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When We Kill
A FAMILY THAT KILLS TOGETHER STAYS TOGETHER.
Meet Jacob - a 12-year-old psychopath. On the brink of being sent to juvie, Jake finds himself placed under the care of an affluent foster family that harbors a sinister secret—the husband, wife and their two teenage children, are serial killers who exclusively kill those they deem deserving. Now, this family is intent on teaching Jake their methods. Haunted by the conviction that he's unworthy of human affection, Jake embarks on a journey to earn his seat at the table, mastering an array of manipulation, physical combat, and strategy techniques. However, when Jake becomes too entangled with the family's latest target, mayhem ensues, tensions rise and boundaries blur. Does Jake have what it takes to fix the chaos he’s unleashed?
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"When We Kill" is book one in a planned series. It's a riveting blend of psychological suspense and a gripping exploration of the innermost desire to belong. If you like stories where the "bad guys" are the heroes, you'll love "When We Kill".
Meet Jacob - a 12-year-old psychopath. On the brink of being sent to juvie, Jake finds himself placed under the care of an affluent foster family that harbors a sinister secret—the husband, wife and their two teenage children, are serial killers who exclusively kill those they deem deserving. Now, this family is intent on teaching Jake their methods. Haunted by the conviction that he's unworthy of human affection, Jake embarks on a journey to earn his seat at the table, mastering an array of manipulation, physical combat, and strategy techniques. However, when Jake becomes too entangled with the family's latest target, mayhem ensues, tensions rise and boundaries blur. Does Jake have what it takes to fix the chaos he’s unleashed?
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"When We Kill" is book one in a planned series. It's a riveting blend of psychological suspense and a gripping exploration of the innermost desire to belong. If you like stories where the "bad guys" are the heroes, you'll love "When We Kill".
288 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 13, 2023
About the author
J.D. Millar
3 books7 followersJD Millar writes character-driven mysteries with a splash of danger, a dash of humor, and settings you’ll wish to visit.
Originally from Europe and often on the move, she draws inspiration from historic towns, sunlit coastlines, and the interesting people who live there. When she’s not writing, she’s usually traveling, reading, or plotting the next mystery over a cup of tea.
Originally from Europe and often on the move, she draws inspiration from historic towns, sunlit coastlines, and the interesting people who live there. When she’s not writing, she’s usually traveling, reading, or plotting the next mystery over a cup of tea.
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November 17, 2023
Decent story, needs work
I have never read a book from this author so therefore I have no real knowledge of whether or not they are new. I got this book for free on one of the stuff your kindle events. Honestly it was an intriguing book. I wasnt bored and there was plenty of action. Now the talking parts and the writing felt very new to me. New as in not alot of experience by the author. The book needs some editing. Misspelled words and or the wrong word used in places. Something a new author would overlook.
While there needs to be a revamp of the editing , more natural transition, and talking parts, I did enjoy the book. I dont know if I will continue on with another book in this series (if there is one, I havent looked that far). The editing mistakes were annoying, but I might read it if I received it for free.
I have never read a book from this author so therefore I have no real knowledge of whether or not they are new. I got this book for free on one of the stuff your kindle events. Honestly it was an intriguing book. I wasnt bored and there was plenty of action. Now the talking parts and the writing felt very new to me. New as in not alot of experience by the author. The book needs some editing. Misspelled words and or the wrong word used in places. Something a new author would overlook.
While there needs to be a revamp of the editing , more natural transition, and talking parts, I did enjoy the book. I dont know if I will continue on with another book in this series (if there is one, I havent looked that far). The editing mistakes were annoying, but I might read it if I received it for free.
February 2, 2024
Good fanfiction?
This reads way more spy thriller than psychological thriller.
Pros
The Anderson family dynamic is really interesting and Jake's friends are cool and you can kinda see the psychological thriller aspect of it.
Cons
all the characters are pretty flat Jake Is a very passive main character and I feel like the only thing we're supposed to know about the Andersons is that they're really good at murder. Jake isn't introspective enough for me he never thinks about his actions in a way that reflects his character so it leads to moments where it felt like his thoughts and emotions flipped randomly. I understand that Jake lacks the ability to understand his emotions on purpose but the way it's written is still a little rough for me.
This reads way more spy thriller than psychological thriller.
Pros
The Anderson family dynamic is really interesting and Jake's friends are cool and you can kinda see the psychological thriller aspect of it.
Cons
all the characters are pretty flat Jake Is a very passive main character and I feel like the only thing we're supposed to know about the Andersons is that they're really good at murder. Jake isn't introspective enough for me he never thinks about his actions in a way that reflects his character so it leads to moments where it felt like his thoughts and emotions flipped randomly. I understand that Jake lacks the ability to understand his emotions on purpose but the way it's written is still a little rough for me.
November 10, 2023
Too many errors
I couldn't finish this book. The main character was originally in an orphanage. He attacked another boy who lived there. The problems with this book began there. The author apparently forgot that the children in the orphanage were orphans, and had a lovely scene with the injured boy's parents.
After several more errors, and an overly simplistic writing style, I couldn't continue reading. The premise has potential, so with editing, the book could be good.
I couldn't finish this book. The main character was originally in an orphanage. He attacked another boy who lived there. The problems with this book began there. The author apparently forgot that the children in the orphanage were orphans, and had a lovely scene with the injured boy's parents.
After several more errors, and an overly simplistic writing style, I couldn't continue reading. The premise has potential, so with editing, the book could be good.
December 10, 2023
Mehp
If you were looking for a dark serial family book like horror honey this isn't it. I'm disappointed not what I wanted. This was a fun read but its been done before. The family adopts a boy that is kinda has serial kill vibes. NO DARK VIBES!! Just a fun read. Jacob is a likable character though.
If you were looking for a dark serial family book like horror honey this isn't it. I'm disappointed not what I wanted. This was a fun read but its been done before. The family adopts a boy that is kinda has serial kill vibes. NO DARK VIBES!! Just a fun read. Jacob is a likable character though.
Did Not Finish
March 20, 2026This was actually sent to me by the author as an ARC when it was first to be published. Unfortunately I could not relate to the plot at all and I left the book a few chapters in, thought I would give it some time but unfortunately to this day I have not and don't think I will be able to. It is just extremely unbelievable and unrelatable.
October 21, 2023
I absolutely loved this book! The writing is so smooth and engaging, it immediately grabs your attention. The storyline is unique and really makes you think. As someone who is fascinated by psychology, I found the book explored some really interesting and thought-provoking aspects of human nature.
April 20, 2024
2.5 stars rounded up to 3.
I enjoyed reading this book, but there were quite a few plot holes that I found distracting. It also needed an editor, badly!
It was a good story that was poorly executed.
I enjoyed reading this book, but there were quite a few plot holes that I found distracting. It also needed an editor, badly!
It was a good story that was poorly executed.
September 20, 2024
Beautifuly written, went far over my expectations!
October 10, 2024
DNF @30%
November 25, 2023
Love the idea for the novel. Definitely could be executed better but the plot was enjoyable
August 11, 2024
Interesting
The concept of the story is amazing and something outside the box. A family of serial killers who adopts a kid that would fit perfectly into their family… amazing!! Even though I like the idea, the story was just okay.
I was hoping it was more blood and guts in the story. It did have some but it wasn’t in much detail. Also, it was a little long. The story could have been shorter and it would still be as effective.
On my D&D scale (disturbing and disgusting) I give it a 0.
The concept of the story is amazing and something outside the box. A family of serial killers who adopts a kid that would fit perfectly into their family… amazing!! Even though I like the idea, the story was just okay.
I was hoping it was more blood and guts in the story. It did have some but it wasn’t in much detail. Also, it was a little long. The story could have been shorter and it would still be as effective.
On my D&D scale (disturbing and disgusting) I give it a 0.
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