Solid three stars. An alright conclusion to a mediocre arc with untapped potential.
*sigh*
Here we go again.
Ok. Likely because the ghost writers for Bravelands are a different team than the Warriors Erins, this book doesn’t suffer from the strange, brushed-over writing style that Warriors is stuck with nowadays. The writing is typical Erin stuff, so nothing amazing, but certainly not bad. I didn’t even notice any typos in this one, which is nice.
The plot of this book is. . . Uninspired. While this one is thankfully more than 195 pages, parts of it still feel underutilized, if not outright rushed. The entire Stride plot has little depth to it, and Breathstealer’s character development doesn’t have nearly enough time to sit. Conversely, Whisper’s plot dragged until its climax, which was quite underwhelming.
There are also some things from the last book that this one just completely forgot about. What ever happened to Graypelt? He was kind of important last book, and if he had also had an impact on Breathstealer as well as Cub, it might have felt more earned when she had her whole arc in this one.
The biggest issue with this book was definitely the pacing. There aren’t really any bad plot points, but none of the ones we did get felt fully fleshed out or lived up to their potential.
Character time.
Breathstealer needed two things: more time, and to actually die. Let me explain. I’ve already said her arc is very rushed, and I stand on that. ESPECIALLY last book, but also in this one, she feels like she jumps back and forth between personalities rather than gradually ‘turning to the dark side’ and being corrupted. More time would have made her descent feel more real while also making it more tragic. And that’s where her death comes in. The first arc of Bravelands remains the best example of a main character dying (in the Erins’ books, at least) by far. And they had the perfect opportunity to not only do it again, but to show that once more, peace can’t always be achieved without some sacrifice, and also make it good in a different way than Fearless’s death. Beathstealer’s death would have been a tragedy in the way Fearless’s wasn’t. What’s worse is that the Erins almost did it, but then went back on it. Breathstealer survives because of the magic of plot convenience, which is not only cheap, but huge missed potential.
Whisper really just needed more to do throughout this series. She was never bad, but her plot was never quite as interesting as the others’. I think for the Great Mother reveal to feel earned, she needed to do something this book unrelated to Echo or Quake, or another buffalo. She needed to stand a bit stronger on her own for her new role to feel deserved. But Whisper wasn’t bad, and I like that Quake and her aren’t immediately star-crossed lovers now that they’re on the same side.
Stride remains pretty boring in personality, but his story was interesting this time. I have the least notes on his plot, especially since we got the scenes of him and Pace to flesh out his character development more. His fight with Jinks felt quite underwhelming, but that was really my only major annoyance with him. Stonehide was a great side character, too.
And my other big issue with this book (and the whole arc), the villain. The Great Devourer is a stupid villain. I explained why in my ‘Breakers of the Code’ review, so go read that if you want the whole rant. Basically, sentient Death doesn’t fit in this world and is a rehash of the ideas from Warriors. It just feels unoriginal and less interesting than a less direct Death villain would have. It also felt super underwhelming in this book. I wasn’t too impressed.
And so ends Bravelands, now that the Erins finally realized the books aren’t making them much money. Not the worst conclusion, but it could have been better. And nothing will ever top the first series.
SERIES RATINGS:
The Shattered Horn: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Breakers of the Code: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Realm of Lost Spirits: ⭐️⭐️⭐️