Thank you to the author for allowing me to be a part of the ARC team! “E-Girl Unplugged” releases January 5, 2024.
Charlie Chan has opened her own private detective agency, mostly with the idea that if she can become legitimate enough she’ll have access to the resources to look into her own father’s disappearance. But future cases don’t pay the bills, so when one of her detectives brings the idea that a popular singer has actually been kidnapped, Charlie is launched into the biggest case of her budding career.
Unfortunately, I think I have a bone to pick with this book. Specifically with the book’s marketing. Advertised as a fast-paced thriller, the majority of this (relatively short) story was…not so fast paced. The parts where things actually progressed and the plot made headway were great, and they did have quite a nice clip to them, but the build-up and the in-between bogged down the rest of the story.
Set in a dual timeline that eventually collides, we follow the original kidnapping of Emefa, a pop-punk idol with some serious personal issues, as it occurred 11 months prior to the rest of the story. The other half follows Charlie and her investigative agency. She starts out with a different case (which we do end up with a resolution to, as well as the main investigation, which was nice), but shortly after ends up investigating Emefa’s disappearance. Once the story gets going with the main investigation, the action picks up pretty quickly and makes for a much more interesting read. That first 30-40%, however, was slow going. I found it difficult to stay engaged until that point, as nothing was really happening. It was a lot of interpersonal interactions, but nothing that really jumped out and grabbed me.
The actual characters in the story are a wild mix, to put it mildly. They’re all interesting people, but for all the conversations we don’t really get a solid feel for the characters’ personalities. It’s like the story couldn’t decide whether to be plot based or character based, and so ended up being neither. Both investigative plot lines were interesting, though not necessarily ones the reader would have a chance at ‘solving.’ The writing itself was good, just a bit slow.
Overall, the story was okay. For a book clocking in at under 300 pages, I expected the whole thing to feel a lot faster. It’s almost like half of it was written to go along with a longer book that spent more time on the characters and their lives, and the other half was written to fit that ‘fast-paced thriller’ vibe. I didn’t hate it, but it didn’t make the top of my ‘favorite thrillers’ list, either.