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Lethal King
Alek Kozlov was only looking for an heir to continue his empire in the mafia, that is the only thing that keeps him awake at night… when his attempts to find a suitable woman to bring his son into the world vanish like smoke in the sky, his last resort is a girl he bought at a auction in Moscow, the perfect virgin to plant his seed on.
Will Rose be able to become the mother of his heir? Will he be able to continue growing his empire ?
Or will the innocent girl achieve what no woman has achieved ever in the life of the Russian mobster? To make him fall in love with her.
Will Rose be able to become the mother of his heir? Will he be able to continue growing his empire ?
Or will the innocent girl achieve what no woman has achieved ever in the life of the Russian mobster? To make him fall in love with her.
432 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 14, 2023
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June 5, 2023
Plot Sounded Interesting- Bad Formatting
DNF on this book. I wanted to read it and would give zero stars if possible. The formatting is so badly done, why not use proper quotation marks and grammar?
The writing was like this:
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I walked into the room and the man holding me back growled
-show some respect - he seemed to be angry -or else-
—-
It’s incredibly confusing and makes the book illegible for me. If the formatting and grammar mistakes is ever fixed I’d be happy to revisit this book in the future.
DNF on this book. I wanted to read it and would give zero stars if possible. The formatting is so badly done, why not use proper quotation marks and grammar?
The writing was like this:
——
I walked into the room and the man holding me back growled
-show some respect - he seemed to be angry -or else-
—-
It’s incredibly confusing and makes the book illegible for me. If the formatting and grammar mistakes is ever fixed I’d be happy to revisit this book in the future.
September 19, 2023
grammatical errors up the wazoo
It looks like there was absolutely no editing done for this story. It would’ve been a decent story line if it wasn’t that bad. The errors of him/his/she/ her get go bad you can’t even follow the dialogue of knowing if it’s the FMC or MMC. You can’t even follow the dialogue that well because the author uses either (-) or a (“) you identify there’s a conversation happening. And it changes up so maybe times. I could only make it half way through cause it was getting very difficult to read.
It looks like there was absolutely no editing done for this story. It would’ve been a decent story line if it wasn’t that bad. The errors of him/his/she/ her get go bad you can’t even follow the dialogue of knowing if it’s the FMC or MMC. You can’t even follow the dialogue that well because the author uses either (-) or a (“) you identify there’s a conversation happening. And it changes up so maybe times. I could only make it half way through cause it was getting very difficult to read.
August 13, 2023
English not translated well
I don't know if English was not the authors 1st language or there was a translator without a grasp of English but it was the worst edited book I've ever tried to read. What a botched job on an ok story line.
I don't know if English was not the authors 1st language or there was a translator without a grasp of English but it was the worst edited book I've ever tried to read. What a botched job on an ok story line.
July 26, 2023
Lethal king
It could really do with a grammar check. The wrong use of pronouns in the entire story confused a lot.
It could really do with a grammar check. The wrong use of pronouns in the entire story confused a lot.
September 12, 2023
Unsatisfied
The story was to hard to follow. Whenever you wrote he you were actually talking about she instead. Bouncing between the wrong genders was confusing.
The story was to hard to follow. Whenever you wrote he you were actually talking about she instead. Bouncing between the wrong genders was confusing.
October 13, 2023
I liked the story but the writing is little to be desired. Almost like it was written in a different language then translated without being edited.
November 18, 2023
Appalling
For goodness sake if you are going to write in English then learn the language first! The phrasing and terminology are awful. It was impossible to read.
For goodness sake if you are going to write in English then learn the language first! The phrasing and terminology are awful. It was impossible to read.
April 3, 2025
Dnf à 23%, trop de fautes d’orthographe et de syntaxe et puis l’histoire n’en parlons pas ça vaut mieux…
May 5, 2026
It would have been a great read. The story was nice but the wrong use of words, quotes and punctuation threw me off. It needs to be proof-read again and re-published. It has great potential.
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