Yukka has an odd definition of friendship and has stolen Emille from Eve after the two of them fell out. But even when Eve realizes her error, it’s only a matter of time before the next calamity comes calling, looking a lot like the last one.
Boy, this kind of fell apart after a really, really strong first volume. It’s not a regret yet, but a string of stories where the absolute worst choices are made does not a good narrative make. Let’s check? Is this a three volume series? Oh dear, it is…
Part of the problem is Emille, who is either a ‘too stupid to live’ heroine or so incredibly naive and optimistic that she’d put Pollyanna off her lunch. Whatever her species, natural selection would have picked her off years ago in the wild.
The other consequence of this is that it shoves poor Eve into the roll of scold constantly and the story keeps painting her as wrong, even though she’s actually right pretty much every time.
Yukka turns out to be some sort of feral child who maimed Emille when they were younger and then just becomes utterly dependent on the latter’s endless kindness, even though this seems to include wanting to hurt her.
There’s a reasonable psychology to be done with this, but they don’t. Instead Eve and Yukka bond over their past traumas and Eve apologizes for daring to have been mean, even though she’s clearly saving Emille from life as a possession.
Okay, they frame it a little nicer than that, and Eve is forced to admit that she likes having Emille around. But the two are only together for a brief moment, admittedly one that leads to an adorable date (the only yuri content you’re getting this volume) in town. Then another girl butts into the frame.
This weird idea that Eve must fight off all challengers seems to be in the air, as Emille begins sneaking out to meet with Collette, a girl they met while on their date. Solid work listening to your sister’s warnings about the town or considering her feelings, Emille.
Oh, did you guess Collette was a vampire hunter the second you laid eyes on her? No points for that one, I’m afraid, but Buffy and Angel these two are not. Instead, Emille gets to wax all woefully about acceptance and then gets to prove herself wrong after Eve is wrong.
Even more annoyingly, it’s clear that the girls never read a mystery novel in their lives. When Eve recounts her major trauma over losing her own sister, it conveniently ends with an obvious moment of ‘no body, no crime’. So we’re left waiting for that shoe to drop.
The best part of this section, or (more accurately) the only good part, comes when a schoolmate of Emille’s comes out as a half-human. This is the point where the story chooses to land its message of acceptance and it’s sweetly effective in a way that the main part of this arc is not.
The last volume was such a wonderful blend of Class-S vibes and solid melodrama, but the writing here feels same-y and lacklustre with very little of the actual yuri and two leads that the story disservices in almost equal measure most of the volume.
You can see vestiges of where this was good - Eve’s melancholy over how much Emille became a part of her life is solid, Emille can be a fun character when she isn’t written entirely as a twit (5% of her page time, tops), and the town date is wonderfully fun. But the ratio to annoying stuff is all wrong.
2.5 stars - the date earns the rate, and while I don’t hate, the yuri won’t elate and doesn’t even have bait, hence the middling fate since it was so good out of the gate.