Thorns of Frost (Court of Winter Book 2): The Bachelor meets The Triwizard Tournament
Once again, we follow Illara as she navigates the worlds of the Solis court and her Situationship with Prince Norivun. Can she save her people from starvation? Will she admit her feelings for the Prince? Will she deck the resident Mean Girl? Will readers choke on tropes?
I’m starting to notice a few patterns here. First, Street tends to overthink her dialogue in the beginning of her books only to say “screw it” by the end. I’m rooting for her to trust herself more in the future because there’s only so much pseudo-flowery speech a girl can take.
Most of this book is a training montage for the female lead to hone her powers. Understandable, since she’s about 10 years behind everybody else. Street uses this time to really bring on the high school mean girl antics and I just cannot get behind that decision. If this were a YA or even set in a high school type setting, sure, why not? But all these characters are full-fledged adults vying to take the throne in some capacity. No way in any hell are adults resorting to schoolyard style antics to further their ambitions. Does the female lead need to have some opportunities for growth to develop self-confidence? Sure, but when you spend the entire first book detailing how she doesn’t fall prey to petty schemes and bullying, it negates any true growth to have her get riled up constantly.
Regarding character growth: Having an overpowered male lead does not mean that should be his only personality trait. Norivun shows no growth whatsoever—to the point where we seldom see his name, just his title. He seems to have three modes at all times: apathetic, angry, aroused (on second thought, maybe this is a high school romance). His screentime is barely a blip on the radar as far as the plot is concerned. I literally just finished the book, and I can’t remember anything he does beyond the bare minimum to support Illara. He’s hardly discernable from his guard, and they might as well just have numbers instead of names. I had to go back and remind myself who was who repeatedly. The bar could be considered a tripping hazard in hell and yet Norivun refuses to go over it.
The plot seemed to be all over the place. There’s a rushed timeline because of the impending starvation of the entire populace, but that can all be put on the backburner because of a tournament deciding who marries the prince? Every time we inch closer to the main plot we’re dragged back to the set of The Bachelor. Having stakes and an established clock is important—but mass casualties are a bit higher stakes and deserve more screentime than who gets the damned rose. There are serious reveals throughout the book that we just glide right over, never to be seen again, because “omigod, what if they don’t end up together?”
Thorns of Frost was very slow going for about 90% of the book. It felt like a lot of the scenes were repeated and shifted a little to the left each time to add some variety, but nevertheless it was much of the same structure. Maybe if a little more time was dedicated to the main storyline and not the pageantry the tournament would have had more weight. As it stands, it feels a little hollow because the main characters didn’t really abide by the terms of said tournament anyway. What was the purpose of it really? It gave a sense of conflated stakes that got in the way of the real problems.
I must give it a 2/5 because I finished it, but I’m getting concerned that the series is going to continue to chase trends and not trust the strength of its own story. Here’s to hoping book 3 will prove me wrong. I’m determined to see this series through in hopes it’ll turn itself around.