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A Wound Deeper Than Pride
Elizabeth’s rejection of him had been excruciating, but that pain was nothing to the horrible realisation that she might be taken from him before his very eyes. In that terrible heartbeat, he had known what it was to truly lose her.
Still reeling from Mr Darcy’s unexpected proposal in Kent, Elizabeth Bennet dearly wishes that she could start their acquaintance anew. Returning to London, she is desperate for a distraction, and turns her attention to her poor, lovelorn sister. An impulsive decision leads to disaster and Elizabeth finds herself unexpectedly under Mr Darcy’s care. Can their time together be enough for her to learn the true depth of his character?
Fitzwilliam Darcy wholeheartedly regrets asking for Elizabeth Bennet’s hand in marriage. Unable to forget her, he withdraws from the world around him, certain that he will never see the lovely Miss Bennet again. In a twist of fate, they meet once more, but this time she is need of his assistance. Being around her at such close quarters is exquisite torment, but can he do enough to atone for his past rudeness?
A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a second chance romance variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
Still reeling from Mr Darcy’s unexpected proposal in Kent, Elizabeth Bennet dearly wishes that she could start their acquaintance anew. Returning to London, she is desperate for a distraction, and turns her attention to her poor, lovelorn sister. An impulsive decision leads to disaster and Elizabeth finds herself unexpectedly under Mr Darcy’s care. Can their time together be enough for her to learn the true depth of his character?
Fitzwilliam Darcy wholeheartedly regrets asking for Elizabeth Bennet’s hand in marriage. Unable to forget her, he withdraws from the world around him, certain that he will never see the lovely Miss Bennet again. In a twist of fate, they meet once more, but this time she is need of his assistance. Being around her at such close quarters is exquisite torment, but can he do enough to atone for his past rudeness?
A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a second chance romance variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
248 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 6, 2023
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October 9, 2023
Elizabeth's desperation brings her face to face with Darcy - again.
Elizabeth, out of an act of desperation to help Jane, causes a situation that puts herself and a young friend in danger. Luckily, Darcy is there to be a hero. Or not so luckily?
Wonderful dynamics of an almost ensemble cast, rather than ODC and supporting characters. What I loved most about this story was, I couldn't guess where the author was going to take it. Between the presences of Mrs. Annesley, Maria and Col. Fitzwilliam to shift attention and cause trouble, it was nice not to 'know' how it would play out.
The epilogue was perfection! Short sweet and just enough information.
My only caveat is - personally I am tired of the old canon Wickham/Lydia thread.
A great sophomore release from this author. Yet so different from her very first book. I enjoy her writing style and look forward to her future publications!
Elizabeth, out of an act of desperation to help Jane, causes a situation that puts herself and a young friend in danger. Luckily, Darcy is there to be a hero. Or not so luckily?
Wonderful dynamics of an almost ensemble cast, rather than ODC and supporting characters. What I loved most about this story was, I couldn't guess where the author was going to take it. Between the presences of Mrs. Annesley, Maria and Col. Fitzwilliam to shift attention and cause trouble, it was nice not to 'know' how it would play out.
The epilogue was perfection! Short sweet and just enough information.
My only caveat is - personally I am tired of the old canon Wickham/Lydia thread.
A great sophomore release from this author. Yet so different from her very first book. I enjoy her writing style and look forward to her future publications!
October 10, 2023
Rescued by Mr. Darcy
While in London after her visit to Hunsford, Elizabeth, accompanied by Maria Lucas, embarks on a scheme to cross paths with Mr. Bingley in Mayfair and somehow inform him of Jane's presence at the Gardiners’. Instead of finding Mr. Bingley, she encounters Mr. Darcy outside his residence. In her distraction, she and Maria are injured by a fast-moving carriage, and Mr. Darcy comes to their rescue. Under his care, as they recover from their physical injuries, the emotional wounds between Elizabeth and Darcy begin to mend as well.
I loved this author’s debut, A Man of Good Fortune, and this novella is her second offering. The beginning provides both Darcy and Elizabeth’s experience of the accident from both their points of view and is very gripping as the event plays out. I was on the edge of my seat, especially while reading Darcy’s perspective.
There is a good cast of characters, with a rare and refreshing supporting role for Maria Lucas who is somewhat intimidated by Darcy’s presence, especially after learning he had carried her while she was unconscious. That was rather amusing. Mrs. Annesley’s positive presence helps move things along, and there is great banter between Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I found this Elizabeth a little on the timid side, preferring it when her ‘courage rises with every attempt to intimidate her’. Also, I didn’t quite see the necessity of adding Lydia and Wickham at the end when they otherwise had no part in the plot.
Still, all in all, this is a very enjoyable read I am happy to recommend. I look forward to more from this talented author.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily providing a review.
While in London after her visit to Hunsford, Elizabeth, accompanied by Maria Lucas, embarks on a scheme to cross paths with Mr. Bingley in Mayfair and somehow inform him of Jane's presence at the Gardiners’. Instead of finding Mr. Bingley, she encounters Mr. Darcy outside his residence. In her distraction, she and Maria are injured by a fast-moving carriage, and Mr. Darcy comes to their rescue. Under his care, as they recover from their physical injuries, the emotional wounds between Elizabeth and Darcy begin to mend as well.
I loved this author’s debut, A Man of Good Fortune, and this novella is her second offering. The beginning provides both Darcy and Elizabeth’s experience of the accident from both their points of view and is very gripping as the event plays out. I was on the edge of my seat, especially while reading Darcy’s perspective.
There is a good cast of characters, with a rare and refreshing supporting role for Maria Lucas who is somewhat intimidated by Darcy’s presence, especially after learning he had carried her while she was unconscious. That was rather amusing. Mrs. Annesley’s positive presence helps move things along, and there is great banter between Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I found this Elizabeth a little on the timid side, preferring it when her ‘courage rises with every attempt to intimidate her’. Also, I didn’t quite see the necessity of adding Lydia and Wickham at the end when they otherwise had no part in the plot.
Still, all in all, this is a very enjoyable read I am happy to recommend. I look forward to more from this talented author.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily providing a review.
October 9, 2023
A nice short variation. After Hunsford, Maria Lucas gets injured in front of Darcy's London house, and Elizabeth is invited to stay and tend to her friend. This gives Darcy another chance to show his civility to her and her family, and seeing him in his own environment gives her second thoughts. I enjoyed this story. The romantic climax felt a little rushed.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 13, 2023
This Pride and Prejudice variation provides a LOT of pages with Darcy and Elizabeth together, which is always popular. Most of the story occurs in London. It begins as Maria Lucas and Elizabeth are leaving Hunsford and traveling to the Gardiner residence. All prior events have occurred in accordance with canon, including Mr. Darcy's marriage proposal to Elizabeth, her angry refusal, and his letter of explanation.
In London, Elizabeth becomes alarmed at Jane's obviously deep depression. In only a few days, the Bennet sisters and Maria are to return to Hertfordshire, and Elizabeth is determined to seek out Mr. Bingley and reunite him with her sister before they leave town. She concocts a desperate plan to get to Grosvenor Street, where his townhouse is located. Unfortunately, her plan backfires when she finds herself face to face with Mr. Darcy rather than her quarry. Mortified, she panics. This has life-threatening consequences, landing her and Maria at Darcy House for an extended stay.
The beginning and end of the book move at a good pace. The middle is slower. Elizabeth feels tremendous guilt for creating the awkward situation. She and Darcy continue to misunderstand each other - she is sure he can't forgive her for misjudging him; he knows he's the last man in the world she would ever marry.
It's a solid original premise, and the quality of the writing and editing is fine. Chapters are presented from either Elizabeth's or Mr. Darcy's point of view. Colonel Fitzwilliam, Georgiana, Lydia, Wickham, the Gardiners, Jane, and Mr. Bingley all have relevant roles.
It falls a bit short of a five-star book. Darcy and Elizabeth have ample opportunities they DON'T use to clear the air between them. I kept wanting to bash their heads together; it's such a simple misunderstanding and both insist on interpreting the other's words and actions in the worst possible ways. There's repetitive introspection about how hard they find it to be around each other. And though I often berate authors for dragging the HEA out too long, when things finally all come together here, there may not be enough of it for some readers.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
In London, Elizabeth becomes alarmed at Jane's obviously deep depression. In only a few days, the Bennet sisters and Maria are to return to Hertfordshire, and Elizabeth is determined to seek out Mr. Bingley and reunite him with her sister before they leave town. She concocts a desperate plan to get to Grosvenor Street, where his townhouse is located. Unfortunately, her plan backfires when she finds herself face to face with Mr. Darcy rather than her quarry. Mortified, she panics. This has life-threatening consequences, landing her and Maria at Darcy House for an extended stay.
The beginning and end of the book move at a good pace. The middle is slower. Elizabeth feels tremendous guilt for creating the awkward situation. She and Darcy continue to misunderstand each other - she is sure he can't forgive her for misjudging him; he knows he's the last man in the world she would ever marry.
It's a solid original premise, and the quality of the writing and editing is fine. Chapters are presented from either Elizabeth's or Mr. Darcy's point of view. Colonel Fitzwilliam, Georgiana, Lydia, Wickham, the Gardiners, Jane, and Mr. Bingley all have relevant roles.
It falls a bit short of a five-star book. Darcy and Elizabeth have ample opportunities they DON'T use to clear the air between them. I kept wanting to bash their heads together; it's such a simple misunderstanding and both insist on interpreting the other's words and actions in the worst possible ways. There's repetitive introspection about how hard they find it to be around each other. And though I often berate authors for dragging the HEA out too long, when things finally all come together here, there may not be enough of it for some readers.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
December 28, 2023
What If Elizabeth Attempted to ‘Accidentally’ Encounter Mr. Bingley?
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: A determined Lizzy contrives to visit Mayfair with Maria Lucas in order to encounter Mr. Bingley and let him know of her sister’s presence in London. But a major mishap ensues and Elizabeth and Maria end up being cared for by none other than Mr. Darcy…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Intense and Dramatic: The Prologue opens with such a scene and such a description! And then it jumps back one day to tell the events leading up to the Prologue scene. I was immediately engaged and anxious to witness more scenes after the Prologue. Elizabeth schemes land her (and Maria) in a very disastrous predicament. I appreciated this creative and plausible premise – I like how it was introduced, and how well it was executed.
- Mr. Darcy: Heroic, honorable, brave – Mr. Darcy is quite the swoony hero in this tale. He has no implacable resentment or improper pride – he immediately heeds Elizabeth’s reproofs and makes every effort to show his depth of compassion and civility for her and everyone in her world. I loved seeing Mr. Darcy make the most of each opportunity to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him. And I loved how Ali Scott illustrated his remorse for all his mistakes and the tender moments where his feelings for Elizabeth are most ardent and difficult to conceal.
- Improving Upon Acquaintance: Darcy and Elizabeth in close quarters – my favorite! I love seeing how this forced and unexpected closeness pushes Darcy and Elizabeth to have more interaction and for their relationship to evolve and develop in new ways. I loved witnessing how Elizabeth reacted to Mr. Darcy’s solicitous behavior, how she felt seeing his kindness towards her relations, and how she rose to his defense during Colonel Fitzwilliam’s provoking taunts. This is just the type of journey I love witnessing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship take.
- The Whole House Knows: Mrs. Annesley, Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam – many people of Darcy House seem to correctly guess Darcy’s feelings, and do their best to encourage Elizabeth’s feelings for Mr. Darcy. It was endearing and entertaining, and kind of gave me Beauty and the Beast vibes! I loved how all were in support of Elizabeth being Mr. Darcy’s choice and how they sing his praises to her.
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER:
- Lydia/Wickham: My only cause to repine is that the Lydia/Wickham storyline interrupted and took focus away from Darcy and Elizabeth. (I know that is the whole point of it…) I wish we saw less Lydia/Wickham and more Elizabeth/Darcy, and also Georgiana and Jane.
FINAL THOUGHTS:
🎩 Mr. Darcy coming to the rescue, being the object of his solicitous care – swoon!
💗 I love stories where readers can witness the gradual evolution of Elizabeth’s feelings and see her introspective reflections about Mr. Darcy.
❤️🩹 A sensitive and expressive tale of healing, heart, and hope.
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Publisher
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation Novella
THE PREMISE: A determined Lizzy contrives to visit Mayfair with Maria Lucas in order to encounter Mr. Bingley and let him know of her sister’s presence in London. But a major mishap ensues and Elizabeth and Maria end up being cared for by none other than Mr. Darcy…
WHAT I LOVED:
- Intense and Dramatic: The Prologue opens with such a scene and such a description! And then it jumps back one day to tell the events leading up to the Prologue scene. I was immediately engaged and anxious to witness more scenes after the Prologue. Elizabeth schemes land her (and Maria) in a very disastrous predicament. I appreciated this creative and plausible premise – I like how it was introduced, and how well it was executed.
- Mr. Darcy: Heroic, honorable, brave – Mr. Darcy is quite the swoony hero in this tale. He has no implacable resentment or improper pride – he immediately heeds Elizabeth’s reproofs and makes every effort to show his depth of compassion and civility for her and everyone in her world. I loved seeing Mr. Darcy make the most of each opportunity to improve Elizabeth’s opinion of him. And I loved how Ali Scott illustrated his remorse for all his mistakes and the tender moments where his feelings for Elizabeth are most ardent and difficult to conceal.
- Improving Upon Acquaintance: Darcy and Elizabeth in close quarters – my favorite! I love seeing how this forced and unexpected closeness pushes Darcy and Elizabeth to have more interaction and for their relationship to evolve and develop in new ways. I loved witnessing how Elizabeth reacted to Mr. Darcy’s solicitous behavior, how she felt seeing his kindness towards her relations, and how she rose to his defense during Colonel Fitzwilliam’s provoking taunts. This is just the type of journey I love witnessing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship take.
- The Whole House Knows: Mrs. Annesley, Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam – many people of Darcy House seem to correctly guess Darcy’s feelings, and do their best to encourage Elizabeth’s feelings for Mr. Darcy. It was endearing and entertaining, and kind of gave me Beauty and the Beast vibes! I loved how all were in support of Elizabeth being Mr. Darcy’s choice and how they sing his praises to her.
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER:
- Lydia/Wickham: My only cause to repine is that the Lydia/Wickham storyline interrupted and took focus away from Darcy and Elizabeth. (I know that is the whole point of it…) I wish we saw less Lydia/Wickham and more Elizabeth/Darcy, and also Georgiana and Jane.
FINAL THOUGHTS:
🎩 Mr. Darcy coming to the rescue, being the object of his solicitous care – swoon!
💗 I love stories where readers can witness the gradual evolution of Elizabeth’s feelings and see her introspective reflections about Mr. Darcy.
❤️🩹 A sensitive and expressive tale of healing, heart, and hope.
Austenesque Reviews
October 22, 2023
“Come what may, he would never stop loving her.” (quote from the book)
What an opening prologue! It grabbed me by the throat and then had me flying through the pages to find out what had happened…Elizabeth in pain? Once I reached the scene my heart almost seized up…blood! Thank goodness I have a strong heart at my age!
“As his eyes met hers, she felt her heart sing an unknown melody – a bittersweet, fascinating one – the kind that enters the mind and will not leave it.” (quote from the book)
Fear not, dear Reader, this isn’t about death and destruction, but the coming together of two souls who bitterly regret their words in Kent. Where each must set aside their pride, prejudice and assumptions that the other wants nothing to do with them. What a poignant journey it was. However, with the help of the Colonel, Mrs. Annesley, Georgiana, and Elizabeth’s own impertinence, there is humour, laughter and sweetness.
“A man’s strength lies in the manner in which he overcomes his weaknesses.” (quote from the book)
Mr. Darcy slowly drops his mask and allows Elizabeth to truly see the man behind it. There are some emotional scenes, especially when Elizabeth overhears a conversation between Sir William Lucas and Darcy. It not only brought Elizabeth to tears but myself included.
All in all, this was a fast-paced novella that captured my heart and wouldn’t let go. I just didn’t want it to end.
I highly recommend this second offering from the talented Ms. Scott. I look forward with great anticipation to her next one!
I was fortunate to receive a copy of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving my review.
March 31, 2025
I HAD BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS BUT WAS ULTIMATELY DISAPPOINTED
👎 The characters strayed too far from the originals.
👎 In the end, I was just bored. Not a lot actually happened.
👎 The characters strayed too far from the originals.
👎 In the end, I was just bored. Not a lot actually happened.
November 26, 2023
A second chance at romance arises out of a near tragedy and both are determined to show they’ve learned from the mistakes of the past.
Ali Scott is a relatively new to me author. I enjoyed a previous release for the way she developed her characters and their romance and engaged my emotions. A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a quick-read novella, but it was much the same with the strong development of those elements that attracted me before.
A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a variation on Austen’s Pride & Prejudice that interrupts the original storyline after Mr. Darcy makes his disastrous proposal to Miss Elizabeth in Hunsford. Those who are familiar with the story will know what led up to the proposal. However, readers new to the P&P story won’t struggle to grasp the variation storyline of a man who took a verbal lashing for presuming a lot of things when he proposed marriage to a woman who was definitely operating under quite a few wrong notions about said gentleman.
A letter from Darcy clears up much of what she got wrong about him, but, she wasn’t entirely wrong, either, so a carriage accident right outside Mr. Darcy’s home and Miss Elizabeth and her friend needing prompt medical care as a result is the catalyst for the pair getting a chance to begin afresh.
The angst is low and tone is tender and hesitant particularly with the awkwardness of forced proximity right after their last stormy encounter. It all happens quickly, but not unbelievably as Darcy processes Elizabeth’s charges against him, smarting under her opinion of his character, and then deciding when he sees her almost get killed, realize that he still loves her and wants another chance. Elizabeth, too, does a quick reversal of feelings after now, in his home among his servants and family, she sees the real Darcy and how much she misunderstood about his character.
It takes the surrounding cast who add more depth from Mrs. Ainsley's motherly advice to the Colonel's humorous help and another incident to get them to the point.
So, this was a quickly read sweet and satisfying second chance at romance set well in the Regency era backdrop that I can recommend to those who enjoy stories in Austen’s world or sweet historical romance, in general.
I rec'd a finished copy from Quills & Quartos to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at That's What I'm Talking About January 8th.
Ali Scott is a relatively new to me author. I enjoyed a previous release for the way she developed her characters and their romance and engaged my emotions. A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a quick-read novella, but it was much the same with the strong development of those elements that attracted me before.
A Wound Deeper Than Pride is a variation on Austen’s Pride & Prejudice that interrupts the original storyline after Mr. Darcy makes his disastrous proposal to Miss Elizabeth in Hunsford. Those who are familiar with the story will know what led up to the proposal. However, readers new to the P&P story won’t struggle to grasp the variation storyline of a man who took a verbal lashing for presuming a lot of things when he proposed marriage to a woman who was definitely operating under quite a few wrong notions about said gentleman.
A letter from Darcy clears up much of what she got wrong about him, but, she wasn’t entirely wrong, either, so a carriage accident right outside Mr. Darcy’s home and Miss Elizabeth and her friend needing prompt medical care as a result is the catalyst for the pair getting a chance to begin afresh.
The angst is low and tone is tender and hesitant particularly with the awkwardness of forced proximity right after their last stormy encounter. It all happens quickly, but not unbelievably as Darcy processes Elizabeth’s charges against him, smarting under her opinion of his character, and then deciding when he sees her almost get killed, realize that he still loves her and wants another chance. Elizabeth, too, does a quick reversal of feelings after now, in his home among his servants and family, she sees the real Darcy and how much she misunderstood about his character.
It takes the surrounding cast who add more depth from Mrs. Ainsley's motherly advice to the Colonel's humorous help and another incident to get them to the point.
So, this was a quickly read sweet and satisfying second chance at romance set well in the Regency era backdrop that I can recommend to those who enjoy stories in Austen’s world or sweet historical romance, in general.
I rec'd a finished copy from Quills & Quartos to read in exchange for an honest review.
My full review will post at That's What I'm Talking About January 8th.
November 10, 2023
Although Darcy and Elizabeth spend a lot of time together, in this same house (his), there are not a lot of action scenes. There are many conversations during which ODC begin to understand each other better. And as each observes the other in their daily life, misunderstandings are erased. (Elizabeth has had that letter from Darcy after his failed proposal.)
Elizabeth and Maria Lucas return from Kent to the Gardiners' house in London, post that awful proposal. Elizabeth finds a depressed Jane and decides to try to change that. She and Maria travel to Grosvenor Street where Elizabeth is hopeful of "accidently" meeting Bingley and then informing him of Jane's presence in London. As they walk Darcy exits his house and both ladies take a step back...into the path of a speeding carriage. Darcy rushes to the rescue. Maria has been knocked unconscious and taken into Darcy House where the attending physician declares that she must not be moved. It is arranged that Elizabeth will stay with her as, obviously, Maria knows no one in that household and her family is not in town.
So most of the story involves the interactions of Darcy and Elizabeth during Maria's healing process. We do have the Colonel there much of the time. He has decided he must "help" his cousin, Darcy, woo the lady it is obvious to the Colonel that he loves. Georgiana also becomes good friends with Elizabeth.
Sir Lucas does come to town to visit his daughter and we have a sweet scene there. Yes, Bingley does reunite with Jane as dinners are planned at Darcy House and relations and/or friends invited to join them.
I did read and enjoy this author's first story and can now also recommend this sweet tale in addition.
Elizabeth and Maria Lucas return from Kent to the Gardiners' house in London, post that awful proposal. Elizabeth finds a depressed Jane and decides to try to change that. She and Maria travel to Grosvenor Street where Elizabeth is hopeful of "accidently" meeting Bingley and then informing him of Jane's presence in London. As they walk Darcy exits his house and both ladies take a step back...into the path of a speeding carriage. Darcy rushes to the rescue. Maria has been knocked unconscious and taken into Darcy House where the attending physician declares that she must not be moved. It is arranged that Elizabeth will stay with her as, obviously, Maria knows no one in that household and her family is not in town.
So most of the story involves the interactions of Darcy and Elizabeth during Maria's healing process. We do have the Colonel there much of the time. He has decided he must "help" his cousin, Darcy, woo the lady it is obvious to the Colonel that he loves. Georgiana also becomes good friends with Elizabeth.
Sir Lucas does come to town to visit his daughter and we have a sweet scene there. Yes, Bingley does reunite with Jane as dinners are planned at Darcy House and relations and/or friends invited to join them.
I did read and enjoy this author's first story and can now also recommend this sweet tale in addition.
December 29, 2023
Review also posted on my blog
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet are both still reeling from the shock of Darcy’s proposal at Hunsford. Following, probably the worst proposal in literature, Darcy is wounded by rejection and berating himself for being an idiot. Elizabeth is mortified at her reaction, especially when she realises that she thoroughly misunderstood Darcy.
They both wish for another chance.
In London, Elizabeth decides to finagle a trip to Mayfair, so that she can tell Mr Bingley how much Jane Bennet misses him.
Elizabeth and Maria Lucas wander around Mayfair, but before she finds Bingley’s house, their plans are turned upside down.
Maria spots Darcy, on the steps of a handsome townhouse. The following minutes bring Elizabeth, Darcy and Maria into close quarters with a moving coach and the cobbled street.
Darcy insists on Maria and Elizabeth recovering from their injuries at his house, chaperoned by Mrs Annesley.
Thus, our dear couple are afforded a second chance to know each other and perhaps find love?
Really enjoyed this. Much more limited cast of characters, with the most annoying ones, happily absent!
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet are both still reeling from the shock of Darcy’s proposal at Hunsford. Following, probably the worst proposal in literature, Darcy is wounded by rejection and berating himself for being an idiot. Elizabeth is mortified at her reaction, especially when she realises that she thoroughly misunderstood Darcy.
They both wish for another chance.
In London, Elizabeth decides to finagle a trip to Mayfair, so that she can tell Mr Bingley how much Jane Bennet misses him.
Elizabeth and Maria Lucas wander around Mayfair, but before she finds Bingley’s house, their plans are turned upside down.
Maria spots Darcy, on the steps of a handsome townhouse. The following minutes bring Elizabeth, Darcy and Maria into close quarters with a moving coach and the cobbled street.
Darcy insists on Maria and Elizabeth recovering from their injuries at his house, chaperoned by Mrs Annesley.
Thus, our dear couple are afforded a second chance to know each other and perhaps find love?
Really enjoyed this. Much more limited cast of characters, with the most annoying ones, happily absent!
October 15, 2023
RATING: 4.5 (Rounding up to 5)
As an avid fan of Austenesque novels, I am always excited when I get introduced to a new author who brings their own unique creativity to the beloved stories that Jane Austen left us. Therefore, I was very excited to receive an ARC of Ali Scott's latest story, A Wound Deeper Than Pride.
In Scott's novel, readers get an opportunity to see what might have happened if Darcy and Elizabeth's second chance at romance and understanding of one another had happened somewhere other than the halls of Pemberley. During a fateful visit to London, Elizabeth finds herself thrown, literally and figuratively, into the path of Darcy. When disaster nearly strikes, Darcy jumps in to save the life of Elizabeth and her friend Miss Mariah Lucas.
This twist in her path, brings Elizabeth under the care of the one man she had thought to forget. However, as Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to spend time in such close proximity, they come to slowly chip away at the misunderstandings that had gotten in their way before. Elizabeth comes to value the man that Darcy is and Darcy finds that he is in even greater danger of losing his heart irrevocably to the one woman he knows will claim it always.
Just as our favorite couple is beginning to believe that perhaps they can find a path to true happiness and respect with each other, Lydia's elopement to Wickham threatens to topple all they've built during their time together. Forced to separate and with so much left unsaid, Darcy and Elizabeth each struggles with the regret and loss of the other. Lucky for us, one thing about Scott's Darcy that is very much faithful to Austen's original hero, is his unwavering devotion to Elizabeth and it was a pleasure to see how these two fought for one another in the end.
I really enjoyed how even in a relatively short novel, Scott is able to bring richness and emotion to this very unique time that Darcy and Elizabeth have with one another. It provided an insight that I think all readers would have loved to see in the original Pride and Prejudice if Darcy and Elizabeth had more of an opportunity to really get to know one another and sort through the pain and passion that lay in their hearts before Lydia's behavior nearly led to disaster. This is my first time reading one of Scott's books but it definitely won't be the last! If you love Pride and Prejudice variations that are distinct and make you fall in love all over again with Darcy and Elizabeth then definitely give this one a read!
As an avid fan of Austenesque novels, I am always excited when I get introduced to a new author who brings their own unique creativity to the beloved stories that Jane Austen left us. Therefore, I was very excited to receive an ARC of Ali Scott's latest story, A Wound Deeper Than Pride.
In Scott's novel, readers get an opportunity to see what might have happened if Darcy and Elizabeth's second chance at romance and understanding of one another had happened somewhere other than the halls of Pemberley. During a fateful visit to London, Elizabeth finds herself thrown, literally and figuratively, into the path of Darcy. When disaster nearly strikes, Darcy jumps in to save the life of Elizabeth and her friend Miss Mariah Lucas.
This twist in her path, brings Elizabeth under the care of the one man she had thought to forget. However, as Darcy and Elizabeth are forced to spend time in such close proximity, they come to slowly chip away at the misunderstandings that had gotten in their way before. Elizabeth comes to value the man that Darcy is and Darcy finds that he is in even greater danger of losing his heart irrevocably to the one woman he knows will claim it always.
Just as our favorite couple is beginning to believe that perhaps they can find a path to true happiness and respect with each other, Lydia's elopement to Wickham threatens to topple all they've built during their time together. Forced to separate and with so much left unsaid, Darcy and Elizabeth each struggles with the regret and loss of the other. Lucky for us, one thing about Scott's Darcy that is very much faithful to Austen's original hero, is his unwavering devotion to Elizabeth and it was a pleasure to see how these two fought for one another in the end.
I really enjoyed how even in a relatively short novel, Scott is able to bring richness and emotion to this very unique time that Darcy and Elizabeth have with one another. It provided an insight that I think all readers would have loved to see in the original Pride and Prejudice if Darcy and Elizabeth had more of an opportunity to really get to know one another and sort through the pain and passion that lay in their hearts before Lydia's behavior nearly led to disaster. This is my first time reading one of Scott's books but it definitely won't be the last! If you love Pride and Prejudice variations that are distinct and make you fall in love all over again with Darcy and Elizabeth then definitely give this one a read!
November 27, 2023
Very enjoyable
This was a very enjoyable read. Right from the first page, the descriptive language stands out. This is clearly an author who can paint a picture with words. The book takes place in post Hunsford and all in London.
An accident occurs just inside Darcy‘s home and Maria and Elizabeth are rescued by him. The rest of the story is a story of Darcy behaving better and Lizzie coming to recognize his better qualities. It’s a nice slow improvement in their relationship and when you reach the HEA you’re sure that they have both gone through all the necessary steps to get there.
This was a very enjoyable read. Right from the first page, the descriptive language stands out. This is clearly an author who can paint a picture with words. The book takes place in post Hunsford and all in London.
An accident occurs just inside Darcy‘s home and Maria and Elizabeth are rescued by him. The rest of the story is a story of Darcy behaving better and Lizzie coming to recognize his better qualities. It’s a nice slow improvement in their relationship and when you reach the HEA you’re sure that they have both gone through all the necessary steps to get there.
December 19, 2023
I surprisingly enjoyed this a lot. I am a Pride and Prejudice freak, though, so take that as you will.
November 7, 2023
Entertaining, but bland
After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, and after Darcy delivers his letter of explanation to Elizabeth, Elizabeth and Maria Lucas return to London and the Gardiners home. Elizabeth and Maria are walking in Mayfair when both are injured by a carriage, right in front of Darcy's home. They spend some time there recuperating, and Elizabeth learns what she lost by refusing Darcy's marriage proposal.
This is a fairly predictable tale. The only villain who arises is Wickham when he runs off with Lydia. The romance is lovely. There's some extremely annoying behavior from our beloved Colonel Fitzwilliam, but other than that all goes as usual, and things are sewn up pretty quickly. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for a pleasant but kind of blah way to pass some time.
After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, and after Darcy delivers his letter of explanation to Elizabeth, Elizabeth and Maria Lucas return to London and the Gardiners home. Elizabeth and Maria are walking in Mayfair when both are injured by a carriage, right in front of Darcy's home. They spend some time there recuperating, and Elizabeth learns what she lost by refusing Darcy's marriage proposal.
This is a fairly predictable tale. The only villain who arises is Wickham when he runs off with Lydia. The romance is lovely. There's some extremely annoying behavior from our beloved Colonel Fitzwilliam, but other than that all goes as usual, and things are sewn up pretty quickly. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for a pleasant but kind of blah way to pass some time.
October 23, 2024
3.5 stars rounded up. In some ways this is a bit predictable, and yet it's a fresh way for ODC to be brought back together after Elizabeth rejects Darcy in Hunsford. The book's blurb says as much as I would about the story.
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September 4, 2024I would call it more variation than retelling of P&P. The overall idea was interesting and I liked reading more into Lizzie's and Darcy's emotions and thoughts. I also appreciated that we got some interactions between Georgina Darcy and her brother and Elizabeth. Writing itself was kind of modern and I missed Austen's accurate and witty remarks on society.
July 5, 2025
I’ll never not love being back with Lizzy and Darcy, whatever form I find them in.
November 26, 2023
First half of the story = 5 stars. Captivating and interesting plot. Was super excited while reading! 2nd half is a not as interesting unfortunately. Pretty bland. I’d give it 2-3 stars.
Didn’t like Colonel Fitzwilliam in this story. And even Darcy was a bit unlikeable as he seemed more like a boy than a man at times? Just not as firm or decisive. I wanted to tell him to “man up” and take charge. Almost like he NEEDED to be guided by the Colonel (who didn’t even really do a good job) to help woo Elizabeth.
Elizabeth too was a bit off. Hard to explain. Just felt like she blushed too much and like the author TRIED to make her sound witty and saucy but actually failed as it just came off as awkward instead.
Georgiana is supposedly shy but really isn’t. She had no problems asking to be on a first name bases within hours of meeting Elizabeth for example.
And while D&E had plenty of time to build on the romance, their interactions felt pretty bland. No chemistry or sizzle. Bummer!
Didn’t like Colonel Fitzwilliam in this story. And even Darcy was a bit unlikeable as he seemed more like a boy than a man at times? Just not as firm or decisive. I wanted to tell him to “man up” and take charge. Almost like he NEEDED to be guided by the Colonel (who didn’t even really do a good job) to help woo Elizabeth.
Elizabeth too was a bit off. Hard to explain. Just felt like she blushed too much and like the author TRIED to make her sound witty and saucy but actually failed as it just came off as awkward instead.
Georgiana is supposedly shy but really isn’t. She had no problems asking to be on a first name bases within hours of meeting Elizabeth for example.
And while D&E had plenty of time to build on the romance, their interactions felt pretty bland. No chemistry or sizzle. Bummer!
November 20, 2023
Okay
It's an average story. Not much happened except for Wickham and Lydia's foolishness at the end, and I could have done without those two.
Darcy and Elizabeth have a good amount of screen time. They were good together.
It's an average story. Not much happened except for Wickham and Lydia's foolishness at the end, and I could have done without those two.
Darcy and Elizabeth have a good amount of screen time. They were good together.
November 26, 2023
Ok. A bit boring
At no point was this a page time for me. There was not enough dialog between ODC and the storyline was weak.
At no point was this a page time for me. There was not enough dialog between ODC and the storyline was weak.
December 17, 2023
Not the greatest P&P variation I’ve ever read, but I definitely enjoyed myself. You can’t go wrong with Mr. Darcy doting on an injured Elizabeth.
November 2, 2023
3.5 rounded to 4. This book takes place in London when different events from canon occur during Elizabeth and Maria's stop at Gracechurch St. There is an accident resulting in Elizabeth and Maria staying at Darcy house, giving ODC time to better understand one another. This is a very inventive and unique premise for a Pride and Prejudice variation. The book centers mostly around Darcy and Elizabeth with little page time from most of the other Bennets.
This author has a lot of talent. Her writing flows well and is very good. I did, however, think that this story was a little slow and made the book feel longer than it should have. I found Elizabeth's design of showing up in a certain part of London to randomly meet Bingley a bit far fetched, but it was necessary to set up the plot of the accident and the subsequent recovery at Darcy's house. I was amused by Maria Lucas and her thoughts and perception of Darcy. That was a fun touch to this story. It was also nice to have so much page time dedicated to the development of D&E's growing relationship, although a little more direct communication during that time would have been welcome. The Colonel added some color to the story as well. The Lydia/Wickham fiasco felt more obligatory than necessary to the plot, but luckily it wasn't drawn out too much. At the end when D&E finally cleared the air and reached an understanding, the story abruptly ended. After enduring the uncertainties and insecurities in their journey along with them, I would have enjoyed sharing in a just a little bit of their happiness to balance it out. There was a cute epilogue that gave us a little glimpse down the road, but at least a few pages of joy would have gone a long way in my enjoyment.
Overall, this was a good variation. I did feel like it could have been better with some content editing, but there were many things I enjoyed. I have been impressed with the writing of this author.
This author has a lot of talent. Her writing flows well and is very good. I did, however, think that this story was a little slow and made the book feel longer than it should have. I found Elizabeth's design of showing up in a certain part of London to randomly meet Bingley a bit far fetched, but it was necessary to set up the plot of the accident and the subsequent recovery at Darcy's house. I was amused by Maria Lucas and her thoughts and perception of Darcy. That was a fun touch to this story. It was also nice to have so much page time dedicated to the development of D&E's growing relationship, although a little more direct communication during that time would have been welcome. The Colonel added some color to the story as well. The Lydia/Wickham fiasco felt more obligatory than necessary to the plot, but luckily it wasn't drawn out too much. At the end when D&E finally cleared the air and reached an understanding, the story abruptly ended. After enduring the uncertainties and insecurities in their journey along with them, I would have enjoyed sharing in a just a little bit of their happiness to balance it out. There was a cute epilogue that gave us a little glimpse down the road, but at least a few pages of joy would have gone a long way in my enjoyment.
Overall, this was a good variation. I did feel like it could have been better with some content editing, but there were many things I enjoyed. I have been impressed with the writing of this author.
September 9, 2024
With Darcy still severely unhappy about the Hunsford Debacle, he is fussing about and finally decides to leave the house. Stepping out, he sees Elizabeth and Maria Lucas in front of his townhome. She is so shocked to see him, as she was looking to find Bingley's house where she could tell him that Jane is in London, she steps back, but there is a carriage going much too fast. Darcy rushes to save them, but Maria is injured badly with severe bruises, abrasions and a sprained ankle. Elizabeth is bruised but not nearly as badly. He takes them into his home, calls for the physician, and does everything he can to help them.
I rather liked the interplay between Darcy and Elizabeth, as he was horror-struck at the thought of losing Elizabeth, but he thinks she still hates him, so he is very careful around her but wants to woo her, in spite of his obvious inability to do so. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Georgiana had nice bit parts. I thought that Maria was getting way too starry-eyed of Mr. Darcy, but that ended up just fine. I loved Mrs. Annesley, especially her line, "gossip is about the only thing that spreads in London faster than disease". She was a wonderful voice of wisdom and managed the conversations brilliantly when they got awkward. Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner are also great. I was pleased not to have to put up with Lady Catherine at all, and the primary interaction with Miss Bingley resulted in a great set-down by Darcy.
Too much time was spent on Wickham and Lydia; but that is partly just me - I hate to be reminded of what a reprobate he is, and what a shameless, selfish, and stupid girl Lydia is. Ugh! However, Elizabeth did give Wickham a good set-down, ending with, "I would not compare yourself to Mr Darcy. You will only find yourself wanting."
Overall, a very nice story.
I rather liked the interplay between Darcy and Elizabeth, as he was horror-struck at the thought of losing Elizabeth, but he thinks she still hates him, so he is very careful around her but wants to woo her, in spite of his obvious inability to do so. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Georgiana had nice bit parts. I thought that Maria was getting way too starry-eyed of Mr. Darcy, but that ended up just fine. I loved Mrs. Annesley, especially her line, "gossip is about the only thing that spreads in London faster than disease". She was a wonderful voice of wisdom and managed the conversations brilliantly when they got awkward. Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner are also great. I was pleased not to have to put up with Lady Catherine at all, and the primary interaction with Miss Bingley resulted in a great set-down by Darcy.
Too much time was spent on Wickham and Lydia; but that is partly just me - I hate to be reminded of what a reprobate he is, and what a shameless, selfish, and stupid girl Lydia is. Ugh! However, Elizabeth did give Wickham a good set-down, ending with, "I would not compare yourself to Mr Darcy. You will only find yourself wanting."
Overall, a very nice story.
January 8, 2024
Excellent, and yet…
This has the all the elements of an excellent variation. One can’t help the heart-tugging moments our main characters feel while grappling with their thoughts and feelings of supposed unrequited love. The writing is stellar as well. It’s a no-brainer that this is a must-read for all fans of P&P retellings.
The star deduction is due to an inconsistency this reader feels ought to have been addressed. Elizabeth Bennet, for all sisterly love that she felt for Jane (even to the extent of almost being run over a carriage, literally!, while attempting to be of service), there was neither a letter or any message sent to and from Jane while Elizabeth is ensconced in the Darcy House in Mayfair. How odd. For all the inner struggles that she felt, for all the visits made by the Gardiners to her, there were no correspondence to her sister, who she claimed to have loved above all. Surely, her not wanting to upset the already-depressed Jane could explain this oversight but still, if only to assure her sister she was out of danger and safely well-attended in the Darcy House could have not taken much but a sentence or two. But there was none of it. It’s as if while Elizabeth fell under the Darcy spell and forgot family, who she defended prodigiously for pain of a broken heart. Inconsistency, as pointed out. If not for this, this would have been a 5 star through and through.
This has the all the elements of an excellent variation. One can’t help the heart-tugging moments our main characters feel while grappling with their thoughts and feelings of supposed unrequited love. The writing is stellar as well. It’s a no-brainer that this is a must-read for all fans of P&P retellings.
The star deduction is due to an inconsistency this reader feels ought to have been addressed. Elizabeth Bennet, for all sisterly love that she felt for Jane (even to the extent of almost being run over a carriage, literally!, while attempting to be of service), there was neither a letter or any message sent to and from Jane while Elizabeth is ensconced in the Darcy House in Mayfair. How odd. For all the inner struggles that she felt, for all the visits made by the Gardiners to her, there were no correspondence to her sister, who she claimed to have loved above all. Surely, her not wanting to upset the already-depressed Jane could explain this oversight but still, if only to assure her sister she was out of danger and safely well-attended in the Darcy House could have not taken much but a sentence or two. But there was none of it. It’s as if while Elizabeth fell under the Darcy spell and forgot family, who she defended prodigiously for pain of a broken heart. Inconsistency, as pointed out. If not for this, this would have been a 5 star through and through.
August 11, 2025
Nothing wrong with exactly, but it didn't affect me much in any way. Elizabeth & Darcy never have a heart to heart conversation. After Elizabeth left Darcy's house and moved to her uncles, I thought they'd finally have a conversation and resolve everything. But no, suddenly we have 3 chapters of Wickham drama and a quick proposal and acceptance at the end, followed by an equally short and unsatisfying epilogue. I often felt underwhelmed by the P&P ending, as i wanted to see more of E&D in love but this book makes that look excessive by comparison. Elizabeth never really apologises for her accusations, there is not much proof given to her to show Darcy's change. She still thinks very meanly of him at 50%, when Colonel again mentions of how Darcy separated Bingley from someone unsuitable, so its not convincing at all to have her be in love with him. Its all build up and no resolution.
2 maybe too low for this, as the writing was ok, but there is not a single moment which affected me in this, but i continued hoping it'll change and was thoroughly disappointed as there was no meaningful conversation between D&E
2 maybe too low for this, as the writing was ok, but there is not a single moment which affected me in this, but i continued hoping it'll change and was thoroughly disappointed as there was no meaningful conversation between D&E
November 14, 2023
The author's first book, A Man of Good Fortune, begins with a vivid description of Darcy's pain in the aftermath of a carriage accident. It is detailed and difficult to read, but so well-described that the reader can almost personally feel it. This book also begins with a description of pain, involving Elizabeth and Maria Lucas. What on earth has happened? It is so effective in drawing the reader into the story.
Elizabeth has returned to London from Hunsford to find Jane a shadow of her former self, still deeply affected by Bingley's desertion. She resolves to do something about it, which leads to the unfortunate accident. Forced to remain at Darcy House while Maria recovers, Elizabeth is in a position to learn more about Darcy's character, while he attempts to correct his mistakes. They both make false assumptions that could have been cleared up a little more quickly by opening their mouths and talking.
Caroline is finally the recipient of Darcy's well-deserved tongue lashing. The book is enchantingly written. I hope Ali Scott has more in the works.
Elizabeth has returned to London from Hunsford to find Jane a shadow of her former self, still deeply affected by Bingley's desertion. She resolves to do something about it, which leads to the unfortunate accident. Forced to remain at Darcy House while Maria recovers, Elizabeth is in a position to learn more about Darcy's character, while he attempts to correct his mistakes. They both make false assumptions that could have been cleared up a little more quickly by opening their mouths and talking.
Caroline is finally the recipient of Darcy's well-deserved tongue lashing. The book is enchantingly written. I hope Ali Scott has more in the works.
October 13, 2023
SPOILER ALERT: This following review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: teen, although clean of graphic sexual content, there were smarmy comments and descriptions during the Lydia and Wickham Flight of Shame. The descriptions of an accident and the resulting injuries might be troubling. Mild language: British swearing:
>>Angst Level: angst during the accident and following lovers’ angst
>>Fan Points: swoon-worthy as ODC resolved their differences and realized a true and abiding love. Heavy sigh.
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout on 9-20-23 and am volunteering to leave a review. Also borrowed from KU 11-7-23.
>>Trope: [1] Fall or injury [2] Hero Darcy, heavy sigh
>>Timeline: Post-Kent when Elizabeth and Maria arrive back in London after visiting Charlotte and post-DHP. The story moves quickly with slight differences from canon. I didn’t mind the speed with which the story moved. There was also a limited number of characters. Thank goodness.
The prologue grabbed me immediately and ICNPID [I could not put it down] Oh-My-Goodness! It was shocking and I wondered what on earth happened. I had to read it and see what caused Elizabeth’s distress.
Kent: Elizabeth and Maria had bid their farewells to Charlotte and Mr. Collins and a coach returned them to London. Elizabeth could not get out of Kent fast enough and wanted to just forget her horrible experience at the hands of the nephews of Lady Catherine de Bourgh. The Colonel had revealed a shocking truth about Mr. Bingley deserting her sister. Then, on top of that, Mr. Darcy, who she was sure hated her, went and did the impossible. She couldn’t believe the actions of either of them.
Back in London, the girls were swept up in the activities of her uncle’s house on Gracechurch Street. Elizabeth was horrified to see how despondent her sister Jane had become. After hearing how the superior sisters had treated Jane, Elizabeth was determined to fix the situation. Well, you know that old saying about the best-laid plans?
Elizabeth was on the hunt for the Bingley townhouse. She and Maria were in Grosvenor Square and were admiring the lovely homes when a gentleman exited the door of the nearest house. It was Mr. Darcy. Elizabeth backed up in shock and shame. What must he think of her being at his house? That was the last thing she remembered other than the look of fear and horror on Mr. Darcy’s face as he lunged for her.
This was a story of reclaiming friendships, reestablishing one’s character, and finding an abiding love of a woman worthy of being loved. The comedic relief came from our dear Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam. The cousin/brother relationship was evident in every scene with this scoundrel. He was hilarious and just as often put his hessians in his mouth as often as Darcy did his. The other voice of reason and sense was Mrs. Annesley. I loved her motherly advice. Thank goodness we didn’t have Mrs. Bennet to deal with.
This was a quick story. It moved through the lovelorn scenes with enough speed that it didn’t become maudlin. I wouldn’t have enjoyed it as much if we had dragged out the misunderstanding between ODC. I enjoyed page time where Darcy and Elizabeth actually have a meaningful conversation. That happened several times and what occurred at the church was oh-so-lovely. Heavy sigh. This was a fun read even though it dealt with an accident that could have been fatal.
1st read 9-21-23
2nd read 11-7-23
>>Rating: teen, although clean of graphic sexual content, there were smarmy comments and descriptions during the Lydia and Wickham Flight of Shame. The descriptions of an accident and the resulting injuries might be troubling. Mild language: British swearing:
>>Angst Level: angst during the accident and following lovers’ angst
>>Fan Points: swoon-worthy as ODC resolved their differences and realized a true and abiding love. Heavy sigh.
>>Source: I received a free copy via Booksprout on 9-20-23 and am volunteering to leave a review. Also borrowed from KU 11-7-23.
>>Trope: [1] Fall or injury [2] Hero Darcy, heavy sigh
>>Timeline: Post-Kent when Elizabeth and Maria arrive back in London after visiting Charlotte and post-DHP. The story moves quickly with slight differences from canon. I didn’t mind the speed with which the story moved. There was also a limited number of characters. Thank goodness.
The prologue grabbed me immediately and ICNPID [I could not put it down] Oh-My-Goodness! It was shocking and I wondered what on earth happened. I had to read it and see what caused Elizabeth’s distress.
Kent: Elizabeth and Maria had bid their farewells to Charlotte and Mr. Collins and a coach returned them to London. Elizabeth could not get out of Kent fast enough and wanted to just forget her horrible experience at the hands of the nephews of Lady Catherine de Bourgh. The Colonel had revealed a shocking truth about Mr. Bingley deserting her sister. Then, on top of that, Mr. Darcy, who she was sure hated her, went and did the impossible. She couldn’t believe the actions of either of them.
Back in London, the girls were swept up in the activities of her uncle’s house on Gracechurch Street. Elizabeth was horrified to see how despondent her sister Jane had become. After hearing how the superior sisters had treated Jane, Elizabeth was determined to fix the situation. Well, you know that old saying about the best-laid plans?
Elizabeth was on the hunt for the Bingley townhouse. She and Maria were in Grosvenor Square and were admiring the lovely homes when a gentleman exited the door of the nearest house. It was Mr. Darcy. Elizabeth backed up in shock and shame. What must he think of her being at his house? That was the last thing she remembered other than the look of fear and horror on Mr. Darcy’s face as he lunged for her.
This was a story of reclaiming friendships, reestablishing one’s character, and finding an abiding love of a woman worthy of being loved. The comedic relief came from our dear Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam. The cousin/brother relationship was evident in every scene with this scoundrel. He was hilarious and just as often put his hessians in his mouth as often as Darcy did his. The other voice of reason and sense was Mrs. Annesley. I loved her motherly advice. Thank goodness we didn’t have Mrs. Bennet to deal with.
This was a quick story. It moved through the lovelorn scenes with enough speed that it didn’t become maudlin. I wouldn’t have enjoyed it as much if we had dragged out the misunderstanding between ODC. I enjoyed page time where Darcy and Elizabeth actually have a meaningful conversation. That happened several times and what occurred at the church was oh-so-lovely. Heavy sigh. This was a fun read even though it dealt with an accident that could have been fatal.
1st read 9-21-23
2nd read 11-7-23
January 18, 2024
The story happened at Darcy House in London just right after the disastrous proposal in Kent. Both carried a heavy heart, though for different reasons, Darcy and Elizabeth met again under unfortunate circumstances which forced them to spend time under the same roof and in each other’s company.
Mrs Annesley played an important role as the messenger between ODC and smoothed the awkwardness and misunderstanding whenever occurred, which gave her more credit than in the original story. Although sometimes a touch too much, I enjoyed the presence of a motherly character in this plot that added warmth to the gathering of our favorite people.
Darcy’s as reserved as in canon, while Col. Fitzwilliam’s as loose-tongued also. Elizabeth learnt to know love and learnt to love. A beautiful and romantic variation.
Mrs Annesley played an important role as the messenger between ODC and smoothed the awkwardness and misunderstanding whenever occurred, which gave her more credit than in the original story. Although sometimes a touch too much, I enjoyed the presence of a motherly character in this plot that added warmth to the gathering of our favorite people.
Darcy’s as reserved as in canon, while Col. Fitzwilliam’s as loose-tongued also. Elizabeth learnt to know love and learnt to love. A beautiful and romantic variation.
November 28, 2023
This novel begins post-Hunsford and starts in London. How badly can pride wound? How does it wound? How many does it wound? This story answers these questions.
Darcy and Elizabeth meet unexpectedly, and hurts have occurred. Will they have a relationship? Will it be moved forward, or have the hurts caused too much damage?
This is a happily ever after story. It is how our dear couple gets to this point which fills in the gaps of this version of their love story. Enjoy with a cup of tea and a free afternoon.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Darcy and Elizabeth meet unexpectedly, and hurts have occurred. Will they have a relationship? Will it be moved forward, or have the hurts caused too much damage?
This is a happily ever after story. It is how our dear couple gets to this point which fills in the gaps of this version of their love story. Enjoy with a cup of tea and a free afternoon.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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