good quick read. a little cheesy (no pun intended) and felt a little bit of a caricature or contrived. i know it's a comedy but some of it felt mocking rather than funny? but maybe that was the point...? something doesn't sit right with me using the personality of felons as comedy and then the lesson itself being felons aren't felons bc when you cannot reduce and essentialize someone's personhood. and just thinking about audiences who go to see this and having to be convinced that "felons" are actual people by buying a ticket to an entertainment show.... i dunno,,, something abt sensationalism in there... i think i'm being too critical of the power of media to change our perceptions but i'm also annoyed at white ppl whose personality is posing as a liberal and saying the right things but whose actions don't follow through.... anyways!
i feel like it just missed the mark in some ways? but reconsidering it now, i think Clyde character helps contextualize the "felon" essentialism/reduction also how it literally makes no sense to treat ppl that way, easy to identify when it's so hyperbolic.
some of the writing just felt too much like it was trying to hard to be natural, i think some of relationships between the characters themselves needed strengthening, again probably dif on stage but just felt liek these were unique characters but not quite connected to each other as they should have been (again maybe THE POINT but didn't feel a concrete/time owned bond between Monty, Tish, and Rafael that Jason completed interrupted)
i did loved Montrellous' takeon sandwhices, geting the ingredients right, not forcing flavors, all that.
i liked scenes 12 to the end of the play. some good Montrellous wisdom, "we can be replaced, but we aren't replaceable"
giving it a 3.5/5 i think i'm too much of a critical snob to enjoy things that are actually good, so i'll work on that and not being so judgemental :-) maybe i'll try Sweat by Nottage next. never really read a play For Fun.... i fear i may rip through some plays here.... :o