It's possible that I need to reset my brain and expectations about romances. I own this. It's also possible that I've become a little crotchety. This may also be true. So, as I review this very basic and template-driven tale, maybe we should all keep these things in mind.
All this said, I really feel we as readers deserve better than this.
Here's what you get in this story.
The female lead is like a paper doll of a heroine. She's 25, gorgeous, and doesn't know it (of course), perfect in virtually every way (Mary), saintlike and instantly adored by all who meet her, and a lifetime abuse victim. The male lead is a former Special Forces dude, gorgeous beyond reason, skilled in hand to hand combat, beloved by all, a Protector with a capital P, and a sex god.
The plot is very trope driven. This perfect girl comes from a horrifically abusive, damaged, addiction addled and criminal family. She's Cinderella, forced into financial and physical servitude until she escapes with just her car and the shirt off her back. She drives until finding an open bar run by the saint-like specimen male lead, who, of course, goes all out to protect her since he immediately knows she is The One. The rest of the story includes numerous bloody run-ins with her father, her narcissistic, entitled brother, a regretful snarky ex girlfriend, and two small-town tropey bad guys, one of which is the standard psychopath you see in every bad romance.
On top of this trope-heavy soup o characters is a pile of TSTL behaviors that range from repeatedly leaving a safe area to insisting on doing things that show "independence," and just straight up ridiculous acts that always result in the next action sequence. Kidnapping is heavily featured, of course. And there's a complete refusal to involve law enforcement until the sitch is dire. Once engaged, law enforcement can't seem to pick up any of the bad guys or figure out where they're hiding.
It's a real smorgasboard of lazy templated storytelling populated by trope-driven "characters" who do nothing beyond what you'd expect from their tiny list of 2D attributes/behaviors. Really, there's not a single thing in this story that hasn't been done thousands and thousands of times before. Nothing stands out. Nothing original, interesting, or non-stereotypical here at all.
I do feel bad being critical of an author who put herself out here and tried to create something entertaining. I really respect that. And hey, I'm the one playing critic and not creating something that I feel might be better, right? However, I honestly feel we deserve better. And that's the purpose of this review.
Please do better!