My review is for Jess peters “An explicit price”. Unfortunately this one just wasn’t for me. That is just my opinion as a reviewer, I was asked to ARC read this book and out of respect for Jess and the other authors I held off to allow the book time to get out there.
Unfortunately, I found that there just wasn’t any chemistry built between the characters. The “dom” representation just wasn’t there for me. No “good dom” as he refers to himself as being would do and allow those things to happen to his sub especially when there were no boundaries put in place. I’m not unaccustomed to dark romance with dark themes but what happens in that club, that scene was just all wrong. No matter how much he wanted her tears, it’s not a good representation of dominant behaviour nor is it accurate. I feel when it came to the bdsm relationship between the two that the author needs to do abit more research into the dynamics of bdsm and talking with people in the community would greatly help her build her bdsm scenes to be more realistic. I think she has included some aspects of a bdsm relationship semi-accurately however I feel they are lack lustre and the chemistry and desire just isn’t there between the characters. It is never built up and sexual tension is never really created between the two. All this makes the ending of the book so hard to grasp. I know it’s a short novella but I feel it wrapped up too quickly and unrealistically. I loved the concept of the book and was excited to read it, I believed it had a lot of potential but unfortunately it fell flat for me. I have to rate it a 1/5.