Mr Watson has another book of poems I much prefer. Some of the poems in here are a little too poetry-slammy for my taste, and I did hear him read some way back in the late 1980's, and he was great, but now just having this little chap to read the poems just don't jump off the page enough, or draw one deeper into the page.
Though there are exceptions, offering the more dense readerly experiences I look for:
in a bright lit room, a fly, strides torn time edges on the verge of avalanche twin temples beat, squeeze the violent bead a jazz parade of the underjoyed is dear enough
from Prologomania.
And in another, entitled Birth Daze, his dark vision jumps out and grabs the reader's eyes and drags them through the dark fecundity of his serpentine mind:
When I stabbed she came, she said She said let this be the last nail in a coffin Of time ending -- now -- that's what She said before the blade broke Against a petrified inside ...you See it was agony she remembered That what faith gave birth to was stone The island tangent to two continents A tied off knot in the digestive tract Of the metaphor She hoped would take her home It was the bulge of rat in snake belly And then it was her baby, yes It wrapped itself around her waist & squeezed It was the bead Sweat between two oceans An isthmus of sacrifice savages crossed A million irrational equations ago In migration from the soil her feet walked, Once.
Which would probably go over at a Slam, but which also offers twists of logic and imagery that can be savored (however disturbingly) reading after silent reading to oneself.