buff their skills and execute their own magical spells/skills.
Why would they be able to have two instances of magic from the magic user, first the magic user and then the magic again of the anchor?? The author writes that Magic in this world is kind of Yin-Yang (positives and negatives). So, if a Mage uses life magic to cure/heal someone, then the "negative-effect-magical-energy" that needs to be transferred to the anchor is of the "death magic kind" but what would be opposites of Earth magic?? Void Magic?? If fire has Ice and Life has Death, wouldn't pushing "death magic" on an anchor, make them die??
The second part is even more irrational/illogical, the transference of this "negative-effect-magical-energy" can only be achieved by physical contact. Not hand-holding, but kissing and sexual intercourse. And because an anchor can only "receive one type/class of magic" from a Mage, then a Mage, like Ardon, the main character (who apparently can perform 4 types of magic: Life, Death, Ice, Earth) needs to have at all times, 4 anchors close to him at all times, to protect and to receive the "negative-effect-magical-energy"???
Ardon never really went to any type of school, he is self-taught and even though the main theme was to go to the Capital to learn magic, he never really gets there (story is totally side-tracked). So, this story is kind of like Ardon (totally becoming a Mary-Sue) and having unlimited magical abilities, without any training, practice, just to have a harem retinue arc in the story.
This book and the ideas, need an editor, need polish and I would recommend a rewrite. The beginning has a lot of things happening at the same time and some are out of order.
Then, the ideas of the author, in this fantasy book and series are not really of a magical system, the "transference of magic" and the roles of the anchors are not explained well (or consistent to logical/rational thought).
The "anchors" would keep an oath to give their lives for the protection and betterment of the mages they serve (because Mages were rare and mages that could do more types of magics were even more valued). The Title of this book: "Ardon's Oath" is because, he changed the typical "Anchor's Oath" to die and serve, to one of "no one will be left behind (no one will be sacrificed), and we are equal in risks and consequences" but again, the author describes why there is magic in this other world, the types of magic, but doesn't go into Mana, Aether, Qi, Chi, etc. Magic energy, or why when using magic, there is an imbalance in "effects-of-having-used-magic" that needs to be discharged by kissing or having sex.?? Wouldn't the mage use up the magical energy, executing a magical spell?? Wouldn't it have been better to have one part of this dual-part be the "carrier of magical energy" and the other part be the "receiver of magical energy to use in spells been a better method to express this fantasy book and "magical system"???
Because "Magic" would need some type of "Magical Energy" to be stored or to be used, or to be transferred/transformed (when using a magical spell), using as the basic principle, the Conservation of Energy, that states: that "in physics and chemistry, the total energy of an isolated system remains constant; it is said to be conserved over time. In the case of a closed system the principle says that the total amount of energy within the system can only be changed through energy entering or leaving the system. Energy can neither be created nor destroyed; rather, it can only be transformed or transferred from one form to another". (definition from Wikipedia).
So, if you are into harem-retinue books that don't really explain the story well, or have common sense, or sensible systems in place, then this book and the series might be for you.
This book has no maps, no inside illustrations, no character summaries, no real character descriptions, no real world building describing the systems in place in this other world: geopolitical, territorial, economic, social, religious, etc.
Main character is contradictory in that he is incredibly childish and sex-driven at the same time. Maybe a serious problem of incredibly low Emotional Intelligence and a lack of formal education. System is contradictory too. Supposedly the few Mages in this Fantasy other world, have the "gift" of six to eight different types of magic (author only describes five: (life, death, earth, fire, ice) (and main character supposedly can only do 4 magics: Earth, Life, Death and Ice??) Then the mages need warrior-asssistants-bodyguards, called "anchors" that act kind of like lighting rods to qualm the negative effects of the "magic" that the mages perform. The thing is, this system isn't really explained well, or have a "Rule of Equivalent Exchange": Mage executes magic spell (no magic energy needed, but has to discharge the negative effects upon an anchor). Usually, a magic user has to gain a surplus of magic energy (Mana, Chi, Qui, Aether, etc.) that they can use to execute different spells or magical abilities. In this story, there is no storage or management of magical energy. The mages, transfer the "negative-effect-magical-energy" to the anchors, and they use this energy to buff their skills and execute their own magical spells/skills.
Why would they be able to have two instances of magic from the magic user, first the magic user and then the magic again of the anchor?? The author writes that Magic in this world is kind of Yin-Yang (positives and negatives). So, if a Mage uses life magic to cure/heal someone, then the "negative-effect-magical-energy" that needs to be transferred to the anchor is of the "death magic kind" but what would be opposites of Earth magic?? Void Magic?? If fire has Ice and Life has Death, wouldn't pushing "death magic" on an anchor, make them die??
The second part is even more irrational/illogical, the transference of this "negative-effect-magical-energy" can only be achieved by physical contact. Not hand-holding, but kissing and sexual intercourse. And because an anchor can only "receive one type/class of magic" from a Mage, then a Mage, like Ardon, the main character (who apparently can perform 4 types of magic: Life, Death, Ice, Earth) needs to have at all times, 4 anchors close to him at all times, to protect and to receive the "negative-effect-magical-energy"???
Ardon never really went to any type of school, he is self-taught and even though the main theme was to go to the Capital to learn magic, he never really gets there (story is totally side-tracked). So, this story is kind of like Ardon (totally becoming a Mary-Sue) and having unlimited magical abilities, without any training, practice, just to have a harem retinue arc in the story.
This book and the ideas, need an editor, need polish and I would recommend a rewrite. The beginning has a lot of things happening at the same time and some are out of order.
Then, the ideas of the author, in this fantasy book and series are not really of a magical system, the "transference of magic" and the roles of the anchors are not explained well (or consistent to logical/rational thought).
The "anchors" would keep an oath to give their lives for the protection and betterment of the mages they serve (because Mages were rare and mages that could do more types of magics were even more valued). The Title of this book: "Ardon's Oath" is because, he changed the typical "Anchor's Oath" to die and serve, to one of "no one will be left behind (no one will be sacrificed), and we are equal in risks and consequences" but again, the author describes why there is magic in this other world, the types of magic, but doesn't go into Mana, Aether, Qi, Chi, etc. Magic energy, or why when using magic, there is an imbalance in "effects-of-having-used-magic" that needs to be discharged by kissing or having sex.?? Wouldn't the mage use up the magical energy, executing a magical spell?? Wouldn't it have been better to have one part of this dual-part be the "carrier of magical energy" and the other part be the "receiver of magical energy to use in spells been a better method to express this fantasy book and "magical system"???
Because "Magic" would need some type of "Magical Energy" to be stored or to be used, or to be transferred/transformed (when using a magical spell), using as the basic principle, the Conservation of Energy, that states: that "in physics and chemistry, the total energy of an isolated system remains constant; it is said to be conserved over time. In the case of a closed system the principle says that the total amount of energy within the system can only be changed through energy entering or leaving the system. Energy can neither be created nor destroyed; rather, it can only be transformed or transferred from one form to another". (definition from Wikipedia).
So, if you are into harem-retinue books that don't really explain the story well, or have common sense, or sensible systems in place, then this book and the series might be for you.
This book has no maps, no inside illustrations, no character summaries, no real character descriptions, no real world building describing the systems in place in this other world: geopolitical, territorial, economic, social, religious, etc.
January 4, 2024
So the first 60% was great. The idea as a whole is fantastic in my opinion, the spheres and anchors are really interesting take on magic. The writing quality was great, the characters were fleshed out and the whole thing moves at a good clip while still giving you world building and a solid page count. This is my first book by the author but I can honestly say while in the zone, he's a solid writer and I think he could create something quite special.
Unfortunately this is the part where i explain why i rated it quite low, by my standards. Once we pass 60% and Ard is introduced to the character who will be his 2nd anchor, well it felt like someone else took the wheel. Ard becomes the cringiest character I've read in a while, the character completly disregards authority (As EVERY MC in these types of books does) but he becomes needlesly antagonistic to every character other than the immediate women around him. He makes deductions he has no business having any knowledge about. He will threaten anyone making even the slightest comment to his own anchors whilst hypocritically insulting all others. Truthfully the most disapointing thing which had previously been a point in the authors favour, is that he spent a good portion of the book building a relationship between the MC and his first anchor and while this was only my impression I got the feeling each anchor was going to be the focus of each ongoing book with a bigger story as the backdrop, instead Ard takes an instant and arbitrary liking to certain women as soon as he's introduced to them, so that everyone but Emlyn is a carboard placeholder.
I try these types of books every now and again hoping to come across a gem as most despite some goods ideas are usually self instert/wish fufilment, and thats fine no ones expecting shakespeare. I thought this one was going to be a gem, and I really do think the author's got what it takes to produce one, but this isnt it.
Unfortunately this is the part where i explain why i rated it quite low, by my standards. Once we pass 60% and Ard is introduced to the character who will be his 2nd anchor, well it felt like someone else took the wheel. Ard becomes the cringiest character I've read in a while, the character completly disregards authority (As EVERY MC in these types of books does) but he becomes needlesly antagonistic to every character other than the immediate women around him. He makes deductions he has no business having any knowledge about. He will threaten anyone making even the slightest comment to his own anchors whilst hypocritically insulting all others. Truthfully the most disapointing thing which had previously been a point in the authors favour, is that he spent a good portion of the book building a relationship between the MC and his first anchor and while this was only my impression I got the feeling each anchor was going to be the focus of each ongoing book with a bigger story as the backdrop, instead Ard takes an instant and arbitrary liking to certain women as soon as he's introduced to them, so that everyone but Emlyn is a carboard placeholder.
I try these types of books every now and again hoping to come across a gem as most despite some goods ideas are usually self instert/wish fufilment, and thats fine no ones expecting shakespeare. I thought this one was going to be a gem, and I really do think the author's got what it takes to produce one, but this isnt it.
September 11, 2023
Bruce’s best work
I have read all of the sentar books and must say this one was probably my favourite intro to a series, even surpassing saving supervillains 1. Ard is smart and able to pick up on things fast, but is still refreshingly stupid (like an 18yr old should be) when it matters most. The banter is snarky and quick witted like British humour, but does not rely on childish humour whatsoever. The slow burn romance promised was one of the best I’ve read in a book. With the interested parties having extremely complicated feelings and history, in a complicated world. The extra length was perfect for this book as I definitely felt like this was one complete arc of the story. Often in 300-400 page books there are certain smaller details that get left behind and this does not happen. The characters are all set up and the journey is well underway. There were a few instances where a sentence ran on slightly or I did struggle for a moment as some contractions came in odd places making me re-read a sentence a few times. But compared to other authors it was sparse. Fantastic book mr. Sentar
I have read all of the sentar books and must say this one was probably my favourite intro to a series, even surpassing saving supervillains 1. Ard is smart and able to pick up on things fast, but is still refreshingly stupid (like an 18yr old should be) when it matters most. The banter is snarky and quick witted like British humour, but does not rely on childish humour whatsoever. The slow burn romance promised was one of the best I’ve read in a book. With the interested parties having extremely complicated feelings and history, in a complicated world. The extra length was perfect for this book as I definitely felt like this was one complete arc of the story. Often in 300-400 page books there are certain smaller details that get left behind and this does not happen. The characters are all set up and the journey is well underway. There were a few instances where a sentence ran on slightly or I did struggle for a moment as some contractions came in odd places making me re-read a sentence a few times. But compared to other authors it was sparse. Fantastic book mr. Sentar
June 14, 2024
Enjoyable series entry
Alternate universe, magic, harem adult situations
Arden, nearly eighteen when several events converge together and he's nearly killed by several magic-hyped assassins, but survives, and things take off from there. Well thought out magic spheres and how it all works. Looking forward to reading book 2.
Alternate universe, magic, harem adult situations
Arden, nearly eighteen when several events converge together and he's nearly killed by several magic-hyped assassins, but survives, and things take off from there. Well thought out magic spheres and how it all works. Looking forward to reading book 2.
February 1, 2024
DNF
I read other books by Sentra and enjoyed them. I just couldn’t finish this one, the MC and his group are boring
I read other books by Sentra and enjoyed them. I just couldn’t finish this one, the MC and his group are boring
July 11, 2024
Mc is 12 and just discovered shonen anime and sex
April 10, 2024
Good
A good start to the book series, I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book released.
A good start to the book series, I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book released.
January 3, 2024
This has been a fun read, though it is drifting more and more toward a harem series, and I'm not a fan of harem stories. But, at least in this book, that behavior is light. We'll see how this goes in the following books. This book can stand alone as there isn't a massive cliffhanger at the end. Interesting power progression, good battles, and nice delineation between good and bad guys, but one plot element is not well closed (could be an author oversight, or it may be closed in subsequent books). I had a hard time putting the book down and enjoyed the read.
December 29, 2023
We can tell this is going to be a book where everyone loves the MC.of course he is a cad with a heart of gold and will chase everything in a skirt, but he loves them, really he does. I am hoping he is setting the MC up for some growth and staying with this series will depend on how well the author can turn this child into an adult.
I am also wondering why the author decided that magic is transferred through intimacy. I am hoping it is not just a reason to have the MC surrounded by women. The author has hinted that this licentiousness will make more sense once we get to the capital but that seems to be at least another half a book away.
This book has the bones of a good story.
I am also wondering why the author decided that magic is transferred through intimacy. I am hoping it is not just a reason to have the MC surrounded by women. The author has hinted that this licentiousness will make more sense once we get to the capital but that seems to be at least another half a book away.
This book has the bones of a good story.
December 30, 2023
Great story
What a great book one , Ard has given up hope of ever becoming a mage, finding his family or ever seeing is first love Emlyn again but this just shows you shouldn't stop hoping and dreaming.
Thoroughly enjoyed book one , interesting characters , well defined magic and I'm sure the world building will continue. I've had this book on my reading list for ages but always avoided it due to the front cover , hate those misogynist covers especially when they have little to do with the great story inside.
What a great book one , Ard has given up hope of ever becoming a mage, finding his family or ever seeing is first love Emlyn again but this just shows you shouldn't stop hoping and dreaming.
Thoroughly enjoyed book one , interesting characters , well defined magic and I'm sure the world building will continue. I've had this book on my reading list for ages but always avoided it due to the front cover , hate those misogynist covers especially when they have little to do with the great story inside.
June 20, 2025
Romance:
December 21, 2023
I was trying to hold off on reading this book until more sequels were out because based on Bruce Sentar's recent work, I knew I was going to be absolutely hooked.
But...I'd had a bit of a rough week. Nothing too bad, but some routine dental work and a job interview, and I hate both, and I wanted a comfort book to curl up with and forget about dental drills, and...
...yeah, mission accomplished. I'm on record being not-very-complimentary towards the same author's Dragon's Justice and Saving Supervillains series, even though they seem to be very well liked in general, but I adore his Dungeon Diving 101 series and his earlier Mana Master series, and from my point of view this is very, very much in line with those latter series.
I particularly love the very three dimensional, well realised characters, the compelling plot, the great dialogue, the viewpoint shifts, and the slightly novel fantasy setting.
If you're looking for some escapism to a happy fantasy land, this is just...perfect. The only possible downside I can think of is that, as I write this, only the first two books are out, and after you inevitably binge read them both, you'll be sad about not having more.
But...I'd had a bit of a rough week. Nothing too bad, but some routine dental work and a job interview, and I hate both, and I wanted a comfort book to curl up with and forget about dental drills, and...
...yeah, mission accomplished. I'm on record being not-very-complimentary towards the same author's Dragon's Justice and Saving Supervillains series, even though they seem to be very well liked in general, but I adore his Dungeon Diving 101 series and his earlier Mana Master series, and from my point of view this is very, very much in line with those latter series.
I particularly love the very three dimensional, well realised characters, the compelling plot, the great dialogue, the viewpoint shifts, and the slightly novel fantasy setting.
If you're looking for some escapism to a happy fantasy land, this is just...perfect. The only possible downside I can think of is that, as I write this, only the first two books are out, and after you inevitably binge read them both, you'll be sad about not having more.
August 13, 2024
I really liked it, except for one thing.
I really, really, didn't like how the whole Ard being kidnapped situation was handled. Everyone roasting him, occasionally assaulting and insulting him, etc. for something that really wasn't his fault. The reasoning used in the book is that anchors are responsible for their mages safety, so he was reckless and irresponsible by being in danger like that. The problem with this is as follows:
1. No one freaking told him that anchors are executed if there mage dies. They are punishing him/reprimanding him for something he had no way of knowing, which felt like total BS.
2. If he's at fault for going off on his own without an anchor, isn't his anchor(s) equally at fault for not being with him? Selina had no idea where her mage was, and Emlyn let him run off in a huff because she got her fee fees hurt. Like, both anchors were super negligent (and they knew better given their training) and yet all the blame is put on Ard?
3. Selina/Ard claiming that Ard now owes Selina a favor. Like wut? I think I've already established earlier that Ard really isn't at fault here, but what does Ard owe her a favor for? Selina's basically saying that Ard owes her a favor because she was scared that he almost got her executed? Basically, that Ard owes her because she was grossly negligent in her duty... That's like if a bodyguard said their client owed them because the bodyguard almost got the client killed.
Anyways, I feel like that could've been handled way better. Either not make everyone rag on Ard so much since he didn't really do anything super wrong, or make the anchors not shit at their jobs. Could have Ard give them the slip somehow, or have Ard be informed about the consequences of getting himself in trouble beforehand. It just made no sense considering the context.
I really, really, didn't like how the whole Ard being kidnapped situation was handled. Everyone roasting him, occasionally assaulting and insulting him, etc. for something that really wasn't his fault. The reasoning used in the book is that anchors are responsible for their mages safety, so he was reckless and irresponsible by being in danger like that. The problem with this is as follows:
1. No one freaking told him that anchors are executed if there mage dies. They are punishing him/reprimanding him for something he had no way of knowing, which felt like total BS.
2. If he's at fault for going off on his own without an anchor, isn't his anchor(s) equally at fault for not being with him? Selina had no idea where her mage was, and Emlyn let him run off in a huff because she got her fee fees hurt. Like, both anchors were super negligent (and they knew better given their training) and yet all the blame is put on Ard?
3. Selina/Ard claiming that Ard now owes Selina a favor. Like wut? I think I've already established earlier that Ard really isn't at fault here, but what does Ard owe her a favor for? Selina's basically saying that Ard owes her a favor because she was scared that he almost got her executed? Basically, that Ard owes her because she was grossly negligent in her duty... That's like if a bodyguard said their client owed them because the bodyguard almost got the client killed.
Anyways, I feel like that could've been handled way better. Either not make everyone rag on Ard so much since he didn't really do anything super wrong, or make the anchors not shit at their jobs. Could have Ard give them the slip somehow, or have Ard be informed about the consequences of getting himself in trouble beforehand. It just made no sense considering the context.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 5, 2023
awesome
I have many pet peeves about harem novels this book swerves past every single one. The MC is likeable and smart with a lot of sass and each one of his lady friends feel like actual people who have a backstory not just dolls for him to f***. There is the correct amount of horizontal mambo but it’s playful and fun and doesn’t feel gross and dehumanising like some and it’s fine if you like that but I like that it feels like he likes these women and really wants them to like him too. The story of a coming of age yay I’m a wizard in a medieval world ohh look a get to have fall in love with a bunch of warrior women but in this lovely romantic fun way. Can’t wait for the next one I really want to see how this journey goes crossing my fingers that the author is going to stick to the script about how many bedroom friends he will get so I can keep remembering their names.
I have many pet peeves about harem novels this book swerves past every single one. The MC is likeable and smart with a lot of sass and each one of his lady friends feel like actual people who have a backstory not just dolls for him to f***. There is the correct amount of horizontal mambo but it’s playful and fun and doesn’t feel gross and dehumanising like some and it’s fine if you like that but I like that it feels like he likes these women and really wants them to like him too. The story of a coming of age yay I’m a wizard in a medieval world ohh look a get to have fall in love with a bunch of warrior women but in this lovely romantic fun way. Can’t wait for the next one I really want to see how this journey goes crossing my fingers that the author is going to stick to the script about how many bedroom friends he will get so I can keep remembering their names.
September 15, 2023
A fast talking smart arse finally comes into magical powers
Ard is a smart quirky character, fast with his barbed tongue, he lets his mouth run wild, starting as an abandoned child in a small border village. Ards mouth and attitude gets him into trouble more often than not. An interesting premise of magic, with mages requiring ‘anchors’ people who can drain a mage of opposing power so they can maintain a balance and not get corrupted. This positions Ard well with the possibility of a harem of anchors who can drain his various powers and use it to enhance themselves with the specific power he ‘gives’ them via a kiss and enables them to become superhuman bodyguards. I enjoyed the story, it was a good length and paced well intermixing Ard’s thirst for knowledge about magic, rekindling his first love, finding his family, and many battles and action sequences to keep the reader entertained. Excellent start to a series.
Ard is a smart quirky character, fast with his barbed tongue, he lets his mouth run wild, starting as an abandoned child in a small border village. Ards mouth and attitude gets him into trouble more often than not. An interesting premise of magic, with mages requiring ‘anchors’ people who can drain a mage of opposing power so they can maintain a balance and not get corrupted. This positions Ard well with the possibility of a harem of anchors who can drain his various powers and use it to enhance themselves with the specific power he ‘gives’ them via a kiss and enables them to become superhuman bodyguards. I enjoyed the story, it was a good length and paced well intermixing Ard’s thirst for knowledge about magic, rekindling his first love, finding his family, and many battles and action sequences to keep the reader entertained. Excellent start to a series.
September 26, 2023
As expected, a fun and creative story with lots of curve balls.
Another fun and interesting story with memorable and interesting characters. Also excellent world building without getting too deep into the weeds about the magic system theory. The MC is especially fun because his mouth loves to write cheques that his behind struggles to cash. His snark and the banter between the major players also lightens the narrative. Its good that while the MC is skeptical of nobles and their machinations, he recognizes that he must learn to run, not walk thru the minefield of politics. He is also willing to talk honestly with his cohort, understanding the value of good and clear communication as they build their relationships.
I look forward to the next installment.
Another fun and interesting story with memorable and interesting characters. Also excellent world building without getting too deep into the weeds about the magic system theory. The MC is especially fun because his mouth loves to write cheques that his behind struggles to cash. His snark and the banter between the major players also lightens the narrative. Its good that while the MC is skeptical of nobles and their machinations, he recognizes that he must learn to run, not walk thru the minefield of politics. He is also willing to talk honestly with his cohort, understanding the value of good and clear communication as they build their relationships.
I look forward to the next installment.
September 11, 2023
Such a good book!
So yes I am definitely a fan of Harem Lit. I am also a fan of OP MCs, but ones that grow into their OPness, not just taking over worlds immediately. This book has all of that. It also has Ard. Ard has got to be one of, if not the most, favorite MCs, not just Harem Lit but of all time! He is funny, intelligent, powerful and snarky as hell! I chuckled most of my way through this book, which I read in one day, and actually LOLed multiple times. Ard is just too much fun! It shows that Mr Sentar must have a good time writing him as well. All I can say in closing is I need more Ard and his girls! Let’s get to it Mr Sentar!
So yes I am definitely a fan of Harem Lit. I am also a fan of OP MCs, but ones that grow into their OPness, not just taking over worlds immediately. This book has all of that. It also has Ard. Ard has got to be one of, if not the most, favorite MCs, not just Harem Lit but of all time! He is funny, intelligent, powerful and snarky as hell! I chuckled most of my way through this book, which I read in one day, and actually LOLed multiple times. Ard is just too much fun! It shows that Mr Sentar must have a good time writing him as well. All I can say in closing is I need more Ard and his girls! Let’s get to it Mr Sentar!
October 26, 2023
Great start - terrible end
MC starts as a country bumpkin inn keeper, discovers he has magic, turns out he is over powered and picks up the magic fast...a little too fast for someone with zero experience and no real exposure to magic.
The worst part of the story is how he lives in a quaint tiny village with no political intrigue, and a month later he is an expert at political manipulation and maneuvering with nothing but a cursory explanation of city politics for him on his journey. So inconsistent with the characters background as to be ridiculous. I got to about 92% read and then stopped...I couldn't handle the incongruity anymore.
MC starts as a country bumpkin inn keeper, discovers he has magic, turns out he is over powered and picks up the magic fast...a little too fast for someone with zero experience and no real exposure to magic.
The worst part of the story is how he lives in a quaint tiny village with no political intrigue, and a month later he is an expert at political manipulation and maneuvering with nothing but a cursory explanation of city politics for him on his journey. So inconsistent with the characters background as to be ridiculous. I got to about 92% read and then stopped...I couldn't handle the incongruity anymore.
December 21, 2023
Ewwwwww Harem Novel
I should have guessed from the cover art it’s a miserable harem novel. That aside not a bad book at all. If all the harem aspects and nonsensical anchor/mage relationship stuff is taken out, I’d give it a solid 3.7 stars. Somewhat interesting magic system and decent MC. I personally don’t like “witty” characters because I like competent in control folks but while still annoying wasn’t the worst I’ve read. The constant reinforcement of romance and flighty attachment makes the story a resounding one star though. It’s disgusting honestly how authors still write books with objectifying subservient characters.
I should have guessed from the cover art it’s a miserable harem novel. That aside not a bad book at all. If all the harem aspects and nonsensical anchor/mage relationship stuff is taken out, I’d give it a solid 3.7 stars. Somewhat interesting magic system and decent MC. I personally don’t like “witty” characters because I like competent in control folks but while still annoying wasn’t the worst I’ve read. The constant reinforcement of romance and flighty attachment makes the story a resounding one star though. It’s disgusting honestly how authors still write books with objectifying subservient characters.
September 10, 2023
This has instantly become one of my favourite series's by Sentar. The characters all have depth and the snarky MC is smart and very likeable. His main love interest Emlyn is very likeable as well. They take their time rather than just falling into bed together. I particularly enjoyed the flirting between them, and when they finally did get together it was well done and one of the best scenes I've read. I hope the author has the MC continue to take his time with the other women that fill out his harem. I highly recommend this book to fans of the author or genre.
September 27, 2023
Very good book, well written and interesting magic setup.
There's a harem element in it, but it actually fits the story, and is not only male-oriented.
I loved the snark, and especially the quick-thinking MC, but the last few chapters seemed to increase the snark but in a repetitive way that started to get annoying. Either come up with something new to snark about or drop the reminiscences.
You can only read on how someone fell into an iced over river that many times before you start skipping paragraphs...
Still very recommended !
There's a harem element in it, but it actually fits the story, and is not only male-oriented.
I loved the snark, and especially the quick-thinking MC, but the last few chapters seemed to increase the snark but in a repetitive way that started to get annoying. Either come up with something new to snark about or drop the reminiscences.
You can only read on how someone fell into an iced over river that many times before you start skipping paragraphs...
Still very recommended !
September 25, 2023
Great start to what will be an amazing series
Wow, what a page turner. The worst part of this book is the next one in the series is not out yet. I only discovered Bruce Sentar's work recently, but since then I have been devouring his books at a rapid pace. I am greatly looking forward to the next book in this series and all of his other series. I hope y'all enjoy then as much as I have.
Wow, what a page turner. The worst part of this book is the next one in the series is not out yet. I only discovered Bruce Sentar's work recently, but since then I have been devouring his books at a rapid pace. I am greatly looking forward to the next book in this series and all of his other series. I hope y'all enjoy then as much as I have.
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