2.5 ⭐️
An interesting gothmantic-style time travel story. Imaginative, gruesome, sweet. I loved the plot, and the bittersweet feeling it leaves me with.
✍🏼 The writing style feels very green for a novel. The author still has lots of growth to do when it comes to editing for flow, clarification of critical details and reducing repetitive descriptive words, and bad habits (like thinking in a stutter). Too many confusing or interruptive things slow down the reading.
⏳ Although the cover image is beautiful and gives historical vibes, the constant timeline seems to be set in a more current time while the Postman is visiting/delivering letters from different years in the future (which basically means he is sometimes younger and sometimes older than his last visit). That all made sense to me, however I never could quite pinpoint what the “current” (constant) timeline was suppose to be set in. The futuristic timeline in comparison to their age and the calligraphy versus digital age part just didn’t add up IMO.
🥴 There were some other perplexing parts like Peter knowing to go to year 2079 (why the heck would he come up with that year??), the story switching to a non-major character’s inner thoughts/story a whole chapter, jumping ahead 20 years without warning in a single chapter and what about Hannah and Alice’s fight justified them to not talk for 2 decades.
⚠️ Chapter 17 is a very gruesome and difficult chapter to digest. I was so upset and angry, and questioned how necessary it was to move the story. It explains the mysteriously linked murders, so I understand what the author was trying to do here. I just never expected that to be in this book, and honestly, it seemed a bit early in the book to be revealing the big mystery of who was behind it all.
🌹 The “love” part of the book is an extremely slow sizzle. In fact, there really wasn’t much love to be said for the first 50%. But after that, the core of the book focused on their affection for one another, and it was sweet. Eventually, the MC continued aging, while Evan didn’t seem to change much, and that started causing some concerns for them as a couple, and the more extreme parts (Evan as a baby, Alice as an old woman) was a little confusing to process how to feel about those parts 🥴
“Remember this, Alice. Even if we’re two parallel lines, I believe that love transcends time just like it transcends age, gender, ethnicity and status.”
🕵🏻♀️ The mystery side of this book is very short, all occurring the first half of the book. Nothing about the book is hard to solve, so it’s not the type of book where you are working in overdrive to figure out what’s going on with the storyline itself, with one curve after another coming. The time hopping in itself was busy enough, so I appreciated that I could always tell what was going to happen even though the characters were in the dark.
Overall, I really enjoyed the creativity, smartness and gothic romantic side of the storyline. I could see this being a movie, and I know the author said it was originally a screenplay, which is really cool. But I really struggled with the delivery, which I do think could be greatly improved upon with the right editor. So yeah, mixed emotions but very glad I read it. The story will sit with me for a while 🥰
Thanks to BookSirens and Nicole C.W. for providing me with a complimentary ARC to review!