This book reminds me of the Paula Abdul song opposites attract, and not because we’re dealing with opposites that attract, although maybe a little bit after what we learn about Alara‘s affinity coming from the divine, or her being an angel or whatever, and his affinity being a dragon coming from the underworld but that’s not really a main theme throughout this book no what I mean when I say I’m reminded of that song is the lyric take two steps forward, and two steps back or something to that effect Because there were many things that were huge improvements in this third installment, Alara and Nora them and the guards working together, actually taking action to get back at that dragon guy king to get that diamond back and get that pendant that linked him to Alara I was honestly surprised that that got resolved in one book and I’m also honestly thinking there’s more that will happen there in the fourth and final book. It just seemed way too easy, our heroes were all working together to try and defeat the king, and prove that he was behind the dying fields and find this link to the warlock so I like that, even though it was really really not confusing, but they were just very muddied waters, and I know, without even having to go read the summaries of this authors, other series, that the firewall that shows up in this book is the main character in her other series and this is just some big crossover Which I mean I guess is OK but it just there’s a lot there’s just a lot OK you’ve got all of the different continents in this world as if that’s not enough we have to introduce this other universe earth it just seem like a lot and it had me rolling my eyes a little bit, so even though I did like the action And that they were actually doing things. It just felt a little short and I didn’t like that. The fire wolf is the one who wielded the ax to destroy that web that was killing the fields. I really feel like that should’ve been done by the heroes in this realm, I feel like that totally robbed them of that we couldn’t do it so we had to outsource it to someone else no but that just really kind of highlights how this author treats her characters and it’s not very nicely she doesn’t do them justice they’re really all kind of stupid and crass and infantile Saying things like fuck session and always laughing about how horny they are and all of that stuff it’s just so it’s very cheap. It’s just very very cheap now I am wondering because I haven’t really read much about Faye is that just a trait of the Faye do they all just talk about sex like that very openly I have to imagine not because Alara is very shy about it. She gets very embarrassed about it so I have to imagine that’s not like a universal treat But I honestly don’t know but it just takes me out of the story immediately and are you telling me that these characters don’t have enough control I mean it’s like every other sentence like oh I really admire her. I know I want to bend her over and fuck her right now like Just enough I guess that works for some people but not me like if I just wanted to read, pure, smart, like that I would just go read pier smart I would like some story please and these are really not super bright. They’re not at all they can’t figure out a way to link the king to the warlock and that’s also still their big idea like when the prince finally finds Alara and his big solution is oh I’m just gonna hide you in my chambers like what kind of idiotic idea is that, they are just not very bright and they’re not really big they’re still so focused on we’ve got a save the crops and we have to do all these things. They’re still just focusing on like playing the kings game instead of revolutionizing everything and I think now at the end of book 3 they’re finally finally finally getting to that point, but I just kept thinking while I was reading it like these motherfuckers are so stupid, and that’s not their fault. Obviously these are fictional characters. That is the authors fault. What is the point of these characters having all of these great powers if they’re also idiots and why has no one wondered if the same spell that was used on the field, and Alara is the same one used on the princes Mother why has no one made that connection. Everyone keeps talking about how powerful she would be if that spell wasn’t walking down her powers, seriously none of them have wondered if it’s the same thing I know her powers have to be become unleashed in the last book. I bet you anything it’s gonna be the queen who kills them if she’s even still alive and they don’t have any definitive proof to tie the king to the warlock but they think what they got on the looking glass is going to just have to be enough. I just I don’t see that I don’t see that happening at all, so I don’t know maybe the overall story is kind of weak. I’ve had that thought too cause I still don’t quite get like oh I’m gonna starve my people because I want to invade these other lands and I want to grow my territory so I’m gonna starve my people I’m gonna make my basically board of directors wanna invade And I’m gonna resist and resist until everyone’s so desperate and then give in and that’s gonna make everyone think I’m a hero I don’t know that I really buy that I mean I guess isn’t that also kind of what Hitler did but I don’t know it just seems the overall story seems a little a little far-fetched And we haven’t I don’t know that we’ve seen enough of the king to really buy into that and we have no proof that he’s behind the missing fee. We just have peoples assumptions oh, because that’s his character but we have an actually seen very much of it I mean yeah, we know he beats the queen so anyway, I do like that we continue to see more of Alara‘s affinity and her powers I was really hoping that she was gonna have more affinity than anyone, but I don’t know maybe there’s still more that we’re gonna learn about her and her angel background or whatever I’m gonna of course read the next book. I have to know how it all plays out but yeah, this installment is still very much like cool it with the modern day and acronyms and terminology. Cool it with all the sex talk and make the characters just a little bit smarter please just a little bit that’s all I’m asking.
This series probably could’ve been condensed into three books or maybe each installment could’ve been a little bit longer or maybe some of them could’ve been combined I think overall, the story would’ve been much stronger if instead of actually having the queens trials, the queens, there was the build up to the trials, but then they never actually happened because then Alara and the prince and the guards all go off together. I just think that would’ve made for a much stronger story like what was the point and her going to those islands? Well, the point of her going to the islands was to get her magic back, but what was the point of her losing the magic which sent her to the islands like what was the point of all of that because really the two were not separated very long at all I think it was like a day and a half or something, so it was just like sending them on these exercises unnecessarily. Hopefully the last book will tie it all together and make it make sense.