Hello everyone, I'm Mr. C Reviewer, and tonight we're discussing (She/Her) Ace Fawn's book, Sold, which is the first book in The Rich Men Series.
I'd like to extend a huge thank you to booksirens for providing a copy of 'Sold' as an E-ARC in exchange for an optional honest review.
The book was first Published October 24, 2023. The narrative, told using third person perspective following Hunter's and Michael's point of view and spans 30 chapters and 246 pages.
Summary: Hunter’s life takes a dramatic turn when he is sold at an auction to the sophisticated and handsome billionaire, Michael. As Michael takes ownership of Hunter, he collars him and begins to shape him into his pet. However, Hunter is not one to simply submit to Michael’s will, as he remains defiant and yearns for his old life back.
Review:
-I was pleased to find that the book included Content Warnings within its pages, The use of Content Warnings was a valuable addition, providing readers with an opportunity to prepare for sensitive topics. The book had some good character and place detail that contributed to an engaging story, but the inconsistency in writing quality and the presence of unnecessary descriptions impacted the overall reading experience.
The pacing within the story didn’t resonate with me, as I found the time jumps to be jarring. The narrative moved quickly, and I was surprised by the significant passage of time throughout the book. To enhance my reading experience, I would have appreciated deeper emotional depth, along with more realistic actions and reactions from the characters. Additionally, it would have been helpful if each chapter had indicated whose point of view we were following from the beginning, rather than having to discover it while reading.
While the book did touch upon BDSM themes, I feel like it could have benefited from a more immersive and detailed portrayal of the lifestyle. This would have allowed readers to better understand and appreciate the complexities of BDSM relationships and dynamics.
-I was disappointed to discover that this book does not have an audiobook version available. As someone who enjoys listening and following along while reading, I hope that an audiobook will be produced in the future. However, I was pleased to find that I could use the read out loud option on my E-reader.
-I don't feel like we were provided with enough information about the events leading up to Hunter’s abduction or the circumstances surrounding his sale, which makes it difficult to fully understand and empathize with his experiences. This lack of detail was particularly disappointing as it detracts from the overall impact of the story. I did appreciate the glimpses we got into the characters’ family history, but I craved a deeper understanding of their motivations and a more thorough exploration of their personalities.
The inclusion of Michael’s perspective within the story seems misplaced and lessens the focus on the central character, Hunter. Instead of following some of Michael’s story, I feel that it would have been more engaging to me to have explored this one in a dystopian like setting instead, when following his story where Michael’s views on the world and his situation were in stark contrast to those around him. I feel that this would have allowed for a more immersive experience as we follow Michael’s journey to challenge the status quo and fight against the injustice of the auction system that affects people like Hunter.
-The book, while containing an engaging story, lost some of its momentum as it progressed through several chapters. I found myself feeling a bit disappointed by the missing events that took place between the final chapter and the epilogue.
The book would have been more enjoyable for me if I knew that the next instalment in the series continued with the same characters. Sometimes in series like this one, it shifts to another character’s story that was previously in the background, possibly Michael's sibling or even Ivan. Although the ending felt rushed, it was still satisfying and tied up loose ends. However, there is a 0.5 book in the series that focuses on different characters, while this book is a full-fledged instalment. We will have to wait and see what happens next.
I rate each story I read out of 10, and for this one, I give it an 6. Remember this was what I thought about the book personally and I suggest that you give it a go for yourself.