My initial review was going to be a 3.5 but after thinking about it longer, I'm gonna bump it to a 4.
I really enjoyed reading this and it's going to be on my mind for a long while, that much im certain about. It dragged me in and made me locked in all the way to the end.
The story has a lot going for it, but I'm going to try and break it into two parts
Likes;
- Exasix Unit 118 (?) Fantastic character, well crafted android personality. Honestly, the manner in which you wrote this android might be the highlight of the series for me. I loved reading his dialogues, the interlude, everything.
- The dynamic between Mara and the unit (I'll refer to him as Noah moving forward) is also well done, though a little clunky at the beginning.
- The whole family unit in that building, ergo, Evie, Mara, Claribel, and Kobe. I enjoyed their interactions together, and it gave a certain sense of warmth to the whole setting, especially when Noah gets added to the mix.
- Once the story has its hooks in you, I admit it becomes very hard to put down. And I don't know if it's how you wrote it but I quite literally binged it to the end.
Questionables;
- While things happen relatively fast, it took about three chapters before the story got its hook into me. Until then, it felt a little like a slog.
- Mara has a character on her own leaves a lot to be desired for me. She bounces well with others but I find her to be drab by herself. And thats not to say I love the rest immensely, but at least there's an interesting angle with them.
- Certain story decisions didn't land too well, I think. It served the overall purpose but I do believe they could have been explored a little more.
All in all, it's been a lovely time. And can't wait to see more from you.