'Flunking with a Ghost' ('Haunted Love #6)
by Baylin Crow
I got hooked in by the title; I'm usually a sucker for ghost/paranormal stories, especially if it's also a MM tale!
This was an interesting premise: teen jock flunking a maths class? (not news, lol). BUT having a teen nerd guy/ghost to tutor this aforementioned jock? Sounded like fun!
I really liked how this storyline started out, especially Liam the jock's dad buying and moving them into this new-to-them but decrepit vintage Victorian house, situated next to...(yep, you guessed it) a very old, run down graveyard, situated behind a creaky (of course it is) iron-gated fence. That came complete with a teen-boy ghost!
Anyway, I basically liked how they slowly developed their friendship, once they figured out they could see and speak to, and even touch each other, which was evolving into something more, both before and after Liam discovered that maybe August wasn't exactly who...or what... he pretended to be.
There's August's trauma of being in a car accident, and ending up as a peculiar type of ghost, coupled with Liam also being in a car accident at the same time & location, but his Mom not surviving. Double trauma and feelings to share!
Where this storyline fell short was near the ending, after their memorable sex-love scene, when Liam comes out of the hotel's bathroom, only to discover that August has disappeared!
Fade to black...
But then, fades back in...with an epilogue that is TWO YEARS LATER! What the hell?
Skipping a HUGE chunk of the storyline to rush into some kind of sloughed-off ending is NOT ok, not by a long shot! Really lame!
The author cheated us readers of the big hospital reveal of Liam and August's reunion (and not just a half-assed little "memory recap"), and of them getting to know each other all over again.
Especially disliked August's mother putting the "thumbscrews" to Liam, constantly interrogating him about how and where he knows August (Jacob, to his family) from? Two years later she still comes across as a suspicious bitch, not as someone who welcomes her son's boyfriend, whom he loves, into his life and family.
So, the author missed a big opportunity for a more complete storyline and a satisfying wrap-up to this cute tale of two boys, trapped in alternate realities, but somehow able to cross that barrier to interact with each other.