Tropes: why choose MFMMM (MMFMM) omegaverse, grumpy x sunshine, chronic illness, disability rep, hurt/comfort, they fall first, beta MMC, motorcycle alpha, roadtrip adventure, daddy dom, DP & DVP, an*l play, sp*nking.
Rating: 2.75✨
First thing first, let’s take a moment to appreciate the cover because it’s seriously stunning.
I was pretty bummed about how it turned out this novel and I have mixed feelings about it. I didn’t hate this book, but unfortunately I didn’t love it either.
This is a 3 star rounded up reading because even tho I seriously disliked some of the author’s choices, I can’t say that I didn’t like the writing style, so two stars would have been too low as a rating for me.
If someone asks, I didn’t say it, but there is sooo much smut that at some point I got bored.
****SPOILER ALERT: PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK****
Okay, so this book is presented as an MFMMM, but there are two scenes that show us some kind of m/m actions, even tho I’m not sure they can be described like that since nothing really happens.
I like me some MM (or FF for that matter) in the harem, but only when it has a good representation and it’s well written. Unfortunately, it isn’t the case here.
The relationship between Bear and Henry comes literally out of nowhere. There isn’t any build up that take us to the start of their romance. We just have one chapter where Henry notices his attraction towards Bear, and then we have THAT scene (I won’t tell anything more because I don’t want to spoil anything more than I already have) and it’s not even from one of their POVs, and really again, nothing s*xual or emotional happens.
We have to read the bonus chapter to see a scene between these two, which is also “interrupted” by the FMC, so we don’t even get an entire chapter that is solely dedicated to them.
It is also implied that something is happening, or will happen, between Liam and Gray.
The author had almost 800 pages to develop these relationships. It's a shame that they were only thrown in the mix at the end of the story. I honestly would’ve preferred to have no MM at all at this point.