This was... not good... And okay, you say it's supposed to read like fanfiction and be mostly smut, fine... But I've read a lot of fanfiction that was better than this and would've deserved to be published more than this book.
The smut was repetitive and boring, so much so that after the first few times I just started skipping the parts that had it in it, cause it was mostly the same with a few new dialogue lines thrown in there... In fact, most of the stuff that happened in the book was boring and after a while I just started reading the dialogue and nothing else (meeting the parents, college parties (all of them extremely similar), them going to class, baking brownies, and a lot of smut...)
Also, why is Hazy constantly fainting?? Who thought it was okay to make her faint over 3 times in one conversation??? and not just metaphorical fainting, but like she actually passes out??
Next, the blood drinking, you mean to tell me that Godrick (they shorten his name to God frequently when they're doing it) was just sucking over a liter of blood out of her on the regular and she still had enough energy to go to class and study all day because she ate one piece of brownie after it and was feeling completelyfine?? There's a reason why most blood donation centers make you wait 8 weeks until you can donate again, and the longest they waited was less than 6 weeks, girlie was probably walking around not quite understanding anything that's going on around her.
Also, the only name that was okay from the three vampire brothers was Laz, that's a fine vampire name (ironic really considering everything), the other one being Hunter?? (maybe that's just me and my obsession with RWRB, but I cringed whenever his name was mentioned), and finally, Godrick, or GOD??? as he's quite frequently called... and I just... it really did make me wish I had DNF'ed this back at 6% when I first had the thought