I really wanted to give this a higher rating, with better writing and/or editing it could have been a very interesting story. Unfortunately there were just too many errors both grammatical and factual to overlook, with several of the factual errors being egregious enough as to ruin any attempt at suspension of disbelief on the part of the reader. Furthermore, the writing felt exceedingly lazy at points with plot devices that were taken, detail for detail, directly from viral stories spread on social media. In fact, one part of the story seemed to be nothing more than a reimagining of the Gabby Petito story. At some points the details were irritating either due to their repetition - how many times do we need to be told that Callaway drives a Charger and is uncomfortable leaving it in seedy parts of town - or else due to their utterly pointless inclusion - no one needs the author to describe what a high chair is and how it is typically used. Additionally, as others have mentioned, I did expect the two separate stories to eventually come together so the fact that they were unrelated certainly left something to be desired. And lastly, the “twist ending” felt obvious pretty much from the start.