Serina is constantly butting heads with the school’s public morals officer, Reiko, who is always harping on about her look. They’re also rivals for the top spot in class, but when Serina catches Reiko heading to a love hotel with a woman, Serina’s got a new way to claw her way to success.
You’d be forgiven for looking at this story, a yuri about a flashy girl pushing back against the school’s female morals officer, and think you were reading off-brand Citrus. Thankfully, there’s a little more here to recommend this story than mere familiarity.
Honestly, the description makes this sound a lot more tawdry than it actually is. Reiko and Serina are both very, very wounded people and the notion that they might find what they need in one another makes for a pretty appealing ‘enemies to lovers’ scenario.
Reiko has a real stick up her butt, plus she pushes her expectations on to others. We see later that this has ruined her relationships in the past and there are hints that she’s being crushed under her own set of expectations, which makes me think the love hotel escapade is a coping mechanism.
Meanwhile, Serina’s family is struggling with money, her parents are loving but never around, and her only hope of university is to get a scholarship. Especially with her younger sister angling for a prestigious high school. Small wonder she becomes so desperate as to consider resorting to blackmail against a girl she already despises.
It’s a decent stew. The storytelling is choppy as all hell, there is a real lack of flow at times, and the writing’s not great, but it gets its points across and if the story’s symbolism is a little on the nose (when they dig into the title you’ll know exactly where it’s heading, mark my words), well, better the obvious than nothing at all.
There’s definitely a little trauma drama towards the end and all the side characters are absolutely dull. Our leads leave enough of a mark, but they are only just getting the job done. There’s almost no yuri minus one dream sequence and Reiko’s admission of her skills, but it does seem to imply that when this does head that way it’ll be spicy.
Both Reiko and Serina are flawed and messy and I do appreciate that. They act like they have it all figured out, but Serina’s got a hair-trigger temper and Reiko has all the issues I mentioned beforehand. Plus her apparent side hustle as an escort. There are seeds here, they just haven’t bloomed into anything yet.
So, we have start of something potentially good, but not an especially great first volume. The art is just okay, none of these designs stick out to me, and I am still unsure if there’s one or two black-haired students in the series.
I recommend it if you like these sorts of stories, but there are tons of good series out there in this genre that do similar things and are presented better. Then again, I do think this has more to it than Citrus, but I read that title BECAUSE it’s tawdry.
3 stars - a worthwhile little read, nothing that yet makes a sizeable impression, but the pieces are there. It may never be top tier, but I like it enough to stay with it and see where it’s headed.