DNF'd at 24% - I was getting a bunch of weird vibes from the writing. Random rich vampire sees a poor helpless cardboard-cutout "I'm not like other guys" self-insert protagonist, falls in instalove, calls him darling and "my max" by the second chapter - as he's still in the process of buying him. Then showers him with attention and money and fixes all his problems as Max gapes at him. Christian Grey called, he wants his billionaire persona back.
Also just incredibly childish writing. "I assume you want to take some pictures?" "All the pictures." was my limit. I'd come across a few parts which made me think "Adults don't talk like that, not even 19-y/o's" and made Max feel really childlike, which isn't something I'm after in a book where you'll spend a majority of it railing said immature character. I should've stayed away when I saw that blurb summation about some cinnamon squad or whatever the heck that was on about. Like, bro, don't write a smut book with weird teen uber lolzorz XD :3 speak in it. It's so weird and constructed so poorly with the rather basic writing - and the overall effect was that of an older teenager writing fanfic that was competent, but still felt too casual to be published.
It's like a slightly worse version of TJ Klune's writing, which I also found very childish, and felt there was no chemistry between them. I've been particularly ruthless with books recently, and if you like wolfsong, you might like this. I'm not you. But damn, I don't think I've DNF'd a book quicker. Jesus. I might come back to it, but any real enjoyment I have of this book shrivelled up at the weird phrases.