Her Wedding Night

Conception Ridge #7

by Chloe Maine

I didn’t choose tonight to be my wedding night. And no matter what, a stalker will get to claim my innocence…

I’m tricked onto a yacht and taken out to sea. The boat party I was invited to? Turns out, the boy who sits beside me in class has an obsession with my purity, and his friends all want to see him take me as his bride.

But my classmates aren’t the only ones on board.

When Gabriel Rudd steps out from the shadows and gives me the choice of who will strip me out of this translucent white bridal gown—father or son—I pick the grown man with the frightening, flashing gaze.

And I have to hope the mountain man, with his whispered, urgent words that fill me with an unexpected heat, will protect me when the rest of them want a turn…

Her Wedding Night is an over-the-top spicy instalove romance with a reclusive former Navy SEAL who will stop at nothing to protect the innocent, unknowing girl he’s been watching from afar.

Genres: Novella, Romance, Contemporary, Age Gap Romance, College, Contemporary Romance, Erotica

146 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 12, 2024

About the author

Chloe Maine has written other books before, but none of them as purely id-driven as Before He Was Her Headmaster. She delights in the fantasy of bending big men to the craven desires of supposedly innocent women. When she’s not writing, she’s probably reading. She lives in Canada with her own big man, raising the babies they made together.

Reviews

[Lolina ⋆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Did I like it? Did I dislike it? I genuinely have no clue 😭.

[❁ lilyreadsromance ❁ · Rating 1 out of 5]

What an absolute bonkers of a plot that was.

Wattpad called. They want their plot back.

[Michelle Claypot_Reads · Rating 5 out of 5]

This author writes some of my favourite short and smutty reads. Completely OTT and Insta love and I love them. Definitely recommend if you’re in the mood for a little filth.

[JMC · Rating 1 out of 5]

Huh?? What?? The plot, if you can call it that, seems like even wattpad would be offended.

[Dar · Rating 5 out of 5]

This quickie had a good build up, kept you guessing a bit, and then it fell into place with lots and lots of scorching heat!

[Chalice · Rating 3 out of 5]

The couple: Gabriel and Lucy

Romance trope: Daddy kink, age gap
Length: 146 pages

Plot: Lucy doesn't know why she agreed to go to the party on the yacht with Ethan, but once she gets there, she realizes she made a terrible mistake. The only one who can save her now is her...stalker? But why is he here? Once the virgin auction starts, though (yes, you read that right), he'll protect her with everything he has.

Commentary: Bonkers. Not my favorite Chloe Maine, to be honest. The whole thing seemed more improbable than any other plot ever. But it was fun and hot for a while.

[LK · Rating 2 out of 5]

WORST HEROINE IVE EVER READ…sex is so fucking hot tho

b a s i c s :
short n spicy dual pov

s h e l v e s :
age gap
alpha
college
damsel x knight
danger
forced proximity
instalove
new adult
obsessive stalker behavior
ott
possessive
protective
virgin

k i n k s :
cervix / womb talk
daddy dom
dick on clit
exhibition
in public
locales
♥︎ library stacks
no condom
praise
pussy humping
tss
💦

e n d e a r m e n t s :
♥︎ bunny
♡ Daddy

e n d i n g :
HEA + baby on the way ♡

r e v i e w :

36%
I know there’d be no book if Lucy wasn’t stupid enough to get herself into this situation, but my god how can she be this fucking stupid. Ethan is creeping me the fuck out and the entire situation is stressing me out and like, congrats Chloe Maine as a writer for being able to freak me out but wtf this is not what I’m looking for when I pick up one of your books. I feel like I can always count on your books for an escape but now I just wish I could escape what I’ve already read of this book.

80%
ok the sex was hot tho. 💦

88%
LITERALLY WTAF. What the actual fuck?! This girl. This fucking girl is she serious rn??? Behold the stupidest fucking thing I’ve ever heard a FMC say:

“That’s called a conspiracy to commit a crime.”

“I don’t want to sex shame anyone.” She blushes.

“They kidnapped you, Lucy. It’s okay to sex-shame kidnappers.”

She nibbles on her lip again. “I went willingly.”

AFTER THAT LEGITIMATELY SICKENING HORRIFYING SITUATION SHE WAS IN she’s downplaying their crimes bc she doesn’t want to “sex shame” anyone?! Of all the—ok I know in these instalove stories, the heroine’s all have to be kind of dumb for the logistics of instalove to work. Otherwise there’d be no happy endings in ott stalkery romances, like the ones MINK writes for example. But wtf is this. What message is this sending for her to be dumb enough to say this??? Literally the worst heroine I’ve ever read and THAT IS SAYING SOMETHING.

🔥
I lift her up onto the table. The gauzy fabric rides up her legs, revealing smooth, soft thighs.

I strip my clothes off, not caring who sees the big, hard planes of my body, or the jut of my cock. It’s important for them to see it, feel small and insignificant next to it, so they let me climb on top of her and have my way with her uninterrupted.

But it means when I step between her thighs and hook my fingers into the waistband of her bikini bottoms, there’s no hiding how much my body likes being in this position.

“You’re hard,” she whispers, her voice catching. “Why are you hard?”

That uncertain hitch to her words should make me soft. She’s asking if I like it. Do you like violating my sweet, innocent body in front of these monsters?

“Because you’re beautiful,” I admit, my voice rough and raw. “Because I know you’ll feel like heaven. I’m so sorry.” I try to shift back, pulling my traitorous erection away from the soft cradle of her thighs, but her fingers wrap around my length and squeeze.

Without a word, I peel her bikini bottoms off, revealing her soft, perfect pussy. Puffy and framed with a dusting of wispy reddish brown hair, it’s innocently beautiful, just like the rest of her.

My cock throbs in her hand.


She tugs me toward the center of her, that tempting pink seam, and I shake my head.

“You don’t need to do that,” I growl under my breath. “Pull it up on your belly and they’ll think I’m inside you. They’ll never know. I’m big enough to hide you.”

I stroke my hand up her calf to her knee, then scoop my hand around to the back of her thigh and press that leg up, opening her for me.

She presses my cock against her sex, and the warmth of her is so shocking, so fucking good.

I jerk forward, thrusting against her. Feeling her cunt slide beneath me is unbelievable.

“Lucy…” I groan.

I hate that she can feel how much I like this. I shouldn’t be showing her this side of me. This is the worst kind of violation.

But then her trembling beneath me shifts, changing. And, with a small whimper, she lifts her hips to meet mine.

My gaze jerks to her face.

She’s staring up at me, wide-eyed.

“You like that, bunny?”

She nods warily.

Relief floods through me. I can make it good for her. I lean over her more, bracing my forearm beside her so I can hold her shoulder, give her something to push against. “That’s it, then. Rub yourself on me.”

She rocks her hips, and on the second slide, a hint of slickness coats the underside of my cock.

“Good girl. Get wet for me,” I breathe.

“It’s been a long time for me, sweetheart,” I mutter under my breath. “And you feel incredible. If I explode all over you, it isn’t personal.”

The corners of her mouth twist up as she laughs quietly. “Pretty sure this is as personal as it gets.”

Her breath is uneven now, hitching every time her clit rubs against the tip of my cock.

I drag my gaze down her body, over the fluffy white fabric... to where the costume gives way to bare skin. To where my cock is pressed hard between her pussy lips.

Her pulse jumps against my touch.

The longer I stare at where we’re joined, the faster that flutter at the base of her throat races.

“Gabriel,” she whispers. Her hips are moving frantically now.

I don’t look away.

“Show me how you come,” I growl. The hot slide of her cunt against my cock will haunt me until the day I die.

“I can’t…” she twists her face.

My pretty little bunny is so close, but she can’t get there.

I push up enough to slide my hand down from her neck, over her small breasts and quivering belly, to where she’s wet for me.

My fingers find her clit.

Her body goes taut, swirling a dark mix of desire and need straight up my arm and into my brain.

Make her come.

Make her come.

Make her⁠—

She jolts, and then her clit throbs, a hard, unmistakable pulse that triggers another and another. Slick spills out of her, coating my cock, and she cries out.

Loud.

A desperate need to keep that stunning, beautiful sound all to myself rises. I gather her into my arms and crush her mouth against mine.

She kisses me in a hitching, out-of-control way.

I tear at her gown, shredding it to her waist. Her bikini top follows, then I arch her back and fall on her tits.

Her nipples are so fucking hard. I drag my mouth back and forth, kissing and then licking. The tight bumps taste bright, like freshly picked berries bursting on my tongue.

Her thighs grip my hips, and my cock—still hard, thank Christ I didn’t embarrass myself—presses in against her at a new angle. This time when she rocks against me, my heavy crown slips and fits itself right at her entrance.

We both go still.

I’m breathing so fucking hard.

“Lucy…”

“If I’m not a virgin, he won’t be obsessed with me,” she whispers.

I drop a featherlight kiss to the base of her throat, then nod as I lift my head.

I hold her gaze as I reach between us and replace my cock with my fingers. I ease one into her, then a second. She holds her breath as I get her used to being fucked.

“Relax,” I whisper. “You have to want it.”

She squirms, then exhales, and her body softens around me.

“Good. That’s it. You’re taking my fingers like a very good girl.” I add another, stretching her as much as possible, then I replace my hand with my cock.

I hinge my hips and push.

She’s impossibly tight. I don’t get very far before I need to ease off, the tip of my cock working in and out, just at her entrance. Gathering more of her slick so I can push in again, deeper this time.

Her eyes flare and her lips part.

Shock.

Inch by inch, I give her the last cock she ever imagined she might find herself on. Her stalker’s father.

I’m old enough to have raised her myself.

I've watched her sleep.

I took one look at her and instantly understood that if I ever had the chance to lose myself in her innocent body, I’d do whatever it took.

And I have.

I sink the last inch into her, my balls coming to rest right against her ass.

“Good girl.” I exhale roughly. “That’s it. You did it. You took me.”

“You’re so big.” She pants. “You’re too big.”

Her words have the terrible opposite effect they should. I swell at the mental image of filling her to her limits.

She grips my shoulders, her fingers tight on my skin. “Gabriel!”

“You’re so beautiful,” I murmur. It’s all I can say. It’s true.

I snap my hips, driving her against the table.

The cock of a gun is an unmistakable sound, though. And it’s followed by a curt order. “Move!”

Lucy gasps, trembling anew.

“Together,” I tell her, gathering her in my arms. “Hold on tight.”

She winds herself around me, clinging as I find a rhythm that feels good but not too good, that I can keep going without losing my mind. I’m holding back, not because I want to, but because I need to, and I’m not pushing all the way inside her, not taking up residence at the entrance to her womb the way I need.

Her impossible tightness eases to a slick, hot snug I glide in and out of with relative ease. At first, all I can hear is the slap of our bodies and her tiny, contained reactions.

I stroke one hand down to her tits, cupping her flesh. “Come for me, bunny. Be a good girl for Daddy.”

Lucy sucks in a breath as I duck my head, pulling her nipple into my mouth. Her back arches and I let myself go, giving her every inch of my cock. I fuck her fast and hard and deep, over and over again, until I feel her tighten around me.

I suck and fuck her through her climax, then I cradle her in my arms again, needing to see her face as I let go.

“God, that felt good. Did it feel good for you? You take me perfectly, Lucy. My Lucy. Daddy’s hot little secret, aren’t you? Keeping all this pent-up need tight inside you. My. Little. Virgin.”

I will forever cherish the memory of her shocked expression as she feels my release throb deep inside her. The moment my cock starts to pulse, her eyes flare wide, feeling my hot seed pump inside her.

It’s too powerful to ignore.

She presses her lips together, holding in a scream, and her legs wrap around my hips.

Holding me deep inside her.

Taking every drop Daddy has to give.

And then she collapses on the table beneath me.


♥︎
When he’s all the way buried, he holds still and soothes me with his words and his touch. “My precious bunny needs my cock,” he murmurs. “I will always give you what you need."


🔥🔥BONUS EPILOGUE SPICE🔥🔥

In front of me is his heavy sac, and resting heavily on top of that is his cock.

My cock.

I nose in against it, breathing in his scent. Taking my time and teasing him, watching his cock thicken, then rise. When it bobs into the air, I catch it with my hand and lick at the crown.

The groan he lets out at the wet swipe of my tongue is unholy and perfect.

“That’s it,” he murmurs as I take him into my mouth. “Oh,” he groans. “Your tongue. Yes, fuck. Ohh…” He's breathing hard.

♥︎

Gabriel’s hand falls between my legs and I hold my breath as his fingers part my lightly furred pussy lips and find my slick entrance. He sweeps my arousal up to my clit, playing with me until I’m squirming.

“Look at this pretty cunt,” he says with warm admiration. “So little and innocent…”

His cock looks too big as I notch him against my entrance. Inch by inch he disappears into my belly.

His hands skate up my belly and circle my breasts. He plucks at my nipples. “Do you like the feel of my gaze caressing your skin?”

“Yes, Daddy.”

“I like it, too.” His pinch is harder this time, pulling my breasts to their limit. “Touch yourself. Show me your hard little clit.”

♥︎

“I love the feel of your tight little pussy stretching around my cock, bunny. And seeing your little body take me in makes it even hotter.” His breath is hot against my cheek. In the mirror, he’s staring at me, heavy-lidded and swollen lipped. He looks like sin, like Hades pleased that he’s talked Persephone onto his big Daddy cock.

I arch my back, reaching my arms up and around his neck. My body pulls taut and he throbs inside me.

I expect him to take over, taking control of my body and using me to finish himself and find his own pleasure. I love it when he’s so much bigger than me, and I’m just a little hole for him.

But he just holds me, throbbing inside me.

♥︎

When he thrusts his hips up, burying his cock in my throat, I hold my breath and take it as best I can.

“Fuck fuck fuck,” he gasps as he sags back in the chair. I follow, licking his twitching, spurting head.

♥︎

“Would you like to play in front of these new friends? Maybe watch them…and let them watch?” I guide her face to look at us in the mirror.

She squirms in my arms, looking little and unsure.

Heat pools in my belly, making my cock throb. I smooth my hand up her back, petting her.

“Do you want…?” She lifts her head. Her expression is so damn open and trusting.

Do I want to fuck her in front of an audience, that’s what she’s asking. And my cock is undeniably hard.

“Maybe you could sit on my lap like we do in front of the mirror?”

She doesn’t need to answer that out loud. Her body answers that with an immediate gush of arousal. I groan.

“Oh, baby. You like that, don’t you?”

She nods, her eyes wide.

“Then that’s what we’ll do, bunny. We’ll show our new friends what a good girl you are for me.”

♥︎

I toss her onto her stomach and hitch her hips up so I can take her from behind.

♥︎

“Are you all looking at my bride?” Gabriel suddenly asks, his voice reverberating around me.

I turn, looking back at him, and am arrested by the proud, lewd smile on his face.

“That’s it,” he says, his voice low. “Let your dress fall, bunny.”

My arm swings away and the lace puddles at my feet.

His cock strains at his dress pants.

When he notices my attention is caught there, he drops his big hand to squeeze his bulge.

I whimper.

“Come here, wife,” he rumbles. “I want you in my lap.”

I scramble onto his knees. He lets me kiss him, straddling him at first, but when I start to grind down against him—anything to relieve the fever suddenly burning through me—he plants those big hands on my hips and stills me.

“Wait.” He drags in a breath, then turns me around...showing me that everyone is watching, making it impossible not to see hot, hungry eyes everywhere.

My breath catches in my throat.

“They’re all here to see me take my bride,” he murmurs. He rubs a hand over my soft belly, where he puts his babies, then up to cup my breasts.

“They want to see your soft, sweet pussy stretched around your husband’s cock. They want to see these sweet tits bouncing as I fuck you.”

His hand slides down again, dipping into my damp panties.

I moan as his fingertips push between my folds, finding my clit. Already hard, already throbbing.

Hungry, appreciative gazes have already been given cart blanche to devour my naked flesh…

I’m as safe on his lap, displayed for all to see, as I would be hidden beneath his bulky body.

“Take me, Daddy,” I breathe, arching my back. I buck against him, desperate to be filled now. “Please,” I beg. “Please fuck me.”

“That’s it. You’re such a good girl. Let it out. Let them hear you ask for what you need.”

“Please love me,” I pant.

My panties stretch, then give way with a tearing sound. Gabriel lifts me up, and when I come back down, his cock is piercing me.

I cry out, a loud, long moan that ends on a silent gasp when he bottoms out, his erection buried all the way to my womb.

He rubs my tummy as if to soothe the roughness of the invasion.

[Aspen · Rating 1 out of 5]

The. Actual. Fuck? Here we have Lucy who seems all full of brains and street smarts, until she isn't. She's aware of her stalker, even trying to get a picture of him to give to campus police. She seems all around wary anr capable of taking care of herself and yet... she ends up on a yatch with a bunch of "friends" who want to play auction off the virgin in some weird sex party. And even though it seems like she's slow on the intake, once the first girl is bought and fucked on the poker table, it still doesn't seem to register? I mean come on! Why is she not saying to these fuckers that she wants no part of this? Nope, she just pretends to have to pee to go up and talk to the captain so she can somehow get off this boat which is now in open water where rules clearly don't apply. And then, THEN she sees her stalker and instead of fighting him off, she tries to seduce him/manipulate him and clearly some stupid part of her brain tells her to kiss him and friggen hump his cock until the guy she's at the party with, Ethan; ie stalker's son, calls for her and she goes back to the party to watch yet another girl get fucked on the table... Did I mention the part where there's clearly drugs, alcohol and no laws on the open water? One drug in particular being a date rape drug??? Yeah no, I like this author and all but this is a bit fucked up and Lucy is all sorts of stupid for all of this. Especially since she doesn't like Ethan that way and he gives her the creeps but sure, let's go to the creeper's party all the same...

Let's not get started on the guns, or the fact that Ethan was so obsessed with Lucy that he paid the captain to legally marry them so he could take her virginity. Let's not talk about the fact that her stalker, Gabriel; Ethan's maybe-maybe not father somehow has more than enough money to buy Lucy in the auction instead of Ethan and then takes her virginity at gun point on the table in front of everyone...

AND. THEN. SHE. GOES. TO. A. CABIN. WITH. HER. STALKER.

A. FUCKEN. CABIN.

Yeah let's just not talk about this nightmare of a book at all anymore.

[SassyMamaReads · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lucy was being stalked for some time now. It’s an older gentleman with tattoos behind his neck and on his arms with gray at his temples. She hasn’t been able to get a clear picture of his face, but Lucy knows Gabe’s blue eyes are the type that stand out. They do stand out when they make eye-to-eye contact as she tries to take his picture.

Let me back up a bit. Lucy starts tutoring a guy named Ethan. He is a frat boy who is failing a class. So, he asked Lucy to tutor him she agreed. She will come to think of him as a quiet nice guy. She wanted to get out of her way, meet new people, and go to parties that semester. So, when Ethan invited her to a party, she said maybe. He wanted to ensure she was coming to the party, so he asked if he could pick her up, and she said no.

Lucy finds out it’s on a yacht, they indeed will be going out to sea, and the foster kid in her was right but for once she didn't want to listen to that inner voice. The fight or flight that was in steeled in her to protect herself. At the last minute, she planned on running, but in the shadows, she saw Gabe on land watching. Then, Ethan found her, and her escape was no more. She will come to find out later his name is, Gabriel Rudd, a reclusive former Navy SEAL. He is stalking her for protection, in a way.

This was such an at-the-edge-of-your-seat kind of book. It is an erotica first-time virgin, gap age, insta-love, suspense, and more.

[Ren || Reading What I Want · Rating 5 out of 5]

𝙎𝙝𝙚’𝙨 𝙨𝙤 𝙨𝙬𝙚𝙚𝙩, 𝙨𝙤 𝙨𝙢𝙖𝙡𝙡 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙛𝙧𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙡𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙞𝙣𝙣𝙤𝙘𝙚𝙣𝙩. 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙥𝙡𝙚𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙮 𝙬𝙧𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙣𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩, 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙘𝙚, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚.

Lucy is a freshman in college and all alone. She’s got a tatted stalker so when the nerdy guy, Ethan invites her to a boat party, she agrees to go. She’s unaware of the nefarious games the frat boys like to play, so Gabriel, Ethan’s dad and her stalker, makes a quick decision to save her.

An awesome 20+ age gap. A man OBSESSED with a young woman. A twisted game turned dangerous. Voyeurism. Stalker. Obsession.

This one is OUT THERE but it’s dirty and smutty and a quickie. You can’t go wrong with this one if you need a palate cleanser or if you’re just in the mood for something short and smexy.

And of course we have a happy ending. It’s a common theme for the girls to be pregnant or have lots of babies and I ADORE it. Nothing like possessive older men and their spoiled obsessions.

[Elyse · Rating 3 out of 5]

Book 15 of 2026

This was a wild ride – and not at all what I expected. I have read many of @ChloeMaine’s books, and I decided to jump into this “Everyone Is Watching” series. What I did not expect was this college girl who gets pulled into some crazy stuff on a boat in the middle of the night. She is going to be taken advantage of, and who saves her? The father of her stalker, who has been watching her! AH! Then in order to save her, he takes her virginity in front of this group of insane college kids. Yup. I said that. Here’s the thing—did I enjoy it? Kinda, yeah. It felt closer to a dark romance novella to me and because of that edge, I was intrigued. Now, don’t ask me if I liked this book or not – it’s honestly hard to tell because this plot was kind of outrageous. But did it stop me? No.

Rating – three stars
Format – kindle unlimited

[Leah Eugenia · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lucy has a stalker...

Growing up in foster care, she has learned to be very aware of her surroundings. She finds him in line in front of her in the coffee shop and gets a good look at him. Then leaves a message with her criminal science professor to look for the man if she goes missing.

Later that day, a student she was tutoring asks her to go to a party and she finds out the hard way it is a sex party where the guys gamble, and the winners take one of the girls. She is trapped, and tries to figure out how to get away...

Then discovers her stalker is on board, not knowing he is trying to protect her... Things get nasty when the boys have weapons, and the tension becomes dangerous. A good mystery to keep you focused...

[E-Reader Addict · Rating 3 out of 5]

When the author herself described this story as bonkers, she wasn't underselling it.

I almost didn't keep reading this one - it started out a little...off. Blah. Not what I expect from this writer (I'm a HUGE fan of her alter ego Zoe York, and have enjoyed a couple of the books she's written as Ainsley Booth), even though I know the books she writes as this alter ego are over-the-top ridiculous and super steamy. But I hung with it and am glad I read it.

Look, as long as you go in with your expectations managed and know what you're getting yourself into, you'll probably enjoy this quick read.

[Rachel Russell · Rating 2 out of 5]

I really did want to give this book a chance... I really did. The blurb sounded intriguing which is why I downloaded it. I finished this book pretty quickly and this book has the potential to really have something... it just really didn't do it for me. I would consider reading more from this author to see if there is something else that I might like. But I couldn't connect with the characters and it seemed like the plot got lost somewhere in the first couple of chapters. Shame.

[Etidae · Rating 4 out of 5]

Holy guacamole that was absurdly hot 🥵

4.5/5 🌶️
Check TWs, some dark themes

🖤 Stalker daddy, protective MMC
🖤 Nerdy virginal FMC 🍒
🖤 Short spicy contemporary novella
🖤 Fast burn, insta love ❤️‍🔥
🖤 Age gap

What starts as a night cruise with some frat guys and gals turns to an auction for her virginity, and her only way out of this alive is her stalker 👀 ✅ ✅ ✅

[Bella · Rating 4 out of 5]

familiar author with a new to me type story

This is not my usual type of book but I love everything Chloe Maine writes so had to read this one too and really enjoyed it I love that her nickname is Bunny makes me melt

[C.J. · Rating 4 out of 5]

Her wedding night

This was a good story and different from anything I’ve read before. Lucy’s attitude and decision making skills seemed to contradict each other at times which was frustrating.

[Michelle · Rating 2 out of 5]

Normally the only books I will give 1 or 2 stars are ones I don't finish.
This wasn't a DNF, but it should have been.
The plot was so unrealistic and not at all believable, and the romance instalove that happened between this girl and her stalker? Ugh.
It didn't work for me at all.

[Reader · Rating 2 out of 5]

lots of continuity errors. laughable dialogue (said without any irony, during a surprise gun battle, "Takes one to know one!"). insane plot leaps. wild vacillations in feelings/motivations. major plot points never resolved. just . . . a mess. and all within a short story!

[Amber · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lucy & Gabriel

Very ott story. 3 stars was being generous. It got me with the tropes lol

Tropes:
stalker
age gap
dual pov
insta love
virgin heroine
good girl praise
daddy kink

Read on Kindle

[AR · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was twisted dark, but through the POV of Lucy, the threatened violence felt unrealistic. She should have been fucking terrified.
I did enjoy Gabriel, the secret stalker angel.
The bonus chapters were MUCH better.

[Sherri Wong · Rating 1 out of 5]

1.5⭐️

[Heather · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not enough daddy and little bunny development for me. Too much bonkers plot which is fine if there are more of the main couple.

[Kirstie Ibrahim · Rating 3 out of 5]

I just don't know, I'm stuck in the middle between like and dislike. This story could have been so much more but it was short and rushed.

[TravelKat · Rating 2 out of 5]

Crazy college kids plot takes up the book, would have loved more Daddy/bunny. Strange book, didn’t enjoy

[Fiatgal · Rating 4 out of 5]

Another fun little novelette!

[Azzie Parks · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short but amazing

This book was truly amazing. I really appreciate this book. I haven't read many of this authors work but what I've read are wonderful. Keep Up The Good Work.

[Anastasia ⋆｡☽˚｡ · Rating 3 out of 5]

RTC

[Trude · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 ⭐️
Short, spicy with stalking, Daddy kink and insane frat boys. Quite a lot of drama at the start. It was good though. I liked it.

[WhiskeyandReading · Rating 4 out of 5]

Perfect for a quick read.