I quite liked the last story Stormbringer, which is nice, because it makes the book end on the high note. The stuff before it, thought, I didn’t think was very good.
Out of the first three other stories, I disliked the most The Bane of the Black Sword. It’s parts were the one of the first stories of Elric ever written (those I generally dislike the most) and it shows. In these stories, even if the concepts are interesting, they are usually presented in a rather flat, basic and uninteresting way. And the whole of Zarozina’s character is just so. How she is presented, the constant mentions that she is so young (17), and innocent, and inexperienced and childlike but still, and even because of it, Elric (who, by my calculations, is around his late twenties at best) gets it on with her instantly is just plain weird and super uncomfortable. Sometimes she is even described by the narration as his “girl-wife” – might as well call her a child bride while you’re at it. I understand of course that she is meant to be in contrast to Elric, all the things that he is not, but there were infinite ways to make a character like that and not make her as she ended up being.
The Vanishing Tower was fine, but I think that Theleb K’aarna is a weak villain, who as a character overstates is welcome greatly.
I enjoyed The Revenge of the Rose the most out of the three. The storyline concerning Elric’s father’s soul, the preparation for and the last battle were great and the character of the Rose herself were cool (a woman who doesn’t fall for Elric immediately or near immediately? no way). That’s one of the markers for the newer stories – that women are present and they actually do something, besides, I don’t know, seducing men. Still, it doesn’t mean they are free from them, as the uncomfortable plot line of the very young clairvoyant Charion Phatt and middle aged poet Wheldrake, who falls in love with her, shows (lord take these grown ass men from these girls). Also, the whole of “Gypsy Nation” is rather questionable, the beginning-middle part of the story is kind of slow and not very gipping and I didn’t care much for the Phatt family and Wheldrake.
Weak, one dimensional characters are one of the biggest and most constant flaws of the stories of the Elric Saga. There are of course some exceptions to this, Elric himself being the case, but still, most of the other interesting characters disappear very quickly. A lot of even the worse stories would be greatly improved if the people in them had some depth at least.