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Twenty Weeks
'It’s his too, Maya! What if he wants it? What if?' The little voice buzzed in my head, and just when I was about to turn away and run out of the clinic, my name was called. Sixteen-year-old, Maya Rockwell, has it a new set of wheels, straight-A grades, and Alex, a hotter than Hades boyfriend with the personality of an angel. When her best friend kicks off the biggest party of the school season, Maya and Alex jump at the invite for some innocent fun, certainly not the drugs and predatory older crowd they confront. Maya barely escapes with her hers and another new one. Alone and afraid, Maya seeks answers, but a single terrifying moment opens her eyes... and she can no longer pretend to be ignorant. Will Maya brave the storm of negative publicity and peer pressure to do the right thing? This is a mature YA. Contains descriptive scenes not suitable for younger audiences.
262 pages, Paperback
First published August 8, 2011
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About the author
Melisa M. Hamling
5 books91 followersI grew up in Colorado and moved to Nebraska in the latter half of my teen years, where I've remained. I have a great family and my father is James Dean. Yep! The James Dean. Okay in name only, but I still love to say it. I have the best husband ever! He's not afraid to do the laundry, or the dishes, and dang. He's had to survive four females and a whole lot of hormones. Poor guy! We have three beautiful daughters, and our only sons, Robby and Bentley, are of course, cats. They refuse to acknowledge their furry background, and so continue to live as humanly as possible.
Most of my work experience has been in healthcare giving me the opportunity to work with a variety of people, ranging from newborn to elderly. My true passion is writing. I'm captivated by stories that delve into facets of the human behavior: affliction, fidelity, passion, betrayal, and redemption. I prefer to take my characters through a physical journey where they learn something about themselves or take them to new and exciting places, but there is always romance involved.
Most of my work experience has been in healthcare giving me the opportunity to work with a variety of people, ranging from newborn to elderly. My true passion is writing. I'm captivated by stories that delve into facets of the human behavior: affliction, fidelity, passion, betrayal, and redemption. I prefer to take my characters through a physical journey where they learn something about themselves or take them to new and exciting places, but there is always romance involved.
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April 9, 2012
This is, without a doubt, one of the worst books I have ever had the misfortune of reading. I have permanently deleted it from my Kindle app and, quite frankly, wish I could get the money back so I could throw it down the drain, since that would be a more productive use of it. I cannot understand why has such a high rating for two reasons - one, it is simply dreadful writing, and two, most of the book is offensive.
This book white washes all the issues of becoming pregnant at sixteen and quickly became propoganda for the pro-life movement. And the thing that gets me is that Hamling had a potentially good idea here - how does a teenage girl cope with a pregnancy when her parents both have opposing points of view on the subject, one convincing her to carry the baby to term, and the other convinced it will ruin her life and opting for abortion? That could have been a thought provoking book. But what Hamling gave us was something that there are no words for.
SPOILERS FROM HERE ON OUT.
TLDR - This book made me angry because of how blatantly pro-life it was, whilst not touching on any realistic issues for pregnant teenagers and their families, or presenting a realistic situation at all - I am amazed anyone can consider such an issue so black and white. It becomes dangerous, in painting such a one sided and unrealistic portrait of what teen pregnancy is like (there's a nasty reference to Teen Mom late in the book). Beside that, it was rushed and poorly written, and I remain stunned that it has such high ratings.
If I wanted to read bad fanfiction, I'd be doing it for free.
This book white washes all the issues of becoming pregnant at sixteen and quickly became propoganda for the pro-life movement. And the thing that gets me is that Hamling had a potentially good idea here - how does a teenage girl cope with a pregnancy when her parents both have opposing points of view on the subject, one convincing her to carry the baby to term, and the other convinced it will ruin her life and opting for abortion? That could have been a thought provoking book. But what Hamling gave us was something that there are no words for.
SPOILERS FROM HERE ON OUT.
TLDR - This book made me angry because of how blatantly pro-life it was, whilst not touching on any realistic issues for pregnant teenagers and their families, or presenting a realistic situation at all - I am amazed anyone can consider such an issue so black and white. It becomes dangerous, in painting such a one sided and unrealistic portrait of what teen pregnancy is like (there's a nasty reference to Teen Mom late in the book). Beside that, it was rushed and poorly written, and I remain stunned that it has such high ratings.
If I wanted to read bad fanfiction, I'd be doing it for free.
January 10, 2026
This is a platform for the author's anti-abortion stance. It also contains a whole lot of syrup, drama upon drama, and some poor writing. For me, though, the deal breaker was the view that one is seen as a moral person not for kindness, honesty or even hard work, but for avoiding abortion. A tragic side story includes an innocent girl, a victim of violence and incest, who opts for abortion and cannot live with the guilt of what she has done. This is to contrast with the happy (and unrealistic) conclusion of the story of the main character, Maya, a 16-year-old straight-A high school student.
Even the stain of sexual transgression is removed from Maya and her boyfriend, Alex. They conceive their child while high on ecstasy, accidentally ingested at a party thrown by a "slut" of a friend. They left the party after Maya was manhandled by some older kid while Alex was in the bathroom. (He TOLD her to wait right outside the door, but there she goes, walking right down the hallway where god only knows what might happen!) But the ecstasy and the sight of Alex is apparently enought to shift the libido into overdrive.
***SPOILER ALERT***
Maya nearly dies from the ecstasy. Isolated from her family and from Alex, whom she believes to be interested in a slut named Sammy, she seeks an abortion. She runs away at the last moment. Through an unlikely set of circumstances, it becomes known that she was at the clinic.
She is taunted at school, branded as a slut (even if she's really not) to the point where she must take classes at home. She later suffers from preeclampsia, but by golly, she finishes high school ahead of time.
She has a miracle baby--you know, the kind that never spits up on you. When she has trouble learning to breast feed, her boyfriend--a teenage boy!--not a nurse--is the one who shows her how. The baby may need a diaper change or two, but he never smells bad. Maya may stay up late at night now, but not enough to interfer with her sleep. And all this because she avoided having an abortion.
***END SPOILER ALERT***
As for the quality of writing I offer a few examples:
1) Spending time with him was like going to a favorite restaurant—delicious and satisfying. (Loc. 115)
2)People littered the open area around the bar and danced. Most were not dancing nice. (Loc. 482-83)
3)Maya would’ve asked about adoption, but the woman already answered the question. “I guess you already answered my questions." (Loc 1592-93)
4)Wondering if she’d done something wrong, Maya made one last effort. “Did I do something wrong?" (Loc. 3471-72)
I understand the author is writing on a topic that peoople have strong feelings about and is targeting an audience that reacts strongly to emotion-laden stories. Nevertheless, her ideology overruns any sense of reality and makes the story not only unrealistic but silly. Add in the unpolished writing and what is left is not an enjoyable read.
Even the stain of sexual transgression is removed from Maya and her boyfriend, Alex. They conceive their child while high on ecstasy, accidentally ingested at a party thrown by a "slut" of a friend. They left the party after Maya was manhandled by some older kid while Alex was in the bathroom. (He TOLD her to wait right outside the door, but there she goes, walking right down the hallway where god only knows what might happen!) But the ecstasy and the sight of Alex is apparently enought to shift the libido into overdrive.
***SPOILER ALERT***
Maya nearly dies from the ecstasy. Isolated from her family and from Alex, whom she believes to be interested in a slut named Sammy, she seeks an abortion. She runs away at the last moment. Through an unlikely set of circumstances, it becomes known that she was at the clinic.
She is taunted at school, branded as a slut (even if she's really not) to the point where she must take classes at home. She later suffers from preeclampsia, but by golly, she finishes high school ahead of time.
She has a miracle baby--you know, the kind that never spits up on you. When she has trouble learning to breast feed, her boyfriend--a teenage boy!--not a nurse--is the one who shows her how. The baby may need a diaper change or two, but he never smells bad. Maya may stay up late at night now, but not enough to interfer with her sleep. And all this because she avoided having an abortion.
***END SPOILER ALERT***
As for the quality of writing I offer a few examples:
1) Spending time with him was like going to a favorite restaurant—delicious and satisfying. (Loc. 115)
2)People littered the open area around the bar and danced. Most were not dancing nice. (Loc. 482-83)
3)Maya would’ve asked about adoption, but the woman already answered the question. “I guess you already answered my questions." (Loc 1592-93)
4)Wondering if she’d done something wrong, Maya made one last effort. “Did I do something wrong?" (Loc. 3471-72)
I understand the author is writing on a topic that peoople have strong feelings about and is targeting an audience that reacts strongly to emotion-laden stories. Nevertheless, her ideology overruns any sense of reality and makes the story not only unrealistic but silly. Add in the unpolished writing and what is left is not an enjoyable read.
March 17, 2023
If this book had a smell, you could bottle it and call it essence of butt-crack.
AWFUL! Not only the writing and the fear tactics used but the unbelievable dialog that had absolutely no relevance or relatability to teenagers.
If I can pull anything positive out of this book, I would say I agree with the author about this message: Teens- drugs are bad no matter what!! Getting pregnant at 16 is not cool. Prolife vs Prochoice issues are ok discussions to have, they are issues to stand up for, debate, defend, or disagree on, however this book went about it in all the ways that make me want to eat my hands off.
AWFUL! Not only the writing and the fear tactics used but the unbelievable dialog that had absolutely no relevance or relatability to teenagers.
If I can pull anything positive out of this book, I would say I agree with the author about this message: Teens- drugs are bad no matter what!! Getting pregnant at 16 is not cool. Prolife vs Prochoice issues are ok discussions to have, they are issues to stand up for, debate, defend, or disagree on, however this book went about it in all the ways that make me want to eat my hands off.
September 10, 2012
This book is a fairy tale and every tragic thing that could possibly happen in a teenagers life rolled into one. It's absolute crap and I actually laughed at so many serious parts throughout the book. I honestly cannot believe they would have teenagers read this. It is so unrealistic and so one sided. Pro lifers would love this story and the total ignorance of the book.
December 8, 2012
Wow! What a story! This is one of the best romantic stories I've ever read. Once I started reading it, I couldn't put it down. I kept reading day and night for two days until I finished it. Although it's a great love story, it's also a tearjerker. Seriously, you'll need tissues, it had me tearing up in quite a few chapters. Maya and Alex are two teenagers who fall in love. They're still at school and one night at a party, they eat some Jello tarts that have been spiked with a drug. They're unaware of what is in the jello, but it lowers their inhibitions and they end up having sex for the first time.
When Maya realizes she's pregnant, she's worries she'll lose Alex, and even if she doesn't and he agrees to marry her, she worries they'll end up in disaster like the statistics show for teen marriages. Maya decides not to tell her parents, or Alex. She makes her decision all alone. Deciding whether to keep the baby, put it up for adoption, or have an abortion is an extremely difficult decision for a sixteen-year-old girl to make. I won't say what her decision is and give spoilers, but the story takes many twists and turns and has you on the edge of your seat. The book is very well written and the two main characters are so endearing you just want everything to go right for them. But life doesn't always work out that way as these teens find out.
Melisa Hamling really knows how to pull at the heart strings as well as tell a great story. I could really sympathize with Maya and I felt every emotion she went through because I had to make the same decision at sixteen when I fell pregnant to my teenage boyfriend. My boyfriend was very supportive and married me, and we're still married, but I won't say what happens to this young couple. You'll have to read the story to find out. Deciding what to do about unexpected pregnancy is hard for any woman, and harder for teenagers. Only the person making that choice knows what is best for them and their circumstances.
I highly recommend Twenty Weeks for all teenagers as well as adults. It's full of information as well as a great page turner. I can't wait to read more from Melisa Hamling. I'm stoked that I've found a new author that I love.
When Maya realizes she's pregnant, she's worries she'll lose Alex, and even if she doesn't and he agrees to marry her, she worries they'll end up in disaster like the statistics show for teen marriages. Maya decides not to tell her parents, or Alex. She makes her decision all alone. Deciding whether to keep the baby, put it up for adoption, or have an abortion is an extremely difficult decision for a sixteen-year-old girl to make. I won't say what her decision is and give spoilers, but the story takes many twists and turns and has you on the edge of your seat. The book is very well written and the two main characters are so endearing you just want everything to go right for them. But life doesn't always work out that way as these teens find out.
Melisa Hamling really knows how to pull at the heart strings as well as tell a great story. I could really sympathize with Maya and I felt every emotion she went through because I had to make the same decision at sixteen when I fell pregnant to my teenage boyfriend. My boyfriend was very supportive and married me, and we're still married, but I won't say what happens to this young couple. You'll have to read the story to find out. Deciding what to do about unexpected pregnancy is hard for any woman, and harder for teenagers. Only the person making that choice knows what is best for them and their circumstances.
I highly recommend Twenty Weeks for all teenagers as well as adults. It's full of information as well as a great page turner. I can't wait to read more from Melisa Hamling. I'm stoked that I've found a new author that I love.
March 14, 2012
I LOVED THIS BOOK! It is AMAZING! I HIGHLY recommend ALL Young Adults read this book, including the guys! Adults, too! I LOVED this story, and it has SO many issues to bring to the attention of everyone. This author has written an outstanding story!
This book is SO FULL of action, "of life as it happens", that when you start reading it, the next thing you know, it is over! You don't even think of putting this book down because the story is SO gripping and compelling. It is so full of events, you are completely immersed in this story. The author does such a compelling job of bringing these characters in this story to life, you feel as if you know and have known them their entire lives. As you are reading along, the next thing you know, it is over, and you do feel a variety of mixed emotions, but still very satisfied.
The author wrote this book beautifully, and the story is so good, very realistic, interesting, and shocking at times, that we don't even think of putting this book down. I just read, and read, and read! This story could happen, and does happen to ANY one of us or our children, or our friends and their children, etc. This story is very realistic as to what can really happen in real life, and I believe this is what held my attention and kept me cut off from the rest of the world for several hours, knowing this does happen, and happens every day.
WARNING ABOUT THE CONTENT: This book IS about Teen Pregnancy, Abortion and other life events that are not very ideal, but DO happen. It is a VERY realistic account of what could happen during a procedure such as an abortion, and also contains other subject matter relating to a suicide, drugs and one other bad thing (if I say what it is, it will be a spoiler to the people who read this book, so I will not mention it.) If you are a parent that does NOT want your child to read about these very realistic life occurrences that DO happen in real life every day, that is your choice. I can only HOPE you would allow your child to know of the things that are of our world so your children are aware and prepared if they come across some of these issues. They need to be prepared for life as it happens, and to keep them sheltered from life is not a good thing, in my opinion. Our kids DO NEED to know what IS out there. I happen to feel that ALL Young Adults DO NEED to know these types of things 'do' happen, or could happen, and this book 'should' be read by EVERYONE! Parents 'should' want their children to know what really COULD AND DOES happen in life, but I DO warn/caution you as to the subject matter of this book. NO ONE should be denied learning about the truth of the real things that do occur today, and yesterday for that matter, yesterday it was just much more secretive.
Personally, I am a "realist" when it comes to life, or at least I try to be as much as I possibly can be, as much of what I know, I want my kids to know. The hard part is when even the parent does not know what is going on! It happens!
About reading this book, if my son or daughter were younger, probably at age 12, I would have asked them to please read this book. They are older now, and I will EVEN NOW ask them to read this book, even if they are older. I have always given my children the the tools necessary to have the opportunity to know what the 'real world is really like in realistic terms', so they can move ahead and make informed decisions without wearing 'rose-colored glasses'. I want my children to KNOW what life could bring their way in their future, and for them to know I have never held anything back from them, of what I know about, of which they 'should' know as well. This is one book I would definitely WANT them to read! I think ALL Young Adults SHOULD read this book! Including the guys as I stated above!
Yes, our SONS 'need' to read this book, too. When it comes to 'Teen Pregnancy' and other decisions to be made, our Young MEN ARE JUST AS MUCH RESPONSIBLE OF A RESULTING PREGNANCY AS OUR DAUGHTERS ARE AND THE DECISIONS THAT NEED TO BE MADE! Both sexes have an equal part in the sexual encounter(s), so the decision making does NOT fall on just ONE PART of the COUPLE. It is not "JUST" the woman's issue to deal with, but BOTH partners should be equally responsible/involved, which is why I believe BOTH sexes SHOULD READ THIS BOOK. I'm going to use the common phrase of 'you play, you pay', so be prepared to live with ANY consequence!
This book can/could be VERY controversial as well, depending upon your position of abortion, but that is NOT the issue the author is bringing up in this book. It IS discussed between the parents in this book, but this book is NOT PRO, NOR ANTI-ABORTION, IT IS JUST A PART OF THE STORY. I want to make this clear from the start so no one decides NOT to read this book because I feel it is such a powerful book that everyone should read it. I am only covering this as it 'could be' a possible issue to some people. Some people may think it could be Pro or Anti and make the decision right there to NOT read it based upon that right off the bat. That is NOT what this book is about at all. PLEASE READ THIS BOOK! I believe it is VITAL!
The author covers SO much information about these two young teenagers' lives, it is a good story and very well written, NOT to be missed!
This book is about two young teenagers, Maya, who is 16, and Andrea, who is 19. They happen to meet at an Abortion Clinic. They become fast friends. They are both pregnant and both are considering having an abortion. This visit, when they meet, happens to be their first visit to the clinic, to find out how far along they are in their pregnancies, to get a tour of the clinic, are given information to take home to read about abortions, as they must wait 48 hours before making a final decision to abort the 'glob of tissue' they are told, or not. It is the law. They exchange phone numbers, but Andrea tells Maya NOT to call her, that she will call her at all times. She is very serious and adamant about these instructions. Maya wonders why Andrea is so strict about this.
Maya and Andrea become fast and great friends. Maya ends up spending a lot of time at Andrea's house when her father is not home. She is not allowed to be at Andrea's house when her father is home. Andrea also has a little sister who is a doll. She wants to be included in all the fun these girls have together. Maya starts to learn some things that makes her question things about Andrea, and it leaves her puzzled.
The two girls have two days to decide what to do. They make their appointments and they just happen to be on the same day within a few hours apart.
Now you know the premise of this story. For me to go on any further would spoil this book for you because SO much happens! This really is all the information you need to know for now, and all I can tell you. Now it's up to you to purchase this book and read the rest of this story and just get lost in it! You really will get lost in this story. Some of it is quite shocking. You will laugh, you will cry, you will be stunned. At times you won't know how to feel. This story is so moving and touching.
The author did such a wonderful job writing this story, as I said above, you really can't put this book down. She really got into the heads of these characters and let them tell their story, and these characters did tell their story. You MUST keep reading to find out what happens next. Again, this book is so realistic, I guess that is why some of the things that happen are so shocking and the story so gripping. We find ourselves cheering Andrea on when things happen in which she needs to stand up for herself and more. This character really grows up, in maturity as well, in a short amount of time. I loved this character. She is so true-to-life, you feel as if you have known her your whole life. All the characters are written with such substance like this. The author did a TREMENDOUS job with all the characters. She also made it so this book is by no means predictable at all! You may 'think' you might know what is going to happen next, but you don't. I think this is another reason I could not stop reading this book! I HAD to know what happened next! I can say this book held my interest from the time I opened it to the first page, until I put it down done! I HIGHLY recommend it! This is a DEFINITE 5-STAR BOOK in my opinion! If I could rate it a "10", I WOULD!
Enjoy reading this one! Make sure you have some time to set aside because I'm dead serious, you will NOT want to put this book down! I think IF I 'had' to put this book down, I would not have stopped thinking about it! I would have done whatever I had to in order to get back to it. I just LOVED this book, and you will, too! Enjoy!
Laurie
I received this book for “FREE” from the Author, Melissa M Hamling in exchange to read the book and write a review about it. It is NOT required for the review to be either positive or negative, but, “of my own opinion.” I was provided with “NO MONIES” to read and write a review for this book, except for the pure enjoyment of reading it. I am disclosing this information in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255, http://www.access.gpo.gov/nara/cfr/wa...
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This book is SO FULL of action, "of life as it happens", that when you start reading it, the next thing you know, it is over! You don't even think of putting this book down because the story is SO gripping and compelling. It is so full of events, you are completely immersed in this story. The author does such a compelling job of bringing these characters in this story to life, you feel as if you know and have known them their entire lives. As you are reading along, the next thing you know, it is over, and you do feel a variety of mixed emotions, but still very satisfied.
The author wrote this book beautifully, and the story is so good, very realistic, interesting, and shocking at times, that we don't even think of putting this book down. I just read, and read, and read! This story could happen, and does happen to ANY one of us or our children, or our friends and their children, etc. This story is very realistic as to what can really happen in real life, and I believe this is what held my attention and kept me cut off from the rest of the world for several hours, knowing this does happen, and happens every day.
WARNING ABOUT THE CONTENT: This book IS about Teen Pregnancy, Abortion and other life events that are not very ideal, but DO happen. It is a VERY realistic account of what could happen during a procedure such as an abortion, and also contains other subject matter relating to a suicide, drugs and one other bad thing (if I say what it is, it will be a spoiler to the people who read this book, so I will not mention it.) If you are a parent that does NOT want your child to read about these very realistic life occurrences that DO happen in real life every day, that is your choice. I can only HOPE you would allow your child to know of the things that are of our world so your children are aware and prepared if they come across some of these issues. They need to be prepared for life as it happens, and to keep them sheltered from life is not a good thing, in my opinion. Our kids DO NEED to know what IS out there. I happen to feel that ALL Young Adults DO NEED to know these types of things 'do' happen, or could happen, and this book 'should' be read by EVERYONE! Parents 'should' want their children to know what really COULD AND DOES happen in life, but I DO warn/caution you as to the subject matter of this book. NO ONE should be denied learning about the truth of the real things that do occur today, and yesterday for that matter, yesterday it was just much more secretive.
Personally, I am a "realist" when it comes to life, or at least I try to be as much as I possibly can be, as much of what I know, I want my kids to know. The hard part is when even the parent does not know what is going on! It happens!
About reading this book, if my son or daughter were younger, probably at age 12, I would have asked them to please read this book. They are older now, and I will EVEN NOW ask them to read this book, even if they are older. I have always given my children the the tools necessary to have the opportunity to know what the 'real world is really like in realistic terms', so they can move ahead and make informed decisions without wearing 'rose-colored glasses'. I want my children to KNOW what life could bring their way in their future, and for them to know I have never held anything back from them, of what I know about, of which they 'should' know as well. This is one book I would definitely WANT them to read! I think ALL Young Adults SHOULD read this book! Including the guys as I stated above!
Yes, our SONS 'need' to read this book, too. When it comes to 'Teen Pregnancy' and other decisions to be made, our Young MEN ARE JUST AS MUCH RESPONSIBLE OF A RESULTING PREGNANCY AS OUR DAUGHTERS ARE AND THE DECISIONS THAT NEED TO BE MADE! Both sexes have an equal part in the sexual encounter(s), so the decision making does NOT fall on just ONE PART of the COUPLE. It is not "JUST" the woman's issue to deal with, but BOTH partners should be equally responsible/involved, which is why I believe BOTH sexes SHOULD READ THIS BOOK. I'm going to use the common phrase of 'you play, you pay', so be prepared to live with ANY consequence!
This book can/could be VERY controversial as well, depending upon your position of abortion, but that is NOT the issue the author is bringing up in this book. It IS discussed between the parents in this book, but this book is NOT PRO, NOR ANTI-ABORTION, IT IS JUST A PART OF THE STORY. I want to make this clear from the start so no one decides NOT to read this book because I feel it is such a powerful book that everyone should read it. I am only covering this as it 'could be' a possible issue to some people. Some people may think it could be Pro or Anti and make the decision right there to NOT read it based upon that right off the bat. That is NOT what this book is about at all. PLEASE READ THIS BOOK! I believe it is VITAL!
The author covers SO much information about these two young teenagers' lives, it is a good story and very well written, NOT to be missed!
This book is about two young teenagers, Maya, who is 16, and Andrea, who is 19. They happen to meet at an Abortion Clinic. They become fast friends. They are both pregnant and both are considering having an abortion. This visit, when they meet, happens to be their first visit to the clinic, to find out how far along they are in their pregnancies, to get a tour of the clinic, are given information to take home to read about abortions, as they must wait 48 hours before making a final decision to abort the 'glob of tissue' they are told, or not. It is the law. They exchange phone numbers, but Andrea tells Maya NOT to call her, that she will call her at all times. She is very serious and adamant about these instructions. Maya wonders why Andrea is so strict about this.
Maya and Andrea become fast and great friends. Maya ends up spending a lot of time at Andrea's house when her father is not home. She is not allowed to be at Andrea's house when her father is home. Andrea also has a little sister who is a doll. She wants to be included in all the fun these girls have together. Maya starts to learn some things that makes her question things about Andrea, and it leaves her puzzled.
The two girls have two days to decide what to do. They make their appointments and they just happen to be on the same day within a few hours apart.
Now you know the premise of this story. For me to go on any further would spoil this book for you because SO much happens! This really is all the information you need to know for now, and all I can tell you. Now it's up to you to purchase this book and read the rest of this story and just get lost in it! You really will get lost in this story. Some of it is quite shocking. You will laugh, you will cry, you will be stunned. At times you won't know how to feel. This story is so moving and touching.
The author did such a wonderful job writing this story, as I said above, you really can't put this book down. She really got into the heads of these characters and let them tell their story, and these characters did tell their story. You MUST keep reading to find out what happens next. Again, this book is so realistic, I guess that is why some of the things that happen are so shocking and the story so gripping. We find ourselves cheering Andrea on when things happen in which she needs to stand up for herself and more. This character really grows up, in maturity as well, in a short amount of time. I loved this character. She is so true-to-life, you feel as if you have known her your whole life. All the characters are written with such substance like this. The author did a TREMENDOUS job with all the characters. She also made it so this book is by no means predictable at all! You may 'think' you might know what is going to happen next, but you don't. I think this is another reason I could not stop reading this book! I HAD to know what happened next! I can say this book held my interest from the time I opened it to the first page, until I put it down done! I HIGHLY recommend it! This is a DEFINITE 5-STAR BOOK in my opinion! If I could rate it a "10", I WOULD!
Enjoy reading this one! Make sure you have some time to set aside because I'm dead serious, you will NOT want to put this book down! I think IF I 'had' to put this book down, I would not have stopped thinking about it! I would have done whatever I had to in order to get back to it. I just LOVED this book, and you will, too! Enjoy!
Laurie
I received this book for “FREE” from the Author, Melissa M Hamling in exchange to read the book and write a review about it. It is NOT required for the review to be either positive or negative, but, “of my own opinion.” I was provided with “NO MONIES” to read and write a review for this book, except for the pure enjoyment of reading it. I am disclosing this information in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255, http://www.access.gpo.gov/nara/cfr/wa...
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July 27, 2012
I found this book to be a really sweet and fairly realistic account of a young girls struggle with what to do when she finds out she's pregnant at 16. I've noticed that some of the reviewers say that this doesn't take sides on the abortion topic, but honestly it really does. This book is pro-life and that is the main point of it. I really don't mind that because honestly I'm fairly pro-life myself, but others who feel strongly in their beliefs may find this book too controversial to them. I highly recommend it to anyone who is on the fence though, since I believe that it could help sway you towards being pro-life, which is obvious if you know anything about conception. I loved how the author made Maya's mother a NICU nurse who was always working to save premature babies, giving the story another vision. The fathers take is also fairly typical of men, he believes it's women's business and he should stay out of it, but he doesn't want any of the women in his life to make that decision. My father does this on the fence thing, and it really bothers me, since he's very pro-fathers in all other regards.
Anyways, beyond the pro-life agenda, there is a really cute romance between Maya and the babies father Alex. I found the drama to be realistic for what I know of teenagers, jealousy, drug use, sneaking around. At times the book did get a little too unrealistic, although it might be an honest portrayal of how a pro-life family would feel after they realize that they're daughter didn't get the abortion they thought she did. I think that my husband and I would be almost relieved like these parents were, but still sometimes they seemed a little too good to be true. The side story with Andrea was heartbreaking, and I had a really hard time reading it. Not because it doesn't happen, but just because it was really that touching. I couldn't imagine what I would do if a friend of mine went through all that.
I also loved how the author followed up, continuing the story a little bit after the baby was born, and even to the first birthday, and then to a small chapter of 5 years later when the Alex and Maya are married and expecting they're second child. It was nice to see that they actually made it work out. I think this story could be inspirational to girls and parents who are faced with similar situations. As a married mother, I know longer have to worry about this situation for myself, but it's always nice to know what the kids of later generations are facing. As parents it's our job to stay tuned in to the dangers and trends to protect them as best we can. Also I like to think that I could take inspiration from Alex and Maya's parents and make the best of a bad situation, although it would be very hard at first.
I think overall it sent it's message out strong and clear, and I hope it becomes popular and more teenagers pick it up and read it for multiple reasons, especially those who find themselves in a similar situation. A child really isn't the end of the world or the biggest mistake of your life, you can still make it a positive thing. As the older sister to a teenage mother, I can tell you from watching my sis, it's not always happily ever after life Maya got at first, but that doesn't mean those things don't come later. My sister has a beautiful 6 year old daughter, and is now married to a wonderful man who she has two more daughters with. It was more difficult for her, but through the support of our family, me, and a strong will she overcame the statistics and so can any other girl out there. I think this is where this book really shines, it doesn't idealize teen pregnancy, but it also doesn't demonize it so that young girls feel so guilty and worthless they end up making another mistake that haunts them.
Anyways, beyond the pro-life agenda, there is a really cute romance between Maya and the babies father Alex. I found the drama to be realistic for what I know of teenagers, jealousy, drug use, sneaking around. At times the book did get a little too unrealistic, although it might be an honest portrayal of how a pro-life family would feel after they realize that they're daughter didn't get the abortion they thought she did. I think that my husband and I would be almost relieved like these parents were, but still sometimes they seemed a little too good to be true. The side story with Andrea was heartbreaking, and I had a really hard time reading it. Not because it doesn't happen, but just because it was really that touching. I couldn't imagine what I would do if a friend of mine went through all that.
I also loved how the author followed up, continuing the story a little bit after the baby was born, and even to the first birthday, and then to a small chapter of 5 years later when the Alex and Maya are married and expecting they're second child. It was nice to see that they actually made it work out. I think this story could be inspirational to girls and parents who are faced with similar situations. As a married mother, I know longer have to worry about this situation for myself, but it's always nice to know what the kids of later generations are facing. As parents it's our job to stay tuned in to the dangers and trends to protect them as best we can. Also I like to think that I could take inspiration from Alex and Maya's parents and make the best of a bad situation, although it would be very hard at first.
I think overall it sent it's message out strong and clear, and I hope it becomes popular and more teenagers pick it up and read it for multiple reasons, especially those who find themselves in a similar situation. A child really isn't the end of the world or the biggest mistake of your life, you can still make it a positive thing. As the older sister to a teenage mother, I can tell you from watching my sis, it's not always happily ever after life Maya got at first, but that doesn't mean those things don't come later. My sister has a beautiful 6 year old daughter, and is now married to a wonderful man who she has two more daughters with. It was more difficult for her, but through the support of our family, me, and a strong will she overcame the statistics and so can any other girl out there. I think this is where this book really shines, it doesn't idealize teen pregnancy, but it also doesn't demonize it so that young girls feel so guilty and worthless they end up making another mistake that haunts them.
February 26, 2013
Author: Melisa Hamling
Published By: Rachelle Ayala Publishing, LLC.
Age Recommended: Teen 14+ YA +Adult
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Rating: 5
Review:
"Twenty Weeks" by Melisa Hamling was a novel that I could see it be of a great benefit read for the 'Teen 14+ and YA over pregnancy. This author did a wonderful job with describing what difficulties that could arrive especially due to 'lack of experience and maturity.' I liked all of the characters being so well developed that really was able to help understand 'how the protagonist makes her decisions and why." This author was able to write a very believable novel that kept the reader engaged with this controversial subject using 'care, warmth and understanding.' The characters from Maya, Alex, Mallory, Michelle, William, Lindee, Sammy, Sterling, Chelsea, Cassandra, Joey, Jeanna, Dr. Jan, Barbara, Dave, Andrea, Anna, Mr Hobson, Dale, to a few others...really giving the reader a captivating read.
I loved how this story was lead from before it all ... continuing with the story after the birth of the baby(Evan Christopher)...on to his first birthday...and finally up to ...well this is the part that I will say you must pick up "Twenty Weeks" to see the end of this very good story that seemed so very real. How the author was able to blend in the rest of this story that was being told was simply good. You will be able to draw your own conclusions from whatever viewpoint you may have after your read. "Twenty Weeks" was definitely a page turner for me...keeping your attention till the end. Yes, there will be a abortion issue that seemed to go on and on but I feel it is a personal 'choice between a teenagers, her feelings for herself...the fetus and her relationship with God.' "Twenty Weeks" also deals with 'child abuse as well as teen pregnancy that was so very well written and easy to read.
This novel is definitely a excellent read...and yes I would recommend "Twenty Weeks" to teenagers, YA as well as adults.
Published By: Rachelle Ayala Publishing, LLC.
Age Recommended: Teen 14+ YA +Adult
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Rating: 5
Review:
"Twenty Weeks" by Melisa Hamling was a novel that I could see it be of a great benefit read for the 'Teen 14+ and YA over pregnancy. This author did a wonderful job with describing what difficulties that could arrive especially due to 'lack of experience and maturity.' I liked all of the characters being so well developed that really was able to help understand 'how the protagonist makes her decisions and why." This author was able to write a very believable novel that kept the reader engaged with this controversial subject using 'care, warmth and understanding.' The characters from Maya, Alex, Mallory, Michelle, William, Lindee, Sammy, Sterling, Chelsea, Cassandra, Joey, Jeanna, Dr. Jan, Barbara, Dave, Andrea, Anna, Mr Hobson, Dale, to a few others...really giving the reader a captivating read.
I loved how this story was lead from before it all ... continuing with the story after the birth of the baby(Evan Christopher)...on to his first birthday...and finally up to ...well this is the part that I will say you must pick up "Twenty Weeks" to see the end of this very good story that seemed so very real. How the author was able to blend in the rest of this story that was being told was simply good. You will be able to draw your own conclusions from whatever viewpoint you may have after your read. "Twenty Weeks" was definitely a page turner for me...keeping your attention till the end. Yes, there will be a abortion issue that seemed to go on and on but I feel it is a personal 'choice between a teenagers, her feelings for herself...the fetus and her relationship with God.' "Twenty Weeks" also deals with 'child abuse as well as teen pregnancy that was so very well written and easy to read.
This novel is definitely a excellent read...and yes I would recommend "Twenty Weeks" to teenagers, YA as well as adults.
March 25, 2012
"Twenty Weeks" deals with a very controversial subject. Since the other reviews have already discussed the subject and the storyline this reviewer will discuss the writing, flow and character development.
Firstly, I enjoyed the book as it dealt with teenagers and the difficulties they face. Ms. Hamling did a great job in defining her teen characters and how they deal with problems based on their lack of experience and maturity. Having two grown daughters and 3 granddaughters, one (17 year old) who lives with me, I am well experienced with teenage girls.
The character development was very good and there was enough back story to understand how the protagonist makes her decisions and why. The secondary characters were filled out enough, for the most part, that we understand their interactions and motivation.
The dialogue between the teenage protagonists was believable and well presented. Although I felt a lack of development of the adult characters in both their dialogue and presentation and motivation.
The book flowed well and there was enough action to keep the plot moving forward and the reader engaged.
With likable characters, good motivation and well written dialogue and plot, this book shows that Ms. Hamling has talent and should continue to develop as a writer. She has dealt with a controversial subject with care, warmth and understanding.
The only real complaint I would have was that the storyline deals with difficult, life changing events and seemed to minimise the real hardship financially, educationally and emotionally facing teenage girls and their parents.
Firstly, I enjoyed the book as it dealt with teenagers and the difficulties they face. Ms. Hamling did a great job in defining her teen characters and how they deal with problems based on their lack of experience and maturity. Having two grown daughters and 3 granddaughters, one (17 year old) who lives with me, I am well experienced with teenage girls.
The character development was very good and there was enough back story to understand how the protagonist makes her decisions and why. The secondary characters were filled out enough, for the most part, that we understand their interactions and motivation.
The dialogue between the teenage protagonists was believable and well presented. Although I felt a lack of development of the adult characters in both their dialogue and presentation and motivation.
The book flowed well and there was enough action to keep the plot moving forward and the reader engaged.
With likable characters, good motivation and well written dialogue and plot, this book shows that Ms. Hamling has talent and should continue to develop as a writer. She has dealt with a controversial subject with care, warmth and understanding.
The only real complaint I would have was that the storyline deals with difficult, life changing events and seemed to minimise the real hardship financially, educationally and emotionally facing teenage girls and their parents.
August 30, 2012
DEFIANTLY NOT FOR THE FAINT HEARTED OR FOR PEOPLE YOUNGER THAN 14
this book wow, it had be crying for ages and ages at the very end, this story is not your typical of im pregnant and im going to get all depressed about it because i don't know who the father is no, this is not one of these books.
it surprised me actually because she has such a loving boyfriend the whole way through it and not once does he ever leave her out of his own will!
this book made me fall in love with every character! you feel sorry for the main character throughout as she is put through so much stuff, especially when she considers abortion...it also makes you question the need for abortion, its quite religious in that sense but not once does it lead a for or against abortion which i liked as i can't stand books which are really biased as it makes people think its the right or wrong thing to do when it should be out of their own will power, anyways off that subject this book had a very clear story and not once did i put this book down, i read this in about a day i think?
thats really good for someone who takes a while to read a book...
the best thing about this book is that justice is served to everyone, she and her boyfriend get what they deserve and so do the other characters in this book.
for me, this is most have read for everyone!
please write another Melisa...i will love you forever!
this book wow, it had be crying for ages and ages at the very end, this story is not your typical of im pregnant and im going to get all depressed about it because i don't know who the father is no, this is not one of these books.
it surprised me actually because she has such a loving boyfriend the whole way through it and not once does he ever leave her out of his own will!
this book made me fall in love with every character! you feel sorry for the main character throughout as she is put through so much stuff, especially when she considers abortion...it also makes you question the need for abortion, its quite religious in that sense but not once does it lead a for or against abortion which i liked as i can't stand books which are really biased as it makes people think its the right or wrong thing to do when it should be out of their own will power, anyways off that subject this book had a very clear story and not once did i put this book down, i read this in about a day i think?
thats really good for someone who takes a while to read a book...
the best thing about this book is that justice is served to everyone, she and her boyfriend get what they deserve and so do the other characters in this book.
for me, this is most have read for everyone!
please write another Melisa...i will love you forever!
September 3, 2012
This book was amazing not only would you be crying you will also be laughing. Maya is a16 year old who finds herself pregnant. She take you a journey that every young woman considers and how to deal with a pregnancy at such a young age.
October 2, 2011
Maya thought back to what she had been told at the clinic. "They said it was no big deal. The thing inside of me was just a blob of nothing, just some tissue." She paused and drew imaginary circles on her sheet with her index finger. Were the people at the clinic being truthful with her? How many weeks was she? How could it be possible? It had only happened once, and she....they hadn't meant to do "it" at all....they hadn't been themselves really..that night...It was those stupid boys fault who had supplied the strange Candy.
Maya Rockwell is sixteen and considered a good, sensible girl. Alex was her boyfriend and they both felt the same there was no need to rush things at all, they were both happy to wait until they were older to do "it". Maya didn't have and didn't want a bad reputation, not like the reputation of Sammy who it was rumoured had already had one abortion. Sammy had really taken some serious hassle over that. So when Maya finally realises she is pregnant she thinks she will take care of it all herself, quietly and efficiently. Maya is determined what her choice should be and what she needs to do, that is until in one moment...one horribly terrifying moment she see's things she wasn't meant to and she can no longer pretend that she is ignorant to the realities of her situation and the realities of the procedure she is seriously thinking of undergoing.
After what she has seen, will Maya make the right decision for herself and her unborn child? Will Maya take a stand after seeing what has happened to her newly made friend? Can Maya also go on to brave the heat of negativity publicity and see justice done for that friend ? The friend whom Maya learns has gone through a living hell of torment and continuing abuse.
This book tackles some extremely important issues within it. It has Child Abuse, Abortion, Teenage Pregnancy, and Illegal Drugs and the usage of drugs, as well as the dangers of pregnancy that these days seem to be quite forgotten. I found the information about fetus sizes etc truthful and the book made you wonder if there are some of these shady clinics still in action in the present day! The book has Maya's parents arguing about such abortion clinics. I think it is a very hot topic, that would and could arguments in families even today within real lives. Maya's father agrees with the idea of choice and abortion whereas Maya's mother Michelle, who works in a Neo Natal Unit so she actually has seen the reality of what size a 15 or 20 week gestation fetus really looks like. In real life I think there will always be heated debates on the cut off point for abortion and in some cases even up to the point of should abortion exist. This book handles the subject very well from a pro-abortion point of view for certain cases and for the against abortion, and do you know/realise the truth about abortion point of view too.
The book also shows how school friendships change, people whom you thought were friends that abandon you at the first sign of controversy. it depicts the bitchiness that goes on in today's schools, so comes across realistic. The book see's Maya make friends with a girl she presumes to be in a situation similar to her own, but whose situation is much worse than she could ever have guessed. Maya and Andrea become firm friends and confidants to a point. Maya also befriends Andrea's little sister Anna and is there for Anna later in the story when she most needs it. The book shows the sisterly love between Mallory and Maya that can easily turn to jealousy, though the jealousy is only brief and the sister bond and relationship is strong when Mallory goes to "sort out" those who bully her sister. I am being careful and possibly cryptic in how I am describing things as I do not wish to give away the main parts of the plot and story. I enjoyed the sweet relationship between Maya and Alex, all the good times and then their misunderstandings. In fact the whole story is based around one of their largest misunderstanding where Maya takes something Alex has said as an off hand almost jesting comment to her heart and decides not to reveal the turmoil she is going through to him. Maya tries to make all the hard decisions herself. Maya almost makes what would be the biggest most regretted decision she could ever make but she accidentally see's a procedure she shouldn't at a clinic and that's all she needs to turn around and leave the clinic and face her family and everyone else with her decision. Maya also helps Anna by telling secrets she learned from Andrea so she in turn protects Anna from the same fate as Andrea.
I love the cover of the book too, when you have read the book you feel it just fits!
December 12, 2011
Once again this is another great "indie" story. This book was a really fast read. I read it from one day to the next, that's how good it was. I have learned a lot about pregnancy, implantation, and development. The baby's heart starts beating at three weeks. And in this story at sixteen to twenty weeks they didn't consider it a baby, they considered it "Just a blob of tissue." What a horrible way to speak of a fetus; a harmless tiny person. Abortion is a very controversial subject to which I do my best not to discuss. But in this story some of the biggest issues are abortion and teen pregnancy along with a few more.
In this book, you have sixteen year old Maya. Her very first time of passion with her boyfriend, she became pregnant. She never dared to tell her parents or even her boyfriend Alex. Scared, like many are, her first thought was an abortion. Maya called a women's abortion clinic and made an appointment. Upon arriving at the clinic on the day of her appointment, there were picketers there. Scared and frighten she was ushered in by security into waiting room, where in there was another girl who was in the same situation as her. Having to deal with a teen pregnancy they quickly started talking and became friends. They become each other's support system. Since Maya never told anyone she was pregnant, she found comfort in having Andrea to talk to.
As the days came closer to their second appointment for the actual procedure, they spent lots of time together. They continued to confide in one another and were there for one another. Maya always felt something wasn't right with Andrea. But on the actual day of the procedure, Andrea confirmed exactly what Maya thought. The confession and what she witness in the clinic traumatized her to the core. And with that she made a decision in which she'll have to live with her whole life. Days after the procedure, a horrible tragedy occurred. Having found her only friend in Andrea to only lose her was devastating. Now she had to stand up for what's right.
This book made me cry so much. I cried for Maya, because of the pain she went through when she felt she couldn't go to her parents. I cried for Andrea for what she endured in her young life. I cried because of all the teenage girls out there who get pregnant and choose abortion as a way out. This book touched so many issues. The author didn't sugar coat nothing. Everything was raw and real. I was blessed to not be a teen mom. I can only imagine how my mom would have felt had I gotten pregnant at a young age because she was very strict. It wouldn't have been pretty. But there's so much more to this book. You guys have to read it. You won't be disappointed at all. I love where Melisa took Maya's story.
I recommend this book to every woman out there. This book is amazing! 5/5 stars! A MUST BUY AND A DEFINITE GOOD CHOICE FOR READING!
April 11, 2014
Oh my goodness. This was so awful! I had such high hopes for it. Having parents with opposing viewpoints on abortion and getting pregnant at 16 made for what should've been an interesting concept. Instead the author ruined it by making it an outlandish tale full of scare tactics. Not only that but then no one is made to own up to their mistakes. It's all just brushed off on drugs, bad people, being young, etc. The author could've done a better service to the anti-abortion stance if she talked less about the horrifying details and more about the emotional pain one might experience afterwards. Using scare tactics just makes for a really pathetic argument.
I won't even get started on the other awful plot lines. They were all just so unrealistic.
I'm a teen mom and I try and share my story with young girls as often as I can. I would never recommend this book to any that I talk to.
I won't even get started on the other awful plot lines. They were all just so unrealistic.
I'm a teen mom and I try and share my story with young girls as often as I can. I would never recommend this book to any that I talk to.
February 2, 2012
Loved Loved Loved!!!!! Such an amazing book. I have read a lot of books about teen pregnancy and abortion but none that have affected me so much. I wanted to cry, jump, laugh, and celebrate while reading this book. So many exiting things happening that constantly change what you think is going ti happen. I couldn't put this book down. It grabbed my heart and wouldn't let go. I felt every emotion Maya was feeling. I felt like I was Maya because I felt if I was in the same position I would behave the same way. Maya truly is a teenager and the author did an AMAZING job writing this book!! Two thumbs up!!!
April 7, 2012
I was at the same crossroads as the character Maya in this book so I could relate with her completely. This true to life story following Maya and Alex on their journey through teen pregnancy, is a must read for everyone, not just teens!
Melisa Hamling created a wonderful masterpiece that must be shared. Tell everyone you know to read this book.
Melisa Hamling created a wonderful masterpiece that must be shared. Tell everyone you know to read this book.
March 23, 2012
I really enjoyed this story and would recommend it to anyone with a teenager. The story shows great depth is explaining the life debate without being preachy at all. The characters reamin truthful and are authentic - they do teenage things.
July 26, 2012
In this YA book, Melisa Hamling deals with controversial matters in a knowledgeable way. Teenage problems are enhanced by insecurities and modern reality. I found it easy to fall into Maya's life and feel all the sadness, horror and happiness she was feeling.
August 10, 2012
A beautiful story,that really got to me in parts and was quite upsetting,i think there is a part in this book that is a very sore subject,but also in the same sence has to be known even though it made me cry a few time i really enjoyed it .
August 13, 2012
Was a free book so decided to read. Deals with teen pregnancy and the choice this teen has to make. Loved the book because it supports pro-life. A bit of a fairy tale ending.....but was still a good read.
September 21, 2012
I can't put in words how much I love this book. At the end of every chapter you are stuck wanting to know more and you have to read more otherwise you are asking questions and you go crazy. I would recommend this to everyone.
not-interested
May 25, 2014Based on the reviews heavy pro-life propaganda. No thank you. Being from a state where little is cared for women's rights (both living and dead) are not respected, I don't think I'll be reading this shit.
July 29, 2012
Great book. Somewhat unrealistic in today's world, but great story.
July 31, 2012
terrific book!
August 16, 2012
a very good read.
August 25, 2012
You will either Love it or Hate it !!! There is no grey area because of the abortion topic that is the strongest part of the storyline.
September 3, 2012
I love it . It was a good story . & it made me cry more then once . I would read more of this author book . .
September 21, 2012
all I can say is Wow!! I cried so much while reading this book.
October 21, 2012
Loved, loved, loved this book!!
July 28, 2012
Such a sweet story...I really enjoyed it
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