Every time I read a Haley Cass story, I lament that she doesn't have a better editor. The ideas are there and the accolades her works receive are deserved--no question (at least for me). The execution leaves more to be desired. There's just an awkwardness of execution that is likely due to Cass overthinking things, which I can definitely understand since I am a chronic over thinker. More on this later.
I recently reread When You Least Expect It because I didn't have anything else I really wanted to read at the time and I really loved that book. And a few hours after I finished I learned that this follow-up novella was going to be released in a matter of days and I was so excited. I bought it immediately. I read it almost immediately.
Better Than Expected is told from Hannah's point of view and starts prior to the events When You Least Expect It until it runs concurrent to WYLEI and then continues for a year longer than the events in WYLEI. If you enjoyed WYLEI, you're likely going to love this since more time with the characters just feels like gravy.
But I was a little disappointed, if I'm being honest. Where after reading the first novel, I was in a euphoric state of romantic bliss and possibility, I finished this novel with a minor sense of satisfaction and a bigger dose of worry. Hannah is dealing with years of trauma and we definitely see the result of that on display in this novella, but it's really hard to watch her experience because we know Caroline and, thus, know how much it's impacting her, and Abbie. I feel this series needs a part 3 in the vein of Forever and a Day, where I can feel a real sense of security for these characters and this family.
But I did enjoy my time again with these characters. And if not for issues I have with the execution , this would be 4 stars probably. Just based on the fact that I'm getting more cute moments with these characters that I adore. But there are those other issues, which aren't new issues with Cass's writing, which is why I'm going to spend a little bit of time going there.
Strike #1 is that the novels/novellas don't feel like a cohesive narrative. These feel like connected short stories. And that's maybe a style preference, but it's not something I'm always in the mood for and/or expecting when I pick up a "novel" or "novella." It's something MJ Duncan does, too, which I've also commented on before.
Strike #2 is awkward uses of ellipses and italicized words, both of which should be used for emphasis, yes, but should also be used sparingly. And this is what I was referring to with the over thinking because I *think* Cass wants to make it sound like real people having these thoughts, rather than a random or detached narrative voice, so I get it, but what it does is a) distract me from the text because I'm having to stop to get my brain to recognize what's happening and b) it doesn't allow me to interpret the text the way I want to interpret the text. And these are fine for drafts, but it's something a good editor would remove because it's not necessary. Our brains are going to do that work for us when it's necessary. (Just like a good editor would remove my overuse of parenthesis and dashes. LOL).
So I'm giving this 3 stars because I think this should have been an actual novel to do everything Cass is trying to do and considering the much longer timeline of the narrative compared to the first book and because it's her 5th(?) major work, and I don't want to see these issues anymore. But I'm a weirdo when it comes to this stuff, so you should definitely not listen to me. Go buy this and read it and enjoy it in a way my brain won't allow.