DNF at 25%
This book is a very basic first run at what could be a good story, with a lot more thought, world building, and writing experience.
Couple of issues: the writing style is a bit repetitive and amateur, the characters have very thin motivations, and high impact scenes aren’t done justice because there is no true emotion in the writing (low on the metaphors/similies/descriptive prose, and the sentence length and structure has no variation, so everything reads quite monotone).
My main issue, though, is that there’s nothing really motivating the story? There’s no clear objective for the characters to achieve, and no ticking clock to motivate them toward their goal. I just didn’t feel that tense need to stick around and find out what happens next.
The sex scenes at the beginning of the book also come out of nowhere, and feel extremely inappropriate for the emotions the characters SHOULD be feeling, given the context. The FMC’s motivations are thinner than gossamer for the inciting event, and I feel that with more time and thought this could have been done better.
I’m going to avoid rating this one because of the DNF, but also because this is a self publish.