Like the loveable but clueless Ken in the movie “Barbie,” I waste far too much time worrying about whether or not the plot of my novels is “enough.” Rather than trusting myself as a writer, I always need to be the showman—creating innovative social situations and flashy settings for every scene. In truth, readers are far more interested in quality writing and relatability. That’s why reading “Fall into Midnight” by Arden Coutts was so refreshing and rewarding.
True to the genre, the story begins with a little mystery and romance. Flanked by bodyguards, Dr. Hannah Winter ventures out to Club Midnight. She unexpectedly finds herself drawn to Gray Alexander, an enigmatic bouncer who spends her nights working security for a ruthless underworld boss. Initially, we don’t have a clue about what kind of threat Hannah is facing, but the suspense of the “not knowing” adds to the sexual tension and moves the story right along. With each chapter, Coutts expands the story with twists and turns that deepen the connection between Hannah and Gray, making it seem impossible for them to be together. Like a seasoned pro, Coutts lands the ending with an unexpected twist that neatly ties up all the loose ends and finally gives Hannah and Gray (and maybe even some of the secondary characters) the happy ending they’ve rightfully earned.
The story was exciting and entertaining, but the writing was next-level good. Coutts creates nuanced characters by showing (not telling) how each feel about the other. The attention to detail is calculated and creative, not clumsy. Carefully structured story development and thoughtful pacing make the budding romance between Hannah and Gray feel fresh and authentic. I loved “Fall into Midnight” and can’t wait to read the next installment of the series!