DNF at 45% I just couldn’t keep forcing myself to read this book. It wasn’t terrible, so it’s probably the cup of tea of someone else, but I just can’t get into books which a good portion of the whole plot surrounds one main event (usually a party). It takes a really good author to keep me intrigued. This wasn’t one.
So the book is about the relationship between Tyme (weird name) and Midnight (also weird name, why??). They had a thing very briefly, but he ended it cause he was in a bad place, and she went on to date his shitty brother by coincidence. The shitty brother cheats on her with his “cousin” (*family friend) and eventually marries her. On the wedding day, Tyme goes to fuck it up, understandably. She gets arrested, Midnight gets her out, they have a moment, blah blah blah.
Things I liked:
-the first 2/3 chapters, where they were acting like their normal bantering selves.
Things I disliked:
-their names (Tyme and Midnight, really??)
-the cheating ex
-the stupid sex party that took up most of the book, ALSO that readers were not warned about the length of cause Lord knows I wouldn’t have even bothered with this otherwise.
-their POVs really, especially Tyme’s. She’s quite immature, and their entire monologue was trying too hard to sound trendy by using popular slangs that just made it seem like it was written by an older person who thinks this is how all black, young, ‘hip’ people speak. I just couldn’t get into it.
-the fact that Midnight never apologized (at least not early enough for me to read anyway) to Tyme for the hurtful message he sent her calling her desperate and all. Maybe that’s just cause I personally wouldn’t be able to move past that if it were me, cause it was so unnecessary. Also, yes, I get you were going through some shit, but she didn’t cause it, neither was she aware of it.
-the weird tension. I sometimes didn’t feel like these two actually liked each other cause every interaction was so sexualized. That’s all that was emphasized, how they turned each other on with every action and word. It got boring real quick.
-couldn’t get into the pacing of the writing. It just felt like things were being dragged out, which they were, but the reader shouldn’t feel that way really.
-oh, did I mention the sex party? It was so cringe.
Anyway, I won’t bother finishing this. On to the next.