I don't get the high ratings on this one.
First of all, this is not the sci-fi horror story it's pitched to be. BETA is more of a semi-psychological drama with a sprinkle of one, singular sci-fi element that isn't explained well or explored deeply. Despite what the cover or the back of the book might insinuate, the smart house isn't really the focus of this narrative for a good, like, 75% of the book.
I mean, I feel absolutely BAMBOOZLED by the author quotes on the back of this one. They throw around things like:
"intelligent, disquieting and seeping with originality"
"unparalleled writing"
"mind-bender of sci-fi terror"
"perfect example of how to build suspense"
"the very best kind of horror"
And I'm scratching my head wondering what tf they are on about.
Because instead of focusing on the smart house and the sci-fi horror elements, BETA is more about the romantic relationships of its protagonists, which absolutely baffles my mind. I did NOT expect to spend the vast majority of this book going on dates, messaging on FB, talking to people about romantic relationships (current and past), reminiscing about exes, reliving flashback scenes with exes, and exploring feelings. ugh
It was painful. Truly and utterly painful!
And speaking of painful... this should have been a novella. Instead of world building or character work or even plot development, the author spends an inordinate amount of time detailing every little unimportant and mundane thing you could imagine. I mean, this narrative is so stretched thin, it's really hanging on by a thread.
I think there's probably 100 to 150 pages of actual story here, but it's so bloated and over-written that the final page count ends up at an astonishing 359 pages.
If this book had an editor, I'd be shocked. Because between the romantic relationships and the obsession with mundane tasks, this book seems to be doing everything it can to avoid talking about the smart house or anything sci-fi horror related.
Just one example of an unnecessary, mundane scene is one where the protagonist is at a Barnes & Noble cafe. We get details on what it smells and sounds like there, what the guy is wearing, what he brought with him, even exactly where he placed his phone in front of him as he sits down to be a self-admitted stereotypical writer. His mother, who I don't think was mentioned previous to this, shows up and spends SIX ENTIRE PAGES telling her son about a recent blind date.
No joke, we hear about how Blind Date Dude was the hot guy at the office that all the girls drooled over, even though he was married at the time. They meet at Red Horse for dinner at 7pm. He texts ahead to say he's running 10 minutes late. Omg what a surprise that he's Doris' brother and he's single now!!
Now riddle me this. Wait, first look at the cover of this book. Peep the subtitle. NOW riddle me this...
Why on God's green earth am I reading about some "hot" old dude who's, "... definitely more Don Knotts than Don Draper" when he's not even a character that ever shows up again outside of this one scene?? Neither does mother for that matter!
And can someone tell me why, oh why, this author is so obsessed with romantic relationships that he's telling me about not just the central character's, but now the central character's MOTHER'S dating life. Wtf??
Like, why are we wasting time on this nonsense when there's supposed to be an evil smart house out here??? I mean. This book is called BETA: A Technological Nightmare... and then THERE'S NOT A LOT OF TECH OR NIGHTMARES.
Like I said, I've been bamboozled!!
I'm stunned at the lack of horror or even suspense and dread in this book. I'm pretty sure I cleared the halfway mark before anything that stank even remotely of horror arrived, and it had nothing to do with the smart house!! Because there aren't even that many scenes that take place in it!
Also, there's a twist here that seemed to think it was clever and slick, but it just made the story convoluted and confusing. I'm not here to spoil anything, so that's all I will say about that.
I'm rating Sammy Scott's BETA 2 out of 5 stars. I do need to say that I think there are good bones here and I'd try more by the author.
BETA isn't the worst indie "horror" book I've read, but it might be one of the most disappointing. I heard so many good things about this and to have praise from the likes of Jonathan Edward Durham, Andrew Van Wey, and Nick Roberts on the cover had me impressed.
After reading the book, however, all I am is BAMBOOZLED in every sense of the word.