There’s nothing especially wrong with this volume of Hirayasumi; honestly, parts of it are very, very good. It just lacks that extra little bit of whatever the series does that transforms the good into the brilliant.
It might be the way this tries to cover a lot of ground over the course of the volume and feels a little all over the place as a result. The narrative throughline about Natsumi and her struggle with creating manga is really good, but it’s approached from several angles to various levels of success.
Hiroto continues to be a life lesson in doing things for the joy of doing them, rather than having a grand purpose. He’s no guru, but there’s no question that his approach is infectious and, even if nobody goes quite as far as he does, it reminds them all to see the pleasure in the small things.
The back part of this volume is better than the start, when Hiroto and Hideki have what looks suspiciously like either chasing a dream or an early onset midlife crisis with their decision to go back to their roots and do something that lets Hiroto get over something from his past.
This comes as Natsumi’s latest attempt at a manga gets the most withering feedback yet from her older editor, whose feeling of being out of step with the world has really started to weigh on him. His evaluation is from a place of good intention, but it’s absolutely savage in its way.
Which sets Natsumi on edge and causes her to vent her frustrations towards Hiroto, just because he’s doing what he always wanted and without having to really work for it. Except he does work hard at it, it’s just not obvious. The denouement to this is really nice.
Hiroto and Yomogi’s relationship goes a bit further this time, especially after an epic fumble by the third participant in this love triangle. Sometimes erring on the side of caution does not impress a woman.
Yomogi once again goes through the wringer here, but the visual representation of her emotional state is an accurate a representation of how it feels to be overwhelmed as any I’ve seen. It leads to… well, we’ll see if it leads to anything, but here’s hoping.
This feels like a volume that’s trying too hard to catch up with everything going on in the story and it winds up feeling a little frenetic. Which is exactly the opposite of how the series is meant to feel. Ironic or not, it’s a bit more hectic than the series at its best.
That’s being harsh because the story is fantastic and the lives of the characters remain interesting as they deal with more realistic concerns than a lot of manga. It’s just that the best Hirayasumi is superb and creates a very high bar. This approaches it, make no mistake, but isn’t quite there.
4 stars - very good, but missing that little je ne sais quoi that would have it representing the series at its best. Still more than worth your reading time and money, mind you, that’s not in question by this point.