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Witches of the Dead Kingdom: Book 1 of the Davies Witches Saga
Once upon a time the almighty Dhia walked the realm of Earth, setting themselves up as gods over the humble mortals. Centuries have passed since their banishment and the Dhia have fallen out of human memory. The only connection between the Otherworld and Earth that remains is the crossing to Annwn, where the souls of the dead go to rest.
Odd, then, that Arawn, King of Annwn and High Lord of the Dead, has a mortal wife and stepson. The Dhia have turned a blind eye to this oddity for now, but Motoki is nearing the age of adulthood and his very presence in Annwn is dangerous. It would be wise for the Dhia to remember that High Lord Arawn is not to be underestimated when it comes to protecting his own.
Across the narrow divide on Earth the spirits of the dead are growing restless. Spirit Seeker, Louisa, is growing concerned, but none of the witches in her life seem to be too bothered by it. Louisa's suspicions turn into alarm when she runs into a young man from another world who needs her help to return to the Otherworld. But nothing is as it seems and hidden family secrets could, at best, get them killed and, at worst, could spark a war.
Witches of the Dead Kingdom is the first book of an exciting new Contemporary Adult Fantasy series by Australian author Ash Oldfield that blends Welsh mythology with modern day magic.
Odd, then, that Arawn, King of Annwn and High Lord of the Dead, has a mortal wife and stepson. The Dhia have turned a blind eye to this oddity for now, but Motoki is nearing the age of adulthood and his very presence in Annwn is dangerous. It would be wise for the Dhia to remember that High Lord Arawn is not to be underestimated when it comes to protecting his own.
Across the narrow divide on Earth the spirits of the dead are growing restless. Spirit Seeker, Louisa, is growing concerned, but none of the witches in her life seem to be too bothered by it. Louisa's suspicions turn into alarm when she runs into a young man from another world who needs her help to return to the Otherworld. But nothing is as it seems and hidden family secrets could, at best, get them killed and, at worst, could spark a war.
Witches of the Dead Kingdom is the first book of an exciting new Contemporary Adult Fantasy series by Australian author Ash Oldfield that blends Welsh mythology with modern day magic.
245 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 24, 2023
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Ash Oldfield
7 books33 followersAsh Oldfield is a fantasy fiction writer from Melbourne, Australia. She is the author of The Rachaya Series and The Davies Witches Saga and has several short works of fiction in various publications.
When she is not working on her latest piece of fiction, Ash enjoys drinking good coffee, taking her dog for walks on the beach and hanging out with her two cats.
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When she is not working on her latest piece of fiction, Ash enjoys drinking good coffee, taking her dog for walks on the beach and hanging out with her two cats.
Get the Ethereal Bridge Novellas FREE at www.asholdfield.com
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November 1, 2023
I couldn't put this book down!! Loved how this was based on Welsh mythology and spliced with modern day Melbourne. The characters grab you from the very beginning, but it was all the mystery and puzzles breadcrumbed through the story which made me keep turning the pages. I was kept on my toes the whole book trying to work out what was going to happen and I love a book that can do that. And there were some scenes that really pulled at my heartstrings, mainly near the beginning which surprised me since we were only just starting to get to know the characters and it takes real talent to do that. Fabulous book!
August 25, 2025
✨ARC Review✨
Ate this book right up! I love when fantasy and old folklore meets modern day life. Amazing writing and I could just picture how every character looked from their description. A must read for all the fantasy lovers out there, no spice but the story and twist and turns at the end makes up for it, seriously had my mouth open like ‘wtf’ towards the end. 😂
Really enjoyed this read and cannot wait for more, I know there has to be! Love love love 🥰
Ate this book right up! I love when fantasy and old folklore meets modern day life. Amazing writing and I could just picture how every character looked from their description. A must read for all the fantasy lovers out there, no spice but the story and twist and turns at the end makes up for it, seriously had my mouth open like ‘wtf’ towards the end. 😂
Really enjoyed this read and cannot wait for more, I know there has to be! Love love love 🥰
November 26, 2023
Witches of the Dead Kingdom is the first book in a new series by Ash Oldfield that blends Welsh Mythology with modern day magic in Melbourne.
I absolutely loved everything about this book! I always adore seeing Welsh representation in stories, and mixing Welsh mythology with gods, immortals and modern day witches in a contemporary high fantasy made it so much more appealing to me!
There were a lot of characters introduced right at the beginning, and it was a little hard to keep up with them all at first but it evened out about 30% through and I really enjoyed getting to know each of them more.
The world-building left a lot to the imagination, but it still didn’t take anything away from the story for me. There were quite a few twists and turns, and the way it would switch between the Otherworld and Melbourne with different point of views really kept me on my toes. And that ending! I did not see that coming!
The book was quite fast-paced but I still finished it way too quickly and I wish it would have been a bit longer, but I'm so excited for the next book!
*I received an advance review copy for free (thank you Ash Oldfield), and I am leaving this review voluntarily.*
I absolutely loved everything about this book! I always adore seeing Welsh representation in stories, and mixing Welsh mythology with gods, immortals and modern day witches in a contemporary high fantasy made it so much more appealing to me!
There were a lot of characters introduced right at the beginning, and it was a little hard to keep up with them all at first but it evened out about 30% through and I really enjoyed getting to know each of them more.
The world-building left a lot to the imagination, but it still didn’t take anything away from the story for me. There were quite a few twists and turns, and the way it would switch between the Otherworld and Melbourne with different point of views really kept me on my toes. And that ending! I did not see that coming!
The book was quite fast-paced but I still finished it way too quickly and I wish it would have been a bit longer, but I'm so excited for the next book!
*I received an advance review copy for free (thank you Ash Oldfield), and I am leaving this review voluntarily.*
November 1, 2023
Very grateful to have been part of the ARC team for Australian author Ash Oldfield’s new contemporary fantasy, Witches of the Dead Kingdom. I am leaving this review voluntarily 😊
An epic combination of gods, immortals and high fantasy versus modern day witches and contemporary fantasy. This story is one of excellence!
I wish the chapters that were half old world and half new world were actually written as two seperate chapters. It felt a bit jarring to switch that quickly from high fantasy to contemporary in the same chapter and be able to keep up. I found myself taking breaks in these chapters to allow myself to properly digest one part of the story before continuing onto the next.
But oh boy, when these two stories came together? OB👏🏻SESSED👏🏻 This book is sensational and I can’t wait to follow along as the rest of the series is written and published.
An epic combination of gods, immortals and high fantasy versus modern day witches and contemporary fantasy. This story is one of excellence!
I wish the chapters that were half old world and half new world were actually written as two seperate chapters. It felt a bit jarring to switch that quickly from high fantasy to contemporary in the same chapter and be able to keep up. I found myself taking breaks in these chapters to allow myself to properly digest one part of the story before continuing onto the next.
But oh boy, when these two stories came together? OB👏🏻SESSED👏🏻 This book is sensational and I can’t wait to follow along as the rest of the series is written and published.
November 1, 2023
With Elders and Otherworlds, denizens and mystics, ‘Witches of the Dead Kingdom’ had me enthralled.
Oldfield magically intertwines the lives of cousins Erin and Louisa, with brothers Motoki and Gil in dual timelines, until their worlds come together in a twist I just never expected!
I read it in two sittings and just *had* to stay up late into the night to finish it. Amazing, and so well written.
I received an advance copy of the book, but preorders are already available.
Oldfield magically intertwines the lives of cousins Erin and Louisa, with brothers Motoki and Gil in dual timelines, until their worlds come together in a twist I just never expected!
I read it in two sittings and just *had* to stay up late into the night to finish it. Amazing, and so well written.
I received an advance copy of the book, but preorders are already available.
November 22, 2023
Rating: 5/5 ⭐
Okay so I had to take a day to just think about the book and take some time to figure out what the actual heck happened at the end of the book because oh my god I didn’t expect that ending! The book is a fantasy that is partly inspired from Welsh mythology which I loved, it also has “Cruel Prince” vibes which was kinda unexpected since the plot’s are so different.
If you follow me on GoodReads or see some of the stories I posted on my Instagram you’ll know how much the suspense was killing me haha. I really wish I could say more about the book but if I do I’m sure I’ll unintentionally spoil something!
The one thing I came across in the book that was a bit weird to me was that some of the details weren’t entirely explained. The first part of the book mentioned an insult from one character to another but the insult itself was never explained. I made a guess later on based on some of the other events that occurred but until I figured that out I was quite confused about the insult that started everything.
Overall I really, really enjoyed this book and I think lovers of urban fantasy would really enjoy this book! Thank you Ash Oldfield for giving me the chance to read this ARC and I'm really looking forward to book 2 of the series!
Okay so I had to take a day to just think about the book and take some time to figure out what the actual heck happened at the end of the book because oh my god I didn’t expect that ending! The book is a fantasy that is partly inspired from Welsh mythology which I loved, it also has “Cruel Prince” vibes which was kinda unexpected since the plot’s are so different.
If you follow me on GoodReads or see some of the stories I posted on my Instagram you’ll know how much the suspense was killing me haha. I really wish I could say more about the book but if I do I’m sure I’ll unintentionally spoil something!
The one thing I came across in the book that was a bit weird to me was that some of the details weren’t entirely explained. The first part of the book mentioned an insult from one character to another but the insult itself was never explained. I made a guess later on based on some of the other events that occurred but until I figured that out I was quite confused about the insult that started everything.
Overall I really, really enjoyed this book and I think lovers of urban fantasy would really enjoy this book! Thank you Ash Oldfield for giving me the chance to read this ARC and I'm really looking forward to book 2 of the series!
November 7, 2023
This book is amazing! The characters, the relationships, the worldbuilding, the multiple points of view, the twists, the tone, the foreshadowing— all of it was brilliantly executed. I especially loved that this is a story of brothers, sisters, and parents & children. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
November 18, 2023
An enthralling story that cleverly combines elements of urban witches and the mythology of the Welsh Mabinogion, straddling the border between epic and modern fantasy. The author creates a unique story around a set of main characters that drive the story. All characters - even the supporting ones - are nicely fleshed out and super relatable.
There isn't a huge amount of plot, but the story works with a lot of suspense that makes the reader turn the pages, because you just need to know what's going to happen next!
I think the worldbuilding could be expanded on, and I would have liked a bit more detail aboutLouisa's and Gil's relationship.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book, which I received as an ARC. Thank you for the opportunity to read this gem. I hope there will be a second installment! 🙌
Absolutely recommended if you enjoy epic fantasy x contemporay, urban fantasy, parallel realms, alternate realities, and a flamboyant cast of characters.
There isn't a huge amount of plot, but the story works with a lot of suspense that makes the reader turn the pages, because you just need to know what's going to happen next!
I think the worldbuilding could be expanded on, and I would have liked a bit more detail aboutLouisa's and Gil's relationship.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book, which I received as an ARC. Thank you for the opportunity to read this gem. I hope there will be a second installment! 🙌
Absolutely recommended if you enjoy epic fantasy x contemporay, urban fantasy, parallel realms, alternate realities, and a flamboyant cast of characters.
October 24, 2023
I have had the great pleasure of receiving this book as an ARC.
This is the first book that i have read from this author and honestly have enjoyed her style of writing.
I found the book fast paced and couldn't put it down. All the main characters were likable and a few unexpected twists to the tale.
I have bought a preorder paperback of this book as it will be one that i will reread numerous times.
I will look forward to the next book.
This is the first book that i have read from this author and honestly have enjoyed her style of writing.
I found the book fast paced and couldn't put it down. All the main characters were likable and a few unexpected twists to the tale.
I have bought a preorder paperback of this book as it will be one that i will reread numerous times.
I will look forward to the next book.
November 13, 2023
Witches of the Dead Kingdom – Ash Oldfield
I was given an ARC copy of this story.
Ash Oldfield is an Australian fantasy author who resides in Melbourne. She is also known for her works - The Rachaya Series.
The Dhia where ancient magical people that use to walk the Earth, Gods over the mere mortals that inhabited the Earth.
Now centuries have passed and the humans that inhabit the Earth no longer know of the Dhia and what they mean.
The only connection now between the Otherworld and Earth is where the dead go to rest, the crossing to Anwnn.
Louisa comes from a line of witches on Earth and senses the spirits of the Earth growing increasingly restless but her sister and none of the other witches she knows shows any concern.
Then she has the strangest visitor, who she soon discovers is none other than the mortal son of the King of Anwnn - Motoki. But he is trapped on Earth and his only chance to get home is with the help of the mortal witch and her friends.
His arrival though isn’t a coincidence, can she discover what is upsetting the spirits and return Motoki to the only home he has ever known.
‘Witches of the Dead Kingdom” is a short fantasy story combined with some Welsh mythology. The premise for this story was something that sounded really entertaining and enjoyable, but I just couldn’t get into it. I struggled a lot to engage with the story, world and characters for a good third of the book. Overall, it was a jarring read to the point I almost didn’t finish it. If the world building was worked on and the language used to describe the world and characters was more relatable, it would have made the characters more relatable and would have really improved this story for me.
I was given an ARC copy of this story.
Ash Oldfield is an Australian fantasy author who resides in Melbourne. She is also known for her works - The Rachaya Series.
The Dhia where ancient magical people that use to walk the Earth, Gods over the mere mortals that inhabited the Earth.
Now centuries have passed and the humans that inhabit the Earth no longer know of the Dhia and what they mean.
The only connection now between the Otherworld and Earth is where the dead go to rest, the crossing to Anwnn.
Louisa comes from a line of witches on Earth and senses the spirits of the Earth growing increasingly restless but her sister and none of the other witches she knows shows any concern.
Then she has the strangest visitor, who she soon discovers is none other than the mortal son of the King of Anwnn - Motoki. But he is trapped on Earth and his only chance to get home is with the help of the mortal witch and her friends.
His arrival though isn’t a coincidence, can she discover what is upsetting the spirits and return Motoki to the only home he has ever known.
‘Witches of the Dead Kingdom” is a short fantasy story combined with some Welsh mythology. The premise for this story was something that sounded really entertaining and enjoyable, but I just couldn’t get into it. I struggled a lot to engage with the story, world and characters for a good third of the book. Overall, it was a jarring read to the point I almost didn’t finish it. If the world building was worked on and the language used to describe the world and characters was more relatable, it would have made the characters more relatable and would have really improved this story for me.
October 29, 2023
This was a really fun read! I loved the settings - the Otherworld really hit that folklore nostalgia itch for me, and the matter-of-fact magic intertwined with a modern city had an enjoyable magical realism feel. I'm a huge fan of all the magical beings sprinkled into the story, and the links to Welsh mythology were amazing.
I almost wish it had been longer! I did have some lingering questions through the book - some were answered as the story unfolded, but some stuck around. I don't mind a bit of mystery though, and I'm hoping the author comes back to explore some of these hints in more depth in future books. What's Gran's story? What's the deal with Gwidion? Why is Earth forbidden? I want to see more of Erin and Louisa's relationship (outside of everything they dealt with in this book!), and I'm soo intrigued by (relationship spoiler) and I'm looking forward to seeing their story develop.
This would be a good read for YA audiences, or adults who love to go along with the vibes and not get too caught up in the nitty gritty of the hows and whys. It's light-hearted, whimsical, and has got a great cast of magical and non-magical characters to root for.
Please note that this is my honest review of an advanced reader copy. My overall rating is 3.5 stars, rounded up to 4 stars for Goodreads.
I almost wish it had been longer! I did have some lingering questions through the book - some were answered as the story unfolded, but some stuck around. I don't mind a bit of mystery though, and I'm hoping the author comes back to explore some of these hints in more depth in future books. What's Gran's story? What's the deal with Gwidion? Why is Earth forbidden? I want to see more of Erin and Louisa's relationship (outside of everything they dealt with in this book!), and I'm soo intrigued by (relationship spoiler) and I'm looking forward to seeing their story develop.
This would be a good read for YA audiences, or adults who love to go along with the vibes and not get too caught up in the nitty gritty of the hows and whys. It's light-hearted, whimsical, and has got a great cast of magical and non-magical characters to root for.
Please note that this is my honest review of an advanced reader copy. My overall rating is 3.5 stars, rounded up to 4 stars for Goodreads.
December 20, 2023
I received an ARC for this book from the author. Thank you. Though I was sent this, it will be my honest opinion and will try and stay spoiler free.
This contemporary fantasy has all the seasonings of the perfect read! Witches, folklore, dual world setting, and adventure of sorts. Ash Oldfield brings Welsh Legends of Anwnn to life in this book, mixing it with modern-day Melbourne. Which, in a way, for me, added a splash of minor magical realism. It was a very fast-paced read, which I loved, and I want the second book now, please aha. I give this one a 4.5💫 rounded down.
The story follows the cast of four main characters Louisa, Erin, Matoki, and Gil in an MPOV and dual timeline story. Louisa and Erin, being humans, witches from the beautiful bustling city of Melbourne, Victoria. Matoki and Gil are from Anwnn, the Welsh underworld of sorts. It's a magical realm that is spilling to the brim with a cast of legends and folklore. Matoki, though unlike Gil, is human, his mother is also human is the wife of the king of Anwnn.
The two worlds are kept separate and have their own timelines, but upon Matokis coming of age, he and Gil sneak out into the human world, and he finally gets a taste of human life.
On the two main male characters, Gil, I didn't really like until towards the end. I felt his role in the book was to play the playboy, womaniser extraordinare and I found him rather flat and two dimensional, very predictable as how he was cast into the story and instead of being fleshed out he was shallow. The situation between him and Louisa was slightly predictable and well confusing in a way. As here he is magically wealthy, sleeps around and all he wants is alcohol, sex and parties and he has a one night stand and suddenly he is in like love and pines for Louisa a forbidden fruit of sorts. Which had me go, huh? But then again, I am one who doesn't really get the instalove/love at first sight trope.
Though, after his one night rompe session with Louisa, he shifted, and there was a change in character and personality. I then enjoyed it, and he was an easy pill to swallow from then on. I was actually rooting for him and the Louisa thing towards the end, so you can say after his epiphany, it seems Oldfield won me over with him.
Matoki, on the other hand, I felt bad for him, his story, but to me, his character felt a little lacklustre. Like to me, the personality and parts of the other 3 mains well overshadowed him. Which made me feel more sad for the guy. He was the only human besides his mom in a world of fantasy creatures and people. So he was often sidelined or in the shadows. Now, in the human world, once again, it was like that as well. Overshadowed by the city, overshadowed by Gil and I mean the interactions between he and Louisa, he felt substantial until Louisa would have her Gil moments in thought. I enjoyed Matoki until he was paired with Gil in the real world. That was when, to me, their storyline kind of fell flat, and I feel the focus shifted more on the witches. Though the ending had me feeling sad, mad, and like I wanted to destroy for Matoki, so although he wasn't a favourite, I still had a connection.
Back into the story aspect of the review.
Gil and his stepbrother Matoki use their usual ways to live amongst humans for over a year. Though time is running out for one, and they must find a Witch or witches to help them get back to Anwnn. This here enters my favourite character, Louisa, and her cousin Erin; whom I had a love-hate relationship with. Erin is full of magic and should be on the witches council. While Louisa, well, the superior magic gene seemed to skip her, and she got some random power of seeing spirits. Louisa kind of reminded me of a grown-up Mildred Hubble from The Worst Witch. Together, they run a witchy store in the heart of Melb.
Erin, she is a roller coaster character, and you find out why at the end, which made me love her, but until then, I wanted to punch her. She is so unkind and stand-offish towards Louisa, who has been like a sister since childhood. She also is a gay character that feeds into slightly lesbian stereotypes; which myself as a gay woman, did have me cringe slightly. Though it wasn't to the point that made me annoyed or mad like in other books I have read. Hopefully, in the next book, we get to know the real Louisa.
Now, onto my favourite character, Louisa. I feel so bad for her. She lost her Nan, she might lose her livelihood and is trying all sorts of things to survive and Erin, the only person she seems to have in this world could care less. This makes her have an emotional journey, and I think come the end shows how strong and resilient she is. Again, instalove odd, but I think her pairing with Gil is okay; even though I feel like her and Matoki would have been more suitable. I hope the next book has heaps more from Louisa.
Now, the rest of the review. All in all, the book was well written and composed of all the right parts, and it kept me hooked. I did struggle with the dual timeline at times as the Anwnn chapters felt farther and farther apart, and I found myself forgetting what was even going on. Which was bothersome for me because I couldn't focus and found myself skimming these chapters to get back to the Melbourne timeline, which is the bulk part of the book.
The MPOV was not an issue. I like MPOV, and I saw in some reviews that people complain about MPOV in this. It was literally spoken about upon ARC sign up that this was a multiple point of view story. That is on you, not the author, for missing that.
Another thing I see negatives about is the language or wording used. The author is from Melbourne, Australia. The bulk of the story is set in Melbourne, Australia. Of course, she will include language or wording normal for anyone in Melbourne to understand. I am American but have lived in Australia almost half my life, though in a different state, I was able to pick up what Ash Oldfield was trying to say or describe. As for the Welsh incorporated within the book, it's a book based on Welsh Legends and Lore. Of course, it's going to be in the book. If I found myself struggling, I goggled the meaning.
All in all, it was a great read, and I can't wait for the next one to come out.
This contemporary fantasy has all the seasonings of the perfect read! Witches, folklore, dual world setting, and adventure of sorts. Ash Oldfield brings Welsh Legends of Anwnn to life in this book, mixing it with modern-day Melbourne. Which, in a way, for me, added a splash of minor magical realism. It was a very fast-paced read, which I loved, and I want the second book now, please aha. I give this one a 4.5💫 rounded down.
The story follows the cast of four main characters Louisa, Erin, Matoki, and Gil in an MPOV and dual timeline story. Louisa and Erin, being humans, witches from the beautiful bustling city of Melbourne, Victoria. Matoki and Gil are from Anwnn, the Welsh underworld of sorts. It's a magical realm that is spilling to the brim with a cast of legends and folklore. Matoki, though unlike Gil, is human, his mother is also human is the wife of the king of Anwnn.
The two worlds are kept separate and have their own timelines, but upon Matokis coming of age, he and Gil sneak out into the human world, and he finally gets a taste of human life.
On the two main male characters, Gil, I didn't really like until towards the end. I felt his role in the book was to play the playboy, womaniser extraordinare and I found him rather flat and two dimensional, very predictable as how he was cast into the story and instead of being fleshed out he was shallow. The situation between him and Louisa was slightly predictable and well confusing in a way. As here he is magically wealthy, sleeps around and all he wants is alcohol, sex and parties and he has a one night stand and suddenly he is in like love and pines for Louisa a forbidden fruit of sorts. Which had me go, huh? But then again, I am one who doesn't really get the instalove/love at first sight trope.
Though, after his one night rompe session with Louisa, he shifted, and there was a change in character and personality. I then enjoyed it, and he was an easy pill to swallow from then on. I was actually rooting for him and the Louisa thing towards the end, so you can say after his epiphany, it seems Oldfield won me over with him.
Matoki, on the other hand, I felt bad for him, his story, but to me, his character felt a little lacklustre. Like to me, the personality and parts of the other 3 mains well overshadowed him. Which made me feel more sad for the guy. He was the only human besides his mom in a world of fantasy creatures and people. So he was often sidelined or in the shadows. Now, in the human world, once again, it was like that as well. Overshadowed by the city, overshadowed by Gil and I mean the interactions between he and Louisa, he felt substantial until Louisa would have her Gil moments in thought. I enjoyed Matoki until he was paired with Gil in the real world. That was when, to me, their storyline kind of fell flat, and I feel the focus shifted more on the witches. Though the ending had me feeling sad, mad, and like I wanted to destroy for Matoki, so although he wasn't a favourite, I still had a connection.
Back into the story aspect of the review.
Gil and his stepbrother Matoki use their usual ways to live amongst humans for over a year. Though time is running out for one, and they must find a Witch or witches to help them get back to Anwnn. This here enters my favourite character, Louisa, and her cousin Erin; whom I had a love-hate relationship with. Erin is full of magic and should be on the witches council. While Louisa, well, the superior magic gene seemed to skip her, and she got some random power of seeing spirits. Louisa kind of reminded me of a grown-up Mildred Hubble from The Worst Witch. Together, they run a witchy store in the heart of Melb.
Erin, she is a roller coaster character, and you find out why at the end, which made me love her, but until then, I wanted to punch her. She is so unkind and stand-offish towards Louisa, who has been like a sister since childhood. She also is a gay character that feeds into slightly lesbian stereotypes; which myself as a gay woman, did have me cringe slightly. Though it wasn't to the point that made me annoyed or mad like in other books I have read. Hopefully, in the next book, we get to know the real Louisa.
Now, onto my favourite character, Louisa. I feel so bad for her. She lost her Nan, she might lose her livelihood and is trying all sorts of things to survive and Erin, the only person she seems to have in this world could care less. This makes her have an emotional journey, and I think come the end shows how strong and resilient she is. Again, instalove odd, but I think her pairing with Gil is okay; even though I feel like her and Matoki would have been more suitable. I hope the next book has heaps more from Louisa.
Now, the rest of the review. All in all, the book was well written and composed of all the right parts, and it kept me hooked. I did struggle with the dual timeline at times as the Anwnn chapters felt farther and farther apart, and I found myself forgetting what was even going on. Which was bothersome for me because I couldn't focus and found myself skimming these chapters to get back to the Melbourne timeline, which is the bulk part of the book.
The MPOV was not an issue. I like MPOV, and I saw in some reviews that people complain about MPOV in this. It was literally spoken about upon ARC sign up that this was a multiple point of view story. That is on you, not the author, for missing that.
Another thing I see negatives about is the language or wording used. The author is from Melbourne, Australia. The bulk of the story is set in Melbourne, Australia. Of course, she will include language or wording normal for anyone in Melbourne to understand. I am American but have lived in Australia almost half my life, though in a different state, I was able to pick up what Ash Oldfield was trying to say or describe. As for the Welsh incorporated within the book, it's a book based on Welsh Legends and Lore. Of course, it's going to be in the book. If I found myself struggling, I goggled the meaning.
All in all, it was a great read, and I can't wait for the next one to come out.
October 31, 2023
Thanks Ash and BookFunnel for providing me with an advanced reader copy of your book! The review below is my honest opinion of the book. The premise is the biggest reason that I requested this ARC, aside from me being a huge fantasy fan. A modern fantasy, set in my current city of Melbourne? Sign me up.
From the get go the first thing I've noticed is that this book is quite short for a fantasy. Having read several series of fantasy before, I am used to books being at least 500 pages long, but according to Storygraph (which is my main reading account), this book is only 252 pages long. I blazed through it quite fast as it is a nice and easy read. However, I couldn't help but feel that because of the short length of the book some of the character development and worldbuilding were rushed, especially in some of the first chapters where a lot of kings and queens characters were introduced. Another thing, which might also be remedied in the printed version (because I was reading on my Kindle) was that the world map was split in half. I loved me a map at the start of the book and managed to stitch together the two halves with a bit of graphic design, but it would be great if this could be optimised for the ebook.
The character of Motoki was probably my favourite part of the book, along with seeing the Melbourne landmarks I'm familiar with being mentioned throughout the story. I'm particularly interested in Arawn, he sounds like a complex personality that could be expanded further in later books. I can see how Gil would be a fan favourite, but he felt a bit one-dimensional to me, although he does seem very genuine and endearing. Unfortunately, I was not that interested in the pairing of Gil and Louisa, did not feel much chemistry or romantic tension between them.
The ending again, was quite rushed to me as I did not feel like the stakes were high enough (at the 70% mark on my Kindle I still don't know what/where the climax will be), but it did set up promising developments for future installments. I'll be continuing this series once book 2 is out.
From the get go the first thing I've noticed is that this book is quite short for a fantasy. Having read several series of fantasy before, I am used to books being at least 500 pages long, but according to Storygraph (which is my main reading account), this book is only 252 pages long. I blazed through it quite fast as it is a nice and easy read. However, I couldn't help but feel that because of the short length of the book some of the character development and worldbuilding were rushed, especially in some of the first chapters where a lot of kings and queens characters were introduced. Another thing, which might also be remedied in the printed version (because I was reading on my Kindle) was that the world map was split in half. I loved me a map at the start of the book and managed to stitch together the two halves with a bit of graphic design, but it would be great if this could be optimised for the ebook.
The character of Motoki was probably my favourite part of the book, along with seeing the Melbourne landmarks I'm familiar with being mentioned throughout the story. I'm particularly interested in Arawn, he sounds like a complex personality that could be expanded further in later books. I can see how Gil would be a fan favourite, but he felt a bit one-dimensional to me, although he does seem very genuine and endearing. Unfortunately, I was not that interested in the pairing of Gil and Louisa, did not feel much chemistry or romantic tension between them.
The ending again, was quite rushed to me as I did not feel like the stakes were high enough (at the 70% mark on my Kindle I still don't know what/where the climax will be), but it did set up promising developments for future installments. I'll be continuing this series once book 2 is out.
November 11, 2023
3.75/5
This was a very unique and fun little read. Overall I did enjoy it.
I often don't read synopses and I was gifted an e-arc of this by the author, so I was quite surprised to read the synopsis after I finished the book and find a lot of worldbuilding in the first paragraph that I didn't actually get from the book at all. I did find the world building around the gods and the otherworld not entirely clear. The synopsis says that the dead go there, but I didn't pick that up from the book? But the gods are not dead but immortal, right? I dunno, there's just a lot of questions for me that weren't explained.
I did enjoy how the otherworld seemed to be full of very unique and interesting creatures. I'm just still unclear where the dead come into it...
At times I felt the dialogue and transitions felt a little awkward. I didn't immediately warm to the earth-based storyline. Some parts felt like they could have been fleshed out a little more.
However I have to say, I really liked the final 10-20% of the story, I liked the reveals and twists at the end and how it all came together.
The thing with Gil and Louisa felt a bit odd to me, and I felt more chemistry between her and Motoki than her and Gil.
I did enjoy the Welsh mythology and language, as it's not something seen as often as other types of mythology. I also liked that the earth-based portions were in Melbourne, not something often seen in fantasy/urban fantasy!
It's a slightly quirky read and probably a little more "cosy" than I would have expected from the cover, but I did like the experience, especially as the story progressed, and I would read the next one.
This was a very unique and fun little read. Overall I did enjoy it.
I often don't read synopses and I was gifted an e-arc of this by the author, so I was quite surprised to read the synopsis after I finished the book and find a lot of worldbuilding in the first paragraph that I didn't actually get from the book at all. I did find the world building around the gods and the otherworld not entirely clear. The synopsis says that the dead go there, but I didn't pick that up from the book? But the gods are not dead but immortal, right? I dunno, there's just a lot of questions for me that weren't explained.
I did enjoy how the otherworld seemed to be full of very unique and interesting creatures. I'm just still unclear where the dead come into it...
At times I felt the dialogue and transitions felt a little awkward. I didn't immediately warm to the earth-based storyline. Some parts felt like they could have been fleshed out a little more.
However I have to say, I really liked the final 10-20% of the story, I liked the reveals and twists at the end and how it all came together.
The thing with Gil and Louisa felt a bit odd to me, and I felt more chemistry between her and Motoki than her and Gil.
I did enjoy the Welsh mythology and language, as it's not something seen as often as other types of mythology. I also liked that the earth-based portions were in Melbourne, not something often seen in fantasy/urban fantasy!
It's a slightly quirky read and probably a little more "cosy" than I would have expected from the cover, but I did like the experience, especially as the story progressed, and I would read the next one.
November 24, 2023
Arc Review 🙌
Well where to start with this book ? Well it’s a very nice read. There is a lot and I mean a lot of Lore that you kind of get thrown into but hey sink or swim right ? The characters are developed really well, from the smallest of roles to the main ones. The detail into who they are is created really well which can be difficult when you’re trying to build a whole realm plus create the actual storyline. Overall though nothing really loses out, the plot is good, jumps around a bit especially in the beginning but it helps you get a grasp on the characters and their backstories and their current stories plus build Lore for the world. The story progresses well and the the unexpected twists are definitely something that for sure. You’re definitely kept on your toes with this one. The world building is done excellently too and the addition of the map at the start of the book really helps your understand the dynamics. The ending is definitely unexpected, I honestly would never have seen that coming at all! Overall I would have to say this is the beginning of what I think is going to be a great series. The world it’s built in is so interesting I’d love to see where the story line progresses from following this book. I’d have to rate it a 4/5, I do feel there was a lot of Lore to take in which could get overwhelming at times but it didn’t hinder the story line, it was just a lot to keep up with. I would definitely recommend checking it out especially if Otherworldly creatures and Witches are your thing cause it definitely gives you both. Keen for the next one Ash Oldfield
Well where to start with this book ? Well it’s a very nice read. There is a lot and I mean a lot of Lore that you kind of get thrown into but hey sink or swim right ? The characters are developed really well, from the smallest of roles to the main ones. The detail into who they are is created really well which can be difficult when you’re trying to build a whole realm plus create the actual storyline. Overall though nothing really loses out, the plot is good, jumps around a bit especially in the beginning but it helps you get a grasp on the characters and their backstories and their current stories plus build Lore for the world. The story progresses well and the the unexpected twists are definitely something that for sure. You’re definitely kept on your toes with this one. The world building is done excellently too and the addition of the map at the start of the book really helps your understand the dynamics. The ending is definitely unexpected, I honestly would never have seen that coming at all! Overall I would have to say this is the beginning of what I think is going to be a great series. The world it’s built in is so interesting I’d love to see where the story line progresses from following this book. I’d have to rate it a 4/5, I do feel there was a lot of Lore to take in which could get overwhelming at times but it didn’t hinder the story line, it was just a lot to keep up with. I would definitely recommend checking it out especially if Otherworldly creatures and Witches are your thing cause it definitely gives you both. Keen for the next one Ash Oldfield
October 28, 2023
I received “Witches of the Dead” as an advanced reading copy. I am leaving my honest review and give this fast paced fantasy a 3.5 ⭐️ rating.
I absolutely loved the concept of this book being based on medieval welsh literature and the use of the welsh language throughout the book, this really connected me to the characters.
The story of Louisa, Erin, Motoki and Gil tells a fantasy story of immortal, mortal and witch characters that collide between realms and worlds.
Please refer to the Blurb to gain a better understanding of what this book is about. I don’t think I can do it justice in my own words trying to explain it.
Personally as a reader the only reason I didn’t rate this higher was simply because I struggled initially (up until about 20% in) to follow the story line with the world building and use of language used to describe the characters and world. However it’s also important to note that fantasy books sometimes have this affect on how I rate books. My rating does not reflect the amazing writing of this author at all simply my own personal struggles as a fantasy reader. I would have loved to have seen a little more in depth spice between the two main characters in this book too as there was so much potential there.
Lastly I will be continuing to read this series as it truly was a great and easy read once the flow of the book happened for me. Thankyou so much Ash for sharing this beautiful read!
December 15, 2023
A fun and feisty fantasy read that packs a wallop at the end with a shocking plot twist that I did not see coming. This was an enjoyable read from start to finish. Oldfield is a writer of solidly good fantasy novels, but she cranks it up a notch in The Witches of the Dead Kingdom. More adult than her Rachaya series this is still a clean read, although there are lustful thoughts and doings aplenty, and the themes and behaviour of the characters are not for the very young reader.
I liked that for once this was a fantasy read that didn’t focus on the rip-your-soul-out love between a mortal and a non-mortal. Instead, there is a strong emphasis on sibling and familial love and connections — how far would you go to protect a loved one? Would you go to another world? Oh, don’t get me wrong, there was enough chemistry to satisfy, and I am hopeful that in the next book, the couple I want to get together do. Although, that is going to lead to a very awkward conversation between the two of them. Speaking of which, no spoilers, but that shocking ending I mentioned has left me asking questions and drawing conclusions that made my eyebrows raise and want to read book two immediately.
A thumping great five stars from me and a plea to the author to hurry up and write the sequel.
I liked that for once this was a fantasy read that didn’t focus on the rip-your-soul-out love between a mortal and a non-mortal. Instead, there is a strong emphasis on sibling and familial love and connections — how far would you go to protect a loved one? Would you go to another world? Oh, don’t get me wrong, there was enough chemistry to satisfy, and I am hopeful that in the next book, the couple I want to get together do. Although, that is going to lead to a very awkward conversation between the two of them. Speaking of which, no spoilers, but that shocking ending I mentioned has left me asking questions and drawing conclusions that made my eyebrows raise and want to read book two immediately.
A thumping great five stars from me and a plea to the author to hurry up and write the sequel.
October 31, 2023
3.5 stars
I initially struggled to get into this book much like others, but my reasoning I think was a little bit different to others. I really struggled to resonate and enjoy the chapters with Motoki and Gil! I’m not sure why, maybe it’s not what I expected from the book? I don’t know.
HOWEVER the storyline of Louisa and Erin, I ATE UP! I absolutely love Louisa, and if I can just have a whole cozy book about her and her spirit seeking, interacting with spirits and following her as a character I would be other the moon! She is such an exciting and interesting character! Erin bothered me a lot at the end, but I can’t give away why without spoilers. She was a bit cliche in the end for me.
All in all, the world building was great, I did find it difficult at times to follow what was going on but that’s ok! That’s my problem, not the author. I’d recommend this for anyone who enjoys a magic based story, but bought into the real world.
I initially struggled to get into this book much like others, but my reasoning I think was a little bit different to others. I really struggled to resonate and enjoy the chapters with Motoki and Gil! I’m not sure why, maybe it’s not what I expected from the book? I don’t know.
HOWEVER the storyline of Louisa and Erin, I ATE UP! I absolutely love Louisa, and if I can just have a whole cozy book about her and her spirit seeking, interacting with spirits and following her as a character I would be other the moon! She is such an exciting and interesting character! Erin bothered me a lot at the end, but I can’t give away why without spoilers. She was a bit cliche in the end for me.
All in all, the world building was great, I did find it difficult at times to follow what was going on but that’s ok! That’s my problem, not the author. I’d recommend this for anyone who enjoys a magic based story, but bought into the real world.
November 6, 2023
Firstly I just need to say that I am so grateful to have received an advanced copy of this book.
I loved the concurrent plotlines intersecting each other; especially in the beginning of the book with a more classical fantasy setting based on Welsh myth intersecting the contemporary fantasy set in modern day Melbourne. The changing perspectives and writhing style made for a fast paced enjoyable read.
I loved seeing the similarities between our two groups of protagonists as the plot went on. It was particularly fun to see what happens when someone from a high fantasy world has to struggle to survive in a modern city.
However, this book is held back from being a 5 star for me as early on the world building felt a bit slow but that is generally what you expect from the first book in a fantasy series. Otherwise, great read and I am excited to see where the story goes when book 2 comes out.
I loved the concurrent plotlines intersecting each other; especially in the beginning of the book with a more classical fantasy setting based on Welsh myth intersecting the contemporary fantasy set in modern day Melbourne. The changing perspectives and writhing style made for a fast paced enjoyable read.
I loved seeing the similarities between our two groups of protagonists as the plot went on. It was particularly fun to see what happens when someone from a high fantasy world has to struggle to survive in a modern city.
However, this book is held back from being a 5 star for me as early on the world building felt a bit slow but that is generally what you expect from the first book in a fantasy series. Otherwise, great read and I am excited to see where the story goes when book 2 comes out.
November 16, 2023
I loved the concept of this book, and grateful to have received an advanced copy.
Similar to some other reviews, I found the concurrent stories jarring and difficult to jump between. Separating them out would be reasonable idea. There’s a lot of characters introduced in a short space of reading time and a pronunciation guide would be beneficial for some of these. I nearly didn’t persevere.
Ash has a unique writing style, and did well to world build in a short fantasy book but there’s a lot of atypical language used which has a place but is used far too often and was at the detriment of not being able to be drawn in more.
I had hope hoped for more here, but is entirely a reflection of my preferences when reading. Ash is clearly a talented writer and it has potential to shape up to a solid series.
Similar to some other reviews, I found the concurrent stories jarring and difficult to jump between. Separating them out would be reasonable idea. There’s a lot of characters introduced in a short space of reading time and a pronunciation guide would be beneficial for some of these. I nearly didn’t persevere.
Ash has a unique writing style, and did well to world build in a short fantasy book but there’s a lot of atypical language used which has a place but is used far too often and was at the detriment of not being able to be drawn in more.
I had hope hoped for more here, but is entirely a reflection of my preferences when reading. Ash is clearly a talented writer and it has potential to shape up to a solid series.
December 15, 2023
Witches of the Dead Kingdom is a multi-realm paranormal and fantasy folklore feast! Her world building and lore-unraveling are incredibly well balanced with moving the plot forward and creating very relatable characters. Cousins Louisa and Erin are magic users and live in modern day Australia and brothers Gil and Motoki are from another realm and time. There is a lot of raw emotion in this story, it will tug at your heartstrings relating not only to family, but friendships and relationships too. The timelines converge in a totally unexpected way, with family history interweaving the characters and sending the reader reeling. This is only book one, and I’m so excited to see how this all plays out!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 1, 2023
I received a copy of this book as an ARC.
I really wanted to enjoy this book, reading the blurb made me really excited to read this. However, once I started reading I had a few problems.
While the premise of the story was amazing, and the writing was good, there were a lot of plot holes in the beginning of the story. These were (I believe) all addressed by the end of the story, but it made for a very jarring reading experience at the start of the story.
For me there were too many very different stories being combined, the story felt rushed and confusing, and the characters felt unrelatable.
I really wanted to enjoy this book, reading the blurb made me really excited to read this. However, once I started reading I had a few problems.
While the premise of the story was amazing, and the writing was good, there were a lot of plot holes in the beginning of the story. These were (I believe) all addressed by the end of the story, but it made for a very jarring reading experience at the start of the story.
For me there were too many very different stories being combined, the story felt rushed and confusing, and the characters felt unrelatable.
December 11, 2023
Book 📚: Witches Of The Dead Kingdom.
Author ✍️: @asholdfieldauthor
Rate:⭐⭐⭐⭐/⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Genre: mythology.
Pages: 404
Review:
An ARC read.
First of all Thank you @asholdfieldauthor for the ARC copy of this book.
This is the first book of an exciting new contemporary adult fantasy series.
A mixture of Welsh mythology with modern day magic.
The starting of the book was a bit confusing and slow moving, but the way their world intervene it becomes and interesting read.. and don't get me telling about the ending... Omg instead of me telling much how about you guys go and read this book..
#bookreview #review #ARC
Author ✍️: @asholdfieldauthor
Rate:⭐⭐⭐⭐/⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Genre: mythology.
Pages: 404
Review:
An ARC read.
First of all Thank you @asholdfieldauthor for the ARC copy of this book.
This is the first book of an exciting new contemporary adult fantasy series.
A mixture of Welsh mythology with modern day magic.
The starting of the book was a bit confusing and slow moving, but the way their world intervene it becomes and interesting read.. and don't get me telling about the ending... Omg instead of me telling much how about you guys go and read this book..
#bookreview #review #ARC
December 17, 2023
Witches of the Dead Kingdom is the first book of an exciting new fantasy series by Australian author Ash Oldfield that blends Welsh mythology with modern day magic - and it's so much fun. I loved the mix of the Otherworld (a magical realm for the gods) and Earth, and the mix of human and magical creatures and their interactions in both worlds. There's a thread of mystery throughout that keeps those pages turning, and a beautiful sibling relationship that really pulls at the heartstrings. A great start to a series, and I look forward to the lingering questions being answered in the next books.
November 5, 2023
I received this book as an ARC reader but everything I write is my own views.
There were moments I couldn't put the book down, where the storyline kept me engrossed. But also times where I didn't really care what happened to the characters. The last couple of chapters were incredible, but I was confused a lot. The POV was confusing, and I often couldn't work out who's part of the story I was reading. It was fascinating to see how it all came together, and it ended on a good note, but there are many characters I am still confused about.
There were moments I couldn't put the book down, where the storyline kept me engrossed. But also times where I didn't really care what happened to the characters. The last couple of chapters were incredible, but I was confused a lot. The POV was confusing, and I often couldn't work out who's part of the story I was reading. It was fascinating to see how it all came together, and it ended on a good note, but there are many characters I am still confused about.
November 28, 2023
i loved this story that combined two cleverly into one exciting magical adventure mystery. The contrast of the old Otherworld and the modern day setting of Melbourne was excellent. I was captivated by the magic shop and the cottage of the sisters. Louisa is a great character, not a tough, kick-ass heroine, but someone who doesn't realize she is as strong as she really is. Gil was another great character. He added some fun to the story.
I look forward to the next installment of this magical series.
I look forward to the next installment of this magical series.
October 28, 2023
I'm grateful to have had the opportunity to read this book early!
It was quite an enjoyable read. The story was moderate to fast paced, with a nice mixture of action and world building.
There were a lot of things that happened that I wasn't expecting and it will be good to do another read through and pick up all of the foreshadowing now that I know what it means!
I look forward to reading more books in this series ☺️
It was quite an enjoyable read. The story was moderate to fast paced, with a nice mixture of action and world building.
There were a lot of things that happened that I wasn't expecting and it will be good to do another read through and pick up all of the foreshadowing now that I know what it means!
I look forward to reading more books in this series ☺️
October 31, 2023
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC copy of this book. It was a wonderful story jumping between worlds and incorporating modern day ideas with fantasy. There were twists and turns as the parallel lives of the characters were explored. I enjoyed reading about each of the characters. The book could have been fleshed out further as it felt like it ended too soon but I look forward to reading more in this world of gods and mythical creatures intersecting with the human world.
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November 24, 2023Did not finish book. Stopped at 30%.
Thanks to the author for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review!
For me, the authors prose isn’t a style that I particularly enjoy. I found it to be a little too wordy at times, which made it flow in a way that I didn’t really like, which made it difficult for me to get into the story.
If you are looking for a unique story, with welsh mythology and (very) flowery prose, I think you’ll enjoy this book!
Thanks to the author for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review!
For me, the authors prose isn’t a style that I particularly enjoy. I found it to be a little too wordy at times, which made it flow in a way that I didn’t really like, which made it difficult for me to get into the story.
If you are looking for a unique story, with welsh mythology and (very) flowery prose, I think you’ll enjoy this book!
January 25, 2025
I met this author at Oz comic con last year and she was so lovely, so it's great to be able to say how fabulous this book is.
I live in Melbourne where part of this story is set so it was very interesting to read the city scenes. I loved being able to picture it in detail cos I know the city so well.
Also loved the characters and the mix of Welsh mythology in an urban fantasy. This was a unique story, full of mystery and intrigue. Looking forward to the next instalment.
I live in Melbourne where part of this story is set so it was very interesting to read the city scenes. I loved being able to picture it in detail cos I know the city so well.
Also loved the characters and the mix of Welsh mythology in an urban fantasy. This was a unique story, full of mystery and intrigue. Looking forward to the next instalment.
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