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Hearts Entwined: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
A slightly more immature Elizabeth Bennet meets Fitzwilliam Darcy London two years earlier than in canon. As a second son, Darcy has chosen the life of a barrister so there are fewer obstacles in their way, and they quickly fall in love. Using the fortune left to him upon his father's death, he invested with Gardiner to make his own fortune, making it easier for the two to wed, along with a legacy set aside for second sons by Darcy's grandfather, the late Earl of Matlock.
Despite this, our dear couple's path is not always easy, as challenges arise as they marry and come together. A vile Mrs. Bennet and Jane's resentment over Elizabeth's good fortune cast shadows over their happiness. The presence of George Wickham and the manoeuvrings of Caroline Bingley further complicate their path. However, despite these tribulations or perhaps because of them, they learn together to surmount them, ultimately weaving their hearts even more profoundly together.
Despite this, our dear couple's path is not always easy, as challenges arise as they marry and come together. A vile Mrs. Bennet and Jane's resentment over Elizabeth's good fortune cast shadows over their happiness. The presence of George Wickham and the manoeuvrings of Caroline Bingley further complicate their path. However, despite these tribulations or perhaps because of them, they learn together to surmount them, ultimately weaving their hearts even more profoundly together.
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Published October 30, 2023
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December 16, 2023
“One love, one heart, one destiny.” –Robert Marley
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature content but not sexually graphic. Adult themes were discussed, death[s], violence mentioned, spousal abuse [mentioned but not described], disappointments, murder… or rather military justice [was quick and painless], attempted murder… on and on.
>>Angst Level: slight as the SBRB was planning to ruin someone, anyone as long as it hurt Darcy.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [11-26-23]. I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. I first read this as it was posted on the forums.
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe where Darcy was a second son who read the law. His elder brother George had inherited Pemberley [2] Lady Anne was still alive [3] NSNJ (Not-So-Nice-Jane) What a self-centered, selfish creature. What can I say? She was Mrs. Bennet’s daughter… not so beautiful for nothing. [4] NSN Mr. & Mrs. Bennet… any Bennet, for that matter. Except Mary, who was a nice person and the only one who loved her elder sister… Lizzy, not Jane. However, it wasn’t long before even the two youngest sisters were disgusted with their family and eldest sister.
“Follow your heart, listen to your inner voice, stop caring about what others think.” –Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
The Bennet family was a mess. Mrs. Bennet and Jane were the pits and Elizabeth was a second-class citizen as far as they were concerned. Mrs. Bennet hated her second daughter for not being the male needed to end the entail. When the girl child was born, she was relegated to the dower house to live with her grandmother until her death. Elizabeth was six years old. Jane only wanted her sister as a foil for her beauty. Lizzy was dark to Jane’s light.
I love the NSN Jane trope. She was deliciously evil and attempted the unthinkable. Yeah, she was a real peach where her younger sister was concerned. Grandmother Bennet had taught Elizabeth how to be a gentlewoman with all the accomplishments needed for the title. On the other hand, Mrs. Fanny Bennet taught Jane how to be selfish, self-centered, vapid, and ignorant. Jane Bennet was a carbon copy of her mother.
Fitzwilliam Darcy had invested with Gardiner and met his niece, Miss Elizabeth, during his visit to Gracechurch Street. Both Elizabeth and Darcy were instantly smitten. That was the beginning of their love story. Their marriage was fraught with problems caused by the master and mistress of Longbourn and their eldest daughter, Jane. While Bennet hid out in his library, his women created mischief and rumors against his second daughter. His indolence and neglect of his family would soon come back to haunt him.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature content but not sexually graphic. Adult themes were discussed, death[s], violence mentioned, spousal abuse [mentioned but not described], disappointments, murder… or rather military justice [was quick and painless], attempted murder… on and on.
>>Angst Level: slight as the SBRB was planning to ruin someone, anyone as long as it hurt Darcy.
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [11-26-23]. I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. I first read this as it was posted on the forums.
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe where Darcy was a second son who read the law. His elder brother George had inherited Pemberley [2] Lady Anne was still alive [3] NSNJ (Not-So-Nice-Jane) What a self-centered, selfish creature. What can I say? She was Mrs. Bennet’s daughter… not so beautiful for nothing. [4] NSN Mr. & Mrs. Bennet… any Bennet, for that matter. Except Mary, who was a nice person and the only one who loved her elder sister… Lizzy, not Jane. However, it wasn’t long before even the two youngest sisters were disgusted with their family and eldest sister.
“Follow your heart, listen to your inner voice, stop caring about what others think.” –Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
The Bennet family was a mess. Mrs. Bennet and Jane were the pits and Elizabeth was a second-class citizen as far as they were concerned. Mrs. Bennet hated her second daughter for not being the male needed to end the entail. When the girl child was born, she was relegated to the dower house to live with her grandmother until her death. Elizabeth was six years old. Jane only wanted her sister as a foil for her beauty. Lizzy was dark to Jane’s light.
I love the NSN Jane trope. She was deliciously evil and attempted the unthinkable. Yeah, she was a real peach where her younger sister was concerned. Grandmother Bennet had taught Elizabeth how to be a gentlewoman with all the accomplishments needed for the title. On the other hand, Mrs. Fanny Bennet taught Jane how to be selfish, self-centered, vapid, and ignorant. Jane Bennet was a carbon copy of her mother.
Fitzwilliam Darcy had invested with Gardiner and met his niece, Miss Elizabeth, during his visit to Gracechurch Street. Both Elizabeth and Darcy were instantly smitten. That was the beginning of their love story. Their marriage was fraught with problems caused by the master and mistress of Longbourn and their eldest daughter, Jane. While Bennet hid out in his library, his women created mischief and rumors against his second daughter. His indolence and neglect of his family would soon come back to haunt him.
December 21, 2023
Completely out of canon,but sweet
I enjoyed this story, it has lots of interesting new concepts and the original characters are w well integrated into the plot. Entertaining.
I enjoyed this story, it has lots of interesting new concepts and the original characters are w well integrated into the plot. Entertaining.
November 8, 2023
Statler and Waldorf award a generous two stars
“Why do we ever come here, I guess we’ll never know…”
I don’t even know where to begin with this. The characters with all the depth of a paper doll, including undeveloped villains? Jane’s switch to the dark side is not believable; nor are Wickham’s and Jane’s machinations.
The inexplicable reason that the characters are younger than in canon (17 and 25)? It changes nothing in the plot.
Major Fitzwilliam’s ability to remove Mr Bennet from Longbourn and hand it to Mr Collins? Or should I mention that Elizabeth and Darcy’s story ends about 80% in?
Perhaps I should mention Elizabeth’s deep worry for the plight of Lydia and Kitty, only to decide she has two much to do at their new estate and maybe school will replace their need for love? No worries—Lady Anne takes the girls to Pemberley.
Characters beating dead horses? Elizabeth might as well have a calling card printed with “Banished to the dower house with her grandmother for six years.” A cue card at Longbourn would come in handy, for the countless—and I mean countless—number of folks who (rightly) tell Jane she has beauty, but is insipid and has no accomplishments or dowry. To wit, ““Have you never wondered why men call on you once or twice and then stop visiting, Miss Bennet? It is because you have nothing other than your looks to recommend you. You do not play, you do not read, or visit the poor—you have no conversation and only seem to be able to smile at them. And, quite frankly, were any of these gentlemen to hear how you speak of your sister, they would want nothing to do with you.” Jane was horrified by the idea. “There is nothing wrong with me. Mama has always told me I am far prettier than any girl in Meryton, and I deserve a wealthy man who would care for me and provide for Mama when my father passes. With the estate entailed away from the female line, it was my duty to marry well, and since I am so beautiful, surely a man will offer for me.”
I could start with any of those, but the biggest problem
is So. Much. Telling. and So. Little. Showing of pertinent information. The tale teems with useless details, including a treatise on a new carriage, which is never mentioned again: “With these discussions fresh in their minds, the couple embarked on their journey in the newly acquired carriage, a generous wedding gift from the Gardiners. The carriage offered ample space, a welcomed change for Fitzwilliam, who was both tall and well-built and had seldom experienced such comfort during his travels. Gardiner had astutely observed the awkward positioning of Fitzwilliam’s legs during travel, which undoubtedly led to discomfort. Therefore, shortly after Fitzwilliam made Elizabeth’s acquaintance, he commissioned a carriage with an extended body to ensure Fitzwilliam’s comfort. This considerate gesture was deeply appreciated, especially given the time they would spend travelling in the carriage during their extended wedding trip.”
Characters, meanwhile, speak in paragraphs: “Blushing furiously, Elizabeth struggled to reply, though she finally found the words. “I have enjoyed meeting Mr. Darcy and getting to know him. And I am very pleased to be here to meet you and Miss Darcy. It is quite a privilege to visit such a beautiful home.” Lady Anne looked around. “I have always appreciated the quiet elegance of Darcy House. When I married my husband, there was little I needed to do to redecorate this home to make it my own. My husband was never one for ostentation, and I could tell he did not like Matlock House when he called on me. I made sure Darcy House remained elegant but comfortable. My sister, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, preferred the ostentation of my mother. Her home, Rosings, is very … ornate, but it is uncomfortable. Of course, my sister prefers people to be uncomfortable in her presence since she thinks that gives her an advantage over them.”
The author’s writers’ group and editor did her no favors.
“Why do we ever come here, I guess we’ll never know…”
I don’t even know where to begin with this. The characters with all the depth of a paper doll, including undeveloped villains? Jane’s switch to the dark side is not believable; nor are Wickham’s and Jane’s machinations.
The inexplicable reason that the characters are younger than in canon (17 and 25)? It changes nothing in the plot.
Major Fitzwilliam’s ability to remove Mr Bennet from Longbourn and hand it to Mr Collins? Or should I mention that Elizabeth and Darcy’s story ends about 80% in?
Perhaps I should mention Elizabeth’s deep worry for the plight of Lydia and Kitty, only to decide she has two much to do at their new estate and maybe school will replace their need for love? No worries—Lady Anne takes the girls to Pemberley.
Characters beating dead horses? Elizabeth might as well have a calling card printed with “Banished to the dower house with her grandmother for six years.” A cue card at Longbourn would come in handy, for the countless—and I mean countless—number of folks who (rightly) tell Jane she has beauty, but is insipid and has no accomplishments or dowry. To wit, ““Have you never wondered why men call on you once or twice and then stop visiting, Miss Bennet? It is because you have nothing other than your looks to recommend you. You do not play, you do not read, or visit the poor—you have no conversation and only seem to be able to smile at them. And, quite frankly, were any of these gentlemen to hear how you speak of your sister, they would want nothing to do with you.” Jane was horrified by the idea. “There is nothing wrong with me. Mama has always told me I am far prettier than any girl in Meryton, and I deserve a wealthy man who would care for me and provide for Mama when my father passes. With the estate entailed away from the female line, it was my duty to marry well, and since I am so beautiful, surely a man will offer for me.”
I could start with any of those, but the biggest problem
is So. Much. Telling. and So. Little. Showing of pertinent information. The tale teems with useless details, including a treatise on a new carriage, which is never mentioned again: “With these discussions fresh in their minds, the couple embarked on their journey in the newly acquired carriage, a generous wedding gift from the Gardiners. The carriage offered ample space, a welcomed change for Fitzwilliam, who was both tall and well-built and had seldom experienced such comfort during his travels. Gardiner had astutely observed the awkward positioning of Fitzwilliam’s legs during travel, which undoubtedly led to discomfort. Therefore, shortly after Fitzwilliam made Elizabeth’s acquaintance, he commissioned a carriage with an extended body to ensure Fitzwilliam’s comfort. This considerate gesture was deeply appreciated, especially given the time they would spend travelling in the carriage during their extended wedding trip.”
Characters, meanwhile, speak in paragraphs: “Blushing furiously, Elizabeth struggled to reply, though she finally found the words. “I have enjoyed meeting Mr. Darcy and getting to know him. And I am very pleased to be here to meet you and Miss Darcy. It is quite a privilege to visit such a beautiful home.” Lady Anne looked around. “I have always appreciated the quiet elegance of Darcy House. When I married my husband, there was little I needed to do to redecorate this home to make it my own. My husband was never one for ostentation, and I could tell he did not like Matlock House when he called on me. I made sure Darcy House remained elegant but comfortable. My sister, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, preferred the ostentation of my mother. Her home, Rosings, is very … ornate, but it is uncomfortable. Of course, my sister prefers people to be uncomfortable in her presence since she thinks that gives her an advantage over them.”
The author’s writers’ group and editor did her no favors.
October 14, 2024
Darcy is a second son
Being a second son, Darcy needs an occupation and is a solicitor. Uncle Gardiner introduces Darcy to Lizzy and they find each other.
The rest of the story is pretty interesting and original. The story reads like we are listening to a narrator tell a story so the strong emotions come across very subdued.
Nice story but it didn’t me laugh or cry.
Being a second son, Darcy needs an occupation and is a solicitor. Uncle Gardiner introduces Darcy to Lizzy and they find each other.
The rest of the story is pretty interesting and original. The story reads like we are listening to a narrator tell a story so the strong emotions come across very subdued.
Nice story but it didn’t me laugh or cry.
November 1, 2023
I was intrigued by the concept for this variation, but found myself disappointed. The plot, characters and relationships felt shallow and under-developed, and the plot veered in borderline ridiculous directions.
February 10, 2024
Vagary indeed.
I looked for the audiobook version on Goodreads, but there isn’t one listed, so am using the paperback version for my review.
This book is indeed a vagary, being almost entirely off-canon which, in my opinion is not necessarily a bad thing. I enjoy different, and this novel definitely fills that bill.
Lady Anne has outlived her husband, Fitzwilliam Darcy is a second son making his living as a barrister and a wise investor with Mr. Gardiner, who introduces him to a 17-year old Elizabeth. The heir to Pemberley is George Darcy who is a bit of a rogue, and intent on marrying a titled woman to aid in his purpose of having a lost Darcy title of Marquess regained.
Elizabeth has come to live with the Gardiners to escape her mother’s cruelty and her father’s indifference. Jane is a mean girl in this book, jealous of Elizabeth and determined to get what she feels is hers.
The story is a long tale, that focuses first on the courtship of ODC leading up to their marriage. I really enjoyed the beginning of the book. Darcy is super sweet, and Elizabeth, while somewhat immature at first, is well portrayed. The remainder of the book has them dealing with obstacles and people trying to disturb their happiness and the group of good and kind friends and family members who circle around them with their advice and support.
The story goes on to address Jane and the Bennet parents and the consequences of their actions, as well as George Wickham, George the heir, and even Charlotte for a time. I found some parts seemed wordy and a tad repetitive. I sort of expected George Darcy to be a scoundrel, but he’s not and ultimately becomes a responsible master of Pemberley. . The ending covers who marries whom, and how many children everyone has, and then who they marry.
Stevie Zimmerman’s five-star narration is always near perfection, and I’m never disappointed with her performance.
I looked for the audiobook version on Goodreads, but there isn’t one listed, so am using the paperback version for my review.
This book is indeed a vagary, being almost entirely off-canon which, in my opinion is not necessarily a bad thing. I enjoy different, and this novel definitely fills that bill.
Lady Anne has outlived her husband, Fitzwilliam Darcy is a second son making his living as a barrister and a wise investor with Mr. Gardiner, who introduces him to a 17-year old Elizabeth. The heir to Pemberley is George Darcy who is a bit of a rogue, and intent on marrying a titled woman to aid in his purpose of having a lost Darcy title of Marquess regained.
Elizabeth has come to live with the Gardiners to escape her mother’s cruelty and her father’s indifference. Jane is a mean girl in this book, jealous of Elizabeth and determined to get what she feels is hers.
The story is a long tale, that focuses first on the courtship of ODC leading up to their marriage. I really enjoyed the beginning of the book. Darcy is super sweet, and Elizabeth, while somewhat immature at first, is well portrayed. The remainder of the book has them dealing with obstacles and people trying to disturb their happiness and the group of good and kind friends and family members who circle around them with their advice and support.
The story goes on to address Jane and the Bennet parents and the consequences of their actions, as well as George Wickham, George the heir, and even Charlotte for a time. I found some parts seemed wordy and a tad repetitive. I sort of expected George Darcy to be a scoundrel, but he’s not and ultimately becomes a responsible master of Pemberley. . The ending covers who marries whom, and how many children everyone has, and then who they marry.
Stevie Zimmerman’s five-star narration is always near perfection, and I’m never disappointed with her performance.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 15, 2026
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Hearts Entwined begins with an engaging premise, introducing a seventeen-year-old Elizabeth Bennet who meets Fitzwilliam Darcy in London two years earlier than in canon. With Darcy as a second son and a barrister, and Elizabeth raised by her grandmother rather than her parents, the story sets the stage for a fresh take on their relationship. These early differences, along with the presence of a living Lady Anne Darcy, immediately caught my attention and created a promising start.
I liked seeing Darcy as a second son in this novel, but that also meant there was far less pride and prejudice at play. And while his role as a barrister could have introduced interesting challenges, most of them were resolved rather easily thanks to inheritances that left him nearly as wealthy as the heir of Pemberley.
Elizabeth’s altered circumstances are an interesting twist too, but I didn’t find it believable that her family would treat her so poorly simply because she was not a boy, especially when her sisters faced no similar treatment. The premise felt a bit exaggerated, and although I wanted to sympathize with her, it was difficult to connect with a version of Elizabeth whose main reaction throughout the story was repeatedly expressing disbelief that Jane could be cruel. Additionally, nearly everyone outside the Bennet family instantly adored her and praised her wit, yet I didn’t see much to justify this admiration beyond fairly empty and repetitive conversations.
I was intrigued by the concept of a “mean Jane,” but the execution didn’t quite work for me either. Like several other characters, she felt a bit one-dimensional, lacking the nuance that could have made this twist truly compelling.
That said, despite the instant attraction (which usually isn’t my preference), the author did include several moments where Darcy and Elizabeth interact meaningfully and gradually fall in love, and those scenes were among the highlights, which I am sure many readers will enjoy.
Overall, Hearts Entwined offers an imaginative re-shaping of beloved characters and an intriguing starting point that many JAFF readers will find appealing. While some elements didn’t work as well for me, particularly the character dynamics and the story’s pacing, I still appreciated the author’s creativity and the tender moments shared between Darcy and Elizabeth. Readers who enjoy alternate-scenario variations with younger versions of the couple may find this a refreshing take on a well-known tale.
https://frompemberleytomilton.wordpre...
Hearts Entwined begins with an engaging premise, introducing a seventeen-year-old Elizabeth Bennet who meets Fitzwilliam Darcy in London two years earlier than in canon. With Darcy as a second son and a barrister, and Elizabeth raised by her grandmother rather than her parents, the story sets the stage for a fresh take on their relationship. These early differences, along with the presence of a living Lady Anne Darcy, immediately caught my attention and created a promising start.
I liked seeing Darcy as a second son in this novel, but that also meant there was far less pride and prejudice at play. And while his role as a barrister could have introduced interesting challenges, most of them were resolved rather easily thanks to inheritances that left him nearly as wealthy as the heir of Pemberley.
Elizabeth’s altered circumstances are an interesting twist too, but I didn’t find it believable that her family would treat her so poorly simply because she was not a boy, especially when her sisters faced no similar treatment. The premise felt a bit exaggerated, and although I wanted to sympathize with her, it was difficult to connect with a version of Elizabeth whose main reaction throughout the story was repeatedly expressing disbelief that Jane could be cruel. Additionally, nearly everyone outside the Bennet family instantly adored her and praised her wit, yet I didn’t see much to justify this admiration beyond fairly empty and repetitive conversations.
I was intrigued by the concept of a “mean Jane,” but the execution didn’t quite work for me either. Like several other characters, she felt a bit one-dimensional, lacking the nuance that could have made this twist truly compelling.
That said, despite the instant attraction (which usually isn’t my preference), the author did include several moments where Darcy and Elizabeth interact meaningfully and gradually fall in love, and those scenes were among the highlights, which I am sure many readers will enjoy.
Overall, Hearts Entwined offers an imaginative re-shaping of beloved characters and an intriguing starting point that many JAFF readers will find appealing. While some elements didn’t work as well for me, particularly the character dynamics and the story’s pacing, I still appreciated the author’s creativity and the tender moments shared between Darcy and Elizabeth. Readers who enjoy alternate-scenario variations with younger versions of the couple may find this a refreshing take on a well-known tale.
November 16, 2024
The plot was good but throughout the story, I felt a familiarity. I don't know if it's because I've read it as a WIP or because it was similar to other stories with similar plotlines. The villains were pretty stupid and so the thrill their villainy is supposed to lend the story was absent making it a bit bland.
February 11, 2024
At her uncle's house the seventeenth year old Elizabeth Bennet gets to know the young barrister Fitzwilliam Darcy, the second son of a wealthy landowner from Derbyshire. For both it is love at first sight and soon they decide to share a live and marry. As their relationship grows there are people like Elizabeth's mother Mrs Bennet and her sister Jane who are jealous of Elizabeth's luck in finding a worthy husband. When spreading gossip is not enough they develop a diabolic plan to destroy Elizabeth's happiness. Will they succeed or is the bond of love between Darcy and Elizabeth stronger?
The book of the author Melissa Anne is very well written and a heartwarming read.
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth was very sweet. I like that they fall for each other from the very first moment and that they form a strong relationship in a physical and mental way. It was so sweet to read that they nearly can't cease touching each other, even in public. That's how I imagine them when they are madly in love. I like that they grow together and that they both enjoy every aspect of their relationship.
In this story some aspects of the original story are changed. Darcy is a second son and his mother is still alive. In Elizabeth's family there are also changes, Mrs Bennet and Jane not on friendly terms with Elizabeth. This opens new paths for the story. Elizabeth and Darcy gain other confidants and others are not as supportive as in the original story. But all changes were understandable. I, for my part, especially liked that Darcy is a second son. He doesn't have the pressure to marry in a way to fulfill the expectations. He is at every moment able to follow his heart. This means he needs not to fight against his growing attraction for Elizabeth, he can simply enjoy falling in love with her.
But the story is not simply a tale of falling in love. As Jane and Mrs Bennet attempt to destroy Elizabeth's happiness and develop a diabolic plan there is also tension in the story. ODC, with the help of their friends and relations, need to fight them together to stop their plan and to reveal their intentions.
If you like a story with Elizabeth and Darcy being madly in love and fighting together against intruders to their relationship you should definitely read this book.
I highly recommend it.
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Addition for the audiobook:
The audiobook is narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of my favourite narrators because she has a unique way to voice all the characters in the book. As always she has performed a lovely narration and turned a really good book in something even better. I really loved it ❤️
I received a free copy of the book and the audiobook from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The book of the author Melissa Anne is very well written and a heartwarming read.
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth was very sweet. I like that they fall for each other from the very first moment and that they form a strong relationship in a physical and mental way. It was so sweet to read that they nearly can't cease touching each other, even in public. That's how I imagine them when they are madly in love. I like that they grow together and that they both enjoy every aspect of their relationship.
In this story some aspects of the original story are changed. Darcy is a second son and his mother is still alive. In Elizabeth's family there are also changes, Mrs Bennet and Jane not on friendly terms with Elizabeth. This opens new paths for the story. Elizabeth and Darcy gain other confidants and others are not as supportive as in the original story. But all changes were understandable. I, for my part, especially liked that Darcy is a second son. He doesn't have the pressure to marry in a way to fulfill the expectations. He is at every moment able to follow his heart. This means he needs not to fight against his growing attraction for Elizabeth, he can simply enjoy falling in love with her.
But the story is not simply a tale of falling in love. As Jane and Mrs Bennet attempt to destroy Elizabeth's happiness and develop a diabolic plan there is also tension in the story. ODC, with the help of their friends and relations, need to fight them together to stop their plan and to reveal their intentions.
If you like a story with Elizabeth and Darcy being madly in love and fighting together against intruders to their relationship you should definitely read this book.
I highly recommend it.
__________________________
Addition for the audiobook:
The audiobook is narrated by Stevie Zimmerman. She is one of my favourite narrators because she has a unique way to voice all the characters in the book. As always she has performed a lovely narration and turned a really good book in something even better. I really loved it ❤️
I received a free copy of the book and the audiobook from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 27, 2024
Excellent saga.
Making Darcy a second son changes the entire arc of the familiar story. In this story it is greatly different. Darcy and Elizabeth are introduced to each other through the Gardiners, as Mr Gardiner has been working with Darcy to increase his inheritance successfully, and Elizabeth is now living with the Gardiners permanently. It’s ‘love’ or something like that, a shock to the system (?) , an immediate connection between them-at first sight. Their first meeting is a trip to the theatre where Darcy impulsively takes Elizabeth’s hand and keeps it for the rest of the performance. And Elizabeth lets him.
I loved this gob-smacked, smitten Darcy. And I loved this head-strong Elizabeth. The Gardiners play a large role here.
Elizabeth has grown up with a mother who hates her and a sister who has pretended to love her because it served her purposes at the time, who later reveals herself as an utterly vindictive witch.
The new characters in this variation are exceptionally well written and integral to the plot. Many of our favorite characters enjoy better outcomes than canon which is fulfilling to read. The author gave the two youngest Bennet sisters a brain in their heads, enough to observe their surroundings and glean some insight about what was going on. That was clever and interesting to watch pan out. The new character that stood out from the others was Lady Anne Darcy, Fitzwilliam’s and George the elder brother’s mother. She was such a wonderful woman, a lady with a very strong heart for mothering all who came under her extended care. The older son plays a large role in this story too. At first we don’t see him as much of a likable character but he emerges as quite a noble and honorable man. Richard Fitzwilliam is here too, always having Darcy’s and now Elizabeth’s back.
As the plot ventures into to a very dramatic series of events, nearly all these characters come together to overcome a tremendous threat to Darcy and Elizabeth’s life together. It was shocking. The punishments that these actions resulted from were equally shocking.
This will go on my reread shelf. I highly recommend it. It is dramatic and angsty. But so well done.
Making Darcy a second son changes the entire arc of the familiar story. In this story it is greatly different. Darcy and Elizabeth are introduced to each other through the Gardiners, as Mr Gardiner has been working with Darcy to increase his inheritance successfully, and Elizabeth is now living with the Gardiners permanently. It’s ‘love’ or something like that, a shock to the system (?) , an immediate connection between them-at first sight. Their first meeting is a trip to the theatre where Darcy impulsively takes Elizabeth’s hand and keeps it for the rest of the performance. And Elizabeth lets him.
I loved this gob-smacked, smitten Darcy. And I loved this head-strong Elizabeth. The Gardiners play a large role here.
Elizabeth has grown up with a mother who hates her and a sister who has pretended to love her because it served her purposes at the time, who later reveals herself as an utterly vindictive witch.
The new characters in this variation are exceptionally well written and integral to the plot. Many of our favorite characters enjoy better outcomes than canon which is fulfilling to read. The author gave the two youngest Bennet sisters a brain in their heads, enough to observe their surroundings and glean some insight about what was going on. That was clever and interesting to watch pan out. The new character that stood out from the others was Lady Anne Darcy, Fitzwilliam’s and George the elder brother’s mother. She was such a wonderful woman, a lady with a very strong heart for mothering all who came under her extended care. The older son plays a large role in this story too. At first we don’t see him as much of a likable character but he emerges as quite a noble and honorable man. Richard Fitzwilliam is here too, always having Darcy’s and now Elizabeth’s back.
As the plot ventures into to a very dramatic series of events, nearly all these characters come together to overcome a tremendous threat to Darcy and Elizabeth’s life together. It was shocking. The punishments that these actions resulted from were equally shocking.
This will go on my reread shelf. I highly recommend it. It is dramatic and angsty. But so well done.
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March 7, 2024DNF. A strange style, lots of telling without any real reasoning behind it.
November 5, 2023
Overall good...
...with little angst. What angst there was comes from outside ODC's relationship. Everything almost felt too easy. Although, some days easy is what I am looking for. Too much angst in a book can carry over into the real word. I have been known to be so worried about happenings in a story, I have called my dog Darcy instead of Rocky. I don't need that in my life.
So, all in all, read it, be shocked by a few things some resort to in order to get their way and enjoy the happy ending.
One thing caught me out, though. I know it was a thing back then, but first cousins, marrying, is just icky.
...with little angst. What angst there was comes from outside ODC's relationship. Everything almost felt too easy. Although, some days easy is what I am looking for. Too much angst in a book can carry over into the real word. I have been known to be so worried about happenings in a story, I have called my dog Darcy instead of Rocky. I don't need that in my life.
So, all in all, read it, be shocked by a few things some resort to in order to get their way and enjoy the happy ending.
One thing caught me out, though. I know it was a thing back then, but first cousins, marrying, is just icky.
November 8, 2023
2.5 Stars
What I liked:
- I enjoyed the Darcy and Elizabeth storyline at the story's beginning and the bits I read in between the other storylines.
What I didn't care for:
- Around the 35% mark, the story morphed into the absurd. Delusional and vulgar, Bennets took over what was a pleasing read up to this point.
- Charlotte's romance took more screentime than I care for, while Mary's character dropped out of sight so early in the story after leaving for London.
What I liked:
- I enjoyed the Darcy and Elizabeth storyline at the story's beginning and the bits I read in between the other storylines.
What I didn't care for:
- Around the 35% mark, the story morphed into the absurd. Delusional and vulgar, Bennets took over what was a pleasing read up to this point.
- Charlotte's romance took more screentime than I care for, while Mary's character dropped out of sight so early in the story after leaving for London.
December 2, 2023
This story deviates a lot from canon, IMHO. First of all, not only is Elizabeth least liked by her mother but also Mrs. Bennet is so negative towards her that Elizabeth's grandmother has basically raised her while both reside in the Dower house. Oh, Mr. Bennet does educate Elizabeth and discuss books with her but other than that does nothing to protect her. When the grandmother dies, Elizabeth goes to live with the Gardiners in London.
Elizabeth is 17 years old while Darcy is 24.
Darcy is a second son and is a barrister. He has invested monies he received upon his father's death with Mr. Gardiner, and they are friends. It is through that friendship that Elizabeth meets Darcy. In this story they basically fall in "love at first sight"! There is little angst in their relationship, and they soon marry. (Not that they never have an argument, however.)
Mrs. Bennet dotes on Jane and expects great things of her. We read of men being attracted to her good looks but soon turning away as they find she has nothing else: no conversation, no knowledge of books or the world, no compliments to offer anyone.
Several events happen of significance as we read along. Darcy finds that upon marriage he has the choice of one of two estates left by his grandfather "to a second son". We also find Jane maneuvering to take Elizabeth's place by Darcy's side. She gets some "help" from Wickham. This event has dire consequences.
Darcy's older brother, George, is part of the story while their mother, Anne, also, plays a large role. George gains a title in this story. Several men look upon Darcy's marriage as what they would want...if they married. George's uncle, however, has arranged a marriage for him with a Lady connected to the ton. That has some further consequences for the Darcy family.
We have Major Fitzwilliam for the first part of the story before he gains the level of colonel. Then we have a two-part epilogue with family histories given at 10-year intervals.
I enjoyed this story.
Elizabeth is 17 years old while Darcy is 24.
Darcy is a second son and is a barrister. He has invested monies he received upon his father's death with Mr. Gardiner, and they are friends. It is through that friendship that Elizabeth meets Darcy. In this story they basically fall in "love at first sight"! There is little angst in their relationship, and they soon marry. (Not that they never have an argument, however.)
Mrs. Bennet dotes on Jane and expects great things of her. We read of men being attracted to her good looks but soon turning away as they find she has nothing else: no conversation, no knowledge of books or the world, no compliments to offer anyone.
Several events happen of significance as we read along. Darcy finds that upon marriage he has the choice of one of two estates left by his grandfather "to a second son". We also find Jane maneuvering to take Elizabeth's place by Darcy's side. She gets some "help" from Wickham. This event has dire consequences.
Darcy's older brother, George, is part of the story while their mother, Anne, also, plays a large role. George gains a title in this story. Several men look upon Darcy's marriage as what they would want...if they married. George's uncle, however, has arranged a marriage for him with a Lady connected to the ton. That has some further consequences for the Darcy family.
We have Major Fitzwilliam for the first part of the story before he gains the level of colonel. Then we have a two-part epilogue with family histories given at 10-year intervals.
I enjoyed this story.
November 29, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story A slightly more immature Elizabeth Bennet meets Fitzwilliam Darcy London two years earlier than in canon. As a second son, Darcy has chosen the life of a barrister so there are fewer obstacles in their way, and they quickly fall in love. Using the fortune left to him upon his father's death, he invested with Gardiner to make his own fortune, making it easier for the two to wed, along with a legacy set aside for second sons by Darcy's grandfather, the late Earl of Matlock. Despite this, our dear couple's path is not always easy, as challenges arise as they marry and come together. A vile Mrs. Bennet and Jane's resentment over Elizabeth's good fortune cast shadows over their happiness. The presence of George Wickham and the manoeuvrings of Caroline Bingley further complicate their path. However, despite these tribulations or perhaps because of them, they learn together to surmount them, ultimately weaving their hearts even more profoundly together. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story A slightly more immature Elizabeth Bennet meets Fitzwilliam Darcy London two years earlier than in canon. As a second son, Darcy has chosen the life of a barrister so there are fewer obstacles in their way, and they quickly fall in love. Using the fortune left to him upon his father's death, he invested with Gardiner to make his own fortune, making it easier for the two to wed, along with a legacy set aside for second sons by Darcy's grandfather, the late Earl of Matlock. Despite this, our dear couple's path is not always easy, as challenges arise as they marry and come together. A vile Mrs. Bennet and Jane's resentment over Elizabeth's good fortune cast shadows over their happiness. The presence of George Wickham and the manoeuvrings of Caroline Bingley further complicate their path. However, despite these tribulations or perhaps because of them, they learn together to surmount them, ultimately weaving their hearts even more profoundly together. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
January 8, 2024
This is the first book I have read/listened to by this author and it wont be the last. Loved how Stevie Zimmerman's narration (as per her usual fantastic voice) brings stories to life and you just become part of the background seeing/listening to the story go on around you. In this story several things are out of canon: Darcy has older brother, his mother is alive, bad/selfish Jane & Mrs B and D&E meet several years before canon. Elizabeth was raised more by her Grandmother in the dower house than with her parents (you learn this early so no big spoiler) and with her and the Gardiner's influence she is more accomplished/gentlewomen's skills than her sisters. E ends up living with her Aunt & Uncle and meets Darcy when she is about 17yrs old. They hit it off right away & have a whirlwind courtship and marriage. Mrs B & Jane are very jealous/angry that E has been successful in marriage. With his family's support along with the Gardiner's they successfully avoid the traps & schemes that Jane & Mrs B and Wickham plan. I love that the residents of Meryton side with Lizzy and Mary and the younger girls are protected and thrive because of Elizabeth and Darcy's marriage and connections.
April 6, 2024
The characters in this book share names with characters from P&P, but that’s all. Jane is a sociopath. Mr Collins is an intelligent and sensible solicitor. Kitty and Lydia are functionally illiterate (just why?). Darcy and especially Elizabeth have no personality outside of being madly in love. Characters tell us ad nauseum that Elizabeth is the kindest, smartest, most beautiful, etc. woman in the world, but she’s extremely passive as a character. Her dialogue never shows any personality traits beyond insecurity. Where are Elizabeth Bennet’s wit and confidence?
I enjoyed the parts of this book where the villains got their comeuppance. It’s always satisfying to read about bad people getting humiliated. The parts with Darcy and Elizabeth’s actual romance really dragged, though. To me, it’s just not interesting when the characters have so little personality. Some grammatical errors as well.
I enjoyed the parts of this book where the villains got their comeuppance. It’s always satisfying to read about bad people getting humiliated. The parts with Darcy and Elizabeth’s actual romance really dragged, though. To me, it’s just not interesting when the characters have so little personality. Some grammatical errors as well.
November 26, 2023
Lovely
It was well written with lots of twist and turns. This had more than one human transformation. Jane was evil in this storyline. Lady Ann is awesome and Big Brother George is a loving normal big brother. I love he did not get killed off. The younger Bennet girls’ storylines are heartfelt and HEA. Wickham is dealt with-no Lydia/Wickham entanglement. There were wonderful twist. I wish Mrs. Bennett was not so awful.
I enjoyed it beginning to end. I HUGHLY recommend this novel.
It was well written with lots of twist and turns. This had more than one human transformation. Jane was evil in this storyline. Lady Ann is awesome and Big Brother George is a loving normal big brother. I love he did not get killed off. The younger Bennet girls’ storylines are heartfelt and HEA. Wickham is dealt with-no Lydia/Wickham entanglement. There were wonderful twist. I wish Mrs. Bennett was not so awful.
I enjoyed it beginning to end. I HUGHLY recommend this novel.
November 2, 2023
a different version of ODC
ODC have different roles in their family’s lives that change them slightly. Darcy is more open to Elizabeth and doesn’t fight his feelings. Lizzy has a horrible family life that made her hesitant to accept Darcy but gives in fairly quickly. The drama of the book comes from outside sources and although we don’t have the normal pride and prejudice theme, the characters are all slightly different. I quite enjoyed the read.
ODC have different roles in their family’s lives that change them slightly. Darcy is more open to Elizabeth and doesn’t fight his feelings. Lizzy has a horrible family life that made her hesitant to accept Darcy but gives in fairly quickly. The drama of the book comes from outside sources and although we don’t have the normal pride and prejudice theme, the characters are all slightly different. I quite enjoyed the read.
November 5, 2023
Very enjoyable
I enjoyed this very much. The twist is that Fitzwilliam Darcy is the second son. Lady Anne is very much alive. George Darcy is the heir to Pemberley. The love story of Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam is very much familiar, but other characters like Charlotte, Caroline And Charles Bingley and the Colonel all appear but have lesser roles. All in all, portions of this story seemed to drag a bit, but overall, low angst and of course, a happily ever after.
I enjoyed this very much. The twist is that Fitzwilliam Darcy is the second son. Lady Anne is very much alive. George Darcy is the heir to Pemberley. The love story of Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam is very much familiar, but other characters like Charlotte, Caroline And Charles Bingley and the Colonel all appear but have lesser roles. All in all, portions of this story seemed to drag a bit, but overall, low angst and of course, a happily ever after.
November 15, 2023
Enjoyable
Entertaining variation. Interesting storyline with Mrs Bennet and Jane as the villains - yes Jane does smile too much. The low angst between our favorite characters of Darcy and Elizabeth makes for an easy read. I will say their was a bit too many expressions of love in public/family settings to be realistic for the time period. Straight-laced Darcy initiating kissing, holding hands, etc. For all to see is a hard sell. Slow burn would be better.
Entertaining variation. Interesting storyline with Mrs Bennet and Jane as the villains - yes Jane does smile too much. The low angst between our favorite characters of Darcy and Elizabeth makes for an easy read. I will say their was a bit too many expressions of love in public/family settings to be realistic for the time period. Straight-laced Darcy initiating kissing, holding hands, etc. For all to see is a hard sell. Slow burn would be better.
November 20, 2023
A Wonderfully Satisfying Read!
The author has done a great job on this version - the plot moves along at a nice clip, the dialogue is good, and I like the Elizabeth Bennett and Fitzwilliam Darcy characters as portrayed in this story. There were very few edits needed, and a few places where the author used modern jargon, but those were few and far between. After reading this over the course of 2 rainy days, I wholeheartedly give her 5 stars, and look forward to her next book!
The author has done a great job on this version - the plot moves along at a nice clip, the dialogue is good, and I like the Elizabeth Bennett and Fitzwilliam Darcy characters as portrayed in this story. There were very few edits needed, and a few places where the author used modern jargon, but those were few and far between. After reading this over the course of 2 rainy days, I wholeheartedly give her 5 stars, and look forward to her next book!
February 23, 2024
This is a longer variation. I thoroughly enjoyed most of this book but the last 100 pages were primarily a long epilogue told by a narrator voice. It was satisfying to explore the resolutions of bad behavior characters, though that was flogged to death by the end. I would give this 4.5 stars but could not round up to 5-it really went on too long and became a 3rd party story for last 3rd. I am just starting another of this author’s books!
November 5, 2023
Wonderfully Sweet!
5 easy stars for a sweet and epic story of profound love, acceptance, courage, and growth. The honest love of our dear couple is sweet and epic in every way, the growth of Mr Bennet and Jane is important and nice to see. The fact that Kitty and Lydia show from an early age discernment, discretion, and caring is a wonderful surprising treat.
5 easy stars for a sweet and epic story of profound love, acceptance, courage, and growth. The honest love of our dear couple is sweet and epic in every way, the growth of Mr Bennet and Jane is important and nice to see. The fact that Kitty and Lydia show from an early age discernment, discretion, and caring is a wonderful surprising treat.
December 17, 2023
Emotional interesting humorous
Love a good story that cam fall into a few categories. Darcy is a second son in this story; he actually a barrister. Elizabeth goes to live with her aunt and uncle in London (put out). Jane and Mrs B are awful. This story is emotional charge, humorous in parts, and very well written. I would recommend for mature reader, but definitely a must read.
Love a good story that cam fall into a few categories. Darcy is a second son in this story; he actually a barrister. Elizabeth goes to live with her aunt and uncle in London (put out). Jane and Mrs B are awful. This story is emotional charge, humorous in parts, and very well written. I would recommend for mature reader, but definitely a must read.
December 19, 2023
Wow!
Very different from canon, but quite interesting! So many twists and turns are included that almost everyone gets to grow up!
Indolent Mr Bennet, vicious(!) Miss Bennet, and even a less spoiled Lydia Bennet all get a metamorphosis in the course of the book.
But the love story of our dear couple is wonderfully written! I'm already planning a second read!
Very different from canon, but quite interesting! So many twists and turns are included that almost everyone gets to grow up!
Indolent Mr Bennet, vicious(!) Miss Bennet, and even a less spoiled Lydia Bennet all get a metamorphosis in the course of the book.
But the love story of our dear couple is wonderfully written! I'm already planning a second read!
June 23, 2024
Another excellent book
Read this from cover to cover in one night and loved it no Caroline Bingley or Lady Catherine, Wickham was got ridden of early in the story by the two brothers. Lady Anne was alive and the patriarch of the family and helps sort things out. Jane, Mrs Bennet and Mr Bennet get what they deserve.
Read this from cover to cover in one night and loved it no Caroline Bingley or Lady Catherine, Wickham was got ridden of early in the story by the two brothers. Lady Anne was alive and the patriarch of the family and helps sort things out. Jane, Mrs Bennet and Mr Bennet get what they deserve.
November 25, 2023
A very nice different version
A very nice different version. Angst, oh my...
Not nice Jane and a much nicer Lydia and Kitty. Also a different expansion on why Wickham doesn't like the Darcy's, as our Darcy is the younger brother.
Enjoyed.
A very nice different version. Angst, oh my...
Not nice Jane and a much nicer Lydia and Kitty. Also a different expansion on why Wickham doesn't like the Darcy's, as our Darcy is the younger brother.
Enjoyed.
December 11, 2023
Fairy tale
Extreme villains scheming against the perfect couple, along with over the top Bennett parents, made this a pretty predictable novel. Even though the dialogue was forced and overly drawn out, it was a pleasant book to read.
Extreme villains scheming against the perfect couple, along with over the top Bennett parents, made this a pretty predictable novel. Even though the dialogue was forced and overly drawn out, it was a pleasant book to read.
February 13, 2024
Beautiful Story
Loved the sweet story. I liked that Lady Anne had such a loving and predominant role in each of the couples. I also liked that ODC had such a beautiful and enduring love between the two of them.
Loved the sweet story. I liked that Lady Anne had such a loving and predominant role in each of the couples. I also liked that ODC had such a beautiful and enduring love between the two of them.
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