The book is sold from the get go as if Maeve is the main character, and my friends in book club and I all assumed we'd be following her POV through the story, but really, you end up following Vic about 80 percent of the time. Even so, the POV never really settles on either one, so the narration feels wishy-washy and unfocused.
We also had an idea that the author did superficial research on Wikipedia and maybe used AI to come up with the historical explanations that stick out throughout the story. We found these paragraphs to be very jarring and not neatly woven in at all, hence the idea about AI usage, though a couple days after that discussion, I figured that probably wasn't the case because of the errors we found throughout the book, particularly in the second half. The book would really benefit from much more editing, plus deeper research, as we found a handful of things in the story that contradict 1940s New York. I know historical fiction can be hard to do if you're not an expert, but . . . the research must be done.
The writing style is also rough. Almost all the characters come with head-to-toe descriptions in the form of paragraph chunks that once again, take away from the story, or the flow of it. Several of them also get back stories, even when unimportant to the plot. For example, and this isn't a spoiler because it doesn't add to the plot, Maeve receives a visit from a sister towards the end of the book. This sister was only mentioned very, very briefly in the first couple of chapters. She has a whole side-story that adds no value, says perhaps two lines of dialogue, and then disappears. Why have her appear at all?
We also get a lot of minute descriptions of characters' actions, which is odd when the settings don't get the same treatment of detail that the characters and their motions do. Most of the time, it felt like the white room effect, and then we have the characters taking new placements or poses as if it's stage directions. I'm not saying we don't need to know any of it, but it stuck out in weird ways at times.
So unfortunately, this was hard for my club and me to enjoy. Vic felt like a self-insert because of his ability to get out of any situation and how neatly everything works out for him. Maeve is a rather disappointing female character because she grumbles a lot but does very little to actually stand up for herself. The plot began to feel rushed the closer we got to the end, as if the author was running out of time somehow. And finally, the integral murder didn't feel as important to all the other things going on in this book, and its resolution and surrounding circumstances were kind of a let down. Altogether, it's a fast read though.