If you were asked to do something for the greater good—up to and including sacrificing yourself—would you? I think most people would do what we can. But I bet most would have trouble giving their life for the greater good. Heart Master is a story just like that. The fantasy novel from Nikolas Everhart, is an interesting story about a self-centered thief pulled into a much larger holy war by a heist gone wrong. I defiantly recommend the book as I was thoroughly entertained by the characters, engaging story and interesting setting, though I do still have questions about the world I felt should have been answered sooner.
The story has multiple point-of-view characters that help tell the tale. While most chapters are from the thief Draven’s perspective, we also get time with two other holy champions; Helena, a warrior with anger management issues, and Kell, a man with aspirations to be his mountain clan’s chieftain but instead called to action in the larger world unwillingly by his god. All three characters have very unique voices and world views which adds their own take on the plot. There’s also Seguris, the once-enslaved Merktwin sent on a mission of conquest. Seeing him change throughout the story and develop into the main antagonist was super interesting.
And while the plot took a short while to get going, once it did, I was hooked. Draven is almost a reluctant, morally gray character forced into this holy conflict, while Helena is the exact opposite, having regular conversations with her goddess. Seeing how different characters goals align (sometimes better than others) with others boosted my engagement with the story, not only leading me to care about their quest, but them as people, too.
With such an engaging plot and characters I cared about, I was a little disappointed to see how some bigger questions relating to the world and faith were left unanswered. I’ll admit that I’m used to reading fantasy works more akin to epic fantasy, and I felt this had the trappings of that: story set not on Earth, a large world filled with different people and cultures, at least one race/species of people different than others, a pantheon I knew nothing about. But it was those last two points I felt were lacking.
Starting with the the Merktwin, they are the only race of people called out as darker skinned, and one of the first things said about them was that many are still slaves. I wondered where they were from and what caused them to be in their situation, what truly made them different from others. We did get some answers, but they still feel like just another race of people in the world. And the fact that the only black characters are slaves or villains kinda rubbed me in an awkward way.
Finally, there is clearly a lot of lore that the author knows about the holy conflict, but very little is shared with the audience. There were a number of times that some god or other pushed someone to do something and I didn’t understand the motivation. It even felt like the god-characters were working against their own worshipers, which made me pause and ask questions. Since they were never answered in this book, this is the biggest thing I hope is addressed in the next.
And I do believe another is coming. And I really do see that as a good thing. With this story and characters are interesting as it is, I want to find out what happens next. Yes, I have some questions and concerns, but it isn’t enough to stop me from being excited for this book’s release and publication of the next. And I hope we get it soon.