This is one of those mixed bag reads that's hard to categorize. I grabbed it because the premise was about rescuing a summer camp, with romance. And the camp part was everything I could have wished for, evoking fond memories of summer camps when I was a camper and a counselor. I loved the enthusiasm, and the banter--and the way that pranks can turn sour quick, which is also a strong memory. The idea of a summer camp for grownups is an awesome idea! And I loved the execution of that aspect.
Alas, the relationships were disappointing, making that aspect of the story drag and drag, yet nothing could quite paper over the big, sucking energy-vacuum of what Jacob Proffitt calls Negative Motivation.
The story begins with Jessie's beloved camp being on the brink of being sold off for condos, but what she misses most is her old camp bestie, who walked away from their friendship years ago, for no reason that Jessie could figure. Then we switch over to Hillary, said ex-bestie, who is sorely missing her single good friendship, yep, with Jessie... and why didn't the two ever talk it out? Though I dislike that premise very much I can forgive it if the two clear the air the minute they see each other. But nope. They don't talk, and don't talk, then part in a snit, and I was counting the pages until that thread would be over. I no longer cared what had happened--these two were emotionally teenagers, apparently.
That sucking black hole even drained the romances, which felt like checkmarks. I wonder if the two authors suspected that as they added a subplot with an elderly dog that I think could have been handled much better. It, too, felt tacked on for the pathos.
Still, the camp does get saved, yay! But I closed the file feeling that the book was 100 pages longer than it needed to be--mainly all the negative energy wasted on maundering over that total lack of motivation for resolving an issue that ought to have been half a chapter of intense talk, then maybe rebuilding trust. But mileage varies, and I hope the book finds its fans in summer camp nostalgia readers!