Patchwork Quilt.
OMG. I swear this was horrible. It’s like the author had one line of thought, expressed it, stopped writing for a moment then came back and went with another line of thought and just kept going. No editing to remove what was previously written, thus contradicting or clashing with the next paragraph.
Fallon was made to be bipolar at times with her feeling of Lucas. When she would finally say she’s was going to be with him all the way, the author seemed to forget when the next scene would come and she would be back to pondering (a lot of pondering) whether she was ready to move forward or not. On and on it went.
One thing (of many) that drug out ridiculously is who pulled Fallon from the river. Lucas flat out said “If I hadn’t have been there…” when he was talking to her, but for some reason she didn’t hear that then asked him about something else. It’s like half the time when information was said directly to her, she completely missed it for some mundane thing that was said. But anyway, she continued to say that Tristan had saved her after it was said (or implied) at least two times that it was Lucas.
Then there was Lucas’ dinner. We spent several pages listen to her inner monologue about the fact that the meal was special and meant something more after Eleanor’s hint to her, the body language and comments of the pack at the table and what it meant by rejecting it, then the author has the audacity to make her seem shocked as the chapter closed and realization hit that she was rejecting Lucas and embarrassing him in front of his pack. Really? She’d just said that’s
What she was likely doing by not eating, but then she’s shocked? That was so ridiculous.
Then there’s the dreams. The girl has dreams of conversations with Marie and other things that relate to her current situation, yet she dismisses them as just dreams… even after she gets a revelation about Lucas’ previous mate that would make the dreams make sense. Then, when the author finally has her accepting the dreams as memories and not dreams, which also makes her accept another truth about that the author has her revert back to saying they were just dreams and that the connection meant nothing. I think that may have been another editing error, the paragraphs are like back to back.
The girl hasn’t once questioned why the girl in the photo was wearing the exact same opal necklace she has been wearing. She never asked Lucas when questioning him about her how she was related to Marie. She never asked who had actually killed his mate, even after having a dream/memory showing how it happened.
The story is follow-able, but it is disjointed and at times wrap back around itself as though the author chose a different route. It’s interesting enough to continue reading, if only to see what becomes of the characters and the curse, but it’s not a book I will seek out to read the finale coming out early ‘24.
See my notes, highlights and commentary on Goodreads. Happy reading!