2.3⭐️ This offering is too short and has too much fluffy filler. Consequently, I found very little substance to this story. In such a short story, I wouldn’t expect extensive character development, but a few lines might have sufficed. Moreover, there were errors that should have been found and corrected in such a short piece.
In all, with a few more pages of substantive content and character development, this story may have been entertaining; however, it missed the mark in my opinion.