The Naked Eye by Yoko Tawada is the story of a young Vietnamese woman traveling to Berlin in order to participate in a lecture - only to be swept away to Bochum by a German man, later ending up in Paris with no money, family, or safety net to fall back on. It’s quite the whirlwind of a story - this woman, Anh is the name she gives herself, travels city to city, never settling down because she doesn’t have a legal presence in France and the further she gets from her starting point, the further away she is from any place she can call home. In Paris she falls in love with the movies, cinema, or in particular a certain french actress - Catherine Denevue. She goes to see her movies daily, feeling a strong pull towards her to the point of obsession. She becomes the lighthouse in her life, a guiding light and a point of grounding in her otherwise constantly shifting situation.
What I think this book does best is capturing the rootless and harsh existence of an illegal immigrant; her difficulty in doing anything because of her lack of papers, proving her legal existence, not being able to go to school or get a “real” job (she does eventually get work through the black market). While Anh is trying to form some kind of link to Paris, she finds herself unable to do so - this situation is made harder because of her language barrier. She doesn’t known German or French at the beginning, only Russian - which was the language she was meant to use in Berlin. Her lack of language becomes her lack of speech, she rarely communicates her thoughts or her feelings to those around her. The people in her life are constantly changing because she goes from one living situation to the next, being dependent on other people for a roof above her head. For a while she lives with a Vietnamese woman, Ai Van, with her french husband, Jean. Because she is dependent on them for a roof, pocket money, and food, she rarely voices her thoughts, wishes, or disagreements; her voice is strained because of her dependent position in the world. Rather than arguing with a person she will move on to a new place. Eventually she almost seems to lose her voice completely, so used to keeping it down or shut off.
The lack of language, the lack of place or home, and the way Anh clings to movies are the things that could’ve made this book absolutely wonderful, in my opinion. There are moments of absolute clarity in Tawada’s prose, that seem to capture something so fundamental in such a beautiful way, that I was mesmerized. The way Anh interacts with Denevue too, is interesting - she addresses her directly, as “you”. The narration itself felt like a smart way in playing with our interaction with media and art, and the narration further went to illustrate how Denevue has become the central point in Ahn’s life, that is always changing because of her different roles as an actress, and yet is the only thing that remains constant in her life.
You’d think I loved this book, and I did really like some parts of it. Ultimately though, it didn’t quite deliver on its promises. While the parts that dealt with Denevue were surely interesting from a purely creative point of view, it was a chore to read. The descriptions of different movies and roles were so lackluster that it felt more like I was reading synopses on IMDb rather than a novel. Taking this book on face value, it’s quite often dull as rock. It shifts so often, it’s hard to get a good grounding into it. It has the flow of a “stream-of-consciousness” narrative without really being inside someone’s consciousness. Yes, we do follow Anh’s thoughts and her shifting reality - but it’s very surface level in terms of her emotional reality. We see what people around her see; sometimes we can perhaps see what a rat would see, following along alleys and dark streets. But do we really see inside of her? I wouldn’t say so. Except through her connection to movies and Denevue. But that’s really my problem with this book. I feel strongly like the parts dealing with movies could’ve made this book really interesting, in telling the story through her interaction with the screen. It just never took off for me, it very rarely felt like the ‘discussion’ on movies were anything more than summaries. Maybe I would feel differently if I had seen all of the movies in question, but I doubt it. What initially drew me to this book, after all, was the mention of her obsession with Catherine Denevue - and while I haven’t seen all of her movies, I’ve seen a few. Even when those movies were mentioned, I felt absolutely nothing in the description of them. I actually started to dread when the narrative shifted to movies after the halfway point. I just wanted to stay linked to Anh herself; had the book been more focused on her I think I would’ve gotten along with it better.
So what can I say to sum this up? I feel like this book had all the potential to be a great novel, I think many of the ideas Tawada had for this book were interesting but didn’t work in execution. I think she captured beautifully Anh’s experience of being an outsider (whether that be due to her illegal presence, her lack of language, or anything else), I think some points of her prose were sharp and showed an eye for something I want to see more of. I think if you read this book without trying to read too much into it, it will be a dull experience. If that’s useful to anyone, I’m glad. If not, then you might want to give it a try anyway - it might surprise you. I will be trying more of Tawada’s writing because I felt like there was something in this book, a little something that clicked with me, and I will be looking to find more of that in her later books.