As I was reading the book, I was convinced I’d give it a three-star review. Kevin Belmonte did a fantastic job researching the life and context of William Wilberforce, but structuring the boom was less masterful. The book was set up with an explanation of Wilberforce’s early years coming first, which makes sense (and as Lewis argues in Surprised by Joy, often the most interesting part of any biography). The interest was kept up in telling of his conversion.
Where the flow and structure of the book takes a major hit is the deviation from centering on Wilberforce’s life: Belmonte lays out the first and second major tasks of Wilberforce’s (being the abolition of the slave trade and the reformation of English morality respectively). Unfortunately, a story of battling in Parliament, while integral to how he achieved the momentous objects that he fought for, was distracting from the man himself. Many people have achieved great things, and achieving anything in a democracy takes determination, steadfastness, and a miracle, but for me, the most compelling thing about Wilberforce was his character and integrity. I dog eared pages and treasured quotes from Wilberforce’s letters or diaries that Belmonte included. I most wanted to know the man and the spirituality of the man behind the move toward abolition.
Because of that, the book markedly improved when Belmonte moved on to the topics of Wilberforce’s nature and ideas, his family life, and then his life as it drew to a close. It wasn’t until at least halfway or two-thirds of the way through the book that I learned that Wilberforce had gotten married (and some ten years before the date I was reading about at the time).
I think Belmonte structured the book in such a way that the readers see and understand his accomplishments and then are shown the man behind them. For me, having even a minimal understanding that this man led to the abolition of the slave trade is enough to want to read about his person. I think I would have preferred a structure that delved into the depths of Wilberforce’s life, spirituality, and person and then showed how this led to and empowered his fight against slavery.
Despite my long-winded desire for a change of structure in the book, as I mentioned I dog eared pages and want to read Wilberforce’s own book and perhaps look into collections of his letters or essays. This book, while picked up as an “oh that looks interesting” read of a great man has just sparked my interest to know more and to go deeper. Because of that, I gave it four-stars. Surely inspiring readers to go deeper in the subject matter is a mark of huge success. In the end, I had to say, well done, Kevin Belmonte, and God give us more men and women like William Wilberforce.