So I've decided this is really two books. The first half of the book is fast-paced, high-stakes, and action-driven. Couldn't put it down. The characters are well-rounded, the dialogue is fun, and the plotting is intense. Loved it! I had some questions as I read, but I was confident those would be answered as the book developed. Easily a 4.5-star book.
The second half of the book is slow -- almost no action. It's a simple description of "this happened, then this." We don't see much interiority into the main character, and while I think we're supposed to hone in on the fact that she's struggling emotionally, there's not a lot of *impact* of that struggle. She still just walks through doors that other people open for her. And the second half of the book also fails to answer a lot of the questions posed in the first half, so it felt like a bit of a let-down. Two stars. The writing is tight, but the plot/emotional arc/pacing all fall flat.
But my biggest complaint is that the MC does very little. She is passive. Everything happens TO her. Even in the moments with the highest tension, where she's ready to stand up and be brave, someone inevitably comes in and saves her ass before she has a chance to do anything herself.
Big battle with the two Lankies? She is ready to rush them with her pocketknife, but then Lopez comes in with guns blazing. Major battle with the Lankies after they've discovered the Vault? Right when everything is about to go to shit, the Earth folks appear and take them all out for them. (That timing...*eye roll*). And the only other moment of big action, when she is getting mugged at the end....she is about to be shot, and instead of getting out of the situation with her own wits, the police show up *just in the nick of time* (again). I was willing to roll with it in the first battle -- I thought maybe that lack of agency would become a plot point or a way to move the emotional arc forward -- but it didn't. By the end, it seemed like the author just kept getting the MC into crazy struggles but didn't know how to get her out again, so he had to go all duex ex machina. I'm sort of okay if that happens once. But every time? It felt (and I'm sorry to say this) like lazy plotting.
And I was disappointed that the questions posed in the first half of the book weren't answered in the second half. So we have these giant Lankies marching around, but they can be taken out by human guns...but the Lankies invaded the colonies. So they clearly have technology and spaceflight. Where is the evidence of their intelligence, organization, technology? I didn't buy that they were these big lumbering creatures that just swatted at humans and let themselves get targeted by clearly lethal gunnery.
And I wished the author had given us a glimpse of the initial invasion. Where were Alex's parents that Alex was able to get to the Vault but they weren't? And they figured out that radio transmissions trigger the Lankies, but what was the impact of that discovery originally? How did they come to that conclusion? That must have been a shitshow, and I wanted to see that. And they have a name for the aliens -- a name that the Earth soldiers use when they come to rescue them. So there must have been SOME communication with Earth that allows everyone to have some general common knowledge here. I had questions.
And given the wider battles they've had with the Lankies off of Scorpio, I needed more background info. I had hoped the Earth soldiers would reveal some information about a) the Lanky's motivation; b) how they started invading -- what is this tech they used? and c) why the Earth people are so set on colonization -- what's the purpose? I sense it's overcrowding on Earth, but it's never directly addressed.
The first half of the book was so good, I kept expecting a twist, a major reveal, a huge climatic battle. Then all of a sudden I realized I was at 84% of the book and it still hadn't happened. I felt let down. If I could wave a magic wand, I would have the author spend much longer on Scorpio, give us flashback to the original invasion, show us more of the Lankies and how they've developed their knowledge of the creatures. The major battle in the Vault would stretch longer and occur at about the 70% mark in the book. Alex would play a larger role in victory in these situations instead of everyone just constantly being rescued by someone else with a bigger gun. I would shorten and cut a lot of transportation after they've been evacuated, spend more time inside Alex's head dealing with her aimlessness, and let her search for Ash in the ship (AGENCY!). It's fine if Alex needs six months on Earth to realize she wants to join up, but let's speed this up a bit. And I'd also give us more insight into the wider political/military battle with the Lankies once she's back on Earth. Reward us with inside info about motivation/tech/plans.
I feel strongly about this book because the first half was SO good. I woke up the morning after finishing it, still stewing, because I felt like I'd been robbed. Can the author give us a do-over? There is so much potential here!